Comments received on poems by Neville
Splitting Hairs
Christina8 said:
Love the great write...an absolute pleasure to read....a delight with the last line....just beautiful!!
September 21st, 2019 18:45
Christina8 said:
Love the great write...an absolute pleasure to read....a delight with the last line....just beautiful!!
September 21st, 2019 18:45
Splitting Hairs
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a delight to read Nev................ Fay
September 21st, 2019 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a delight to read Nev................ Fay
September 21st, 2019 13:31
Splitting Hairs
dusk arising said:
Here we go... Nev once again leads me into a pleasureable mystery tale.... such a romance .... not splitting hairs but was there parting of hairs one wonders?
Great possibilities arise each time i re-read this piece. Now that\'s great entertainment value for the readers creative mind.
Excellent mind capture Neville.
September 21st, 2019 12:52
dusk arising said:
Here we go... Nev once again leads me into a pleasureable mystery tale.... such a romance .... not splitting hairs but was there parting of hairs one wonders?
Great possibilities arise each time i re-read this piece. Now that\'s great entertainment value for the readers creative mind.
Excellent mind capture Neville.
September 21st, 2019 12:52
Splitting Hairs
orchidee said:
I got no green candles? Does the Co-op sell them?!
September 21st, 2019 12:52
orchidee said:
I got no green candles? Does the Co-op sell them?!
September 21st, 2019 12:52
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Goldfinch60 said:
That space will be filled with your Spirit for the rest of us to honour and remember in awe.
September 21st, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That space will be filled with your Spirit for the rest of us to honour and remember in awe.
September 21st, 2019 01:13
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
SerenWise said:
Plenty for sure. But a valid question nonetheless
September 20th, 2019 21:16
SerenWise said:
Plenty for sure. But a valid question nonetheless
September 20th, 2019 21:16
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Michael Edwards said:
When I am dead and gone
the space I occupy
will with me be withdrawn.
Great shorty Neville.
September 20th, 2019 08:32
Michael Edwards said:
When I am dead and gone
the space I occupy
will with me be withdrawn.
Great shorty Neville.
September 20th, 2019 08:32
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
dusk arising said:
Question Neville \"Will it need tending?\" Mine won\'t that\'s for sure. Mourning? well i should think that depends upon who\'s the mournful type.
Great compact piece throwing out questions which each \'type\' of reader will receieve and respond to
in their own \'typical\' manner. Be interesting to see how that pans out here.
Good one.
September 20th, 2019 06:48
dusk arising said:
Question Neville \"Will it need tending?\" Mine won\'t that\'s for sure. Mourning? well i should think that depends upon who\'s the mournful type.
Great compact piece throwing out questions which each \'type\' of reader will receieve and respond to
in their own \'typical\' manner. Be interesting to see how that pans out here.
Good one.
September 20th, 2019 06:48
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Fay Slimm. said:
All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own welfare..... hope this answers that solemn question a little bit - - thanks for posing it on behalf of us all Nev.
September 20th, 2019 05:43
Fay Slimm. said:
All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own welfare..... hope this answers that solemn question a little bit - - thanks for posing it on behalf of us all Nev.
September 20th, 2019 05:43
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
sylviasearcher said:
Awww many i am sure.
And a perfectly poised question too 🦋
September 20th, 2019 05:33
sylviasearcher said:
Awww many i am sure.
And a perfectly poised question too 🦋
September 20th, 2019 05:33
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
orchidee said:
One said \'Live so as to be missed\' (when you\'re gone, that is). I can\'t seem to find who said it originally. Maybe it was you - yes?!
But - aww - why will they all tend the space when I\'m gone? Cos they\'ll be rid of my singing. heehee.
September 20th, 2019 05:20
orchidee said:
One said \'Live so as to be missed\' (when you\'re gone, that is). I can\'t seem to find who said it originally. Maybe it was you - yes?!
But - aww - why will they all tend the space when I\'m gone? Cos they\'ll be rid of my singing. heehee.
September 20th, 2019 05:20
There Are Those
Goldfinch60 said:
... that write in rhyme
and verse
There are those where rhymes
a curse
Clever write Neville .
September 20th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
... that write in rhyme
and verse
There are those where rhymes
a curse
Clever write Neville .
September 20th, 2019 01:23
There Are Those
SerenWise said:
Excellent little write, perfection of rhyming!
September 19th, 2019 22:08
SerenWise said:
Excellent little write, perfection of rhyming!
