Comments received on poems by Neville
Not Never in a Month of Sundays
dusk arising said:
Words of certainty from a man who knows. Such a wonderful statement for the lady. A feeling so strong that it is doubtless.
The \'one\' for me arrived at the wrong time for us both and slipped through our fingers we jointly admitted 30 years later.
May 16th, 2021 01:40
dusk arising said:
Words of certainty from a man who knows. Such a wonderful statement for the lady. A feeling so strong that it is doubtless.
The \'one\' for me arrived at the wrong time for us both and slipped through our fingers we jointly admitted 30 years later.
May 16th, 2021 01:40
Fletched
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed my friend
indeed, there is nothing as penetratingly impactful
as humanity\'s complexly divisive: commonality
worded, so accessibly relatable..
\'cause fetching and firing, ain\'t ever been our problem
its the simple fact
that we never allow ourselves the rationality
of assuming we, like most around us
will miss
more than we hit, and so
each painful stab of those missed
dreams and aspirations, we collide with
in our everyday interactions, impact us
much more than they should
then we add our obliviousness
to life\'s happenstance, toxic cocktail mix
ignoring the suffering
our own missed arrows, help create...
\'Free
and aching
for
the sky …\'
indeed! simultaneously, all at once
no inch or quarter given,
no wonder we see more satellite dishes, than stars
in that bleakness of nightly, realisations...
May 14th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed my friend
indeed, there is nothing as penetratingly impactful
as humanity\'s complexly divisive: commonality
worded, so accessibly relatable..
\'cause fetching and firing, ain\'t ever been our problem
its the simple fact
that we never allow ourselves the rationality
of assuming we, like most around us
will miss
more than we hit, and so
each painful stab of those missed
dreams and aspirations, we collide with
in our everyday interactions, impact us
much more than they should
then we add our obliviousness
to life\'s happenstance, toxic cocktail mix
ignoring the suffering
our own missed arrows, help create...
\'Free
and aching
for
the sky …\'
indeed! simultaneously, all at once
no inch or quarter given,
no wonder we see more satellite dishes, than stars
in that bleakness of nightly, realisations...
May 14th, 2021 04:40
Fletched
orchidee said:
I mucked it all up on that day in 1066. If only I hadn\'t turned up!
May 14th, 2021 01:36
orchidee said:
I mucked it all up on that day in 1066. If only I hadn\'t turned up!
May 14th, 2021 01:36
Fletched
Goldfinch60 said:
Ask Orchi why he told King Harold to look up in 1066?
Andy
May 13th, 2021 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Ask Orchi why he told King Harold to look up in 1066?
Andy
May 13th, 2021 15:19
Fletched
Fay Slimm. said:
Cupid\'s darts always hit where they wish to cause most damage methinks - - a smile for these well-covered lines of clever intrigue...........x
May 13th, 2021 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Cupid\'s darts always hit where they wish to cause most damage methinks - - a smile for these well-covered lines of clever intrigue...........x
May 13th, 2021 04:18
Fletched
dusk arising said:
EE-BAH-GUM Fletch were a grand old fellah and deadly absolutely deadly at 100yds with his catapault until his mam wanted her knickers elastic back. Worra lad. But youre right, it wor with bow an arrah where he wor lethal. Robin \'ood weren\'t innit when Fletch let one loose, especially after he\'d had a curry.
Straight and true, just like your words this day.
May 13th, 2021 03:45
dusk arising said:
EE-BAH-GUM Fletch were a grand old fellah and deadly absolutely deadly at 100yds with his catapault until his mam wanted her knickers elastic back. Worra lad. But youre right, it wor with bow an arrah where he wor lethal. Robin \'ood weren\'t innit when Fletch let one loose, especially after he\'d had a curry.
Straight and true, just like your words this day.
May 13th, 2021 03:45
Fletched
orchidee said:
Will I swoon if I find out what\'s behind these words?! lol.
May 13th, 2021 03:44
orchidee said:
Will I swoon if I find out what\'s behind these words?! lol.
