Comments received on poems by Neville
Storm Petrel Rising
spilleronsheet said:
Initially I felt nostalgic of a beach visit
Then felt the wrath man delivered to our nature
It’s a very well knit poetry
You played the words well dear poet
November 1st, 2021 08:46
spilleronsheet said:
Initially I felt nostalgic of a beach visit
Then felt the wrath man delivered to our nature
It’s a very well knit poetry
You played the words well dear poet
November 1st, 2021 08:46
Storm Petrel Rising
Doggerel Dave said:
Smelt the salt the sea and the foam tangy in my nostrils, never saw no flying motor cars, all I saw were gulls out there, which was great \'cos it meant they weren\'t in here nicking my sandwich....
Atmospheric write there Nev.
November 1st, 2021 07:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Smelt the salt the sea and the foam tangy in my nostrils, never saw no flying motor cars, all I saw were gulls out there, which was great \'cos it meant they weren\'t in here nicking my sandwich....
Atmospheric write there Nev.
November 1st, 2021 07:52
Storm Petrel Rising
L. B. Mek said:
even all the way, from here
deep in our islander\'s, naïve existence
we smell the electrified menace in the gust
that ruffles our clothing and hair
delivering promise, of a Winter
that\'s gonna be remembered long
in the annals of Nature\'s
wrath of devastation..
\'brooding\' is putting it mildly!
(thanks for sharing dear Poet
your words, help sharpen our awareness
let\'s us know, its not just us
that\'s glimpsed those ominous, omens)
November 1st, 2021 07:31
L. B. Mek said:
even all the way, from here
deep in our islander\'s, naïve existence
we smell the electrified menace in the gust
that ruffles our clothing and hair
delivering promise, of a Winter
that\'s gonna be remembered long
in the annals of Nature\'s
wrath of devastation..
\'brooding\' is putting it mildly!
(thanks for sharing dear Poet
your words, help sharpen our awareness
let\'s us know, its not just us
that\'s glimpsed those ominous, omens)
November 1st, 2021 07:31
Storm Petrel Rising
orchidee said:
I\'m a confused laddie - petrol in the title, then petrel, a bird!
Typo not done yet - not when I looked in! lol
November 1st, 2021 06:52
orchidee said:
I\'m a confused laddie - petrol in the title, then petrel, a bird!
Typo not done yet - not when I looked in! lol
November 1st, 2021 06:52
Storm Petrel Rising
Fay Slimm. said:
A marvel of sight are those petrels in flight when seen from a boat at sea - - love the double usage of words in this newsy piece Nev .......... x
November 1st, 2021 06:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A marvel of sight are those petrels in flight when seen from a boat at sea - - love the double usage of words in this newsy piece Nev .......... x
November 1st, 2021 06:39
Storm Petrel Rising
dusk arising said:
Oi seen some thangs on\'t \'orizon m\'lad but i never seen of that!
Petrel or petrol..... fuels the imagination with confusion. Certainly be a storm comin if petrol prices get much higher.
November 1st, 2021 06:25
dusk arising said:
Oi seen some thangs on\'t \'orizon m\'lad but i never seen of that!
Petrel or petrol..... fuels the imagination with confusion. Certainly be a storm comin if petrol prices get much higher.
November 1st, 2021 06:25
Somewhere on a Spectrum
spilleronsheet said:
Such fine words
And what a wonderful contrast
Marvellous is the lady
October 31st, 2021 11:27
spilleronsheet said:
Such fine words
And what a wonderful contrast
Marvellous is the lady
October 31st, 2021 11:27
Somewhere on a Spectrum
Caring dove said:
Interesting words … nicely expressed . )
October 31st, 2021 09:47
Caring dove said:
Interesting words … nicely expressed . )
October 31st, 2021 09:47
Somewhere on a Spectrum
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poignant words make clear how vulnerable such special ones are my friend and who are able to live only inside their own mysterious rainbow - - thank you for caring and for sharing truths about those - \"somewhere\" on an unknowable spectrum........x
October 31st, 2021 03:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poignant words make clear how vulnerable such special ones are my friend and who are able to live only inside their own mysterious rainbow - - thank you for caring and for sharing truths about those - \"somewhere\" on an unknowable spectrum........x
October 31st, 2021 03:22
Somewhere on a Spectrum
Goldfinch60 said:
Fascinating words Neville about a fascinating lady.
Andy
October 31st, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Fascinating words Neville about a fascinating lady.
Andy
October 31st, 2021 01:53
Somewhere on a Spectrum
dusk arising said:
The essence of enigma and fascination captured in your fine writing today.
October 31st, 2021 01:47
dusk arising said:
The essence of enigma and fascination captured in your fine writing today.
October 31st, 2021 01:47
Inconsequential Gulls
SureshG said:
Not to be a downer but hidden beneath your message is the ominous winds of the demise of democracy.
October 30th, 2021 20:23
SureshG said:
Not to be a downer but hidden beneath your message is the ominous winds of the demise of democracy.
October 30th, 2021 20:23
Inconsequential Gulls
Neville said:
Hey Neil, sorry to hear that, still I guess it could have been a lot worse .. good to see you back .. and have as good a weekend as you possibly can under the circumstances ............... Neville
October 29th, 2021 11:52
Neville said:
Hey Neil, sorry to hear that, still I guess it could have been a lot worse .. good to see you back .. and have as good a weekend as you possibly can under the circumstances ............... Neville
October 29th, 2021 11:52
Inconsequential Gulls
orchidee said:
I reckon I should meet her. See ya in a week, when I\'ve recovered! lol.
