Comments received on poems by Neville
Those Who Would Love Light
L. B. Mek said:
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in elegance of mesmeric transcendence, when we witness the marriage of talent with its inspiringly majestic muse...
\'Dancing
with dust motes
in an arc before falling
Like light
refracted and traced
upon a glorious chapter
Prismed
and flawless\'
how wondrously you decipher the rainbow gift\'s of life, from the dreary of reality,
a great write my friend!
November 24th, 2020 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in elegance of mesmeric transcendence, when we witness the marriage of talent with its inspiringly majestic muse...
\'Dancing
with dust motes
in an arc before falling
Like light
refracted and traced
upon a glorious chapter
Prismed
and flawless\'
how wondrously you decipher the rainbow gift\'s of life, from the dreary of reality,
a great write my friend!
November 24th, 2020 05:05
Those Who Would Love Light
dusk arising said:
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible presence of love realised sund in your fine words today.
November 24th, 2020 04:04
dusk arising said:
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible presence of love realised sund in your fine words today.
November 24th, 2020 04:04
Those Who Would Love Light
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I\'m a disaster waiting to happen - well, If I say \'I\'m about to sing\', that is! lol.
November 24th, 2020 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I\'m a disaster waiting to happen - well, If I say \'I\'m about to sing\', that is! lol.
November 24th, 2020 02:56
Those Who Would Love Light
Goldfinch60 said:
May the reading of her be love forever.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
May the reading of her be love forever.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:51
Another Golden Dawn
L. B. Mek said:
well, that\'s one memorable morning - Eos gifted you my friend, though having come to understand you a little through your writes, I\'ll tender a tentative bet - that your words were inspired more: by your nocturnal triumph(s), than that Sunshine you immortalise with such eloquence,
great read
November 23rd, 2020 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
well, that\'s one memorable morning - Eos gifted you my friend, though having come to understand you a little through your writes, I\'ll tender a tentative bet - that your words were inspired more: by your nocturnal triumph(s), than that Sunshine you immortalise with such eloquence,
great read
November 23rd, 2020 04:40
Another Golden Dawn
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I thought you meant Dawn. I was about to meet the lass! I never seem to meet \'em though. Will it be too much for me? lol
November 23rd, 2020 02:52
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I thought you meant Dawn. I was about to meet the lass! I never seem to meet \'em though. Will it be too much for me? lol
November 23rd, 2020 02:52
Another Golden Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day that is raised from the dark shows us a new life. We have that new life in each new day.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day that is raised from the dark shows us a new life. We have that new life in each new day.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:22
Another Golden Dawn
Doggerel Dave said:
Metaphor or plain hard boiled reality? Keeps flipping for me... Can appreciate both, so thanks.
Regards Dave
November 22nd, 2020 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Metaphor or plain hard boiled reality? Keeps flipping for me... Can appreciate both, so thanks.
Regards Dave
November 22nd, 2020 18:41
Another Golden Dawn
Fay Slimm. said:
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear may follow yet a window opens for those who gather to face another morrow, to welcome its treasure and wait for what they do not know - - needing no more than to watch for that glowing smile. Positivity in a poetic nutshell my friend.
November 22nd, 2020 18:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear may follow yet a window opens for those who gather to face another morrow, to welcome its treasure and wait for what they do not know - - needing no more than to watch for that glowing smile. Positivity in a poetic nutshell my friend.
November 22nd, 2020 18:02
Another Golden Dawn
Christina8 said:
Beautiful reflection.....love this poem!..C
November 22nd, 2020 14:11
Christina8 said:
Beautiful reflection.....love this poem!..C
November 22nd, 2020 14:11
Another Golden Dawn
dusk arising said:
There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future.
A light which those who turn, looking back and dwell upon yesterdays storm, cannot yet see.
Though reflection, within the light of tomorrow, gains us wisdom.
There you see, your pieces often make me dwell, and look beyond the words, to seek a pearl of wisdom condensed therein.
November 22nd, 2020 13:32
dusk arising said:
There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future.
A light which those who turn, looking back and dwell upon yesterdays storm, cannot yet see.
Though reflection, within the light of tomorrow, gains us wisdom.
There you see, your pieces often make me dwell, and look beyond the words, to seek a pearl of wisdom condensed therein.
November 22nd, 2020 13:32
Aperitif
Goldfinch60 said:
May that taste be forever with you Neville, she is very special.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May that taste be forever with you Neville, she is very special.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:14
Aperitif
FineB said:
A good write ✍ Neville.
Peppermint. Lovely
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:09
FineB said:
A good write ✍ Neville.
Peppermint. Lovely
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:09
Aperitif
Clara said:
I\'m with Micheal here, I also let out a sigh...
She still
tastes of sunlight rising
Wow. I mean, you just unlocked next level romance my friend.
