Comments received on poems by Neville
Black Candles
Goldfinch60 said:
Those black candles will still produce the light to show us the way forward into love.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those black candles will still produce the light to show us the way forward into love.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 00:34
Black Candles
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and dream she did!!
Your poem may be brief,
but your penned words say a lot…
a lot for your readers’ to unravel.
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2021 16:10
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
…and dream she did!!
Your poem may be brief,
but your penned words say a lot…
a lot for your readers’ to unravel.
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen.
Laura🌻
August 15th, 2021 16:10
Black Candles
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Black candles and Tansy a warlock\'s brew a ripe apple and the beauty sleeps.
August 15th, 2021 07:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Black candles and Tansy a warlock\'s brew a ripe apple and the beauty sleeps.
August 15th, 2021 07:34
Black Candles
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Scuse me Doc - Tansy, samphire and dried peppermint: you sure your licence and registration are still in good order....?
Atmosphere in plenty there though.....
August 15th, 2021 06:27
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Scuse me Doc - Tansy, samphire and dried peppermint: you sure your licence and registration are still in good order....?
Atmosphere in plenty there though.....
August 15th, 2021 06:27
Black Candles
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - that\'s what love often does to a sufferer - that is if samphire is available -- - - and I know cos I bin there too ..............x
August 15th, 2021 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - that\'s what love often does to a sufferer - that is if samphire is available -- - - and I know cos I bin there too ..............x
August 15th, 2021 06:23
Covertly Covid
Dove said:
Definitely it’s a battle field and it does maneuver covertly! My only weapon is immunization, mask up, and cleansing! Best to u and yours
August 14th, 2021 18:13
Dove said:
Definitely it’s a battle field and it does maneuver covertly! My only weapon is immunization, mask up, and cleansing! Best to u and yours
August 14th, 2021 18:13
Covertly Covid
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing question Neville, most do though.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing question Neville, most do though.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Covertly Covid
Doggerel Dave said:
\"If you did I did....but our too close company during lock down -......\"
August 14th, 2021 04:08
Doggerel Dave said:
\"If you did I did....but our too close company during lock down -......\"
August 14th, 2021 04:08
Covertly Covid
Fay Slimm. said:
Covert is one of my favourite terms to describe Covid - how did you know that I wonder ! --- your penned question Nev. has more than one answer but one in the eye for cunning Covid is to be known as a determined survivor - - methinks - - maybe .............x
August 14th, 2021 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Covert is one of my favourite terms to describe Covid - how did you know that I wonder ! --- your penned question Nev. has more than one answer but one in the eye for cunning Covid is to be known as a determined survivor - - methinks - - maybe .............x
August 14th, 2021 03:41
Covertly Covid
dusk arising said:
There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too readily we can think of the terrible loss of life in WW2 and extermination camps.
How does lockdown/shielding compare, are we heroic survivors. No. Though a dramatic episode in history it does not compare to history\'s disasters for us survivors.
But it ain\'t quite over yet.
Sorry to go off subject Neville but the above are thoughts which came to mind reading your words my friend.
August 14th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too readily we can think of the terrible loss of life in WW2 and extermination camps.
How does lockdown/shielding compare, are we heroic survivors. No. Though a dramatic episode in history it does not compare to history\'s disasters for us survivors.
But it ain\'t quite over yet.
Sorry to go off subject Neville but the above are thoughts which came to mind reading your words my friend.
August 14th, 2021 03:34
Covertly Covid
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope you both survived. My singing survives, but that can\'t be helped!
August 14th, 2021 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Hope you both survived. My singing survives, but that can\'t be helped!
August 14th, 2021 01:53
Calling Time
Dove said:
Serenity of time, and such heartfelt painting! Them dust motes, always annoy me, but alas time shall catch me too! Excellent writing Sir Neville
August 13th, 2021 21:24
Dove said:
Serenity of time, and such heartfelt painting! Them dust motes, always annoy me, but alas time shall catch me too! Excellent writing Sir Neville
August 13th, 2021 21:24
Perfectly Hued
SureshG said:
Perfectly hued, if that’s what we choose to see, or as shown by thee.
August 13th, 2021 10:43
SureshG said:
Perfectly hued, if that’s what we choose to see, or as shown by thee.
August 13th, 2021 10:43
Perfectly Hued
myself and me said:
\"We would surely
never again dream of
closing our eyes to the world ..\"
Indeed, but I surely need a pair of sunglasses.
August 12th, 2021 15:34
myself and me said:
\"We would surely
never again dream of
closing our eyes to the world ..\"
Indeed, but I surely need a pair of sunglasses.
