Comments received on poems by Neville
Upon a Time Once
Laura🌻 said:
Love is a multifaceted experience. It can be very complex; but not so much at a young age. No worries to be had until…
As I read your words, my musings have been interrupted with a sudden thought…so much is being said with just a few words; hence the tsunami.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 14:54
Laura🌻 said:
Love is a multifaceted experience. It can be very complex; but not so much at a young age. No worries to be had until…
As I read your words, my musings have been interrupted with a sudden thought…so much is being said with just a few words; hence the tsunami.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 14:54
Upon a Time Once
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Is this any relation a poem \'Pon a time\'?!
Note to self: this is very \'sad\' of me, I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do, than looking for missing \'u\'s?
August 10th, 2021 12:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Is this any relation a poem \'Pon a time\'?!
Note to self: this is very \'sad\' of me, I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do, than looking for missing \'u\'s?
August 10th, 2021 12:07
Upon a Time Once
dusk arising said:
Simple but full of reverie. You\'ve caught the true magic of writing few words but saying so much more here Neville.
August 10th, 2021 09:32
dusk arising said:
Simple but full of reverie. You\'ve caught the true magic of writing few words but saying so much more here Neville.
August 10th, 2021 09:32
Upon a Time Once
L. B. Mek said:
\'Regardless
of whether, borrowed or lent
To us in that moment
it was time, well spent\'
\'Upon a time
once, we had everything
didn’t we: just ..\'
(my melancholy, has a new muse
its in the white
of your poetry\'s capacity, to soothe)
I\'m a bona fide, fan
for just, such a reason
my oh, so talented friend!
August 10th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Regardless
of whether, borrowed or lent
To us in that moment
it was time, well spent\'
\'Upon a time
once, we had everything
didn’t we: just ..\'
(my melancholy, has a new muse
its in the white
of your poetry\'s capacity, to soothe)
I\'m a bona fide, fan
for just, such a reason
my oh, so talented friend!
August 10th, 2021 06:05
Upon a Time Once
Doggerel Dave said:
And why did it ever end, Nev? It was going so well.......
August 10th, 2021 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
And why did it ever end, Nev? It was going so well.......
August 10th, 2021 05:21
Upon a Time Once
Fay Slimm. said:
A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - great stuff again Nev. -- with a sigh................x
August 10th, 2021 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - great stuff again Nev. -- with a sigh................x
August 10th, 2021 03:59
An Unfinished Summer
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies do still exist and still want to bring love to us all.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies do still exist and still want to bring love to us all.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:36
An Unfinished Summer
Accidental Poet said:
Somewhere in my mind the Summer never ends. Great write N. 😉
August 9th, 2021 18:44
Accidental Poet said:
Somewhere in my mind the Summer never ends. Great write N. 😉
August 9th, 2021 18:44
An Unfinished Summer
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been around much and a bit out of touch - how did the move go? Oh and yes - another super write.
August 9th, 2021 14:21
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been around much and a bit out of touch - how did the move go? Oh and yes - another super write.
August 9th, 2021 14:21
An Unfinished Summer
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Boys do the dancing girls do the choosing.
August 9th, 2021 08:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Boys do the dancing girls do the choosing.
August 9th, 2021 08:20
Calling Time
Lorna said:
And there it is, and he is not afraid. I\'m loving this.
August 9th, 2021 06:38
Lorna said:
And there it is, and he is not afraid. I\'m loving this.
August 9th, 2021 06:38
An Unfinished Summer
dusk arising said:
... till time and life\'s love moved us on and along into the unknown, which all to quickly became our yesterdays.
Thank goodness for hindsight.
August 9th, 2021 06:28
dusk arising said:
... till time and life\'s love moved us on and along into the unknown, which all to quickly became our yesterdays.
Thank goodness for hindsight.
August 9th, 2021 06:28
An Unfinished Summer
L. B. Mek said:
\'With his long hair, love beads, patched
jeans ..
those Marlboro lights and frayed velvet
jacket ..\'
(a Native-American, James Dean
would have been a hit
in the west of blighty or Hollywood
I would have to agree)
a fun read, sometimes
we need to dust-off
those age wilted self-portraits
and reminisce those time\'s
when life was full of youthful vigour
and gloriously bold..
August 9th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'With his long hair, love beads, patched
jeans ..
those Marlboro lights and frayed velvet
jacket ..\'
(a Native-American, James Dean
would have been a hit
in the west of blighty or Hollywood
I would have to agree)
a fun read, sometimes
we need to dust-off
those age wilted self-portraits
and reminisce those time\'s
when life was full of youthful vigour
and gloriously bold..
