Comments received on poems by Neville
Is There Anyone There
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many out there who can hear and appreciate your words Neville and I am certainly one of them.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many out there who can hear and appreciate your words Neville and I am certainly one of them.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:55
Is There Anyone There
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
And \'Cooeee\' do ya hear me? Are ya there?!
April 7th, 2020 13:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
And \'Cooeee\' do ya hear me? Are ya there?!
April 7th, 2020 13:25
Is There Anyone There
dusk arising said:
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of today\'s society.
But when we see so many following wealthy organised religions (google how wealthy is the roman catholic church for example) who put such stead in a book which states \"it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of heaven\" is it any wonder?
I really like the format as it builds in drama. Love the question contained.
April 7th, 2020 13:00
dusk arising said:
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of today\'s society.
But when we see so many following wealthy organised religions (google how wealthy is the roman catholic church for example) who put such stead in a book which states \"it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of heaven\" is it any wonder?
I really like the format as it builds in drama. Love the question contained.
April 7th, 2020 13:00
Is There Anyone There
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever this lead-up to saying goodbye to a dying romance but trying to get in touch seems impossible at times like these - love those last lines Nev - - such an original take on how to go separate ways.
April 7th, 2020 12:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever this lead-up to saying goodbye to a dying romance but trying to get in touch seems impossible at times like these - love those last lines Nev - - such an original take on how to go separate ways.
April 7th, 2020 12:55
Is There Anyone There
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I can hear you...
Loud and clear!
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2020 12:07
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I can hear you...
Loud and clear!
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2020 12:07
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
MendedFences27 said:
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and sorrow. The main character... has none. Her foil is the fool who believes in reconciliation. Fool me once/fool me twice etc. sadly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and sorrow. The main character... has none. Her foil is the fool who believes in reconciliation. Fool me once/fool me twice etc. sadly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 19:45
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
FredPeyer said:
I became unglued just reading it! You do have a beautiful way with words!
April 6th, 2020 12:50
FredPeyer said:
I became unglued just reading it! You do have a beautiful way with words!
April 6th, 2020 12:50
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
orchidee said:
Is that book \'Once upon a time.....?\'
April 6th, 2020 09:13
orchidee said:
Is that book \'Once upon a time.....?\'
April 6th, 2020 09:13
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that book is read and no surprises are left it is the time to select a new one.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 08:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that book is read and no surprises are left it is the time to select a new one.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 08:16
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant metaphors used here to clear the decks of an un-lovely ending to a once love affair - your words meld like glue to the leaves of this reader\'s memory -- - such powerful stuff Nev.
April 6th, 2020 06:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant metaphors used here to clear the decks of an un-lovely ending to a once love affair - your words meld like glue to the leaves of this reader\'s memory -- - such powerful stuff Nev.
April 6th, 2020 06:52
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
dusk arising said:
Times certainly change when u become able to attach an index to her text.
The novel has to be thoroughly read from cover to cover with full familiarity before such index can be appended.
The reading of course, is the pleasureable trip of discovery for both the reader and the book.
Really enjoyed this metaphor spin.
April 6th, 2020 06:19
dusk arising said:
Times certainly change when u become able to attach an index to her text.
The novel has to be thoroughly read from cover to cover with full familiarity before such index can be appended.
The reading of course, is the pleasureable trip of discovery for both the reader and the book.
Really enjoyed this metaphor spin.
April 6th, 2020 06:19
Fear of Haiku
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville.
I write haikus, senryus and tankas and have done for long while but try to keep them in the sense they were meant to be taken.
I also write goldikus and wordikus if I want to do something different and have any type of meaning.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville.
I write haikus, senryus and tankas and have done for long while but try to keep them in the sense they were meant to be taken.
I also write goldikus and wordikus if I want to do something different and have any type of meaning.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 00:16
Fear of Haiku
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening NEVILLE ~ Its not the HAIKU or SENRYU or TANKAS (5 7 5 7 7) Im scared of ~ in fact they can be good fun and long Poems are not appreciated on MSN ! What scares ME is that even on a freewheelin* - easy goin* - come-day go-day SITE like MPS there are Purists ~ WHO if you lable a POEM a HAIKU (5 7 5 & about Nature & Seasons etc ?) or a SENRYU (5 7 5 about People & emotions etc ?) they will inform you that its either wrong Syllable countwise or Subjectwise etc etc. This can put budding Poets off and they leave MPS and give up Poetry. I notice that much Published Poetry in Languages other than English dont follow the 5 7 5 syllabus rule so it seems like a *Free for All* out there ~ thanks for sharin* & carin*
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BR IAN & ANGELA !
