Comments received on poems by Neville
Beached Whale Blues
Doggerel Dave said:
Much of that rescue activity you relate occurs also in Australia, Nev. Dedication required - kudos.Such a turnaround from the old days.
Whale watching now big business - Humpbacks breaching is a spectacular sight - if a little mysterious.
July 26th, 2021 04:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Much of that rescue activity you relate occurs also in Australia, Nev. Dedication required - kudos.Such a turnaround from the old days.
Whale watching now big business - Humpbacks breaching is a spectacular sight - if a little mysterious.
July 26th, 2021 04:58
Beached Whale Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange the beaching of whales Nev.
-- your descriptive haiku reminds us of high tide rescue for some while others are the unfortunate ones. Sad eh - - and I am beginning to blubber now...........x
July 26th, 2021 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange the beaching of whales Nev.
-- your descriptive haiku reminds us of high tide rescue for some while others are the unfortunate ones. Sad eh - - and I am beginning to blubber now...........x
July 26th, 2021 03:32
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
Goldfinch60 said:
Or hopefully both will be together.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Or hopefully both will be together.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:43
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
MendedFences27 said:
Frivolous affairs, some long remembered, some forgotten straight away. You dove deep into the essence of both. Well structured, succinct. and pointed. Short, but complex. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2021 22:25
MendedFences27 said:
Frivolous affairs, some long remembered, some forgotten straight away. You dove deep into the essence of both. Well structured, succinct. and pointed. Short, but complex. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2021 22:25
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
dusk arising said:
Many a new taste can reach one\'s tongue tip. Foul tastes are best replaced with something sweet.... a sweet taste should be savoured for as long as it lingers and should an aftertaste arise... look for something to remove it.... something sweet maybe?
Nice wordplay to get the word jugglers juggling.
July 25th, 2021 11:05
dusk arising said:
Many a new taste can reach one\'s tongue tip. Foul tastes are best replaced with something sweet.... a sweet taste should be savoured for as long as it lingers and should an aftertaste arise... look for something to remove it.... something sweet maybe?
Nice wordplay to get the word jugglers juggling.
July 25th, 2021 11:05
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
Poetic Dan said:
Not if I know how to use it for more than just words and song.... To much for Sunday morning, well you wrote the fantastic poem lol
Cheers my man
July 25th, 2021 04:07
Poetic Dan said:
Not if I know how to use it for more than just words and song.... To much for Sunday morning, well you wrote the fantastic poem lol
Cheers my man
July 25th, 2021 04:07
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
Maybe or not - however the taste of these beguiling four lines will remain in readers\' minds of that I am sure - -- -have a great Sunday my friend.......x
July 25th, 2021 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Maybe or not - however the taste of these beguiling four lines will remain in readers\' minds of that I am sure - -- -have a great Sunday my friend.......x
July 25th, 2021 02:25
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
KP\'s name was on the tip of my tongue - so I spat it out, like a bad apple! lol.
July 25th, 2021 02:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
KP\'s name was on the tip of my tongue - so I spat it out, like a bad apple! lol.
July 25th, 2021 02:13
From a Safe Distance Only
Goldfinch60 said:
Silences can be so informative and so wonderful within our lives Neville.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Silences can be so informative and so wonderful within our lives Neville.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:28
From a Safe Distance Only
Doggerel Dave said:
Darn! (or something) - Fay\'s solved your riddle, and I woz a going to tell you it woz too hard to solve....
July 24th, 2021 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Darn! (or something) - Fay\'s solved your riddle, and I woz a going to tell you it woz too hard to solve....
July 24th, 2021 19:53
From a Safe Distance Only
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poet\'s mind has versed the almost unattainable with this invitation to listen to silence as it resonates. Hurting yes but a reminder of love subtly calling again from the past. A gem again Nev.
July 24th, 2021 10:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poet\'s mind has versed the almost unattainable with this invitation to listen to silence as it resonates. Hurting yes but a reminder of love subtly calling again from the past. A gem again Nev.
July 24th, 2021 10:03
En Route From A to B
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
The time for the wicked\'s judgement will come - as in my recent poem.
If it was not so serious - meanwhile - me trip to the Co-op and back is bad enough. Doh! Why am I complaining, when there\'s this that happened?
July 24th, 2021 02:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
The time for the wicked\'s judgement will come - as in my recent poem.
If it was not so serious - meanwhile - me trip to the Co-op and back is bad enough. Doh! Why am I complaining, when there\'s this that happened?
July 24th, 2021 02:22
En Route From A to B
Goldfinch60 said:
That route from A to B was an absolute nightmare for those who travelled it and lost their live in doing so.
Even today it is said that no birds sing at Belsen.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That route from A to B was an absolute nightmare for those who travelled it and lost their live in doing so.
