Comments received on poems by Neville
Limerence
Goldfinch60 said:
That obscurity will arise in due time Neville.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That obscurity will arise in due time Neville.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:56
Untitled #2
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in some cases Neville, some people do not deserve a second thought.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in some cases Neville, some people do not deserve a second thought.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:27
Untitled #2
Trenz Pruca said:
Another great one Neville. Thank you for improving my day..
August 20th, 2021 16:07
Trenz Pruca said:
Another great one Neville. Thank you for improving my day..
August 20th, 2021 16:07
The Angle of Her Lay
myself and me said:
Now I know who to blame for the hot summer night.
August 20th, 2021 13:44
myself and me said:
Now I know who to blame for the hot summer night.
August 20th, 2021 13:44
Untitled #2
Fay Slimm. said:
There comes a time when either gender is tested too much my friend - I guess then appears an untitled and flagrant dismissal which I understand - the She in the waste bin needs to see insults don\'t always bring hasty answers by pacification to most often planned manipulation - - Oooh now look what this read has brought out in me.......... x
August 20th, 2021 08:00
Fay Slimm. said:
There comes a time when either gender is tested too much my friend - I guess then appears an untitled and flagrant dismissal which I understand - the She in the waste bin needs to see insults don\'t always bring hasty answers by pacification to most often planned manipulation - - Oooh now look what this read has brought out in me.......... x
August 20th, 2021 08:00
Untitled #2
Lorna said:
Phew - this was tough on her.... I would have been on the shelf a few times if my husband hadn\'t been so forgiving. But you got it down to a tee!
August 20th, 2021 07:50
Lorna said:
Phew - this was tough on her.... I would have been on the shelf a few times if my husband hadn\'t been so forgiving. But you got it down to a tee!
August 20th, 2021 07:50
Untitled #2
dusk arising said:
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few footsteps of the learning stroll through life. The contents of that wastebin serve to thicken the walking boot soles of life\'s journeyman.
August 20th, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few footsteps of the learning stroll through life. The contents of that wastebin serve to thicken the walking boot soles of life\'s journeyman.
August 20th, 2021 06:19
Untitled #2
L. B. Mek said:
\'without even a shelf to sit on
She was deemed unworthy\'..
Oft, passion is deemed a quality
yet
in that moment, of blinding pain
we
far too often, choose to abuse our cherished
weaponising
that same passion, into a reactionary tool
designed
to inflict, such disproportionate levels of heartless
suffering...
(mirror, is a little harder - to look in-to
those, morning after\'s
still, fallible as we are - our conscious
if allowed to, can guide us back
to a realm, where forgiveness
is no longer, such an impossible
dream...)
August 20th, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'without even a shelf to sit on
She was deemed unworthy\'..
Oft, passion is deemed a quality
yet
in that moment, of blinding pain
we
far too often, choose to abuse our cherished
weaponising
that same passion, into a reactionary tool
designed
to inflict, such disproportionate levels of heartless
suffering...
(mirror, is a little harder - to look in-to
those, morning after\'s
still, fallible as we are - our conscious
if allowed to, can guide us back
to a realm, where forgiveness
is no longer, such an impossible
dream...)
August 20th, 2021 05:35
The Angle of Her Lay
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how with hindsight
all that we couldn\'t fathom
becomes so glaringly understandable,
its just a little unfair
how it often arrives, a little too late
for those willing to hold-on and fight...
another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
captured the poetic voice with such sincerity
August 20th, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how with hindsight
all that we couldn\'t fathom
becomes so glaringly understandable,
its just a little unfair
how it often arrives, a little too late
for those willing to hold-on and fight...
another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
captured the poetic voice with such sincerity
August 20th, 2021 05:23
Untitled #2
orchidee said:
Aww, why he chuck her in the bin?! He could send her to me - to recycle? Call the poem \'Recycling Rita\' or summat like that.
Any more info on this from me might be swoony. lol.
