Comments received on poems by Neville
An Old Promise Well Kept
dusk arising said:
A haunting tale well written in a beguiling way where your readers mind searches out for clues in every line.
I love writings like this. Suspenseful and exciting. Complete and incomplete... masterful.
August 28th, 2021 08:28
dusk arising said:
A haunting tale well written in a beguiling way where your readers mind searches out for clues in every line.
I love writings like this. Suspenseful and exciting. Complete and incomplete... masterful.
August 28th, 2021 08:28
An Old Promise Well Kept
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene as always implacably penned clearly has a wise message hid in its lines of keeping a word once made..... such a tender feel to this quite intriguing read Nev.
August 28th, 2021 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene as always implacably penned clearly has a wise message hid in its lines of keeping a word once made..... such a tender feel to this quite intriguing read Nev.
August 28th, 2021 05:32
Negative in Blue
Caring dove said:
Good choice of words , ) I liked how this flowed with ease . Very well expressed
August 28th, 2021 05:25
Caring dove said:
Good choice of words , ) I liked how this flowed with ease . Very well expressed
August 28th, 2021 05:25
An Old Promise Well Kept
Doggerel Dave said:
A bond, broken by circumstance, but his side of the contract never rescinded.
A rich picture, Nev - more long \'uns please.
August 28th, 2021 05:22
Doggerel Dave said:
A bond, broken by circumstance, but his side of the contract never rescinded.
A rich picture, Nev - more long \'uns please.
August 28th, 2021 05:22
She Calls Them Tears
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Neville, such loss…such unspoken grief… that salt can still be felt in a wound not yet healed – and there’s the rub………
August 27th, 2021 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Neville, such loss…such unspoken grief… that salt can still be felt in a wound not yet healed – and there’s the rub………
August 27th, 2021 18:37
She Calls Them Tears
myself and me said:
Holy salt. Next time when I cook, I will add a handful of tears into the dish, not for taste but for the sadness\'s sake.
August 27th, 2021 12:47
myself and me said:
Holy salt. Next time when I cook, I will add a handful of tears into the dish, not for taste but for the sadness\'s sake.
August 27th, 2021 12:47
She Calls Them Tears
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Reading your wonderful intriguing poem this morning has stirred my senses. I can almost taste and visualize those ‘salt crystals’.
Reading between the lines is a mystery in itself. You’re a pro at letting the reader interpret your writings and come to their own conclusion.
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 09:23
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Reading your wonderful intriguing poem this morning has stirred my senses. I can almost taste and visualize those ‘salt crystals’.
Reading between the lines is a mystery in itself. You’re a pro at letting the reader interpret your writings and come to their own conclusion.
Laura🌻
August 27th, 2021 09:23
She Calls Them Tears
Caring dove said:
Interesting read ... I like your words )
August 27th, 2021 07:06
Caring dove said:
Interesting read ... I like your words )
August 27th, 2021 07:06
She Calls Them Tears
dusk arising said:
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in years to come, interplanetary space.... nice, she can\'t call space her tears.
But are tears a convenience, a mask, wondered the police officer faced with a flood of them from a speeding driver.
August 27th, 2021 05:03
dusk arising said:
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in years to come, interplanetary space.... nice, she can\'t call space her tears.
But are tears a convenience, a mask, wondered the police officer faced with a flood of them from a speeding driver.
August 27th, 2021 05:03
She Calls Them Tears
L. B. Mek said:
\'salt crystals\'..
let us hope, for her sake
and for his redemptive need
to shed and phoenix, his regretful heart
that those crystals undergo a transfiguration
into, her life\'s serendipitous: \'diamond pearls\'..
that will shimmer
in the brightness of a forgiving day
and help attract, a healing presence
\'back\', in-to her life...
(Long after you\'ve forgotten me
I\'ll be your fan, my friend
keep that mighty pen, weaving and sharing
your masterfully subtle, Poetry!)
thank you!
August 27th, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'salt crystals\'..
let us hope, for her sake
and for his redemptive need
to shed and phoenix, his regretful heart
that those crystals undergo a transfiguration
into, her life\'s serendipitous: \'diamond pearls\'..
that will shimmer
in the brightness of a forgiving day
and help attract, a healing presence
\'back\', in-to her life...
(Long after you\'ve forgotten me
I\'ll be your fan, my friend
keep that mighty pen, weaving and sharing
your masterfully subtle, Poetry!)
thank you!
August 27th, 2021 04:50
She Calls Them Tears
Fay Slimm. said:
You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - - your art of confidential half-exposed situations astounds -
with intrigue that could not be bettered The feeling of almost hearing your whispers makes for mystery and you nail it for me each time - - inspiringly good this one goes into my fave-list dear friend.