September 19th, 2019 22:08
There Are Those
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘And then there are those...’
who’ll slither from
under their rock and...
I enjoyed this read!
~Laura~🌻
September 19th, 2019 20:30
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
‘And then there are those...’
who’ll slither from
under their rock and...
I enjoyed this read!
~Laura~🌻
September 19th, 2019 20:30
There Are Those
kevin browne said:
Definitely well put together Mr.Nev...your carfting is growing and just keeps on growing. Loved reading this....
September 19th, 2019 15:24
kevin browne said:
Definitely well put together Mr.Nev...your carfting is growing and just keeps on growing. Loved reading this....
September 19th, 2019 15:24
There Are Those
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville! Perfectly formed and with a superb closure.
September 19th, 2019 13:09
dusk arising said:
Nice one Neville! Perfectly formed and with a superb closure.
September 19th, 2019 13:09
There Are Those
sylviasearcher said:
There are those who...
Fuck?
You were inviting us to complete the last line weren’t you
September 19th, 2019 10:24
sylviasearcher said:
There are those who...
Fuck?
You were inviting us to complete the last line weren’t you
September 19th, 2019 10:24
There Are Those
Poetic Dan said:
Those that want..... You can\'t stop!
O it\'s for those to carry it on
Because there are those that absorb everything!
Fantastic read! really enjoyed
Ta very much
September 19th, 2019 10:13
Poetic Dan said:
Those that want..... You can\'t stop!
O it\'s for those to carry it on
Because there are those that absorb everything!
Fantastic read! really enjoyed
Ta very much
September 19th, 2019 10:13
There Are Those
orchidee said:
And who are the \"they\" who are always saying things?!
September 19th, 2019 07:14
orchidee said:
And who are the \"they\" who are always saying things?!
September 19th, 2019 07:14
There Are Those
Christina8 said:
Wonderful list of \"those\"....beautiful write for today Neville!!
September 19th, 2019 06:19
Christina8 said:
Wonderful list of \"those\"....beautiful write for today Neville!!
September 19th, 2019 06:19
There Are Those
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those Nev. - - a beut of a write and no doubt some more of \"those\" will be coming to mind from your readers........ Fay
September 19th, 2019 05:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those Nev. - - a beut of a write and no doubt some more of \"those\" will be coming to mind from your readers........ Fay
September 19th, 2019 05:02
Good Time Girl
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, but rather sad. Really conjures up a lasting impression
September 18th, 2019 22:06
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, but rather sad. Really conjures up a lasting impression
September 18th, 2019 22:06
Good Time Girl
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to go down that path but sometimes it is the only way to live.
My son works in Social Services in the prisons and he says how great some of the inmates are in ordinary ways, they just went wrong in one particular way.
Great write Neville.
September 18th, 2019 04:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to go down that path but sometimes it is the only way to live.
My son works in Social Services in the prisons and he says how great some of the inmates are in ordinary ways, they just went wrong in one particular way.
Great write Neville.
September 18th, 2019 04:43
Good Time Girl
orchidee said:
I understand - some folk fall on bad times, their lives go downhill for whatever reason.
Meanwhile - Oh, I dunno, I will go mad and meet her, for a bit of a \'good time\'! lol. Fido says can he come along too?! Has the \'girl\' got a lady dog he could meet?! Ooh!
September 18th, 2019 03:30
orchidee said:
I understand - some folk fall on bad times, their lives go downhill for whatever reason.
Meanwhile - Oh, I dunno, I will go mad and meet her, for a bit of a \'good time\'! lol. Fido says can he come along too?! Has the \'girl\' got a lady dog he could meet?! Ooh!
September 18th, 2019 03:30
Good Time Girl
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the picture you pen of a once-pretty girl - - giving many relief and receiving far more than lucre has a very strong warning for those beginning the game.
September 18th, 2019 02:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the picture you pen of a once-pretty girl - - giving many relief and receiving far more than lucre has a very strong warning for those beginning the game.
September 18th, 2019 02:47
Good Time Girl
dusk arising said:
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an ageing hooker probably wondering if the path which led to \'now\' was ever worth it\'s cost upon her.
September 18th, 2019 02:41
dusk arising said:
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an ageing hooker probably wondering if the path which led to \'now\' was ever worth it\'s cost upon her.
September 18th, 2019 02:41
Good Time Girl
orchidee said:
Oohh, I best not meet her then! Woof, No says Fido.
September 18th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
Oohh, I best not meet her then! Woof, No says Fido.
September 18th, 2019 02:37
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