October 29th, 2021 10:49
orchidee said:
I reckon I should meet her. See ya in a week, when I\'ve recovered! lol.
October 29th, 2021 10:49
Inconsequential Gulls
L. B. Mek said:
.. and all
chasing crumbs
leaching off, of
society\'s rubbish..
Gluttony, was an all consuming
evil
before Theology: ever existed!
(a great write, dear Poet)
and thank you, for letting me vent a little as well
by helping inspire my little scribbled reply
October 29th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
.. and all
chasing crumbs
leaching off, of
society\'s rubbish..
Gluttony, was an all consuming
evil
before Theology: ever existed!
(a great write, dear Poet)
and thank you, for letting me vent a little as well
by helping inspire my little scribbled reply
October 29th, 2021 05:47
Inconsequential Gulls
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing. Agree too with Dusk that your words spell deeper meaning than just inconsequential - good write my friend.....x
October 29th, 2021 04:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing. Agree too with Dusk that your words spell deeper meaning than just inconsequential - good write my friend.....x
October 29th, 2021 04:13
Inconsequential Gulls
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
Especially because it’s a sweet way of satire filled with truth
Those are the great politicians we choose
Well penned
October 29th, 2021 03:21
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
Especially because it’s a sweet way of satire filled with truth
Those are the great politicians we choose
Well penned
October 29th, 2021 03:21
Inconsequential Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:
Your talking about MP\'s again, what a load of misconceptions and non truths spew from their beaks.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Your talking about MP\'s again, what a load of misconceptions and non truths spew from their beaks.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 02:04
Inconsequential Gulls
orchidee said:
Should I meet these gulls?!
Well, it sounded like \'gals\'! lol.
October 29th, 2021 01:58
orchidee said:
Should I meet these gulls?!
Well, it sounded like \'gals\'! lol.
October 29th, 2021 01:58
Inconsequential Gulls
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically phrased today.
Can you smell the regurgitated fish?
October 29th, 2021 01:57
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically phrased today.
Can you smell the regurgitated fish?
October 29th, 2021 01:57
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is like an abstract artwork where you really have to look deeply into it to find a meaning within yourself - I like abstract works of art so thank you.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is like an abstract artwork where you really have to look deeply into it to find a meaning within yourself - I like abstract works of art so thank you.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:54
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a very interesting and intriguing read……..
’burnt and bitter oranges’……
this is something that I really like……
believe it or not…..
Thank you for sharing this challenging write.
Laura🌻
October 28th, 2021 23:27
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a very interesting and intriguing read……..
’burnt and bitter oranges’……
this is something that I really like……
believe it or not…..
Thank you for sharing this challenging write.
Laura🌻
October 28th, 2021 23:27
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
SureshG said:
Me thinks you tickled the MPS’s uvula, devilishly teasing, engaging, meaning left to interpretation
October 28th, 2021 20:20
SureshG said:
Me thinks you tickled the MPS’s uvula, devilishly teasing, engaging, meaning left to interpretation
October 28th, 2021 20:20
Mouth My Name Slow
Sparrow73 said:
I love it! It is something I can completely relate to and sincerely needed to hear! The universe is so timely when we\'re willing to listen isn\'t it. Keep em coming I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed them all! I do hope that when where purging are negative thoughts that we do not mean to offend others it\'s just our way of releasing of which we cannot hang on to is all. No sweet can be appreciated without the knowledge of a bit of bitter. Thus, bittersweet.
October 28th, 2021 15:19
Sparrow73 said:
I love it! It is something I can completely relate to and sincerely needed to hear! The universe is so timely when we\'re willing to listen isn\'t it. Keep em coming I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed them all! I do hope that when where purging are negative thoughts that we do not mean to offend others it\'s just our way of releasing of which we cannot hang on to is all. No sweet can be appreciated without the knowledge of a bit of bitter. Thus, bittersweet.
October 28th, 2021 15:19
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
dusk arising said:
Mystery leads the mind to conjour a story..... plenty of meat here to construct a very strangely framed tale....
. ...... bergamot taunts the air
October 28th, 2021 14:41
dusk arising said:
Mystery leads the mind to conjour a story..... plenty of meat here to construct a very strangely framed tale....
. ...... bergamot taunts the air
October 28th, 2021 14:41
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Great minds think alike they say - and this young filly\'s eyes like the uncanny when she is nearly right.......x
October 28th, 2021 13:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Great minds think alike they say - and this young filly\'s eyes like the uncanny when she is nearly right.......x
October 28th, 2021 13:04
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like the mummy has been found, and her importance has been lost in time.
October 28th, 2021 13:03
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like the mummy has been found, and her importance has been lost in time.
October 28th, 2021 13:03
Burnt and Bitter Oranges
Fay Slimm. said:
Old pictures viewed in today\'s mode must have seemed to perpetuate people yet traits remembered bring back even the taste and smell of someone much missed - - at least I think that is the message behind this intriguing read - - well perhaps maybe......x
October 28th, 2021 11:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Old pictures viewed in today\'s mode must have seemed to perpetuate people yet traits remembered bring back even the taste and smell of someone much missed - - at least I think that is the message behind this intriguing read - - well perhaps maybe......x
October 28th, 2021 11:40
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