Comments received on poems by Neville
She Calls Them Tears
dusk arising said:
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in years to come, interplanetary space.... nice, she can\'t call space her tears.
But are tears a convenience, a mask, wondered the police officer faced with a flood of them from a speeding driver.
August 27th, 2021 05:03
dusk arising said:
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in years to come, interplanetary space.... nice, she can\'t call space her tears.
But are tears a convenience, a mask, wondered the police officer faced with a flood of them from a speeding driver.
August 27th, 2021 05:03
She Calls Them Tears
L. B. Mek said:
\'salt crystals\'..
let us hope, for her sake
and for his redemptive need
to shed and phoenix, his regretful heart
that those crystals undergo a transfiguration
into, her life\'s serendipitous: \'diamond pearls\'..
that will shimmer
in the brightness of a forgiving day
and help attract, a healing presence
\'back\', in-to her life...
(Long after you\'ve forgotten me
I\'ll be your fan, my friend
keep that mighty pen, weaving and sharing
your masterfully subtle, Poetry!)
thank you!
August 27th, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'salt crystals\'..
let us hope, for her sake
and for his redemptive need
to shed and phoenix, his regretful heart
that those crystals undergo a transfiguration
into, her life\'s serendipitous: \'diamond pearls\'..
that will shimmer
in the brightness of a forgiving day
and help attract, a healing presence
\'back\', in-to her life...
(Long after you\'ve forgotten me
I\'ll be your fan, my friend
keep that mighty pen, weaving and sharing
your masterfully subtle, Poetry!)
thank you!
August 27th, 2021 04:50
She Calls Them Tears
Fay Slimm. said:
You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - - your art of confidential half-exposed situations astounds -
with intrigue that could not be bettered The feeling of almost hearing your whispers makes for mystery and you nail it for me each time - - inspiringly good this one goes into my fave-list dear friend.
August 27th, 2021 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - - your art of confidential half-exposed situations astounds -
with intrigue that could not be bettered The feeling of almost hearing your whispers makes for mystery and you nail it for me each time - - inspiringly good this one goes into my fave-list dear friend.
August 27th, 2021 02:26
An Unexpected Chaos
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are within us all Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are within us all Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:53
An Unexpected Chaos
myself and me said:
An unexpected chaos, but good to have.
August 25th, 2021 13:29
myself and me said:
An unexpected chaos, but good to have.
August 25th, 2021 13:29
The Fullest of Moons
Dove said:
Artistically written , I just love stained glass decor In sunlight, but the blue moon just zipped by, and by golly you created a lovely poem, now no need to be hurt by those shards of beauty
August 25th, 2021 10:17
Dove said:
Artistically written , I just love stained glass decor In sunlight, but the blue moon just zipped by, and by golly you created a lovely poem, now no need to be hurt by those shards of beauty
August 25th, 2021 10:17
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Dove said:
A troubled mind, can’t listen to anything, not even the beauty of nature! Well written Dear One
August 25th, 2021 10:12
Dove said:
A troubled mind, can’t listen to anything, not even the beauty of nature! Well written Dear One
August 25th, 2021 10:12
An Unexpected Chaos
Dove said:
And so you met again, the passion, the thrill , and maybe the chaos
Of yesteryear’s departure! Profound thoughts, with giddy pleasures
August 25th, 2021 10:07
Dove said:
And so you met again, the passion, the thrill , and maybe the chaos
Of yesteryear’s departure! Profound thoughts, with giddy pleasures
August 25th, 2021 10:07
An Unexpected Chaos
dusk arising said:
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
dusk arising said:
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
An Unexpected Chaos
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment which makes that easy....
August 25th, 2021 04:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody\'s perfect, Nev.
I\'m not, but I aspire to create an environment which makes that easy....
August 25th, 2021 04:23
An Unexpected Chaos
Fay Slimm. said:
Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she secretly want to go back again to being lost ? I say -- - - nay........x.
August 25th, 2021 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she secretly want to go back again to being lost ? I say -- - - nay........x.
August 25th, 2021 04:20
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Goldfinch60 said:
We all hear our own conscience if we are prepared to listen for it Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 14:56
Goldfinch60 said:
We all hear our own conscience if we are prepared to listen for it Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 14:56
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
myself and me said:
Can you hear the whisper \"Brilliant!\"?
August 24th, 2021 13:47
myself and me said:
Can you hear the whisper \"Brilliant!\"?
August 24th, 2021 13:47
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Fay Slimm. said:
A super three liner again Nev. The voice of inner conscience can ring the loudest when really listening and will drown out even the sea - cos I have tried that meself with a shell.........x
August 24th, 2021 09:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A super three liner again Nev. The voice of inner conscience can ring the loudest when really listening and will drown out even the sea - cos I have tried that meself with a shell.........x
August 24th, 2021 09:54
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
L. B. Mek said:
jumped the gun, maybe
blurted out those words in the heat of passion
mere weaved syllables, to him
a tsunami of release for her: once repressed, dreams
and so she dams, herself - back
to those safe shores, of disbelief...
\'timing\', is a much neglected artform
in my humble opinion!
