Comments received on poems by Neville
When I am Done
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good thoughts, Neville. I wonder about those quite a bit more at 82 than 22.
April 21st, 2021 09:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good thoughts, Neville. I wonder about those quite a bit more at 82 than 22.
April 21st, 2021 09:19
When I am Done
dusk arising said:
Nicely plucked snippets of occasion from a life lived in fullness. It\'s said it all flashes before us at the time of passing (how do they know LOL) and maybe the salient points will be clearer then. But here and now this was a rewarding read in the style which is very much your own and appreciated by this reader.... among many i\'m sure.
April 21st, 2021 09:03
dusk arising said:
Nicely plucked snippets of occasion from a life lived in fullness. It\'s said it all flashes before us at the time of passing (how do they know LOL) and maybe the salient points will be clearer then. But here and now this was a rewarding read in the style which is very much your own and appreciated by this reader.... among many i\'m sure.
April 21st, 2021 09:03
When I am Done
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev.
See how I save syllables, referring to your name in one syllable only?
Do shut up now Orchi. lol.
April 21st, 2021 04:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev.
See how I save syllables, referring to your name in one syllable only?
Do shut up now Orchi. lol.
April 21st, 2021 04:58
When I am Done
Fay Slimm. said:
Many the unforgettable things we will miss my dear friend and you scribe them so well in this list which touches the heart of giving and love.
April 21st, 2021 03:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Many the unforgettable things we will miss my dear friend and you scribe them so well in this list which touches the heart of giving and love.
April 21st, 2021 03:15
A Jar of Nuthatch
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes an edufication is to be found on MPS. Despite my misgivings, I did seek the assistance of Prof Google (not always cooperative) and managed with a struggle to discover what these Nut something or others were, plus their collective noun...
Mistletoe ball still an ongoing project.....
Marlboroughs? Smoked those coffin nails for years - but that was forty years ago
Finally? at the end? Still able to think hard lengthy thoughts....after a fashion. :-)
Thanks for it all, Neville.
Ditto the sentiments expressed above re your move.
April 21st, 2021 01:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes an edufication is to be found on MPS. Despite my misgivings, I did seek the assistance of Prof Google (not always cooperative) and managed with a struggle to discover what these Nut something or others were, plus their collective noun...
Mistletoe ball still an ongoing project.....
Marlboroughs? Smoked those coffin nails for years - but that was forty years ago
Finally? at the end? Still able to think hard lengthy thoughts....after a fashion. :-)
Thanks for it all, Neville.
Ditto the sentiments expressed above re your move.
April 21st, 2021 01:56
A Jar of Nuthatch
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words Neville, glad top see you back with us.
Pleased the move went well.
Andy
April 21st, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words Neville, glad top see you back with us.
Pleased the move went well.
Andy
April 21st, 2021 00:47
A Jar of Nuthatch
Michael Edwards said:
Looks like we\'ve both been away - anyway it\'s great to see you posting and in such good form. Not sure when I\'ll be posting as my art arm is currently busier than it has been for many a long day. Did the move go well?
April 20th, 2021 15:54
Michael Edwards said:
Looks like we\'ve both been away - anyway it\'s great to see you posting and in such good form. Not sure when I\'ll be posting as my art arm is currently busier than it has been for many a long day. Did the move go well?
April 20th, 2021 15:54
A Jar of Nuthatch
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Nev with your reflective and dreamy romantic Jar of Nuthatch - even a slow drink of Marlborough\'s not able to hide the longing in those few final words. - -- sighs and aaahs aplenty for this clever gem of a blues song .........x
April 20th, 2021 06:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Nev with your reflective and dreamy romantic Jar of Nuthatch - even a slow drink of Marlborough\'s not able to hide the longing in those few final words. - -- sighs and aaahs aplenty for this clever gem of a blues song .........x
April 20th, 2021 06:38
A Jar of Nuthatch
L. B. Mek said:
as a fan of Plath, I can\'t help but relate
that bell jar of madness your words depict
witnessing reality
through that legacy prism of empathetic - insight
within her poetic vision
for vitality: within remembrance
of our heart\'s, stubbornly treasured veracity...
