Comments received on poems by Neville
Negative in Blue
dusk arising said:
Your lines are as artistically, knowingly loaded brushes painting from a palet of a lovers pastel life onto a canvas of teased illusion in my mine of recollected picturescapes.
I find your poetry the most romantic. Time after time you encapsulate both a melacholy and a grandeur of loves lasting rewards.
May 9th, 2021 23:19
dusk arising said:
Your lines are as artistically, knowingly loaded brushes painting from a palet of a lovers pastel life onto a canvas of teased illusion in my mine of recollected picturescapes.
I find your poetry the most romantic. Time after time you encapsulate both a melacholy and a grandeur of loves lasting rewards.
May 9th, 2021 23:19
Negative in Blue
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, Neville that leaves me wanting more. Nicely written.
May 9th, 2021 17:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, Neville that leaves me wanting more. Nicely written.
May 9th, 2021 17:35
Thatch
Goldfinch60 said:
So beautiful to see but one wonders about the problems there may well be.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So beautiful to see but one wonders about the problems there may well be.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 00:33
Thatch
jarcher54 said:
Ha ha... and here I have wished I had a thatch roof all my life, just for the romance. Here in the US of A we use metal or those nasty shingles made of tar and grit... I have experienced a tropical storm on a thatched roof and loved the way it softens the blow and drip for hours after. I put on a metal roof 40 years ago and it will certainly outlast me... It\'s only romantic when it rains. Slate is too dear here darn it.
May 7th, 2021 23:16
jarcher54 said:
Ha ha... and here I have wished I had a thatch roof all my life, just for the romance. Here in the US of A we use metal or those nasty shingles made of tar and grit... I have experienced a tropical storm on a thatched roof and loved the way it softens the blow and drip for hours after. I put on a metal roof 40 years ago and it will certainly outlast me... It\'s only romantic when it rains. Slate is too dear here darn it.
May 7th, 2021 23:16
Thatch
Dove said:
If you have a thatch, don’t light a match!
Just kidding, what is a thatch made of.??
Palm , bamboo , or banana leaves.
I swear there’s nothing up my trees!
May 7th, 2021 09:03
Dove said:
If you have a thatch, don’t light a match!
Just kidding, what is a thatch made of.??
Palm , bamboo , or banana leaves.
I swear there’s nothing up my trees!
May 7th, 2021 09:03
Some Things Should Not be Forgot
Dove said:
Such an endearing write with a hint of melancholy, but ever so beautiful. The past is but whispered memories on the tip of the tongue, Just waiting to be exhaled
May 7th, 2021 08:41
Dove said:
Such an endearing write with a hint of melancholy, but ever so beautiful. The past is but whispered memories on the tip of the tongue, Just waiting to be exhaled
May 7th, 2021 08:41
Thatch
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know, maybe not quite - thatch
but I still - reach, for soundtracks: of rain falling on tin roofs
when I can\'t sleep,
a lingering legacy of my childhood\'s idolised memories, I think...
a wonderful shorty, it let me travel back in time
such a sweet gift, in a read
May 7th, 2021 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know, maybe not quite - thatch
but I still - reach, for soundtracks: of rain falling on tin roofs
when I can\'t sleep,
a lingering legacy of my childhood\'s idolised memories, I think...
a wonderful shorty, it let me travel back in time
such a sweet gift, in a read
May 7th, 2021 06:49
Some Things Should Not be Forgot
L. B. Mek said:
as a confessed fan of your unassuming poetry\'s
unique element of subtle decadence,
I\'m just thrilled to add this to my collection of treasured re-read: must\'s..
so happy to see your artistry soaring to ever-higher levels my friend,
\'bloomin eck, u sure can spin an enthrallingly gre8 yarn!\'
May 7th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
as a confessed fan of your unassuming poetry\'s
unique element of subtle decadence,
I\'m just thrilled to add this to my collection of treasured re-read: must\'s..
so happy to see your artistry soaring to ever-higher levels my friend,
\'bloomin eck, u sure can spin an enthrallingly gre8 yarn!\'
May 7th, 2021 05:42
Thatch
Fay Slimm. said:
The quaintness of thatch though pretty seems to have lost its place around here too and with these days of ruthless pollution needs regular maintaining - so methinks I will stay with slate..............x
May 7th, 2021 05:29
Fay Slimm. said:
The quaintness of thatch though pretty seems to have lost its place around here too and with these days of ruthless pollution needs regular maintaining - so methinks I will stay with slate..............x
May 7th, 2021 05:29
Thatch
Doggerel Dave said:
Just left it, haven\'t you? Your farewell, Neville?
BTW: this one I had not the slightest trouble with a response.....not always the case...so if I dip out sometimes_ sorry!
May 7th, 2021 04:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Just left it, haven\'t you? Your farewell, Neville?
BTW: this one I had not the slightest trouble with a response.....not always the case...so if I dip out sometimes_ sorry!
May 7th, 2021 04:29
Some Things Should Not be Forgot
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Did I forget to remember this lass? I\'ve hundreds in my little red book! lol
May 7th, 2021 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Did I forget to remember this lass? I\'ve hundreds in my little red book! lol
May 7th, 2021 02:05
Some Things Should Not be Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, those memories will always be there.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, those memories will always be there.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:43
Some Things Should Not be Forgot
Fay Slimm. said:
Gotta be one of your very best this reflection of the unforgettable held in love\'s sweet memory. - - a truly touching read Nev. and now in my list of favourites.
