Comments received on poems by Neville
Perfectly Hued
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, if only that would be so all would be wonderful Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, if only that would be so all would be wonderful Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2021 00:48
Perfectly Hued
Accidental Poet said:
So very much to be seen, if only our eyes could envision it for real. Beautiful write N. 😉
August 11th, 2021 19:13
Accidental Poet said:
So very much to be seen, if only our eyes could envision it for real. Beautiful write N. 😉
August 11th, 2021 19:13
Perfectly Hued
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A colorful world indeed…
if only we could, we would…
my dear poet!
A masterfully written poem.
Thank you for sharing.☺️
Laura🌻
August 11th, 2021 15:49
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A colorful world indeed…
if only we could, we would…
my dear poet!
A masterfully written poem.
Thank you for sharing.☺️
Laura🌻
August 11th, 2021 15:49
Perfectly Hued
MendedFences27 said:
\"Perfectly hued,\" is of itself a dream. Even a world without people, still must contend with the nastiness of Nature. A day might be so hued during the daylight hours, but then there is the darkness, and the world is full of predators and prey, storms and disasters, angry seas, unbearable temperatures, etc.
\"If\" begins your poem and it is a mighty big word, but accepting the impossible as possible, it would be a beautiful dream come true, such that we could surely never close our eyes again.
Your poem presents a view to the world and to the nature of man that we all wish to be true. It is food for thought served on fine china. It is appetizing to the palate and honey to the taste. Loved it! - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 12:22
MendedFences27 said:
\"Perfectly hued,\" is of itself a dream. Even a world without people, still must contend with the nastiness of Nature. A day might be so hued during the daylight hours, but then there is the darkness, and the world is full of predators and prey, storms and disasters, angry seas, unbearable temperatures, etc.
\"If\" begins your poem and it is a mighty big word, but accepting the impossible as possible, it would be a beautiful dream come true, such that we could surely never close our eyes again.
Your poem presents a view to the world and to the nature of man that we all wish to be true. It is food for thought served on fine china. It is appetizing to the palate and honey to the taste. Loved it! - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 12:22
Perfectly Hued
dusk arising said:
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but..... would I trade my dreams for the world to be so, shaped?
Nay sir, open eyed and i say nay sir. My dreams are a wonder for my inner eye only and mine alone. They are the wit of my poetry and i shall take them with me to journeys end.
Thank you neville for lighting a fire with your words today to exercise my thoughts along a track they had not seen.
August 11th, 2021 09:28
dusk arising said:
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but..... would I trade my dreams for the world to be so, shaped?
Nay sir, open eyed and i say nay sir. My dreams are a wonder for my inner eye only and mine alone. They are the wit of my poetry and i shall take them with me to journeys end.
Thank you neville for lighting a fire with your words today to exercise my thoughts along a track they had not seen.
August 11th, 2021 09:28
Perfectly Hued
Doggerel Dave said:
Well...yeh.. um..of course ..why not..
Good write Neville.
August 11th, 2021 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Well...yeh.. um..of course ..why not..
Good write Neville.
August 11th, 2021 05:27
Perfectly Hued
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for otherness. - - a read to remember so into my list of faves with this little gem.............x
August 11th, 2021 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for otherness. - - a read to remember so into my list of faves with this little gem.............x
August 11th, 2021 03:04
Upon a Time Once
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be still there Neville.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be still there Neville.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:37
Upon a Time Once
Accidental Poet said:
And what a time it was, and still is N. 👍
August 10th, 2021 19:04
Accidental Poet said:
And what a time it was, and still is N. 👍
August 10th, 2021 19:04
Upon a Time Once
Laura🌻 said:
Love is a multifaceted experience. It can be very complex; but not so much at a young age. No worries to be had until…
As I read your words, my musings have been interrupted with a sudden thought…so much is being said with just a few words; hence the tsunami.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 14:54
Laura🌻 said:
Love is a multifaceted experience. It can be very complex; but not so much at a young age. No worries to be had until…
As I read your words, my musings have been interrupted with a sudden thought…so much is being said with just a few words; hence the tsunami.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 14:54
Upon a Time Once
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Is this any relation a poem \'Pon a time\'?!
Note to self: this is very \'sad\' of me, I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do, than looking for missing \'u\'s?
August 10th, 2021 12:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Is this any relation a poem \'Pon a time\'?!
Note to self: this is very \'sad\' of me, I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do, than looking for missing \'u\'s?
August 10th, 2021 12:07
Upon a Time Once
dusk arising said:
Simple but full of reverie. You\'ve caught the true magic of writing few words but saying so much more here Neville.
August 10th, 2021 09:32
dusk arising said:
Simple but full of reverie. You\'ve caught the true magic of writing few words but saying so much more here Neville.
August 10th, 2021 09:32
Upon a Time Once
L. B. Mek said:
\'Regardless
of whether, borrowed or lent
To us in that moment
it was time, well spent\'
\'Upon a time
once, we had everything
didn’t we: just ..\'
(my melancholy, has a new muse
its in the white
of your poetry\'s capacity, to soothe)
I\'m a bona fide, fan
for just, such a reason
my oh, so talented friend!
