Comments received on poems by Neville
Bare
dusk arising said:
mmmm can\'t help but get a warm feeling from your post today. Sadly the reality of my aging is that i get terrible back pains if i stay in bed too long but..... i can think of one or two incentives...
December 27th, 2020 11:12
dusk arising said:
mmmm can\'t help but get a warm feeling from your post today. Sadly the reality of my aging is that i get terrible back pains if i stay in bed too long but..... i can think of one or two incentives...
December 27th, 2020 11:12
Bare
Fay Slimm. said:
Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds invitingly cosy - - put me down for a try.......x
December 27th, 2020 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds invitingly cosy - - put me down for a try.......x
December 27th, 2020 05:46
Bare
Poetic Dan said:
Most definitely ride with this out from the winter smog looking forward to spring!
December 27th, 2020 03:55
Poetic Dan said:
Most definitely ride with this out from the winter smog looking forward to spring!
December 27th, 2020 03:55
In a Moment of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful passionate write Neville.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful passionate write Neville.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:52
In a Moment of Poetry
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Lips - what do we in poetry call the lips of the vulva? - I say \"love-lips\" for both the labia majora and the labia minora of the vulva (NOT vagina).
But remember I was a pathologist in my day job, before I retired - I\'m 81.
December 26th, 2020 19:25
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Lips - what do we in poetry call the lips of the vulva? - I say \"love-lips\" for both the labia majora and the labia minora of the vulva (NOT vagina).
But remember I was a pathologist in my day job, before I retired - I\'m 81.
December 26th, 2020 19:25
In a Moment of Poetry
Dove said:
Nice Poetry, inhaled with passion and taste upon thy lips
December 26th, 2020 11:34
Dove said:
Nice Poetry, inhaled with passion and taste upon thy lips
December 26th, 2020 11:34
In a Moment of Poetry
orchidee said:
A swoony moment?! Seasons Greetings N. I must meet her! lol.
December 26th, 2020 10:28
orchidee said:
A swoony moment?! Seasons Greetings N. I must meet her! lol.
December 26th, 2020 10:28
Truism
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend
December 22nd, 2020 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend
December 22nd, 2020 06:57
Mastication
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m gona \'choose\' to just tiptoe around the deeper and darker possible meaning to your write, blink my ignorance over your words and simply state,
some of the most treasured memories I have been gifted in my life: involved a woman who angelical deigned to intrust her love within my fickle heart and a white button-up business shirt - ruffled around the collar, cos before she \'chose\' to pick it up - it was all tapped-out...
a great write my friend, back to those deceptively subtle write\'s that only your insightfully witty imagination can conjure-up!
December 17th, 2020 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m gona \'choose\' to just tiptoe around the deeper and darker possible meaning to your write, blink my ignorance over your words and simply state,
some of the most treasured memories I have been gifted in my life: involved a woman who angelical deigned to intrust her love within my fickle heart and a white button-up business shirt - ruffled around the collar, cos before she \'chose\' to pick it up - it was all tapped-out...
a great write my friend, back to those deceptively subtle write\'s that only your insightfully witty imagination can conjure-up!
December 17th, 2020 05:44
Mastication
Goldfinch60 said:
As da has said those flavours must be savoured over time.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
As da has said those flavours must be savoured over time.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:25
Mastication
FredPeyer said:
Well put, Neville, and dusk arising said it all.
December 16th, 2020 11:40
FredPeyer said:
Well put, Neville, and dusk arising said it all.
December 16th, 2020 11:40
Mastication
dusk arising said:
BIG smile here. I like that very much. A beautiful woman is like an exquisitely prepared meal. She must be served well and time taken so that all flavours of her femininity may be savoured.
December 16th, 2020 11:05
dusk arising said:
BIG smile here. I like that very much. A beautiful woman is like an exquisitely prepared meal. She must be served well and time taken so that all flavours of her femininity may be savoured.
December 16th, 2020 11:05
Mastication
Jerry Reynolds said:
So was she when she put on that shirt. Good write.