May 13th, 2021 03:44
No Guaranteed Tomorrows
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives must be treasured and you words show how true this is Neville.
Andy
May 13th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives must be treasured and you words show how true this is Neville.
Andy
May 13th, 2021 00:20
No Guaranteed Tomorrows
Accidental Poet said:
but what happens when the future runs into the past? Run that by Orchi and watch his head spin. ; )
May 12th, 2021 19:03
Accidental Poet said:
but what happens when the future runs into the past? Run that by Orchi and watch his head spin. ; )
May 12th, 2021 19:03
No Guaranteed Tomorrows
SureshG said:
What a delightful way to spend the moments of now, on dwelling on the pleasantries of yester, with words creatively put together
May 12th, 2021 14:31
SureshG said:
What a delightful way to spend the moments of now, on dwelling on the pleasantries of yester, with words creatively put together
May 12th, 2021 14:31
No Guaranteed Tomorrows
dusk arising said:
The memory of love\'s past make our tomorrows all the more welcome for who knows what gems of memory will pleasure us in the next 24hours.
May 12th, 2021 07:50
dusk arising said:
The memory of love\'s past make our tomorrows all the more welcome for who knows what gems of memory will pleasure us in the next 24hours.
May 12th, 2021 07:50
No Guaranteed Tomorrows
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Now for my poem: \'Seeking Tomorrow\'. I can never find it. When it gets here, it\'s \'Today\'. Strange that, hmm?!
Full of neologisms? Ooh, is it catching? Will ya be OK? heehee.
May 12th, 2021 05:35
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Now for my poem: \'Seeking Tomorrow\'. I can never find it. When it gets here, it\'s \'Today\'. Strange that, hmm?!
Full of neologisms? Ooh, is it catching? Will ya be OK? heehee.
May 12th, 2021 05:35
No Guaranteed Tomorrows
Fay Slimm. said:
Am loving the thoughtful use of words in this lament of lost love and how it is turned so adroitly with your talented pen into a mission to make Now a time to be treasured - -with a smile for your aptly coined word \"Unexploredness\" I join in the good celebration of what is today - - -- thanks for sharing this with us mon ami ..................x
May 12th, 2021 02:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Am loving the thoughtful use of words in this lament of lost love and how it is turned so adroitly with your talented pen into a mission to make Now a time to be treasured - -with a smile for your aptly coined word \"Unexploredness\" I join in the good celebration of what is today - - -- thanks for sharing this with us mon ami ..................x
May 12th, 2021 02:46
Journey of Tears
Goldfinch60 said:
In love trust must always be at the heart of it and lies and deviations do not produce trust and if that trust is not there love just fails.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
In love trust must always be at the heart of it and lies and deviations do not produce trust and if that trust is not there love just fails.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 23:55
Journey of Tears
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a gendered means of self expression - think no more of it than that. Didn\'t punch a hole in the wall too, did she?
Succinctly penned forgive and forget.....it WAS forgive and forget, wasn\'t it Neville? :-)
May 11th, 2021 21:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a gendered means of self expression - think no more of it than that. Didn\'t punch a hole in the wall too, did she?
Succinctly penned forgive and forget.....it WAS forgive and forget, wasn\'t it Neville? :-)
May 11th, 2021 21:49
Journey of Tears
orchidee said:
Good write N.
What words could possibly have preceded \'It\'ll all end is in tears\'?
Answer: Simples - \'I\'m gonna sing!\' lol.
May 11th, 2021 11:38
orchidee said:
Good write N.
What words could possibly have preceded \'It\'ll all end is in tears\'?
Answer: Simples - \'I\'m gonna sing!\' lol.
May 11th, 2021 11:38
Journey of Tears
dusk arising said:
Ah, the shroud of female tears covers many a deviation from the actual. However, now is politically not the time to be in any way demeaning toward the female whilst she wills her whiles into the compassion of the onlooker.
May 11th, 2021 08:39
dusk arising said:
Ah, the shroud of female tears covers many a deviation from the actual. However, now is politically not the time to be in any way demeaning toward the female whilst she wills her whiles into the compassion of the onlooker.