August 27th, 2021 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - - your art of confidential half-exposed situations astounds -
with intrigue that could not be bettered The feeling of almost hearing your whispers makes for mystery and you nail it for me each time - - inspiringly good this one goes into my fave-list dear friend.
August 27th, 2021 02:26
An Unexpected Chaos
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are within us all Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are within us all Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:53
An Unexpected Chaos
myself and me said:
An unexpected chaos, but good to have.
August 25th, 2021 13:29
myself and me said:
An unexpected chaos, but good to have.
August 25th, 2021 13:29
The Fullest of Moons
Dove said:
Artistically written , I just love stained glass decor In sunlight, but the blue moon just zipped by, and by golly you created a lovely poem, now no need to be hurt by those shards of beauty
August 25th, 2021 10:17
Dove said:
Artistically written , I just love stained glass decor In sunlight, but the blue moon just zipped by, and by golly you created a lovely poem, now no need to be hurt by those shards of beauty
August 25th, 2021 10:17
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Dove said:
A troubled mind, can’t listen to anything, not even the beauty of nature! Well written Dear One
August 25th, 2021 10:12
Dove said:
A troubled mind, can’t listen to anything, not even the beauty of nature! Well written Dear One
August 25th, 2021 10:12
An Unexpected Chaos
Dove said:
And so you met again, the passion, the thrill , and maybe the chaos
Of yesteryear’s departure! Profound thoughts, with giddy pleasures
August 25th, 2021 10:07
Dove said:
And so you met again, the passion, the thrill , and maybe the chaos
Of yesteryear’s departure! Profound thoughts, with giddy pleasures
August 25th, 2021 10:07
An Unexpected Chaos
dusk arising said:
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
dusk arising said:
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
An Unexpected Chaos
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment which makes that easy....
August 25th, 2021 04:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment which makes that easy....
August 25th, 2021 04:23
An Unexpected Chaos
Fay Slimm. said:
Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she secretly want to go back again to being lost ? I say -- - - nay........x.
August 25th, 2021 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she secretly want to go back again to being lost ? I say -- - - nay........x.
August 25th, 2021 04:20
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Accidental Poet said:
I once put a shell to my ear
To my surprise what did I hear?
My Muse with words to write
In the sand, but waves washed the sight
🤔
August 24th, 2021 20:28
Accidental Poet said:
I once put a shell to my ear
To my surprise what did I hear?
My Muse with words to write
In the sand, but waves washed the sight
🤔
August 24th, 2021 20:28
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Goldfinch60 said:
We all hear our own conscience if we are prepared to listen for it Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 14:56
Goldfinch60 said:
We all hear our own conscience if we are prepared to listen for it Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 14:56
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
myself and me said:
Can you hear the whisper \"Brilliant!\"?
August 24th, 2021 13:47
myself and me said:
Can you hear the whisper \"Brilliant!\"?
August 24th, 2021 13:47
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Fay Slimm. said:
A super three liner again Nev. The voice of inner conscience can ring the loudest when really listening and will drown out even the sea - cos I have tried that meself with a shell.........x
August 24th, 2021 09:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A super three liner again Nev. The voice of inner conscience can ring the loudest when really listening and will drown out even the sea - cos I have tried that meself with a shell.........x
August 24th, 2021 09:54
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
L. B. Mek said:
jumped the gun, maybe
blurted out those words in the heat of passion
mere weaved syllables, to him
a tsunami of release for her: once repressed, dreams
and so she dams, herself - back
to those safe shores, of disbelief...
\'timing\', is a much neglected artform
in my humble opinion!
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
couldn\'t help being inspired
thank you! what a gift you choose to share
August 24th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
jumped the gun, maybe
blurted out those words in the heat of passion
mere weaved syllables, to him
a tsunami of release for her: once repressed, dreams
and so she dams, herself - back
to those safe shores, of disbelief...
\'timing\', is a much neglected artform
in my humble opinion!
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
couldn\'t help being inspired
thank you! what a gift you choose to share
August 24th, 2021 06:08
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
dusk arising said:
Was it a WW2 shell?
Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling into place.
August 24th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
Was it a WW2 shell?
Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling into place.
August 24th, 2021 03:49
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done my friend, loved the opening lines.... sometimes nothing can definitely be To loud
August 24th, 2021 02:18
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done my friend, loved the opening lines.... sometimes nothing can definitely be To loud
August 24th, 2021 02:18
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Yes, we can get into some silent places - old church, etc - and the silence can actually hurt our ears - so does me singing to them! heehee.
August 24th, 2021 01:37
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Yes, we can get into some silent places - old church, etc - and the silence can actually hurt our ears - so does me singing to them! heehee.
August 24th, 2021 01:37
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