December 16th, 2020 09:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
So was she when she put on that shirt. Good write.
December 16th, 2020 09:32
Head Rest
L. B. Mek said:
of youth\'s vehemence in all thing\'s impassioned into brilliance: these song celebrates, and how!
\'fool\'s rush-in\' goes the well trodden wisdom, but nay: dear Poet, I\'m with you - may we all go out as the brilliant flames of volatile vitality, we were born to be...
Brilliant my friend! another nugget uncovered to quench my poetic need\'s, (well, for a little while at least) lol
December 14th, 2020 07:03
L. B. Mek said:
of youth\'s vehemence in all thing\'s impassioned into brilliance: these song celebrates, and how!
\'fool\'s rush-in\' goes the well trodden wisdom, but nay: dear Poet, I\'m with you - may we all go out as the brilliant flames of volatile vitality, we were born to be...
Brilliant my friend! another nugget uncovered to quench my poetic need\'s, (well, for a little while at least) lol
December 14th, 2020 07:03
Vermeil
Dove said:
Oh might she be a radiant star
Whose shine is feather light
Golden beams flowing from afar
Upon the eyes such a delight
Oh might she be beautiful gal
Whose skin is the fabric of gold
Who makes men’s ego swell
A beautiful sight to behold
( such loveliness your poetic words hold)
Much enjoyed
December 12th, 2020 07:50
Dove said:
Oh might she be a radiant star
Whose shine is feather light
Golden beams flowing from afar
Upon the eyes such a delight
Oh might she be beautiful gal
Whose skin is the fabric of gold
Who makes men’s ego swell
A beautiful sight to behold
( such loveliness your poetic words hold)
Much enjoyed
December 12th, 2020 07:50
Carbonito de Sophie
Dove said:
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of “ I love you “
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
December 12th, 2020 07:38
Dove said:
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of “ I love you “
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
December 12th, 2020 07:38
Vermeil
Poetic Dan said:
I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!
Thank you!
December 9th, 2020 16:29
Poetic Dan said:
I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!
Thank you!
December 9th, 2020 16:29
Vermeil
Suresh said:
You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could
December 9th, 2020 04:57
Suresh said:
You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could
December 9th, 2020 04:57
Swansong
RDS said:
Nice view Neville, slightly darkly through a funnily dry lens! I should think about writing a will. Thanks
J
December 8th, 2020 14:05
RDS said:
Nice view Neville, slightly darkly through a funnily dry lens! I should think about writing a will. Thanks
J
December 8th, 2020 14:05
Vermeil
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins over unveiled vermeil- skin. Intriguing again my friend - - - - but I like it. immensely..............x
December 8th, 2020 07:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins over unveiled vermeil- skin. Intriguing again my friend - - - - but I like it. immensely..............x
December 8th, 2020 07:12
Vermeil
L. B. Mek said:
oh you clever Poet:
is this commentary on him perceiving her as his \'second skin\', untameable electric attraction fusing their fantasies into one murky reality,
or is this her perception of self - her worth, as a self-demeaning take on aesthetic beauty while underneath it all she considers herself as mere decorative silver, when she yearns to have been born into the world of all things \'real\' gold...
brilliantly subtle, truly an insightful write pondering intricacies that play out in our moment\'s of vulnerable intimacy,
or I\'m just reading too much into things as usual, lol
a Brilliant write either way!
December 8th, 2020 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
oh you clever Poet:
is this commentary on him perceiving her as his \'second skin\', untameable electric attraction fusing their fantasies into one murky reality,
or is this her perception of self - her worth, as a self-demeaning take on aesthetic beauty while underneath it all she considers herself as mere decorative silver, when she yearns to have been born into the world of all things \'real\' gold...
brilliantly subtle, truly an insightful write pondering intricacies that play out in our moment\'s of vulnerable intimacy,
or I\'m just reading too much into things as usual, lol
a Brilliant write either way!
December 8th, 2020 05:47
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