Comments received on poems by Neville
Indivisible Fractions
Doggerel Dave said:
Is this to be my Destiny, my one true way, Master?
Have you bestowed upon me the key which grants escape from these polarities and the attainment of enlightenment?
Blessings to thee, O Lord………
January 22nd, 2021 17:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Is this to be my Destiny, my one true way, Master?
Have you bestowed upon me the key which grants escape from these polarities and the attainment of enlightenment?
Blessings to thee, O Lord………
January 22nd, 2021 17:15
Indivisible Fractions
Fay Slimm. said:
Beguiling as ever these transient fractions of time - - - wonder where this moment went as I was typing with intent to find answers to mystify thee...... great read Nev and well received by many in front and behind my indecipherable words.......... x
January 22nd, 2021 10:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Beguiling as ever these transient fractions of time - - - wonder where this moment went as I was typing with intent to find answers to mystify thee...... great read Nev and well received by many in front and behind my indecipherable words.......... x
January 22nd, 2021 10:52
Indivisible Fractions
Jerry Reynolds said:
Hark the future
The present’s so fast
By the time you say it
It’s in the past
Well done Neville
January 22nd, 2021 09:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Hark the future
The present’s so fast
By the time you say it
It’s in the past
Well done Neville
January 22nd, 2021 09:37
Indivisible Fractions
L. B. Mek said:
of those illusive intangibles
you pen...
of past \'what if\'s\'
my mind
begrudgingly: attends...
a smart format for delivery
you\'ve chosen, ever subtle
even when versed so accessible
January 22nd, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
of those illusive intangibles
you pen...
of past \'what if\'s\'
my mind
begrudgingly: attends...
a smart format for delivery
you\'ve chosen, ever subtle
even when versed so accessible
January 22nd, 2021 06:13
Indivisible Fractions
dusk arising said:
I am writing this looking to the future but just realise i started in the past. So how can i catch up with myself. I\'m unsure whether my opening gambit there has a doppler effect built in backwards or it\'s red shift turned blue?
Captains yule log, stardate twenny too,one,twenny one. I am warped and suffering photon torpedo anal discomfature.
Needless to say you thoroughly confused me on a day when i was hoping to watch faeries dance.
January 22nd, 2021 05:27
dusk arising said:
I am writing this looking to the future but just realise i started in the past. So how can i catch up with myself. I\'m unsure whether my opening gambit there has a doppler effect built in backwards or it\'s red shift turned blue?
Captains yule log, stardate twenny too,one,twenny one. I am warped and suffering photon torpedo anal discomfature.
Needless to say you thoroughly confused me on a day when i was hoping to watch faeries dance.
January 22nd, 2021 05:27
Indivisible Fractions
orchidee said:
Would that be \'This moment in time\', or \'That moment in time\', or \'That moment just gone\' or \'That moment not here yet\'?
I\'m reduced to a jibbering wreck. Partly due to this poem. Partly due to that gal I did meet! heehee.
January 22nd, 2021 05:07
orchidee said:
Would that be \'This moment in time\', or \'That moment in time\', or \'That moment just gone\' or \'That moment not here yet\'?
I\'m reduced to a jibbering wreck. Partly due to this poem. Partly due to that gal I did meet! heehee.
January 22nd, 2021 05:07
A Collection of Slumbers
L. B. Mek said:
those bittersweet memento\'s
some, as physical objects
but most: mere remnants, hidden
in those winding memory aisles
of our once
most cherished moments...
a wonderfully paced write my friend, a great read
January 21st, 2021 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
those bittersweet memento\'s
some, as physical objects
but most: mere remnants, hidden
in those winding memory aisles
of our once
most cherished moments...
a wonderfully paced write my friend, a great read
January 21st, 2021 05:18
A Collection of Slumbers
Goldfinch60 said:
So many memories abound within drawers and cupboards, they are so important in our lives.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So many memories abound within drawers and cupboards, they are so important in our lives.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:23
Reasons for Leaving
jarcher54 said:
There\'s a story there... or do we each imagine we know what this refers to from our own experience? Sort of the opposite of sound and fury signifying nothing?
January 20th, 2021 11:05
jarcher54 said:
There\'s a story there... or do we each imagine we know what this refers to from our own experience? Sort of the opposite of sound and fury signifying nothing?