August 10th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Regardless
of whether, borrowed or lent
To us in that moment
it was time, well spent\'
\'Upon a time
once, we had everything
didn’t we: just ..\'
(my melancholy, has a new muse
its in the white
of your poetry\'s capacity, to soothe)
I\'m a bona fide, fan
for just, such a reason
my oh, so talented friend!
August 10th, 2021 06:05
Upon a Time Once
Doggerel Dave said:
And why did it ever end, Nev? It was going so well.......
August 10th, 2021 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
And why did it ever end, Nev? It was going so well.......
August 10th, 2021 05:21
Upon a Time Once
Fay Slimm. said:
A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - great stuff again Nev. -- with a sigh................x
August 10th, 2021 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - great stuff again Nev. -- with a sigh................x
August 10th, 2021 03:59
An Unfinished Summer
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies do still exist and still want to bring love to us all.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies do still exist and still want to bring love to us all.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:36
An Unfinished Summer
Accidental Poet said:
Somewhere in my mind the Summer never ends. Great write N. 😉
August 9th, 2021 18:44
Accidental Poet said:
Somewhere in my mind the Summer never ends. Great write N. 😉
August 9th, 2021 18:44
An Unfinished Summer
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been around much and a bit out of touch - how did the move go? Oh and yes - another super write.
August 9th, 2021 14:21
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been around much and a bit out of touch - how did the move go? Oh and yes - another super write.
August 9th, 2021 14:21
An Unfinished Summer
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Boys do the dancing girls do the choosing.
August 9th, 2021 08:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Boys do the dancing girls do the choosing.
August 9th, 2021 08:20
Calling Time
Lorna said:
And there it is, and he is not afraid. I\'m loving this.
August 9th, 2021 06:38
Lorna said:
And there it is, and he is not afraid. I\'m loving this.
August 9th, 2021 06:38
An Unfinished Summer
dusk arising said:
... till time and life\'s love moved us on and along into the unknown, which all to quickly became our yesterdays.
Thank goodness for hindsight.
August 9th, 2021 06:28
dusk arising said:
... till time and life\'s love moved us on and along into the unknown, which all to quickly became our yesterdays.
Thank goodness for hindsight.
August 9th, 2021 06:28
An Unfinished Summer
L. B. Mek said:
\'With his long hair, love beads, patched
jeans ..
those Marlboro lights and frayed velvet
jacket ..\'
(a Native-American, James Dean
would have been a hit
in the west of blighty or Hollywood
I would have to agree)
a fun read, sometimes
we need to dust-off
those age wilted self-portraits
and reminisce those time\'s
when life was full of youthful vigour
and gloriously bold..
August 9th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'With his long hair, love beads, patched
jeans ..
those Marlboro lights and frayed velvet
jacket ..\'
(a Native-American, James Dean
would have been a hit
in the west of blighty or Hollywood
I would have to agree)
a fun read, sometimes
we need to dust-off
those age wilted self-portraits
and reminisce those time\'s
when life was full of youthful vigour
and gloriously bold..
August 9th, 2021 06:23
An Unfinished Summer
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I remember it well and its hippie-life that never seemed finished - -like your final line...........x
August 9th, 2021 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I remember it well and its hippie-life that never seemed finished - -like your final line...........x
August 9th, 2021 05:50
An Unfinished Summer
Doggerel Dave said:
A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the hippie girls in for a while (if he wanted them...........) but time moved on.....
Needless to say, I enjoyed that, Neville....
August 9th, 2021 04:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A great portrait of a \'\'60\'s - \'70\'s \"Hero\" - certainly got the hippie girls in for a while (if he wanted them...........) but time moved on.....
Needless to say, I enjoyed that, Neville....
August 9th, 2021 04:25
An Unfinished Summer
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hoping the Summer is unfinished? Are we all hoping?!
Dis he look like Jesus? It depends, if he was of Middle Eastern appearance (Israel). He would not have been white or black or Chinese or whatever. But you mean the beard!
I\'m going to the Co-op. It\'s in the Mid-West. (do shut up now Orchi. lol)
August 9th, 2021 04:13
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You hoping the Summer is unfinished? Are we all hoping?!
Dis he look like Jesus? It depends, if he was of Middle Eastern appearance (Israel). He would not have been white or black or Chinese or whatever. But you mean the beard!
I\'m going to the Co-op. It\'s in the Mid-West. (do shut up now Orchi. lol)
August 9th, 2021 04:13
Calling Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, just slipping away into a new life in a comfortable way.............. but not yet.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, just slipping away into a new life in a comfortable way.............. but not yet.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:09
Calling Time
Accidental Poet said:
A very meaningful write N. As my own Dad nears closer and closer to his last days, I\'m seeing him in a new light that I never expected to. I\'ve learned to appreciate more and more. 🤔
August 8th, 2021 19:17
Accidental Poet said:
A very meaningful write N. As my own Dad nears closer and closer to his last days, I\'m seeing him in a new light that I never expected to. I\'ve learned to appreciate more and more. 🤔
August 8th, 2021 19:17
Calling Time
MendedFences27 said:
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\" gives the sense of a peaceful passing, and \"silvered notes\" lends musical association. 0f whom you speak would have enjoyed the sense of the moment. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\" gives the sense of a peaceful passing, and \"silvered notes\" lends musical association. 0f whom you speak would have enjoyed the sense of the moment. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:06
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