Comments received on poems by Neville
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Goldfinch60 said:
May those friends and children be forever with us.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
May those friends and children be forever with us.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 02:04
Just for You
Goldfinch60 said:
That endearing love will always be there within you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
That endearing love will always be there within you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:23
Just for You
dusk arising said:
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere presence in my thougtful mind of you\"
oooppss sorry my mind conjoured up another line or two for your, once again, thought provoking mood piece.
March 13th, 2021 13:57
dusk arising said:
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere presence in my thougtful mind of you\"
oooppss sorry my mind conjoured up another line or two for your, once again, thought provoking mood piece.
March 13th, 2021 13:57
Just for You
FredPeyer said:
I too had no idea what \'leats\' meant, but thankfully orchie cleared that up.
Great poem, Neville!
March 13th, 2021 11:37
FredPeyer said:
I too had no idea what \'leats\' meant, but thankfully orchie cleared that up.
Great poem, Neville!
March 13th, 2021 11:37
Just for You
Dove said:
A very earthy love poem , I too am not sure what a leat is !
Always well penned! Sunshine is always radiant in your
Lines because they come from your soul
March 13th, 2021 10:46
Dove said:
A very earthy love poem , I too am not sure what a leat is !
Always well penned! Sunshine is always radiant in your
Lines because they come from your soul
March 13th, 2021 10:46
Just for You
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to hearing meant love..........x
March 13th, 2021 06:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to hearing meant love..........x
March 13th, 2021 06:51
Just for You
Doggerel Dave said:
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that linger.
PS: \'Sorry I can\'t respond to the spring is sprung poetry - don\'t make much sense to me......
March 13th, 2021 03:14
Doggerel Dave said:
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that linger.
PS: \'Sorry I can\'t respond to the spring is sprung poetry - don\'t make much sense to me......
March 13th, 2021 03:14
Just for You
orchidee said:
Yep, can\'t beat a good leat. \'Stream\' probably, to us in my part of the world.
I doubt I shall meet this gal in this fine write - she\'s all yours, I reckon.
March 13th, 2021 03:12
orchidee said:
Yep, can\'t beat a good leat. \'Stream\' probably, to us in my part of the world.
I doubt I shall meet this gal in this fine write - she\'s all yours, I reckon.
March 13th, 2021 03:12
Metro Mornings
Dove said:
So beautiful! Arc light and haloed! So Angelic the skies
March 12th, 2021 13:00
Dove said:
So beautiful! Arc light and haloed! So Angelic the skies
March 12th, 2021 13:00
Metro Mornings
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Good by to winter\" a lovely line Neville. You all laid back under a thatched roof and me a dawn away looking for the first Crocus.
March 12th, 2021 09:30
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Good by to winter\" a lovely line Neville. You all laid back under a thatched roof and me a dawn away looking for the first Crocus.
March 12th, 2021 09:30
Metro Mornings
L. B. Mek said:
\'Goodbye to winter for me
Darling
Since I am still a stranger
Surely …
Yet familiar\'..
(a wonderfully paced write
of self-mined positivity, cloaked within wisdom\'s reality of tempered practicality, my friend..
as always, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
intertwined, tracks connecting our stations of life, like our season\'s
let us boldly welcome
each new chapter
of our horizon\'s dawn, by greeting it with the practised smiles
of our survival\'s resolve
gripping un-surrendered dreams
that nurture, our hope fuelled deeds..
March 12th, 2021 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Goodbye to winter for me
Darling
Since I am still a stranger
Surely …
Yet familiar\'..
(a wonderfully paced write
of self-mined positivity, cloaked within wisdom\'s reality of tempered practicality, my friend..
as always, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
intertwined, tracks connecting our stations of life, like our season\'s
let us boldly welcome
each new chapter
of our horizon\'s dawn, by greeting it with the practised smiles
of our survival\'s resolve
gripping un-surrendered dreams
that nurture, our hope fuelled deeds..
March 12th, 2021 07:00
Metro Mornings
Fay Slimm. said:
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so expertly put in these few lines as always are the reasons love survives wintery times . - - - every line has a reminder and must keep this among my faves...,,,,...,x
March 12th, 2021 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so expertly put in these few lines as always are the reasons love survives wintery times . - - - every line has a reminder and must keep this among my faves...,,,,...,x
March 12th, 2021 03:52
Metro Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:
I nearly missed dawn this morning, half the day seemed to have gone when I awoke at 6:10 am.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 03:06
Goldfinch60 said:
I nearly missed dawn this morning, half the day seemed to have gone when I awoke at 6:10 am.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 03:06
Metro Mornings
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Will she wave goodbye to me? Have I even met her?! heehee.
March 12th, 2021 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Will she wave goodbye to me? Have I even met her?! heehee.
March 12th, 2021 02:48
Out of Mind
Dove said:
Love the line , the candles are weeping!
If only I could think that way!
“If I no longer see you, you no longer exist “
Seems I’m a creature of you are
Always in my thoughts and heart
March 10th, 2021 19:12
Dove said:
Love the line , the candles are weeping!
If only I could think that way!
“If I no longer see you, you no longer exist “
Seems I’m a creature of you are
Always in my thoughts and heart
March 10th, 2021 19:12
Love like a Song
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing through all these very apt lines mon ami.
