Comments received on poems by Neville
Just a Kiss Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
on a lot of levels...
such a thought provoking read, my friend
(hope you have a clear sky - weekend) 😎
July 16th, 2021 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
on a lot of levels...
such a thought provoking read, my friend
(hope you have a clear sky - weekend) 😎
July 16th, 2021 06:07
Just a Kiss Goodbye
dusk arising said:
That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I\'m not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.
July 16th, 2021 05:12
dusk arising said:
That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I\'m not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.
July 16th, 2021 05:12
Just a Kiss Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:
Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x
July 16th, 2021 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x
July 16th, 2021 03:06
Mark these Words
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You’ve aptly scribed
“Two sides to every argument and story”…
and then there’s the truth.
It is worthwhile to have an honest conversation.
Laura🌻
July 16th, 2021 01:22
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You’ve aptly scribed
“Two sides to every argument and story”…
and then there’s the truth.
It is worthwhile to have an honest conversation.
Laura🌻
July 16th, 2021 01:22
Mark these Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we can all help each other in this world.
Andy
July 16th, 2021 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we can all help each other in this world.
Andy
July 16th, 2021 00:03
Mark these Words
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
If she won\'t, her loss, but I will.
Love you dearly.
July 15th, 2021 12:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
If she won\'t, her loss, but I will.
Love you dearly.
July 15th, 2021 12:36
Mark these Words
SureshG said:
I’ve heard this argument before, and can tell with surety, that it is right…
July 15th, 2021 10:37
SureshG said:
I’ve heard this argument before, and can tell with surety, that it is right…
July 15th, 2021 10:37
Mark these Words
L. B. Mek said:
ok so we need this printed, as car bumper stickers
as doorbell signage and everything else...
how many disagreements, fallouts
have we all experienced in life, caused by someone
misunderstanding us/our actions
then doubling-down on that and getting all defensive
and refusing to \'see reason\'...!
(this felt like a long awaited: exhale
of a read, somewhat cathartic I must admit) lol
thank you for wording it: so accessible, dear poet
July 15th, 2021 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
ok so we need this printed, as car bumper stickers
as doorbell signage and everything else...
how many disagreements, fallouts
have we all experienced in life, caused by someone
misunderstanding us/our actions
then doubling-down on that and getting all defensive
and refusing to \'see reason\'...!
(this felt like a long awaited: exhale
of a read, somewhat cathartic I must admit) lol
thank you for wording it: so accessible, dear poet
July 15th, 2021 06:00
Mark these Words
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh who are you kidding, Neville? - everyone does - look above, and below and sideways if you must......
I certainly do and will - you will have to try harder to get rid of me 😊
July 15th, 2021 05:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh who are you kidding, Neville? - everyone does - look above, and below and sideways if you must......
I certainly do and will - you will have to try harder to get rid of me 😊
July 15th, 2021 05:19
Mark these Words
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your heart fills every line with true expertise. Brilliant writing again amigo..........x
July 15th, 2021 03:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your heart fills every line with true expertise. Brilliant writing again amigo..........x
July 15th, 2021 03:16
Mark these Words
dusk arising said:
Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of yesterday can indeed bring understanding and forgiveness.
July 15th, 2021 02:22
dusk arising said:
Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of yesterday can indeed bring understanding and forgiveness.
July 15th, 2021 02:22
Upon a Small White Feather
Caring dove said:
White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂
July 15th, 2021 02:02
Caring dove said:
White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂
July 15th, 2021 02:02
Upon a Small White Feather
myself and me said:
You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.
July 14th, 2021 19:39
myself and me said:
You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.
July 14th, 2021 19:39
Upon a Small White Feather
Accidental Poet said:
Yes N, smiles for everyone. ; )
July 14th, 2021 05:23
Accidental Poet said:
Yes N, smiles for everyone. ; )
July 14th, 2021 05:23
Upon a Small White Feather
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the image of ladies presenting white feathers to \'cowards\' during WW1.
Angels perhaps? I\'ll settle for that.....
July 14th, 2021 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the image of ladies presenting white feathers to \'cowards\' during WW1.
Angels perhaps? I\'ll settle for that.....
July 14th, 2021 04:28
Upon a Small White Feather
Fay Slimm. said:
A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x
July 14th, 2021 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x
July 14th, 2021 04:04
Upon a Small White Feather
dusk arising said:
Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved one looking down on us.
Nicely worded joyful reminder of a missed person.
July 14th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved one looking down on us.
Nicely worded joyful reminder of a missed person.
July 14th, 2021 03:34
Magnificently Different
myself and me said:
Wow, you must have a magnificent pen.
July 13th, 2021 21:29
myself and me said:
Wow, you must have a magnificent pen.
July 13th, 2021 21:29
Magnificently Different
MendedFences27 said:
Stopped and fell into this trove of memories, though without the mandolin. I must say I loved the metaphor, though. And as always a dream come true. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2021 16:24
MendedFences27 said:
Stopped and fell into this trove of memories, though without the mandolin. I must say I loved the metaphor, though. And as always a dream come true. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2021 16:24
Magnificently Different
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a very long time ago but I remember them so well.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a very long time ago but I remember them so well.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 14:41
Magnificently Different
SureshG said:
the trouble of being a late arrival is that all ones thoughts have already been expressed and thus shy away from repeating, so -
‘magnificently poemed’ is all that’s left.
July 13th, 2021 12:49
SureshG said:
the trouble of being a late arrival is that all ones thoughts have already been expressed and thus shy away from repeating, so -
‘magnificently poemed’ is all that’s left.
July 13th, 2021 12:49
Magnificently Different
L. B. Mek said:
\'and ain\'t that: the Dream
we\'re all striving to achieve...
if only, we could fast-track
our evolutionary self-growth, in time
for us to possess something, better
to offer: when that \'next time\'
comes around, in that blink
of an enticingly mesmeric, wink...\'
(another subtly woven write
tugging at those tether\'s, we buried deep
just so that we can survive
each elongated sigh of regretted, breath)
Brilliant, such an immersive read!
and as always, I thank you
for continuously inspiring
my little scribbled replies, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'and ain\'t that: the Dream
we\'re all striving to achieve...
if only, we could fast-track
our evolutionary self-growth, in time
for us to possess something, better
to offer: when that \'next time\'
comes around, in that blink
of an enticingly mesmeric, wink...\'
(another subtly woven write
tugging at those tether\'s, we buried deep
just so that we can survive
each elongated sigh of regretted, breath)
Brilliant, such an immersive read!
and as always, I thank you
for continuously inspiring
my little scribbled replies, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:59
Magnificently Different
Doggerel Dave said:
Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened next.... That because the initial piece was very vivid and engaged my curiosity...never having been in that position myself.
July 13th, 2021 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Frustrating, Neville......my pedestrian mind wants to know what happened next.... That because the initial piece was very vivid and engaged my curiosity...never having been in that position myself.
July 13th, 2021 04:22
Magnificently Different
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity yet only dreams now remain in memory\'s coffers. Sweet intrigue as always but still very telling...............x
July 13th, 2021 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity yet only dreams now remain in memory\'s coffers. Sweet intrigue as always but still very telling...............x
July 13th, 2021 03:31
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