I read and learn, with humble gratitude my friend
April 20th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
as a fan of Plath, I can\'t help but relate
that bell jar of madness your words depict
witnessing reality
through that legacy prism of empathetic - insight
within her poetic vision
for vitality: within remembrance
of our heart\'s, stubbornly treasured veracity...
I read and learn, with humble gratitude my friend
April 20th, 2021 05:59
A Jar of Nuthatch
dusk arising said:
Not often I get to read a final line with a \'hard on\' in it.
In a relaxation of a daydream world where brainwaves untertake their magic changes a Lear like nonsense pervades and our desires submit to our weirdness of autosuggestion as she again enters the realm of desire.
I hope that\'s not to far from an understanding of your writing today.
On another note. Good to see you posting here again, you\'re missed when absent.
April 20th, 2021 04:36
dusk arising said:
Not often I get to read a final line with a \'hard on\' in it.
In a relaxation of a daydream world where brainwaves untertake their magic changes a Lear like nonsense pervades and our desires submit to our weirdness of autosuggestion as she again enters the realm of desire.
I hope that\'s not to far from an understanding of your writing today.
On another note. Good to see you posting here again, you\'re missed when absent.
April 20th, 2021 04:36
Beware of Mirrors
L. B. Mek said:
profound and timeless, insightful wisdom: worthy, of deep contemplation
and as always worded so enticingly subtle my friend, glad I fished this one out
worth uploading again in the future (in my humble opinion)
April 19th, 2021 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
profound and timeless, insightful wisdom: worthy, of deep contemplation
and as always worded so enticingly subtle my friend, glad I fished this one out
worth uploading again in the future (in my humble opinion)
April 19th, 2021 03:37
Just my M24 and Me
L. B. Mek said:
I found this read timeless, in its message and tone
intertwining personalised life commentary, while imagining a perceived narrative of someone seemingly so far removed from our everyday reality, when it could so easily have been you and me..
a great write my friend, glad I found it
\'Sundays now mean
Absolutely nothing\'
\'Tomorrow’s just
Another numbered day\'..
these lines read so hauntingly relatable
April 9th, 2021 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
I found this read timeless, in its message and tone
intertwining personalised life commentary, while imagining a perceived narrative of someone seemingly so far removed from our everyday reality, when it could so easily have been you and me..
a great write my friend, glad I found it
\'Sundays now mean
Absolutely nothing\'
\'Tomorrow’s just
Another numbered day\'..
these lines read so hauntingly relatable
April 9th, 2021 03:38
Autumn
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one would remember.....
Seriously, I did feel that one Neville.
April 8th, 2021 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one would remember.....
Seriously, I did feel that one Neville.
April 8th, 2021 19:00
Out of Mind
Fay Slimm. said:
Love has a way of staying in mind when its day has ended and these moving words suggest the best way to let go - honestly, hopefully and so tender...........x.
April 2nd, 2021 17:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Love has a way of staying in mind when its day has ended and these moving words suggest the best way to let go - honestly, hopefully and so tender...........x.
April 2nd, 2021 17:13
Out of Mind
SureshG said:
Only in the physical sense, for they live on in memories
Well done, sir
April 2nd, 2021 16:21
SureshG said:
Only in the physical sense, for they live on in memories
Well done, sir
April 2nd, 2021 16:21
Metro Mornings
SureshG said:
I envision a yawning sky, naked, as the darkness fades and the hidden suns’ light reflects the orange luster of the dawning day.
Maybe I am just bats!
March 25th, 2021 21:33
SureshG said:
I envision a yawning sky, naked, as the darkness fades and the hidden suns’ light reflects the orange luster of the dawning day.
Maybe I am just bats!
March 25th, 2021 21:33
Just for You
SureshG said:
No, nothing shall stand in your way of expressing your true feelings, and so well done with these words you have.
March 24th, 2021 15:19
SureshG said:
No, nothing shall stand in your way of expressing your true feelings, and so well done with these words you have.
March 24th, 2021 15:19
Before We Die
Doggerel Dave said:
Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for some time. LC\'s CDs are not far away either - hardly need them as fragments buzz through my head often.
