Comments received on poems by Neville



Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Caring dove said:

Nice read ) makes me think of those people busy getting everything they want , and more … too busy to stop and reflect . just how I maybe interpreted it anyhow . Or just try and stay in peace despite what may be going on around you . There is a sense of comfort in your words

November 2nd, 2021 15:37

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Your penned words do speak for themselves and I appreciate what they’re communicating to yours truly.

Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.

Laura🌻

November 2nd, 2021 15:27

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
orchidee said:

Now why, when they say \'Peace and good will to all men\' (mankind, that is), does some wag say, \'Who is Will? And why\'s he being good to everyone?\' I dunno these things. lol.

November 2nd, 2021 10:45

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
spilleronsheet said:

I really look at up at your works
So refined and majestic
With few lines they convey such a powerful message
The present scenario with an advice
Well crafted dear poet

November 2nd, 2021 09:33

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
dusk arising said:

Peace and wellbeing is my mantra of the last few weeks and looks like continuing for some time. Away from any human contact, except delivery drivers, peace comes along easily.

Very calming words to be taken onboard.

November 2nd, 2021 05:50

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
L. B. Mek said:

\'Each with their pollen
pockets primed
and likewise filled
to the very
point of overflowing ..\'
these poem, just exudes
your poetic class, my friend
so subtle, ever
so majestically subtle..
you deliver that arrowed incision of insightful commentary
with the practised ease, of a Supreme wordsmith..
(I read and learn, dear Poet
and Proud, to call myself a fan)

November 2nd, 2021 05:47

Let These Words Speak For Themselves
Fay Slimm. said:

Such wise advice in this read today Nev. Explaining clearly your words on finding ways through rush to peace means we leave the fanatic and avoid over-thinking those with differing opinions - maybe......x

November 2nd, 2021 05:17

Storm Petrel Rising
Goldfinch60 said:

Those petrels are wonderful to watch, have seen them when travelling this countries cliffs.

Andy

November 2nd, 2021 01:24

Storm Petrel Rising
Jerry Reynolds said:

A Fine write, Neville.
I\'m going with a harbinger of trouble.

November 1st, 2021 09:43

Storm Petrel Rising
spilleronsheet said:

Initially I felt nostalgic of a beach visit
Then felt the wrath man delivered to our nature
It’s a very well knit poetry
You played the words well dear poet

November 1st, 2021 08:46

Storm Petrel Rising
Doggerel Dave said:

Smelt the salt the sea and the foam tangy in my nostrils, never saw no flying motor cars, all I saw were gulls out there, which was great \'cos it meant they weren\'t in here nicking my sandwich....

Atmospheric write there Nev.

November 1st, 2021 07:52

Storm Petrel Rising
L. B. Mek said:

even all the way, from here
deep in our islander\'s, naïve existence
we smell the electrified menace in the gust
that ruffles our clothing and hair
delivering promise, of a Winter
that\'s gonna be remembered long
in the annals of Nature\'s
wrath of devastation..
\'brooding\' is putting it mildly!
(thanks for sharing dear Poet
your words, help sharpen our awareness
let\'s us know, its not just us
that\'s glimpsed those ominous, omens)

November 1st, 2021 07:31

Storm Petrel Rising
orchidee said:

I\'m a confused laddie - petrol in the title, then petrel, a bird!
Typo not done yet - not when I looked in! lol

November 1st, 2021 06:52

Storm Petrel Rising
Fay Slimm. said:

A marvel of sight are those petrels in flight when seen from a boat at sea - - love the double usage of words in this newsy piece Nev .......... x

November 1st, 2021 06:39

Storm Petrel Rising
dusk arising said:

Oi seen some thangs on\'t \'orizon m\'lad but i never seen of that!

Petrel or petrol..... fuels the imagination with confusion. Certainly be a storm comin if petrol prices get much higher.

November 1st, 2021 06:25

Somewhere on a Spectrum
spilleronsheet said:

Such fine words
And what a wonderful contrast
Marvellous is the lady

October 31st, 2021 11:27

Somewhere on a Spectrum
Caring dove said:

Interesting words … nicely expressed . )

October 31st, 2021 09:47

Somewhere on a Spectrum
Fay Slimm. said:

Your poignant words make clear how vulnerable such special ones are my friend and who are able to live only inside their own mysterious rainbow - - thank you for caring and for sharing truths about those - \"somewhere\" on an unknowable spectrum........x

October 31st, 2021 03:22

Somewhere on a Spectrum
orchidee said:

Yep, I meet enigmatic gals! heehee.

October 31st, 2021 02:22

Somewhere on a Spectrum
Goldfinch60 said:

Fascinating words Neville about a fascinating lady.

Andy

October 31st, 2021 01:53

Somewhere on a Spectrum
dusk arising said:

The essence of enigma and fascination captured in your fine writing today.

October 31st, 2021 01:47

Inconsequential Gulls
SureshG said:

Not to be a downer but hidden beneath your message is the ominous winds of the demise of democracy.

October 30th, 2021 20:23

Inconsequential Gulls
Neville said:


Hey Neil, sorry to hear that, still I guess it could have been a lot worse .. good to see you back .. and have as good a weekend as you possibly can under the circumstances ............... Neville


October 29th, 2021 11:52

Inconsequential Gulls
orchidee said:

I reckon I should meet her. See ya in a week, when I\'ve recovered! lol.

October 29th, 2021 10:49

Inconsequential Gulls
L. B. Mek said:

.. and all
chasing crumbs
leaching off, of
society\'s rubbish..
Gluttony, was an all consuming
evil
before Theology: ever existed!
(a great write, dear Poet)
and thank you, for letting me vent a little as well
by helping inspire my little scribbled reply


October 29th, 2021 05:47

Inconsequential Gulls
Fay Slimm. said:

Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing. Agree too with Dusk that your words spell deeper meaning than just inconsequential - good write my friend.....x

October 29th, 2021 04:13

Inconsequential Gulls
spilleronsheet said:

Well crafted dear poet
Especially because it’s a sweet way of satire filled with truth
Those are the great politicians we choose
Well penned

October 29th, 2021 03:21

Inconsequential Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:

Your talking about MP\'s again, what a load of misconceptions and non truths spew from their beaks.

Andy

October 29th, 2021 02:04

Inconsequential Gulls
orchidee said:

Should I meet these gulls?!
Well, it sounded like \'gals\'! lol.

October 29th, 2021 01:58

Inconsequential Gulls
dusk arising said:

Such a lovely metaphor for the Houses of Parliament you\'ve poetically phrased today.

Can you smell the regurgitated fish?

October 29th, 2021 01:57



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