Comments received on poems by Neville



Magic Bead
Fay Slimm. said:

The finding would bring about a magical change to one who made curtains stay so tightly drawn - - methinks - - well maybe..........x

August 2nd, 2021 15:44

Magic Bead
Jerry Reynolds said:

A lot to pierce the imagination here, Neville.

August 2nd, 2021 14:41

Magic Bead
orchidee said:

Good write N. Might I swoon? lol.

August 2nd, 2021 14:08

A Nameless Craft
Goldfinch60 said:

May that kiss pon her stern show her the feelings that the skipper has for her.

Andy

July 31st, 2021 00:33

A Nameless Craft
Accidental Poet said:

Sounds like some mischief going on here N. But I saw nothing. Well, nothing I\'ll admit to. 😉

July 30th, 2021 21:29

A Nameless Craft
Jerry Reynolds said:

Oh yes, Neville at his best.
Take your time, Ladies first.

July 30th, 2021 08:02

A Nameless Craft
L. B. Mek said:

\'giggity\', Quagmire\'s already on board: I hear.. ahem! lol
(have a great weekend my friend)

July 30th, 2021 05:21

A Nameless Craft
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - Well who would want a skipper around when they are being kissed on the stern - -- am glad they are still abobbing today Nev. --- I hear that storm ravaged a lot in heavy seas...............x

July 30th, 2021 02:55

A Nameless Craft
orchidee said:

Will I swoon if I unravel the meaning of this too much?! heehee.

July 30th, 2021 02:02

Almost a Very Nearly
Goldfinch60 said:

The wonder of the sea can intrigue us all Neville.

Andy

July 30th, 2021 00:11

Almost a Very Nearly
Jerry Reynolds said:

impudent butterfly
sits on kings crown

July 29th, 2021 09:04

Almost a Very Nearly
Accidental Poet said:

aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉

July 29th, 2021 07:47

Almost a Very Nearly
orchidee said:

Good write N. Beer belly?!

July 29th, 2021 05:46

Almost a Very Nearly
dusk arising said:

Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.

July 29th, 2021 05:45

Almost a Very Nearly
L. B. Mek said:

been out in choppy rivers have we?
almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
or a lifetime\'s nightmare of regret,
guess it all, rests
on a flip of luck\'s - temperamental tide
if you will..
another fun shorty, my friend
thank you

July 29th, 2021 04:52

No Sweat
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, I\'ve got me a few cultural keepsakes
best described
as Men\'s \'lengthy shirts\' - ahem
from my travels, and I almost
booked a flight to middle east, once
just so I could add
one of their, rather - \'Airy\', ensembles
to my collection..
there\'s no shame, when your home
is turned into a sweat bucket - for days
no Sir, no shame at all, just survival
in all its \'pretty coloured guises\'... ahem! lol
what great fun, dear poet
thank you

July 29th, 2021 04:49

Almost a Very Nearly
Fay Slimm. said:

Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x

July 29th, 2021 03:48

No Sweat
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fun read, Neville.
The image of you in a dress.
Just can\'t un-see it.

July 28th, 2021 14:17

No Sweat
flyingfish said:

No worries, cheers

July 28th, 2021 12:28

No Sweat
Accidental Poet said:

I bet Orchi has a thong he\'ll let you borrow. 🤣

July 28th, 2021 07:50

No Sweat
Saxon Crow said:

A dress is nice as long as it\'s long
But you just can\'t beat a colourful sarong

July 28th, 2021 05:45

No Sweat
dusk arising said:

I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was very funny back then, but I don\'t think i could live with the stigma if I were seen doing similar again unless on stage.
Hot, sweaty and sticky though my stage performances became i think it may have been more comfortable in a loose fitting dress.
Cant really picture you in a dress... have you a nice wig and heels?

July 28th, 2021 05:03

No Sweat
Doggerel Dave said:

Perhaps a sarong, Nev?

July 28th, 2021 04:22

No Sweat
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a see-thru\' or one of those minis ? Heat makes us mardy and dizzy with sweat - so go on - I dare ya - - but keep away from the harbour for pity\'s sake Nev...........x

July 28th, 2021 03:07

No Sweat
orchidee said:

And then it rained....! lol.

July 28th, 2021 01:56

No Sweat
Goldfinch60 said:

If I wore less on hot sticky days like this I may get arrested!

Andy

July 28th, 2021 01:46

Its Shore Life
SureshG said:

The sea was calling you and you obliged, and now it offers awesome sights.

July 27th, 2021 12:47

Its Shore Life
Accidental Poet said:

Oh the magnet pull towards the coastline. The air, gulls, the spray of crashing waves. I grew up on the coast also. \'Tis why I\'m such a lover of lighthouses. Great write N.

July 27th, 2021 08:39

Its Shore Life
L. B. Mek said:

it comes with that glint of grey in our hair
and an extra second of delay, in our sighs
a nudge of awareness, announcing
that burgeoning arrival of perspective
graced by wisdoms, wide lensed scope
for nuanced: thought...
(such a vivid read
imbued with that melancholic romance
of life, by the sea)
another great shorty, my friend!

July 27th, 2021 05:25

Its Shore Life
Goldfinch60 said:

So wonderful to share the sea shore with those wonderful birds Neville.

Andy

July 27th, 2021 04:42



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