You embedded the reference in an atmospheric effort embroidered with rich detail - I would have enjoyed it anyway without the good book\'s reference.
How\'s the move, BTW?
March 24th, 2021 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for some time. LC\'s CDs are not far away either - hardly need them as fragments buzz through my head often.
You embedded the reference in an atmospheric effort embroidered with rich detail - I would have enjoyed it anyway without the good book\'s reference.
How\'s the move, BTW?
March 24th, 2021 06:33
Tomodachi ya Koibito
SureshG said:
I tried to look up Tomodachi ya Koibito, but didn’t get far.
Though, I must say, I throughly enjoyed the poem.
March 22nd, 2021 20:52
SureshG said:
I tried to look up Tomodachi ya Koibito, but didn’t get far.
Though, I must say, I throughly enjoyed the poem.
March 22nd, 2021 20:52
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Dove said:
Oh beat this heart of mine- if a man said “ you are a collection of sighs”
Oh beat this heart of mine
Hear my heartfelt sighs
When a man loves a woman
There’s a glow in his eyes
Oh beat this heart of mine
There’s poetry in his soul
With every word he whispers
Serenity softly flows
March 20th, 2021 09:07
Dove said:
Oh beat this heart of mine- if a man said “ you are a collection of sighs”
Oh beat this heart of mine
Hear my heartfelt sighs
When a man loves a woman
There’s a glow in his eyes
Oh beat this heart of mine
There’s poetry in his soul
With every word he whispers
Serenity softly flows
March 20th, 2021 09:07
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Neville said:
Hey .. LB .. thank you so much, not only for your heart warming visit .. but for pointing me in the direction of kazumasa oda .. I have already made good use of YouTube today ..... Neville
March 15th, 2021 07:36
Neville said:
Hey .. LB .. thank you so much, not only for your heart warming visit .. but for pointing me in the direction of kazumasa oda .. I have already made good use of YouTube today ..... Neville
March 15th, 2021 07:36
Tomodachi ya Koibito
orchidee said:
Cooeee! You beaten that egg yet?!
Totally unrelated comment to the poem - Do shut up now Orchi! lol.
March 15th, 2021 06:18
orchidee said:
Cooeee! You beaten that egg yet?!
Totally unrelated comment to the poem - Do shut up now Orchi! lol.
March 15th, 2021 06:18
Tomodachi ya Koibito
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of your subtle artistry my friend, beautifully worded!
may, I in turn recommend you sound-out,
\'tokyo no sora\' by kazumasa oda
no worthier lyrics in-reply to your words can ever exist, in my humble opinion
March 15th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of your subtle artistry my friend, beautifully worded!
may, I in turn recommend you sound-out,
\'tokyo no sora\' by kazumasa oda
no worthier lyrics in-reply to your words can ever exist, in my humble opinion
March 15th, 2021 05:57
Tomodachi ya Koibito
MendedFences27 said:
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both, you have immortalized her in your own way. A poem of remembrance to keep a link open to the original relationship. Your own emotions on paper. Well done, - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:26
MendedFences27 said:
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both, you have immortalized her in your own way. A poem of remembrance to keep a link open to the original relationship. Your own emotions on paper. Well done, - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:26
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Along that red-dirt road in my mind all my lovers are dear friends of mine.
March 14th, 2021 08:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Along that red-dirt road in my mind all my lovers are dear friends of mine.
March 14th, 2021 08:19
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck to you both.
But (and someone has to ask directly) wot about that last bleeding line??
March 14th, 2021 05:56
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck to you both.
But (and someone has to ask directly) wot about that last bleeding line??
March 14th, 2021 05:56
Tomodachi ya Koibito
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Erm, I never studied languages much! heehee.
Good write N.
March 14th, 2021 03:05
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Erm, I never studied languages much! heehee.
Good write N.
March 14th, 2021 03:05
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only your pen can achieve my friend. An intriguing peep into tender togetherness in this first of my morning\'s read..............x
March 14th, 2021 03:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only your pen can achieve my friend. An intriguing peep into tender togetherness in this first of my morning\'s read..............x
March 14th, 2021 03:00
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