August 9th, 2021 06:23
An Unfinished Summer
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I remember it well and its hippie-life that never seemed finished - -like your final line...........x
August 9th, 2021 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I remember it well and its hippie-life that never seemed finished - -like your final line...........x
August 9th, 2021 05:50
An Unfinished Summer
Doggerel Dave said:
A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the hippie girls in for a while (if he wanted them...........) but time moved on.....
Needless to say, I enjoyed that, Neville....
August 9th, 2021 04:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the hippie girls in for a while (if he wanted them...........) but time moved on.....
Needless to say, I enjoyed that, Neville....
August 9th, 2021 04:25
An Unfinished Summer
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hoping the Summer is unfinished? Are we all hoping?!
Dis he look like Jesus? It depends, if he was of Middle Eastern appearance (Israel). He would not have been white or black or Chinese or whatever. But you mean the beard!
I\'m going to the Co-op. It\'s in the Mid-West. (do shut up now Orchi. lol)
August 9th, 2021 04:13
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hoping the Summer is unfinished? Are we all hoping?!
Dis he look like Jesus? It depends, if he was of Middle Eastern appearance (Israel). He would not have been white or black or Chinese or whatever. But you mean the beard!
I\'m going to the Co-op. It\'s in the Mid-West. (do shut up now Orchi. lol)
August 9th, 2021 04:13
Calling Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, just slipping away into a new life in a comfortable way.............. but not yet.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, just slipping away into a new life in a comfortable way.............. but not yet.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:09
Calling Time
Accidental Poet said:
A very meaningful write N. As my own Dad nears closer and closer to his last days, I\'m seeing him in a new light that I never expected to. I\'ve learned to appreciate more and more. 🤔
August 8th, 2021 19:17
Accidental Poet said:
A very meaningful write N. As my own Dad nears closer and closer to his last days, I\'m seeing him in a new light that I never expected to. I\'ve learned to appreciate more and more. 🤔
August 8th, 2021 19:17
Calling Time
MendedFences27 said:
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\" gives the sense of a peaceful passing, and \"silvered notes\" lends musical association. 0f whom you speak would have enjoyed the sense of the moment. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\" gives the sense of a peaceful passing, and \"silvered notes\" lends musical association. 0f whom you speak would have enjoyed the sense of the moment. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:06
Calling Time
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
What a wonderful read.
I especially liked…
“dancing wild and blindly
within the silvered notes of his once
dark hair ..”
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:42
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
What a wonderful read.
I especially liked…
“dancing wild and blindly
within the silvered notes of his once
dark hair ..”
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:42
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Aah the feeling of love, of safety, and of contentment once the arms of one chair are shared with your loved one.
I enjoyed this wonderful reminder of two hearts beating as one.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:35
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Aah the feeling of love, of safety, and of contentment once the arms of one chair are shared with your loved one.
I enjoyed this wonderful reminder of two hearts beating as one.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
August 8th, 2021 14:35
Calling Time
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow and what a way to call closing on life that ends in easy-chaired smiles with cosy acceptance. Hey and good to go too when dreams are still on the wild side mon ami.............x
August 8th, 2021 05:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow and what a way to call closing on life that ends in easy-chaired smiles with cosy acceptance. Hey and good to go too when dreams are still on the wild side mon ami.............x
August 8th, 2021 05:24
Calling Time
Doggerel Dave said:
\' Way to go, Nev. Smooth and easy.... Great portrait.
Now for a reviver (he wouldn\'t want you to stay sad forever) why not try (word association inspired) Closing Time (LC) One of my many faves in his catalogue.
August 8th, 2021 04:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\' Way to go, Nev. Smooth and easy.... Great portrait.
Now for a reviver (he wouldn\'t want you to stay sad forever) why not try (word association inspired) Closing Time (LC) One of my many faves in his catalogue.
August 8th, 2021 04:15
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville that comfort is always with me as Joyce looks down on me.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville that comfort is always with me as Joyce looks down on me.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:54
Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs
Accidental Poet said:
For love to embrace two hearts within the arms of one chair is beautiful. Great write N. 👍
August 7th, 2021 09:00
Accidental Poet said:
For love to embrace two hearts within the arms of one chair is beautiful. Great write N. 👍
August 7th, 2021 09:00
Magic Bead
Dove said:
Mystery beads, satin curtains, such elegant objects to behold, but the real beauty is how you spin words, or rather weave them ! More so like a gem , she hid her valuables until she deemed him worthy of discovery
August 7th, 2021 08:49
Dove said:
Mystery beads, satin curtains, such elegant objects to behold, but the real beauty is how you spin words, or rather weave them ! More so like a gem , she hid her valuables until she deemed him worthy of discovery
August 7th, 2021 08:49
When You Find These Words
Dove said:
I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
Sunshine on a rainy day! ❤️
August 7th, 2021 08:25
Dove said:
I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
Sunshine on a rainy day! ❤️
August 7th, 2021 08:25
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