Comments received on poems by Neville
Almost a Very Nearly
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉
July 29th, 2021 07:47
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉
July 29th, 2021 07:47
Almost a Very Nearly
dusk arising said:
Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.
July 29th, 2021 05:45
dusk arising said:
Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.
July 29th, 2021 05:45
Almost a Very Nearly
L. B. Mek said:
been out in choppy rivers have we?
almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
or a lifetime\'s nightmare of regret,
guess it all, rests
on a flip of luck\'s - temperamental tide
if you will..
another fun shorty, my friend
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
been out in choppy rivers have we?
almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
or a lifetime\'s nightmare of regret,
guess it all, rests
on a flip of luck\'s - temperamental tide
if you will..
another fun shorty, my friend
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:52
No Sweat
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve got me a few cultural keepsakes
best described
as Men\'s \'lengthy shirts\' - ahem
from my travels, and I almost
booked a flight to middle east, once
just so I could add
one of their, rather - \'Airy\', ensembles
to my collection..
there\'s no shame, when your home
is turned into a sweat bucket - for days
no Sir, no shame at all, just survival
in all its \'pretty coloured guises\'... ahem! lol
what great fun, dear poet
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve got me a few cultural keepsakes
best described
as Men\'s \'lengthy shirts\' - ahem
from my travels, and I almost
booked a flight to middle east, once
just so I could add
one of their, rather - \'Airy\', ensembles
to my collection..
there\'s no shame, when your home
is turned into a sweat bucket - for days
no Sir, no shame at all, just survival
in all its \'pretty coloured guises\'... ahem! lol
what great fun, dear poet
thank you
July 29th, 2021 04:49
Almost a Very Nearly
Fay Slimm. said:
Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x
July 29th, 2021 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x
July 29th, 2021 03:48
No Sweat
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fun read, Neville.
The image of you in a dress.
Just can\'t un-see it.
July 28th, 2021 14:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fun read, Neville.
The image of you in a dress.
Just can\'t un-see it.
July 28th, 2021 14:17
No Sweat
Accidental Poet said:
I bet Orchi has a thong he\'ll let you borrow. 🤣
July 28th, 2021 07:50
Accidental Poet said:
I bet Orchi has a thong he\'ll let you borrow. 🤣
July 28th, 2021 07:50
No Sweat
Saxon Crow said:
A dress is nice as long as it\'s long
But you just can\'t beat a colourful sarong
July 28th, 2021 05:45
Saxon Crow said:
A dress is nice as long as it\'s long
But you just can\'t beat a colourful sarong
July 28th, 2021 05:45
No Sweat
dusk arising said:
I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was very funny back then, but I don\'t think i could live with the stigma if I were seen doing similar again unless on stage.
Hot, sweaty and sticky though my stage performances became i think it may have been more comfortable in a loose fitting dress.
Cant really picture you in a dress... have you a nice wig and heels?
July 28th, 2021 05:03
dusk arising said:
I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was very funny back then, but I don\'t think i could live with the stigma if I were seen doing similar again unless on stage.
Hot, sweaty and sticky though my stage performances became i think it may have been more comfortable in a loose fitting dress.
Cant really picture you in a dress... have you a nice wig and heels?
July 28th, 2021 05:03
No Sweat
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a see-thru\' or one of those minis ? Heat makes us mardy and dizzy with sweat - so go on - I dare ya - - but keep away from the harbour for pity\'s sake Nev...........x
July 28th, 2021 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a see-thru\' or one of those minis ? Heat makes us mardy and dizzy with sweat - so go on - I dare ya - - but keep away from the harbour for pity\'s sake Nev...........x
July 28th, 2021 03:07
No Sweat
Goldfinch60 said:
If I wore less on hot sticky days like this I may get arrested!
Andy
July 28th, 2021 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
If I wore less on hot sticky days like this I may get arrested!
Andy
July 28th, 2021 01:46
Its Shore Life
SureshG said:
The sea was calling you and you obliged, and now it offers awesome sights.
July 27th, 2021 12:47
SureshG said:
The sea was calling you and you obliged, and now it offers awesome sights.
July 27th, 2021 12:47
Its Shore Life
Accidental Poet said:
Oh the magnet pull towards the coastline. The air, gulls, the spray of crashing waves. I grew up on the coast also. \'Tis why I\'m such a lover of lighthouses. Great write N.
July 27th, 2021 08:39
Accidental Poet said:
Oh the magnet pull towards the coastline. The air, gulls, the spray of crashing waves. I grew up on the coast also. \'Tis why I\'m such a lover of lighthouses. Great write N.
July 27th, 2021 08:39
Its Shore Life
L. B. Mek said:
it comes with that glint of grey in our hair
and an extra second of delay, in our sighs
a nudge of awareness, announcing
that burgeoning arrival of perspective
graced by wisdoms, wide lensed scope
for nuanced: thought...
(such a vivid read
imbued with that melancholic romance
of life, by the sea)
another great shorty, my friend!
