Comments received on poems by Neville
Beware of Mirrors
L. B. Mek said:
profound and timeless, insightful wisdom: worthy, of deep contemplation
and as always worded so enticingly subtle my friend, glad I fished this one out
worth uploading again in the future (in my humble opinion)
April 19th, 2021 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
profound and timeless, insightful wisdom: worthy, of deep contemplation
and as always worded so enticingly subtle my friend, glad I fished this one out
worth uploading again in the future (in my humble opinion)
April 19th, 2021 03:37
Just my M24 and Me
L. B. Mek said:
I found this read timeless, in its message and tone
intertwining personalised life commentary, while imagining a perceived narrative of someone seemingly so far removed from our everyday reality, when it could so easily have been you and me..
a great write my friend, glad I found it
\'Sundays now mean
Absolutely nothing\'
\'Tomorrow’s just
Another numbered day\'..
these lines read so hauntingly relatable
April 9th, 2021 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
I found this read timeless, in its message and tone
intertwining personalised life commentary, while imagining a perceived narrative of someone seemingly so far removed from our everyday reality, when it could so easily have been you and me..
a great write my friend, glad I found it
\'Sundays now mean
Absolutely nothing\'
\'Tomorrow’s just
Another numbered day\'..
these lines read so hauntingly relatable
April 9th, 2021 03:38
Autumn
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one would remember.....
Seriously, I did feel that one Neville.
April 8th, 2021 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Wish I\'d written that .........perhaps I could slip it in ......no one would remember.....
Seriously, I did feel that one Neville.
April 8th, 2021 19:00
Out of Mind
Fay Slimm. said:
Love has a way of staying in mind when its day has ended and these moving words suggest the best way to let go - honestly, hopefully and so tender...........x.
April 2nd, 2021 17:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Love has a way of staying in mind when its day has ended and these moving words suggest the best way to let go - honestly, hopefully and so tender...........x.
April 2nd, 2021 17:13
Out of Mind
SureshG said:
Only in the physical sense, for they live on in memories
Well done, sir
April 2nd, 2021 16:21
SureshG said:
Only in the physical sense, for they live on in memories
Well done, sir
April 2nd, 2021 16:21
Metro Mornings
SureshG said:
I envision a yawning sky, naked, as the darkness fades and the hidden suns’ light reflects the orange luster of the dawning day.
Maybe I am just bats!
March 25th, 2021 21:33
SureshG said:
I envision a yawning sky, naked, as the darkness fades and the hidden suns’ light reflects the orange luster of the dawning day.
Maybe I am just bats!
March 25th, 2021 21:33
Just for You
SureshG said:
No, nothing shall stand in your way of expressing your true feelings, and so well done with these words you have.
March 24th, 2021 15:19
SureshG said:
No, nothing shall stand in your way of expressing your true feelings, and so well done with these words you have.
March 24th, 2021 15:19
Before We Die
Doggerel Dave said:
Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for some time. LC\'s CDs are not far away either - hardly need them as fragments buzz through my head often.
You embedded the reference in an atmospheric effort embroidered with rich detail - I would have enjoyed it anyway without the good book\'s reference.
How\'s the move, BTW?
March 24th, 2021 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Have that very book on my shelf Neville, though I haven\'t opened it for some time. LC\'s CDs are not far away either - hardly need them as fragments buzz through my head often.
You embedded the reference in an atmospheric effort embroidered with rich detail - I would have enjoyed it anyway without the good book\'s reference.
How\'s the move, BTW?
March 24th, 2021 06:33
Tomodachi ya Koibito
SureshG said:
I tried to look up Tomodachi ya Koibito, but didn’t get far.
Though, I must say, I throughly enjoyed the poem.
March 22nd, 2021 20:52
SureshG said:
I tried to look up Tomodachi ya Koibito, but didn’t get far.
Though, I must say, I throughly enjoyed the poem.
March 22nd, 2021 20:52
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Dove said:
Oh beat this heart of mine- if a man said “ you are a collection of sighs”
Oh beat this heart of mine
Hear my heartfelt sighs
When a man loves a woman
There’s a glow in his eyes
Oh beat this heart of mine
There’s poetry in his soul
With every word he whispers
Serenity softly flows
March 20th, 2021 09:07
Dove said:
Oh beat this heart of mine- if a man said “ you are a collection of sighs”
Oh beat this heart of mine
Hear my heartfelt sighs
When a man loves a woman
There’s a glow in his eyes
Oh beat this heart of mine
There’s poetry in his soul
With every word he whispers
Serenity softly flows
March 20th, 2021 09:07
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Neville said:
Hey .. LB .. thank you so much, not only for your heart warming visit .. but for pointing me in the direction of kazumasa oda .. I have already made good use of YouTube today ..... Neville
March 15th, 2021 07:36
Neville said:
Hey .. LB .. thank you so much, not only for your heart warming visit .. but for pointing me in the direction of kazumasa oda .. I have already made good use of YouTube today ..... Neville
March 15th, 2021 07:36
Tomodachi ya Koibito
orchidee said:
Cooeee! You beaten that egg yet?!