January 20th, 2021 11:05
A Collection of Slumbers
dusk arising said:
One of my ex\'s had a pair of secret drawers, on special occasions she would open them and show me her secret artifacts. I could describe them to you but that would be indiscreet.
Wisdom in your words sir. Again, words of life from one who has lived them.
January 20th, 2021 08:05
dusk arising said:
One of my ex\'s had a pair of secret drawers, on special occasions she would open them and show me her secret artifacts. I could describe them to you but that would be indiscreet.
Wisdom in your words sir. Again, words of life from one who has lived them.
January 20th, 2021 08:05
A Collection of Slumbers
orchidee said:
I forgot all them gals I met. I\'ve cupboards bursting with...love-letters?!
Now make up your mind, Orchi - have ya met them or not?! lol.
January 20th, 2021 06:13
orchidee said:
I forgot all them gals I met. I\'ve cupboards bursting with...love-letters?!
Now make up your mind, Orchi - have ya met them or not?! lol.
January 20th, 2021 06:13
A Collection of Slumbers
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m an inveterate collector of bits of old rubbish which I somehow came upon during memorable moments. You have just told the whole of my story.
January 20th, 2021 05:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m an inveterate collector of bits of old rubbish which I somehow came upon during memorable moments. You have just told the whole of my story.
January 20th, 2021 05:49
A Collection of Slumbers
Fay Slimm. said:
My treasured corners are full of such mem\'ries as your relatable verse today so well portrays - - - love this one to pieces - and what a great title ................x
January 20th, 2021 05:36
Fay Slimm. said:
My treasured corners are full of such mem\'ries as your relatable verse today so well portrays - - - love this one to pieces - and what a great title ................x
January 20th, 2021 05:36
Reasons for Leaving
orchidee said:
Good write N. I gotta meet her first, let alone leaving her! lol.
January 19th, 2021 07:02
orchidee said:
Good write N. I gotta meet her first, let alone leaving her! lol.
January 19th, 2021 07:02
Reasons for Leaving
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of a poem i wrote ages ago:-
when u find
she\'s not the one
and grow tired
of the things she\'s done
then the time is here
to make it right
if its gone so wrong
move along tonight
But there again i could have got a hold of the wrong end of the stick.
January 19th, 2021 06:58
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of a poem i wrote ages ago:-
when u find
she\'s not the one
and grow tired
of the things she\'s done
then the time is here
to make it right
if its gone so wrong
move along tonight
But there again i could have got a hold of the wrong end of the stick.
January 19th, 2021 06:58
Reasons for Leaving
L. B. Mek said:
Ugh! That time - yet again...
\'when rose petal words
are poisoned
by yesterdays misspoken tone
and a romance
once fated to bloom
a life time, now
stares back: Snag,
while all around
couples swivel - in-step
to their pulsed
lifetime soundtrack
of unending Spring delights\'
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply my friend,
a great write you\'ve shared,
words depicting that heartachingly morose moment of belated realisation with incision accuracy and insightful brevity
January 19th, 2021 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
Ugh! That time - yet again...
\'when rose petal words
are poisoned
by yesterdays misspoken tone
and a romance
once fated to bloom
a life time, now
stares back: Snag,
while all around
couples swivel - in-step
to their pulsed
lifetime soundtrack
of unending Spring delights\'
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply my friend,
a great write you\'ve shared,
words depicting that heartachingly morose moment of belated realisation with incision accuracy and insightful brevity
January 19th, 2021 06:25
Reasons for Leaving
Doggerel Dave said:
You aren\'t doing a Marie Kondo here are you ??
Dave
January 19th, 2021 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
You aren\'t doing a Marie Kondo here are you ??