August 12th, 2021 15:34
An Unfinished Summer
Dove said:
Brings forth pictures of Hubby, of course he looked like Jesus Christ, who was truly my first Idol!
Of course we were from the later generation! Not the Hippies of the 60’s
Another thought provoking poem!
August 12th, 2021 11:22
Dove said:
Brings forth pictures of Hubby, of course he looked like Jesus Christ, who was truly my first Idol!
Of course we were from the later generation! Not the Hippies of the 60’s
Another thought provoking poem!
August 12th, 2021 11:22
Upon a Time Once
Dove said:
Tongue Twisted, once upon a time, imprinted in my mind and heart, but this is no fairy tale, just genuine feelings and words! Smilez
August 12th, 2021 11:18
Dove said:
Tongue Twisted, once upon a time, imprinted in my mind and heart, but this is no fairy tale, just genuine feelings and words! Smilez
August 12th, 2021 11:18
Perfectly Hued
Dove said:
I only close my eyes for kisses and divine music, but never for 🌈 rainbows or lovely hues!
Great thought provoking poem!
August 12th, 2021 11:15
Dove said:
I only close my eyes for kisses and divine music, but never for 🌈 rainbows or lovely hues!
Great thought provoking poem!
August 12th, 2021 11:15
Perfectly Hued
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, if only that would be so all would be wonderful Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, if only that would be so all would be wonderful Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:48
Perfectly Hued
Accidental Poet said:
So very much to be seen, if only our eyes could envision it for real. Beautiful write N. 😉
August 11th, 2021 19:13
Accidental Poet said:
So very much to be seen, if only our eyes could envision it for real. Beautiful write N. 😉
August 11th, 2021 19:13
Perfectly Hued
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A colorful world indeed…
if only we could, we would…
my dear poet!
A masterfully written poem.
Thank you for sharing.☺️
Laura🌻
August 11th, 2021 15:49
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A colorful world indeed…
if only we could, we would…
my dear poet!
A masterfully written poem.
Thank you for sharing.☺️
Laura🌻
August 11th, 2021 15:49
Perfectly Hued
MendedFences27 said:
\"Perfectly hued,\" is of itself a dream. Even a world without people, still must contend with the nastiness of Nature. A day might be so hued during the daylight hours, but then there is the darkness, and the world is full of predators and prey, storms and disasters, angry seas, unbearable temperatures, etc.
\"If\" begins your poem and it is a mighty big word, but accepting the impossible as possible, it would be a beautiful dream come true, such that we could surely never close our eyes again.
Your poem presents a view to the world and to the nature of man that we all wish to be true. It is food for thought served on fine china. It is appetizing to the palate and honey to the taste. Loved it! - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 12:22
MendedFences27 said:
\"Perfectly hued,\" is of itself a dream. Even a world without people, still must contend with the nastiness of Nature. A day might be so hued during the daylight hours, but then there is the darkness, and the world is full of predators and prey, storms and disasters, angry seas, unbearable temperatures, etc.
\"If\" begins your poem and it is a mighty big word, but accepting the impossible as possible, it would be a beautiful dream come true, such that we could surely never close our eyes again.
Your poem presents a view to the world and to the nature of man that we all wish to be true. It is food for thought served on fine china. It is appetizing to the palate and honey to the taste. Loved it! - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 12:22
Perfectly Hued
dusk arising said:
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but..... would I trade my dreams for the world to be so, shaped?
Nay sir, open eyed and i say nay sir. My dreams are a wonder for my inner eye only and mine alone. They are the wit of my poetry and i shall take them with me to journeys end.
Thank you neville for lighting a fire with your words today to exercise my thoughts along a track they had not seen.
August 11th, 2021 09:28
dusk arising said:
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but..... would I trade my dreams for the world to be so, shaped?
Nay sir, open eyed and i say nay sir. My dreams are a wonder for my inner eye only and mine alone. They are the wit of my poetry and i shall take them with me to journeys end.
Thank you neville for lighting a fire with your words today to exercise my thoughts along a track they had not seen.
August 11th, 2021 09:28
Perfectly Hued
Doggerel Dave said:
Well...yeh.. um..of course ..why not..
Good write Neville.
August 11th, 2021 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Well...yeh.. um..of course ..why not..
Good write Neville.
August 11th, 2021 05:27
Perfectly Hued
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for otherness. - - a read to remember so into my list of faves with this little gem.............x
August 11th, 2021 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for otherness. - - a read to remember so into my list of faves with this little gem.............x
August 11th, 2021 03:04
Upon a Time Once
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be still there Neville.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be still there Neville.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:37
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