May 6th, 2021 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Gotta be one of your very best this reflection of the unforgettable held in love\'s sweet memory. - - a truly touching read Nev. and now in my list of favourites.
May 6th, 2021 13:31
Ice Queen
L. B. Mek said:
so clever: its kinda crazy but that \'trolleyed\' finale, is imagery
I find so relatable, within the context of what modernity
has to offer, as a remnant semblance
of that extinct deity, we once - proudly, classed: \'A lady...\'
(wonderfully witty, but as-ever
still locked-on target, with succinct commentary
my friend) a great read!
May 6th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
so clever: its kinda crazy but that \'trolleyed\' finale, is imagery
I find so relatable, within the context of what modernity
has to offer, as a remnant semblance
of that extinct deity, we once - proudly, classed: \'A lady...\'
(wonderfully witty, but as-ever
still locked-on target, with succinct commentary
my friend) a great read!
May 6th, 2021 04:37
Ice Queen
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people do have ice in their veins and are never defrosted, they need to be avoided.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people do have ice in their veins and are never defrosted, they need to be avoided.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:07
Ice Queen
Fay Slimm. said:
A slight shiver of a compelling read Nev. - methinks that lady who left had icicled blood in her bones........... hope she never existed but in your poet\'s mind..........x
May 5th, 2021 14:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A slight shiver of a compelling read Nev. - methinks that lady who left had icicled blood in her bones........... hope she never existed but in your poet\'s mind..........x
May 5th, 2021 14:02
Ice Queen
Doggerel Dave said:
Image, promise, and....disillusionment?... did you know already, Neville?
May 5th, 2021 07:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Image, promise, and....disillusionment?... did you know already, Neville?
May 5th, 2021 07:04
Ice Queen
Accidental Poet said:
Perhaps, it was never meant to be. Well penned Neville. ; ) AP
May 5th, 2021 05:34
Accidental Poet said:
Perhaps, it was never meant to be. Well penned Neville. ; ) AP
May 5th, 2021 05:34
Some Sounds Easily Missed
Fay Slimm. said:
Dont know how I missed this piece of sound wisdom - - - the cupped hand had memories flooding back and though me is now fully grown how I would settle for that listening time all over again........... x
May 5th, 2021 03:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Dont know how I missed this piece of sound wisdom - - - the cupped hand had memories flooding back and though me is now fully grown how I would settle for that listening time all over again........... x
May 5th, 2021 03:21
Lies
Accidental Poet said:
Alas the depths of love within a man know no end. Great write Neville.
May 4th, 2021 08:18
Accidental Poet said:
Alas the depths of love within a man know no end. Great write Neville.
May 4th, 2021 08:18
Lies
L. B. Mek said:
again, ever-so subtly: brilliant! my friend..
I hate comparing your works
with those of famous Poet\'s, like Bukowski
but your effort today hit so close to surpassing
one of my favourites from his rather - divisive, cannon
I feel the need to quote his version on this same theme
(forgive my self-indulgent rudeness, in my own twisted way
I mean well, or at least that\'s what I\'ve convinced myself... lol)
from \'To the w**** who took my poetry\':
\'next time take my left arm or a fifty
but not my poems:
I\'m not Shakespeare
but sometime simply
there won\'t be any more, abstract or otherwise;
there\'ll always be money and w***** and drunkards
down to the last bomb,
but as God said,
crossing his legs,
I see where I have made plenty of poets
but not so very much
poetry.\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4437 )
May 4th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
again, ever-so subtly: brilliant! my friend..
I hate comparing your works
with those of famous Poet\'s, like Bukowski
but your effort today hit so close to surpassing
one of my favourites from his rather - divisive, cannon
I feel the need to quote his version on this same theme
(forgive my self-indulgent rudeness, in my own twisted way
I mean well, or at least that\'s what I\'ve convinced myself... lol)
from \'To the w**** who took my poetry\':
\'next time take my left arm or a fifty
but not my poems:
I\'m not Shakespeare
but sometime simply
there won\'t be any more, abstract or otherwise;
there\'ll always be money and w***** and drunkards
down to the last bomb,
but as God said,
crossing his legs,
I see where I have made plenty of poets
but not so very much
poetry.\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4437 )
May 4th, 2021 06:23
Blighty
L. B. Mek said:
\'The distance between
A hole in the ground and old blighty\'..
\'is the legacy bill: for a million ghosts, sacrificed
in a Single day - where most
had barely sprouted whiskers - on their fervent chins\'...
(simply Brilliant! my friend)
may we never forget
this crimson soaked: receipt,
with each treasured breath
of the freedom, They: bequeathed...
May 4th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'The distance between
A hole in the ground and old blighty\'..
\'is the legacy bill: for a million ghosts, sacrificed
in a Single day - where most
had barely sprouted whiskers - on their fervent chins\'...
(simply Brilliant! my friend)
may we never forget
this crimson soaked: receipt,
with each treasured breath
of the freedom, They: bequeathed...
May 4th, 2021 04:48
Lies
Fay Slimm. said:
Showing that love is tender and forgets hurts by writing them out - -- a depth beyond words in these few exceptional lines Nev.............x
May 4th, 2021 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Showing that love is tender and forgets hurts by writing them out - -- a depth beyond words in these few exceptional lines Nev.............x
May 4th, 2021 04:19
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