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
couldn\'t help being inspired
thank you! what a gift you choose to share
August 24th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
jumped the gun, maybe
blurted out those words in the heat of passion
mere weaved syllables, to him
a tsunami of release for her: once repressed, dreams
and so she dams, herself - back
to those safe shores, of disbelief...
\'timing\', is a much neglected artform
in my humble opinion!
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
couldn\'t help being inspired
thank you! what a gift you choose to share
August 24th, 2021 06:08
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
dusk arising said:
Was it a WW2 shell?
Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling into place.
August 24th, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
Was it a WW2 shell?
Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling into place.
August 24th, 2021 03:49
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done my friend, loved the opening lines.... sometimes nothing can definitely be To loud
August 24th, 2021 02:18
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done my friend, loved the opening lines.... sometimes nothing can definitely be To loud
August 24th, 2021 02:18
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Yes, we can get into some silent places - old church, etc - and the silence can actually hurt our ears - so does me singing to them! heehee.
August 24th, 2021 01:37
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Yes, we can get into some silent places - old church, etc - and the silence can actually hurt our ears - so does me singing to them! heehee.
August 24th, 2021 01:37
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Doggerel Dave said:
Value the human with a conscience, Nev - sometimes I believe they are few.
Too cynical?
August 24th, 2021 01:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Value the human with a conscience, Nev - sometimes I believe they are few.
Too cynical?
August 24th, 2021 01:27
When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud
Caring dove said:
Nice writing , 🙂 what else might she hear ?
August 24th, 2021 01:14
Caring dove said:
Nice writing , 🙂 what else might she hear ?
August 24th, 2021 01:14
The Fullest of Moons
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes it is too late when the beauty within others is seen Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes it is too late when the beauty within others is seen Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 00:46
The Fullest of Moons
myself and me said:
A masterpiece of broken heart. A post-modern 3D art.
August 23rd, 2021 16:12
myself and me said:
A masterpiece of broken heart. A post-modern 3D art.
August 23rd, 2021 16:12
The Fullest of Moons
Doggerel Dave said:
I can see two seriously intriguing pictures here , Nev - the first, your piece, very vivid consisting of strategically placed words which hold themselves together with the aid of your skill; and the other: formed with shards of glass, held together with..... blood and bone?
August 23rd, 2021 08:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I can see two seriously intriguing pictures here , Nev - the first, your piece, very vivid consisting of strategically placed words which hold themselves together with the aid of your skill; and the other: formed with shards of glass, held together with..... blood and bone?
August 23rd, 2021 08:01
The Fullest of Moons
dusk arising said:
having brought him to the edge of despair she now saw something of beauty, something she would like to possess....
well thats one interpretation.
August 23rd, 2021 07:25
dusk arising said:
having brought him to the edge of despair she now saw something of beauty, something she would like to possess....
well thats one interpretation.
August 23rd, 2021 07:25
A Very Personal Holocaust
L. B. Mek said:
it took years for the Nazi\'s
to warp minds and conquer
their own country, the rest
they achieved - in a matter of days...
A heart wrenching read, like how you treated
such a painful subject with so much respect
(this is you
at your subtle and measured best
in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing, my friend
August 23rd, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
it took years for the Nazi\'s
to warp minds and conquer
their own country, the rest
they achieved - in a matter of days...
A heart wrenching read, like how you treated
such a painful subject with so much respect
(this is you
at your subtle and measured best
in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing, my friend
August 23rd, 2021 04:54
Limerence
L. B. Mek said:
see, we all crave that validation of attention
until we get it, on tap and we leave it running
just to test its reserves
while coveting all those other flavour delicacies
till, that day comes
and we realise, the well\'s run dry
then even those untried flavours, start to come
with a lingering aftertaste, that we just can\'t shake
not knowing, we\'re the ones
that\'s spoilt our taste buds
with all that: festering guilt...
(maybe took this somewhere else?) lol
another witty shorty, with layers
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 23rd, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
see, we all crave that validation of attention
until we get it, on tap and we leave it running
just to test its reserves
while coveting all those other flavour delicacies
till, that day comes
and we realise, the well\'s run dry
then even those untried flavours, start to come
with a lingering aftertaste, that we just can\'t shake
not knowing, we\'re the ones
that\'s spoilt our taste buds
with all that: festering guilt...
(maybe took this somewhere else?) lol
another witty shorty, with layers
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 23rd, 2021 04:45
The Fullest of Moons
Fay Slimm. said:
Strong imagery which tells such an intriguing tale Nev. -- your pen sees interludes and transcribes them to gently bewitch all your readers - a cleverly written masterpiece again....x
August 23rd, 2021 04:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Strong imagery which tells such an intriguing tale Nev. -- your pen sees interludes and transcribes them to gently bewitch all your readers - a cleverly written masterpiece again....x
August 23rd, 2021 04:42
The Fullest of Moons
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Was it me, was she too much for me? Did I jump off a roof, and fall on a greenhouse?! Doh!
August 23rd, 2021 04:23
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Was it me, was she too much for me? Did I jump off a roof, and fall on a greenhouse?! Doh!
August 23rd, 2021 04:23
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