November 21st, 2020 17:03
Clara said:
I\'m with Micheal here, I also let out a sigh...
She still
tastes of sunlight rising
Wow. I mean, you just unlocked next level romance my friend.
November 21st, 2020 17:03
Aperitif
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem!! I had to look up \"Aperitif\" lol!! A refreshing read.....
November 21st, 2020 16:08
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem!! I had to look up \"Aperitif\" lol!! A refreshing read.....
November 21st, 2020 16:08
Aperitif
RDS said:
I absolutely love the sensory synaesthesia you create with invite with lines like:
\"She still
tastes of sunlight rising\"
Pure and delightful thank you Neville one of my favourites.
November 21st, 2020 14:31
RDS said:
I absolutely love the sensory synaesthesia you create with invite with lines like:
\"She still
tastes of sunlight rising\"
Pure and delightful thank you Neville one of my favourites.
November 21st, 2020 14:31
Aperitif
Michael Edwards said:
And I let out a sigh - honest - super write N.
November 21st, 2020 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
And I let out a sigh - honest - super write N.
November 21st, 2020 13:45
Aperitif
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that she is deeply loved - -- another example of tenderest versing my friend ................x
November 21st, 2020 09:27
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that she is deeply loved - -- another example of tenderest versing my friend ................x
November 21st, 2020 09:27
Aperitif
dusk arising said:
These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of familiarity and rewarding warmth of mutual pairing.
Your well chosen words bring forth the sensual with a grace.
November 21st, 2020 09:06
dusk arising said:
These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of familiarity and rewarding warmth of mutual pairing.
Your well chosen words bring forth the sensual with a grace.
November 21st, 2020 09:06
Aperitif
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
All this about a pair of teeth?! lol.
November 21st, 2020 06:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
All this about a pair of teeth?! lol.
November 21st, 2020 06:58
Windfallen
Christina8 said:
Such beautiful poetry....I loved the last stanza about the windfallen apples, so eloquently written!...C
November 20th, 2020 19:16
Christina8 said:
Such beautiful poetry....I loved the last stanza about the windfallen apples, so eloquently written!...C
November 20th, 2020 19:16
Windfallen
Dove said:
Such beauty your words, here I have windfallen oranges,
mostly half eaten oranges that Squirrels drop upon the ground
Tiny little peels strewn all over the place
Yet your vision almost romantic feel,
Loved it
November 20th, 2020 11:17
Dove said:
Such beauty your words, here I have windfallen oranges,
mostly half eaten oranges that Squirrels drop upon the ground
Tiny little peels strewn all over the place
Yet your vision almost romantic feel,
Loved it
November 20th, 2020 11:17
Windfallen
Michael Edwards said:
Reads like a sultry autumn day in sun ripe pleasureness.
November 19th, 2020 14:51
Michael Edwards said:
Reads like a sultry autumn day in sun ripe pleasureness.
November 19th, 2020 14:51
Windfallen
Clara said:
Your work is definitely something to be admired... Poetry in its most poetic form. Pleases all of the senses.
November 19th, 2020 14:22
Clara said:
Your work is definitely something to be admired... Poetry in its most poetic form. Pleases all of the senses.
November 19th, 2020 14:22
Windfallen
dusk arising said:
Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth fallen for many centuries but an orchard strewn with fallers will always bring to mind the disgraceful deathly export of our fruit to flanders field and the like.
Beauty is a reflection of the souls sorrow.... amplified in me with your fine words today.
November 19th, 2020 07:23
dusk arising said:
Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth fallen for many centuries but an orchard strewn with fallers will always bring to mind the disgraceful deathly export of our fruit to flanders field and the like.
Beauty is a reflection of the souls sorrow.... amplified in me with your fine words today.
November 19th, 2020 07:23
Windfallen
L. B. Mek said:
really like your last stanza and the \'feel - tone\' of the voice in this write, has a sense of \'mellowed despair\': an apt description of 2020 as a whole I think
November 19th, 2020 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
really like your last stanza and the \'feel - tone\' of the voice in this write, has a sense of \'mellowed despair\': an apt description of 2020 as a whole I think
November 19th, 2020 04:58
Windfallen
Fay Slimm. said:
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of times I did just that and found troubles melted away with the glorious scent of fallen lushness.......... a great first read of my morning dear Nev.........x
November 19th, 2020 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of times I did just that and found troubles melted away with the glorious scent of fallen lushness.......... a great first read of my morning dear Nev.........x
November 19th, 2020 04:56
Trench Life
L. B. Mek said:
a moving and dispiritingly vivid tribute, good write
& may we never forget!
November 19th, 2020 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
a moving and dispiritingly vivid tribute, good write
& may we never forget!
November 19th, 2020 04:14
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