Even today it is said that no birds sing at Belsen.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:33
En Route From A to B
Doggerel Dave said:
Forced to abandon this topic for a long time. Immediately after the war, it was informational overload - because not only British prisoner of war escape stories, which I read avidly and enjoyed (to the victor goes the spoils – and the propaganda) but accounts and news reels (covering the opening of the camps) were in abundance also. Nightmares as a kid.
Latterly, not so long ago, a fortnight spent in Berlin for the art galleries and modern architecture forced me to do the rounds covering this once more. And once more wished I had not.
In this context, I have to tell you Nev your writing is too good and bought this up too vividly for me.
Not a criticism – others may need to wake up.
July 23rd, 2021 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Forced to abandon this topic for a long time. Immediately after the war, it was informational overload - because not only British prisoner of war escape stories, which I read avidly and enjoyed (to the victor goes the spoils – and the propaganda) but accounts and news reels (covering the opening of the camps) were in abundance also. Nightmares as a kid.
Latterly, not so long ago, a fortnight spent in Berlin for the art galleries and modern architecture forced me to do the rounds covering this once more. And once more wished I had not.
In this context, I have to tell you Nev your writing is too good and bought this up too vividly for me.
Not a criticism – others may need to wake up.
July 23rd, 2021 20:05
En Route From A to B
Jerry Reynolds said:
A necessary write, Neville.
My mind still has a hard time getting around the scale of it all.
Your poem helps.
July 23rd, 2021 17:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
A necessary write, Neville.
My mind still has a hard time getting around the scale of it all.
Your poem helps.
July 23rd, 2021 17:01
En Route From A to B
Fay Slimm. said:
Every line in your exposure of such evil makes that route from A. to B etched indelibly on hearts and minds of all generations - - may that four day hellish journey never ever be relegated to history. A read to remember with bowed heads Nev.
July 23rd, 2021 15:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Every line in your exposure of such evil makes that route from A. to B etched indelibly on hearts and minds of all generations - - may that four day hellish journey never ever be relegated to history. A read to remember with bowed heads Nev.
July 23rd, 2021 15:39
En Route From A to B
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
The unspeakable atrocities committed against the helpless who never desired such a trip from A to B. Unfortunately,
‘almost a million innocents passed en-route from A to B’.
I became aware of these despicable facts when I read “The Diary of Anne Frank”.
Laura🌻
July 23rd, 2021 15:31
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
The unspeakable atrocities committed against the helpless who never desired such a trip from A to B. Unfortunately,
‘almost a million innocents passed en-route from A to B’.
I became aware of these despicable facts when I read “The Diary of Anne Frank”.
Laura🌻
July 23rd, 2021 15:31
The Essence of You
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Neville, now in my memory.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Neville, now in my memory.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 00:39
The Essence of You
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for this engaging muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:51
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for this engaging muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:51
The Essence of You
SureshG said:
He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.
July 22nd, 2021 12:22
SureshG said:
He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.
July 22nd, 2021 12:22
The Essence of You
Saxon Crow said:
He\'d be buggered if he had asthma.
Beautiful poem Nev
July 22nd, 2021 10:50
Saxon Crow said:
He\'d be buggered if he had asthma.
Beautiful poem Nev
July 22nd, 2021 10:50
The Essence of You
orchidee said:
Oopd, I nipped back to \'like\' this. Was I too busy \'liking\' my own poems? Was that why I was cut orf?!
July 22nd, 2021 05:29
orchidee said:
Oopd, I nipped back to \'like\' this. Was I too busy \'liking\' my own poems? Was that why I was cut orf?!
July 22nd, 2021 05:29
The Essence of You
orchidee said:
Good write N. Now, I don\'t want to breathe in any effects of KP\'s botox! She\'s gonna melt in this heat. She will turn into a plastic blob! lol.
July 22nd, 2021 05:27
orchidee said:
Good write N. Now, I don\'t want to breathe in any effects of KP\'s botox! She\'s gonna melt in this heat. She will turn into a plastic blob! lol.
July 22nd, 2021 05:27
The Essence of You
L. B. Mek said:
like I breathe, your subtle poetry-in
at every opportunity
He a fanatic of love and intoxicating chemistry
and, I
well just a fan, but a proud one - till the end
my friend,
(just can\'t get enough of your scene depicting write\'s
in each one, we just plunge straight into the nucleus
core, at the heart of its poetic plot)
July 22nd, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
like I breathe, your subtle poetry-in
at every opportunity
He a fanatic of love and intoxicating chemistry
and, I
well just a fan, but a proud one - till the end
my friend,
(just can\'t get enough of your scene depicting write\'s
in each one, we just plunge straight into the nucleus
core, at the heart of its poetic plot)
July 22nd, 2021 04:05
The Essence of You
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing beats breathing love\'s essence like expressed in this tenderest of poetic confessions. A sigh of a read Nev..............x
July 22nd, 2021 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing beats breathing love\'s essence like expressed in this tenderest of poetic confessions. A sigh of a read Nev..............x
July 22nd, 2021 03:47
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