July 27th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
it comes with that glint of grey in our hair
and an extra second of delay, in our sighs
a nudge of awareness, announcing
that burgeoning arrival of perspective
graced by wisdoms, wide lensed scope
for nuanced: thought...
(such a vivid read
imbued with that melancholic romance
of life, by the sea)
another great shorty, my friend!
July 27th, 2021 05:25
Its Shore Life
Goldfinch60 said:
So wonderful to share the sea shore with those wonderful birds Neville.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So wonderful to share the sea shore with those wonderful birds Neville.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:42
Its Shore Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing but far too familiar gulls when I hit the seashore ....envious Neville.
July 27th, 2021 02:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing but far too familiar gulls when I hit the seashore ....envious Neville.
July 27th, 2021 02:40
Its Shore Life
Saxon Crow said:
It shertainly is! One day the crabs will rise up
July 27th, 2021 02:37
Saxon Crow said:
It shertainly is! One day the crabs will rise up
July 27th, 2021 02:37
Its Shore Life
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your play on words - -- was with you there Nev watching those busy sanderlings - it is indeed a seabird\'s life around shores and great to stroll among the different sorts and am glad you have all that so near dear amigo.............x
July 27th, 2021 02:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your play on words - -- was with you there Nev watching those busy sanderlings - it is indeed a seabird\'s life around shores and great to stroll among the different sorts and am glad you have all that so near dear amigo.............x
July 27th, 2021 02:30
Beached Whale Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a shame to see those beached whales but there are many who help them get back to their safe environment.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a shame to see those beached whales but there are many who help them get back to their safe environment.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:39
Beached Whale Blues
Saxon Crow said:
Yooooouuuu diiiiidd this weeeelllllllloooooo
July 26th, 2021 14:23
Saxon Crow said:
Yooooouuuu diiiiidd this weeeelllllllloooooo
July 26th, 2021 14:23
Beached Whale Blues
SureshG said:
Why do they get beached? Is it intentional or an accident - would be nice to learn.
Loved the haiku - I never learnt to compose.
July 26th, 2021 12:39
SureshG said:
Why do they get beached? Is it intentional or an accident - would be nice to learn.
Loved the haiku - I never learnt to compose.
July 26th, 2021 12:39
Beached Whale Blues
dusk arising said:
Such an event for many in parts of this wonderous world means a bounty of good food and wealth. Today in our climes it is a sad occasion beyond our understanding.
High tide to the rescue indeed but all to often the whale remains.
A puzzling poem for me to dance with possibilities.
July 26th, 2021 09:33
dusk arising said:
Such an event for many in parts of this wonderous world means a bounty of good food and wealth. Today in our climes it is a sad occasion beyond our understanding.
High tide to the rescue indeed but all to often the whale remains.
A puzzling poem for me to dance with possibilities.
July 26th, 2021 09:33
Beached Whale Blues
Accidental Poet said:
That one species should care and help that of another is the sign of compassion and love of life. Well penned N.
July 26th, 2021 08:53
Accidental Poet said:
That one species should care and help that of another is the sign of compassion and love of life. Well penned N.
July 26th, 2021 08:53
Beached Whale Blues
Jerry Reynolds said:
what mates we were then
spinnakers on the wind
July 26th, 2021 08:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
what mates we were then
spinnakers on the wind
July 26th, 2021 08:02
Upon the Tip of His Tongue
L. B. Mek said:
and how we regret
not realising it, at the time
and not insuring, we treasured
each lingered sip
and each lips, breathed-in scent
of all that she is, and will
remain - regretfully, meaningfully
in our lives
till that very last, blink
of our relenting: grip...
(simply: Brilliant my friend
what a poignant shorty)
July 26th, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
and how we regret
not realising it, at the time
and not insuring, we treasured
each lingered sip
and each lips, breathed-in scent
of all that she is, and will
remain - regretfully, meaningfully
in our lives
till that very last, blink
of our relenting: grip...
(simply: Brilliant my friend
what a poignant shorty)
July 26th, 2021 06:37
From a Safe Distance Only
L. B. Mek said:
\'he would admit ..
Indeed it was those subtle
strokes and gentle prompts
That reminded
him so very much of lovers
long since passed\'..
reads like lyrics to a well written country music song
that comes-on between, 4th and 5th drink messy slurps
and has you swimming in yearned-for, memories
till mercifully, by that lost shot of double Sambuca
you bow - out, cold
hoping, memory wipes are invented: by morning...
Just such a great set of lines, my friend
they hit home - arrowed
as if I inked the words myself...
(what greater quality can we expect
from a cherished poem)
thank you!
July 26th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'he would admit ..
Indeed it was those subtle
strokes and gentle prompts
That reminded
him so very much of lovers
long since passed\'..
reads like lyrics to a well written country music song
that comes-on between, 4th and 5th drink messy slurps
and has you swimming in yearned-for, memories
till mercifully, by that lost shot of double Sambuca
you bow - out, cold
hoping, memory wipes are invented: by morning...
Just such a great set of lines, my friend
they hit home - arrowed
as if I inked the words myself...
(what greater quality can we expect
from a cherished poem)
thank you!
July 26th, 2021 06:32
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