August 20th, 2021 04:32
orchidee said:
Aww, why he chuck her in the bin?! He could send her to me - to recycle? Call the poem \'Recycling Rita\' or summat like that.
Any more info on this from me might be swoony. lol.
August 20th, 2021 04:32
Untitled #2
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks Nev...
PS: Perhaps second \'fire\' should be \'a hose\'...
August 20th, 2021 04:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks Nev...
PS: Perhaps second \'fire\' should be \'a hose\'...
August 20th, 2021 04:16
The Angle of Her Lay
Doggerel Dave said:
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)
August 20th, 2021 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)
August 20th, 2021 01:54
The Angle of Her Lay
Accidental Poet said:
A very sensuous pen under your command N. 👍
August 19th, 2021 19:20
Accidental Poet said:
A very sensuous pen under your command N. 👍
August 19th, 2021 19:20
The Angle of Her Lay
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hopefully her wish
is his command.
A wonderfully penned poem.
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 16:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hopefully her wish
is his command.
A wonderfully penned poem.
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 16:43
The Angle of Her Lay
dusk arising said:
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy confused too.
August 19th, 2021 13:10
dusk arising said:
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy confused too.
August 19th, 2021 13:10
The Angle of Her Lay
orchidee said:
Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.
August 19th, 2021 10:28
orchidee said:
Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.
August 19th, 2021 10:28
The Angle of Her Lay
Fay Slimm. said:
A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x
August 19th, 2021 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x
August 19th, 2021 09:34
Elusive Blues
dusk arising said:
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic heights of sculpture.... and then she moves.... rapture.
August 17th, 2021 09:36
dusk arising said:
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic heights of sculpture.... and then she moves.... rapture.
August 17th, 2021 09:36
Elusive Blues
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautifully penned. Hope you find the blues
August 17th, 2021 07:12
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautifully penned. Hope you find the blues
August 17th, 2021 07:12
Elusive Blues
Poetic Dan said:
Felt every bit of this my friend, thanks for sharing
August 17th, 2021 06:32
Poetic Dan said:
Felt every bit of this my friend, thanks for sharing
August 17th, 2021 06:32
Elusive Blues
L. B. Mek said:
those blue flames of passion
once we squander them
so impossibly hard, to ignite it within another again
but what to do
some mistakes, try as we might, just can\'t avoid
and although our loyalty may have failed us once
we must still strive
to find a path, to that Phoenix pulse of our love...
(this is how your poetry, expressed itself to me my friend
love the subtlety, a joy to read
even if it brought back some unwanted memories)
August 17th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
those blue flames of passion
once we squander them
so impossibly hard, to ignite it within another again
but what to do
some mistakes, try as we might, just can\'t avoid
and although our loyalty may have failed us once
we must still strive
to find a path, to that Phoenix pulse of our love...
(this is how your poetry, expressed itself to me my friend
love the subtlety, a joy to read
even if it brought back some unwanted memories)
August 17th, 2021 05:20
Elusive Blues
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own private observations in order to verify the delicacy of her beauty.....
Got me going here, Nev.
August 17th, 2021 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own private observations in order to verify the delicacy of her beauty.....
Got me going here, Nev.
August 17th, 2021 04:34
Elusive Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would not welcome the joy of discovering blues as elusive as these words portray - - great stuff again Nev..........x
August 17th, 2021 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would not welcome the joy of discovering blues as elusive as these words portray - - great stuff again Nev..........x
August 17th, 2021 04:09
Elusive Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blues will be there for him one day Neville.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blues will be there for him one day Neville.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 02:59
Elusive Blues
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I\'m gonna take up studying a certain porcelain! Or should I stick to the ceramic sort? I might swoon otherwise. lol.
August 17th, 2021 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I\'m gonna take up studying a certain porcelain! Or should I stick to the ceramic sort? I might swoon otherwise. lol.
August 17th, 2021 01:51
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