Dave
January 19th, 2021 06:15
Reasons for Leaving
Fay Slimm. said:
One way of dealing with build-ups as you so tellingly describe here my friend. - or alternatively this could provide a reason for talking - -- maybe.............x
January 19th, 2021 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
One way of dealing with build-ups as you so tellingly describe here my friend. - or alternatively this could provide a reason for talking - -- maybe.............x
January 19th, 2021 05:33
Birdspeak
L. B. Mek said:
Startling murmuration\'s and Zebra\'s camouflage tactics are far too similar - in tone, to the \'herd\' mindset in Longfellow\'s \'A psalm of life\' for us to ignore: Nature\'s sobering pattern for survival\'s ease, I feel...
as usual, an intriguingly clever twist my friend, brilliantly executed
January 18th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
Startling murmuration\'s and Zebra\'s camouflage tactics are far too similar - in tone, to the \'herd\' mindset in Longfellow\'s \'A psalm of life\' for us to ignore: Nature\'s sobering pattern for survival\'s ease, I feel...
as usual, an intriguingly clever twist my friend, brilliantly executed
January 18th, 2021 04:31
Birdspeak
Fay Slimm. said:
I just love your play on words here Nev.. - the murmurations of starling assemblies are always a wonder for bird-lovers like me and am I caught this little gem of a tribute
January 18th, 2021 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
I just love your play on words here Nev.. - the murmurations of starling assemblies are always a wonder for bird-lovers like me and am I caught this little gem of a tribute
January 18th, 2021 04:29
Birdspeak
Goldfinch60 said:
The symphony of birds singing is so wondrous to me. I have seen murmurations in the live and they are one of natures most magnificent sights.
Andy
January 18th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
The symphony of birds singing is so wondrous to me. I have seen murmurations in the live and they are one of natures most magnificent sights.
Andy
January 18th, 2021 01:51
Birdspeak
Michael Edwards said:
All God\'s creatures got a place in the choir
Some sing loud and some sing higher
Some sing out loud on the telephone wire
some just clap their hands, paws or anything you like now
January 17th, 2021 16:58
Michael Edwards said:
All God\'s creatures got a place in the choir
Some sing loud and some sing higher
Some sing out loud on the telephone wire
some just clap their hands, paws or anything you like now
January 17th, 2021 16:58
Birdspeak
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
For many animals we have a verb for the animal\'s making the sound, and another word entirely for the sound the animal makes. Dogs bark, they go bow-wow. Owls hoot, they go too-wit-to-woo. Sheep and Trumps bleat, they go baa and fake news! respectively.
January 17th, 2021 13:18
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
For many animals we have a verb for the animal\'s making the sound, and another word entirely for the sound the animal makes. Dogs bark, they go bow-wow. Owls hoot, they go too-wit-to-woo. Sheep and Trumps bleat, they go baa and fake news! respectively.
January 17th, 2021 13:18
Birdspeak
FredPeyer said:
Every morning there is so much noise from the tree beside my house...............never heard the murmur
January 17th, 2021 12:26
FredPeyer said:
Every morning there is so much noise from the tree beside my house...............never heard the murmur
January 17th, 2021 12:26
Two Hopes for Thee
Christina8 said:
What a sweet write.....I really like this one a lot!...C
January 17th, 2021 11:56
Christina8 said:
What a sweet write.....I really like this one a lot!...C
January 17th, 2021 11:56
Birdspeak
Christina8 said:
This is an interesting little write...I confess I don\'t know a lot about birds but I thought they all sung loudly.....hmmm
January 17th, 2021 11:55
Christina8 said:
This is an interesting little write...I confess I don\'t know a lot about birds but I thought they all sung loudly.....hmmm
January 17th, 2021 11:55
Birdspeak
Suresh said:
Some coo to woo
Some (humans) have noisy chatter
But, just need the sweet sound of murmur is all a starlings needs to reach its darling.
Entertaining post indeed
January 17th, 2021 08:36
Suresh said:
Some coo to woo
Some (humans) have noisy chatter
But, just need the sweet sound of murmur is all a starlings needs to reach its darling.
Entertaining post indeed
January 17th, 2021 08:36
Birdspeak
dusk arising said:
You could feel it throughout the nation
their skyward gaze contemplation
the darkening skies
amazed their eyes
behold, their first mumuration
January 17th, 2021 07:06
dusk arising said:
You could feel it throughout the nation
their skyward gaze contemplation
the darkening skies
amazed their eyes
behold, their first mumuration
January 17th, 2021 07:06
Birdspeak
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Cos they are straining with all their might....?
https://www.bbc.com/news/av/world-europe-55655158
January 17th, 2021 06:05
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Cos they are straining with all their might....?
https://www.bbc.com/news/av/world-europe-55655158
January 17th, 2021 06:05
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