May 11th, 2021 08:39
Journey of Tears
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Hit the road Jack, Drop off the key Lee, Make a New Plan Stan\" been there for sure. Good one Neville.
May 11th, 2021 08:26
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Hit the road Jack, Drop off the key Lee, Make a New Plan Stan\" been there for sure. Good one Neville.
May 11th, 2021 08:26
Journey of Tears
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sublime deviations
And
Convoluted detours
In the end though
He just could not take
Anymore
Lies told by the score ..\'..
this: my gifted and oh-so insightful, friend
would be a fittingly worded, dedication
for Miss Nina Simone\'s: incandescent Existence
immortalised, in those timeless lyrics to
\'Don\'t le me be, Misunderstood\', specifically
\'Baby, do you understand me now?
Sometimes, I feel a little mad
Well, don\'t you know that
No one alive can always be an angel
When things go wrong, I seem to be bad
I\'m just a soul who\'s intentions are good
Oh Lord, please, don\'t let me be misunderstood\'
(I\'m sorry for kidnapping
your own meaning to these wonderful words
by selfishly tattooing my own interpretation
all over them)
May 11th, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sublime deviations
And
Convoluted detours
In the end though
He just could not take
Anymore
Lies told by the score ..\'..
this: my gifted and oh-so insightful, friend
would be a fittingly worded, dedication
for Miss Nina Simone\'s: incandescent Existence
immortalised, in those timeless lyrics to
\'Don\'t le me be, Misunderstood\', specifically
\'Baby, do you understand me now?
Sometimes, I feel a little mad
Well, don\'t you know that
No one alive can always be an angel
When things go wrong, I seem to be bad
I\'m just a soul who\'s intentions are good
Oh Lord, please, don\'t let me be misunderstood\'
(I\'m sorry for kidnapping
your own meaning to these wonderful words
by selfishly tattooing my own interpretation
all over them)
May 11th, 2021 05:43
Journey of Tears
Fay Slimm. said:
The falling of self-pity\'s tears for whatever devious reason could not be expressed better my friend - - what cannot be changed is best left methinks- -- another great read............. x
May 11th, 2021 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The falling of self-pity\'s tears for whatever devious reason could not be expressed better my friend - - what cannot be changed is best left methinks- -- another great read............. x
May 11th, 2021 04:22
Negative in Blue
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely makes it imperative to continue to monitor blood pressure, Neville...... For me a very visual piece.
May 10th, 2021 08:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely makes it imperative to continue to monitor blood pressure, Neville...... For me a very visual piece.
May 10th, 2021 08:16
Negative in Blue
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was there
Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet
From dancing in and out
Of waves\'..
this is when Poetry, transcends
and demeans words like Beautiful
meaninglessly: incompetent, as praise...
(Truly a sumptuous read, my friend!)
Sensuality inked with such Immersive imagery
encapsulated in that wholesome Quality
of respectfully humane, Decency
May 10th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was there
Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet
From dancing in and out
Of waves\'..
this is when Poetry, transcends
and demeans words like Beautiful
meaninglessly: incompetent, as praise...
(Truly a sumptuous read, my friend!)
Sensuality inked with such Immersive imagery
encapsulated in that wholesome Quality
of respectfully humane, Decency
May 10th, 2021 05:48
Negative in Blue
Fay Slimm. said:
A brilliant example of intriguing imagery written to tease our sense again with scenes of sheer romance - - great stuff for a Monday morn........x
May 10th, 2021 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A brilliant example of intriguing imagery written to tease our sense again with scenes of sheer romance - - great stuff for a Monday morn........x
May 10th, 2021 04:44
Negative in Blue
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
This the same lass, or a different one? And should I meet this one?! lol.
May 10th, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
This the same lass, or a different one? And should I meet this one?! lol.
May 10th, 2021 01:39
Negative in Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
May those sunny days be with you forever Neville.
Andy
May 10th, 2021 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
May those sunny days be with you forever Neville.
Andy
May 10th, 2021 00:50
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