March 10th, 2021 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing through all these very apt lines mon ami.
March 10th, 2021 11:43
Out of Mind
MendedFences27 said:
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the lost imagined one .This is the power of the mind.
The first two lines set up the imagery. Then we inject \"hope\" an undefined emotion and the work of the mind. And lastly, having set up the implausible we free what is not ours to let go. Yet the honesty of your emotions rings through to the reader and we know the words are spoken in sincerity. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:51
MendedFences27 said:
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the lost imagined one .This is the power of the mind.
The first two lines set up the imagery. Then we inject \"hope\" an undefined emotion and the work of the mind. And lastly, having set up the implausible we free what is not ours to let go. Yet the honesty of your emotions rings through to the reader and we know the words are spoken in sincerity. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:51
Out of Mind
FredPeyer said:
Neville, this is a great poem and should be hanging in every divorce lawyer\'s office!
March 9th, 2021 19:11
FredPeyer said:
Neville, this is a great poem and should be hanging in every divorce lawyer\'s office!
March 9th, 2021 19:11
Out of Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be. I\'ll settle for the last three stanzas.
Great Neville.
March 9th, 2021 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be. I\'ll settle for the last three stanzas.
Great Neville.
March 9th, 2021 17:31
Out of Mind
L. B. Mek said:
\'If I cannot see you
Then you no longer exist\'
=
\'You can dance, you can laugh
You can love, now eternally free..\'
worded beautifully, I really like the challenging journey depicted - in distilling, the acceptance it takes
to transmute your first two lines: into your last two..
another subtle serving of your inked brushstroke of brilliance my friend, in my humble opinion
March 9th, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'If I cannot see you
Then you no longer exist\'
=
\'You can dance, you can laugh
You can love, now eternally free..\'
worded beautifully, I really like the challenging journey depicted - in distilling, the acceptance it takes
to transmute your first two lines: into your last two..
another subtle serving of your inked brushstroke of brilliance my friend, in my humble opinion
March 9th, 2021 07:23
Out of Mind
dusk arising said:
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me and so to they must have elevated my lovers. Elevation - to ride higher than you rode before.
Your excellent words speak of letting go peacefully with understanding and acceptance. To move forward along a path as yet untrod.
Really enjoyed reading this and the thoughts it provoked - leaving me uplifted truly.
March 9th, 2021 05:50
dusk arising said:
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me and so to they must have elevated my lovers. Elevation - to ride higher than you rode before.
Your excellent words speak of letting go peacefully with understanding and acceptance. To move forward along a path as yet untrod.
Really enjoyed reading this and the thoughts it provoked - leaving me uplifted truly.
March 9th, 2021 05:50
Out of Mind
orchidee said:
You seeing me? You burnt all the pics of me?! heehee.
A fine write N.
March 9th, 2021 02:32
orchidee said:
You seeing me? You burnt all the pics of me?! heehee.
A fine write N.
March 9th, 2021 02:32
Some Sounds Easily Missed
MendedFences27 said:
Some believe that our voice communications is what separates us from the animals, especially when used to make music. If all the animals could speak the world would be deafening. You run from the early years of Man to today and along the way not much has changed. The loudest voice gets heard first. The quiet and meek are nearly voiceless, but perhaps enjoying more of the \"muffled sighs.\" This is a keeper. Thanks for that. - Phil A
March 8th, 2021 23:36
MendedFences27 said:
Some believe that our voice communications is what separates us from the animals, especially when used to make music. If all the animals could speak the world would be deafening. You run from the early years of Man to today and along the way not much has changed. The loudest voice gets heard first. The quiet and meek are nearly voiceless, but perhaps enjoying more of the \"muffled sighs.\" This is a keeper. Thanks for that. - Phil A
March 8th, 2021 23:36
Love like a Song
Dove said:
Beautifully written!
Love like a wind chime
Let it enchant your soul
Let it’s music resonates
and kiss your very soul
Let the winds of love
Make you feel whole
March 8th, 2021 09:34
Dove said:
Beautifully written!
Love like a wind chime
Let it enchant your soul
Let it’s music resonates
and kiss your very soul
Let the winds of love
Make you feel whole
March 8th, 2021 09:34
Love like a Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, listening is so important.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, listening is so important.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:12
Love like a Song
MendedFences27 said:
Most of music is love songs, except country. If you play a country song backwards,,,,,,,,, You get either your girl back, your truck back, or your dog back, (sorry),- Perhaps if people listened carefully to music and lyrics lessons could be learned. Maybe a greater understanding of each other would be the reward. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2021 21:55
MendedFences27 said:
Most of music is love songs, except country. If you play a country song backwards,,,,,,,,, You get either your girl back, your truck back, or your dog back, (sorry),- Perhaps if people listened carefully to music and lyrics lessons could be learned. Maybe a greater understanding of each other would be the reward. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2021 21:55
Love like a Song
FredPeyer said:
You hit on something we all should do much more often: Pause, tune-in and listen. Love the poem!
March 7th, 2021 16:22
FredPeyer said:
You hit on something we all should do much more often: Pause, tune-in and listen. Love the poem!
March 7th, 2021 16:22
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