April 5th, 2020 11:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening NEVILLE ~ Its not the HAIKU or SENRYU or TANKAS (5 7 5 7 7) Im scared of ~ in fact they can be good fun and long Poems are not appreciated on MSN ! What scares ME is that even on a freewheelin* - easy goin* - come-day go-day SITE like MPS there are Purists ~ WHO if you lable a POEM a HAIKU (5 7 5 & about Nature & Seasons etc ?) or a SENRYU (5 7 5 about People & emotions etc ?) they will inform you that its either wrong Syllable countwise or Subjectwise etc etc. This can put budding Poets off and they leave MPS and give up Poetry. I notice that much Published Poetry in Languages other than English dont follow the 5 7 5 syllabus rule so it seems like a *Free for All* out there ~ thanks for sharin* & carin*
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BR IAN & ANGELA !
April 5th, 2020 11:55
Fear of Haiku
orchidee said:
Who are Haiku and Senryu? You can see I\'m not a cultured poet! lol.
April 5th, 2020 10:21
orchidee said:
Who are Haiku and Senryu? You can see I\'m not a cultured poet! lol.
April 5th, 2020 10:21
Fear of Haiku
dusk arising said:
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they haiku and that .. innit?
April 5th, 2020 08:39
dusk arising said:
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they haiku and that .. innit?
April 5th, 2020 08:39
Fear of Haiku
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - this hits the nail on the head - -
- that\'s the way it is with short things monsieur - --- but then poetry can often make friends out of strangers methinks...............
April 5th, 2020 08:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - this hits the nail on the head - -
- that\'s the way it is with short things monsieur - --- but then poetry can often make friends out of strangers methinks...............
April 5th, 2020 08:36
More Truth
Poetic Dan said:
Like an arrow good sir! You took all my possessions but the memories are ours...
Great stuff
Keep safe
April 5th, 2020 04:08
Poetic Dan said:
Like an arrow good sir! You took all my possessions but the memories are ours...
Great stuff
Keep safe
April 5th, 2020 04:08
More Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
No it cannot go with you and it can be left behind but that\'s just money, the best thing that you must be remembered for though is your love for friends and family - that will always be treasured.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
No it cannot go with you and it can be left behind but that\'s just money, the best thing that you must be remembered for though is your love for friends and family - that will always be treasured.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 01:35
More Truth
Fay Slimm. said:
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue for retaining the richness of spirit meant - so who can say Nay to your reasonable question dear Nev. ? - -- such treasure is permanent and goes where its owner goes. - - well that\'s what methinks after pondering your welcome posting my friend.
April 4th, 2020 16:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue for retaining the richness of spirit meant - so who can say Nay to your reasonable question dear Nev. ? - -- such treasure is permanent and goes where its owner goes. - - well that\'s what methinks after pondering your welcome posting my friend.
April 4th, 2020 16:47
Insidious
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably. Love can grow or fade depending on how life and people change. The pain is a product of Love\'s depth. All love is not the same, some feel it more deeply than others. Your poem stages the \"suffering\" felt by one who loved intensely. No one went wrong. It\'s just one of life\'s changes, but it still hurts. _ Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:35
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably. Love can grow or fade depending on how life and people change. The pain is a product of Love\'s depth. All love is not the same, some feel it more deeply than others. Your poem stages the \"suffering\" felt by one who loved intensely. No one went wrong. It\'s just one of life\'s changes, but it still hurts. _ Phil A.
March 30th, 2020 19:35
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Goldfinch60 said:
My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father\'s influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
You are still your father\'s son.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
My Father died in 1995 but he is still with me and always will be as yours will be with you. Our lives were moulded by our father\'s influence and you would not be the good person you are without that influence.
You are still your father\'s son.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:06
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Christina8 said:
I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....
March 26th, 2020 19:53
Christina8 said:
I think we all struggle with these questions.....except I wonder just the opposite, now that my mother is gone.....if only someone could provide us with the answers....
March 26th, 2020 19:53
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You fit exactly where you want to fit...
in your children’s heart and soul!
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 18:42
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You fit exactly where you want to fit...
in your children’s heart and soul!
~Laura~🌻
March 26th, 2020 18:42
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.
March 26th, 2020 15:07
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers. Very clever yet such a good question with many answers.
March 26th, 2020 15:07
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Michael Edwards said:
Questions I still ponder - clever write.
March 26th, 2020 14:13
Michael Edwards said:
Questions I still ponder - clever write.
March 26th, 2020 14:13
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
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