Totally unrelated comment to the poem - Do shut up now Orchi! lol.
March 15th, 2021 06:18
orchidee said:
Cooeee! You beaten that egg yet?!
Totally unrelated comment to the poem - Do shut up now Orchi! lol.
March 15th, 2021 06:18
Tomodachi ya Koibito
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of your subtle artistry my friend, beautifully worded!
may, I in turn recommend you sound-out,
\'tokyo no sora\' by kazumasa oda
no worthier lyrics in-reply to your words can ever exist, in my humble opinion
March 15th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
a delectable serving of your subtle artistry my friend, beautifully worded!
may, I in turn recommend you sound-out,
\'tokyo no sora\' by kazumasa oda
no worthier lyrics in-reply to your words can ever exist, in my humble opinion
March 15th, 2021 05:57
Tomodachi ya Koibito
MendedFences27 said:
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both, you have immortalized her in your own way. A poem of remembrance to keep a link open to the original relationship. Your own emotions on paper. Well done, - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:26
MendedFences27 said:
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both, you have immortalized her in your own way. A poem of remembrance to keep a link open to the original relationship. Your own emotions on paper. Well done, - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:26
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Along that red-dirt road in my mind all my lovers are dear friends of mine.
March 14th, 2021 08:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Along that red-dirt road in my mind all my lovers are dear friends of mine.
March 14th, 2021 08:19
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck to you both.
But (and someone has to ask directly) wot about that last bleeding line??
March 14th, 2021 05:56
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Neville. Felt fine and in many ways familiar, understood and good luck to you both.
But (and someone has to ask directly) wot about that last bleeding line??
March 14th, 2021 05:56
Tomodachi ya Koibito
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Erm, I never studied languages much! heehee.
Good write N.
March 14th, 2021 03:05
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? Erm, I never studied languages much! heehee.
Good write N.
March 14th, 2021 03:05
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only your pen can achieve my friend. An intriguing peep into tender togetherness in this first of my morning\'s read..............x
March 14th, 2021 03:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only your pen can achieve my friend. An intriguing peep into tender togetherness in this first of my morning\'s read..............x
March 14th, 2021 03:00
Tomodachi ya Koibito
Goldfinch60 said:
May those friends and children be forever with us.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
May those friends and children be forever with us.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 02:04
Just for You
Goldfinch60 said:
That endearing love will always be there within you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
That endearing love will always be there within you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:23
Just for You
dusk arising said:
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere presence in my thougtful mind of you\"
oooppss sorry my mind conjoured up another line or two for your, once again, thought provoking mood piece.
March 13th, 2021 13:57
dusk arising said:
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere presence in my thougtful mind of you\"
oooppss sorry my mind conjoured up another line or two for your, once again, thought provoking mood piece.
March 13th, 2021 13:57
Just for You
FredPeyer said:
I too had no idea what \'leats\' meant, but thankfully orchie cleared that up.
Great poem, Neville!
March 13th, 2021 11:37
FredPeyer said:
I too had no idea what \'leats\' meant, but thankfully orchie cleared that up.
Great poem, Neville!
March 13th, 2021 11:37
Just for You
Dove said:
A very earthy love poem , I too am not sure what a leat is !
Always well penned! Sunshine is always radiant in your
Lines because they come from your soul
March 13th, 2021 10:46
Dove said:
A very earthy love poem , I too am not sure what a leat is !
Always well penned! Sunshine is always radiant in your
Lines because they come from your soul
March 13th, 2021 10:46
Just for You
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to hearing meant love..........x
March 13th, 2021 06:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to hearing meant love..........x
March 13th, 2021 06:51
Just for You
Doggerel Dave said:
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that linger.
PS: \'Sorry I can\'t respond to the spring is sprung poetry - don\'t make much sense to me......
March 13th, 2021 03:14
Doggerel Dave said:
A real heartfelt, open ended tribute, Neville You do little nuggets that linger.
PS: \'Sorry I can\'t respond to the spring is sprung poetry - don\'t make much sense to me......
March 13th, 2021 03:14
Just for You
orchidee said:
Yep, can\'t beat a good leat. \'Stream\' probably, to us in my part of the world.
I doubt I shall meet this gal in this fine write - she\'s all yours, I reckon.
March 13th, 2021 03:12
orchidee said:
Yep, can\'t beat a good leat. \'Stream\' probably, to us in my part of the world.
I doubt I shall meet this gal in this fine write - she\'s all yours, I reckon.
March 13th, 2021 03:12
Metro Mornings
Dove said:
So beautiful! Arc light and haloed! So Angelic the skies
March 12th, 2021 13:00
Dove said:
So beautiful! Arc light and haloed! So Angelic the skies
March 12th, 2021 13:00
Metro Mornings
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Good by to winter\" a lovely line Neville. You all laid back under a thatched roof and me a dawn away looking for the first Crocus.
March 12th, 2021 09:30
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Good by to winter\" a lovely line Neville. You all laid back under a thatched roof and me a dawn away looking for the first Crocus.
March 12th, 2021 09:30
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