Comments received on poems by Neville
Metro Mornings
Fay Slimm. said:
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so expertly put in these few lines as always are the reasons love survives wintery times . - - - every line has a reminder and must keep this among my faves...,,,,...,x
March 12th, 2021 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so expertly put in these few lines as always are the reasons love survives wintery times . - - - every line has a reminder and must keep this among my faves...,,,,...,x
March 12th, 2021 03:52
Metro Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:
I nearly missed dawn this morning, half the day seemed to have gone when I awoke at 6:10 am.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 03:06
Goldfinch60 said:
I nearly missed dawn this morning, half the day seemed to have gone when I awoke at 6:10 am.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 03:06
Metro Mornings
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Will she wave goodbye to me? Have I even met her?! heehee.
March 12th, 2021 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Will she wave goodbye to me? Have I even met her?! heehee.
March 12th, 2021 02:48
Out of Mind
Dove said:
Love the line , the candles are weeping!
If only I could think that way!
“If I no longer see you, you no longer exist “
Seems I’m a creature of you are
Always in my thoughts and heart
March 10th, 2021 19:12
Dove said:
Love the line , the candles are weeping!
If only I could think that way!
“If I no longer see you, you no longer exist “
Seems I’m a creature of you are
Always in my thoughts and heart
March 10th, 2021 19:12
Love like a Song
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing through all these very apt lines mon ami.
March 10th, 2021 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing through all these very apt lines mon ami.
March 10th, 2021 11:43
Out of Mind
MendedFences27 said:
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the lost imagined one .This is the power of the mind.
The first two lines set up the imagery. Then we inject \"hope\" an undefined emotion and the work of the mind. And lastly, having set up the implausible we free what is not ours to let go. Yet the honesty of your emotions rings through to the reader and we know the words are spoken in sincerity. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:51
MendedFences27 said:
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the lost imagined one .This is the power of the mind.
The first two lines set up the imagery. Then we inject \"hope\" an undefined emotion and the work of the mind. And lastly, having set up the implausible we free what is not ours to let go. Yet the honesty of your emotions rings through to the reader and we know the words are spoken in sincerity. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:51
Out of Mind
FredPeyer said:
Neville, this is a great poem and should be hanging in every divorce lawyer\'s office!
March 9th, 2021 19:11
FredPeyer said:
Neville, this is a great poem and should be hanging in every divorce lawyer\'s office!
March 9th, 2021 19:11
Out of Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be. I\'ll settle for the last three stanzas.
Great Neville.
March 9th, 2021 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Love free of possession - the only way (though sometimes very hard) to be. I\'ll settle for the last three stanzas.
Great Neville.
March 9th, 2021 17:31
Out of Mind
L. B. Mek said:
\'If I cannot see you
Then you no longer exist\'
=
\'You can dance, you can laugh
You can love, now eternally free..\'
worded beautifully, I really like the challenging journey depicted - in distilling, the acceptance it takes
to transmute your first two lines: into your last two..
another subtle serving of your inked brushstroke of brilliance my friend, in my humble opinion
March 9th, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'If I cannot see you
Then you no longer exist\'
=
\'You can dance, you can laugh
You can love, now eternally free..\'
worded beautifully, I really like the challenging journey depicted - in distilling, the acceptance it takes
to transmute your first two lines: into your last two..
another subtle serving of your inked brushstroke of brilliance my friend, in my humble opinion
March 9th, 2021 07:23
Out of Mind
dusk arising said:
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me and so to they must have elevated my lovers. Elevation - to ride higher than you rode before.
Your excellent words speak of letting go peacefully with understanding and acceptance. To move forward along a path as yet untrod.
Really enjoyed reading this and the thoughts it provoked - leaving me uplifted truly.
March 9th, 2021 05:50
dusk arising said:
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me and so to they must have elevated my lovers. Elevation - to ride higher than you rode before.
Your excellent words speak of letting go peacefully with understanding and acceptance. To move forward along a path as yet untrod.
Really enjoyed reading this and the thoughts it provoked - leaving me uplifted truly.
March 9th, 2021 05:50
Out of Mind
orchidee said:
You seeing me? You burnt all the pics of me?! heehee.
A fine write N.
March 9th, 2021 02:32
orchidee said:
You seeing me? You burnt all the pics of me?! heehee.
A fine write N.
March 9th, 2021 02:32
Some Sounds Easily Missed
MendedFences27 said:
Some believe that our voice communications is what separates us from the animals, especially when used to make music. If all the animals could speak the world would be deafening. You run from the early years of Man to today and along the way not much has changed. The loudest voice gets heard first. The quiet and meek are nearly voiceless, but perhaps enjoying more of the \"muffled sighs.\" This is a keeper. Thanks for that. - Phil A
March 8th, 2021 23:36
MendedFences27 said:
Some believe that our voice communications is what separates us from the animals, especially when used to make music. If all the animals could speak the world would be deafening. You run from the early years of Man to today and along the way not much has changed. The loudest voice gets heard first. The quiet and meek are nearly voiceless, but perhaps enjoying more of the \"muffled sighs.\" This is a keeper. Thanks for that. - Phil A
March 8th, 2021 23:36
Love like a Song
Dove said:
Beautifully written!
Love like a wind chime
Let it enchant your soul
Let it’s music resonates
and kiss your very soul
Let the winds of love
Make you feel whole
March 8th, 2021 09:34
Dove said:
Beautifully written!
Love like a wind chime
Let it enchant your soul
Let it’s music resonates
and kiss your very soul
Let the winds of love
Make you feel whole
March 8th, 2021 09:34
Love like a Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, listening is so important.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, listening is so important.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:12
Love like a Song
MendedFences27 said:
Most of music is love songs, except country. If you play a country song backwards,,,,,,,,, You get either your girl back, your truck back, or your dog back, (sorry),- Perhaps if people listened carefully to music and lyrics lessons could be learned. Maybe a greater understanding of each other would be the reward. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2021 21:55
MendedFences27 said:
Most of music is love songs, except country. If you play a country song backwards,,,,,,,,, You get either your girl back, your truck back, or your dog back, (sorry),- Perhaps if people listened carefully to music and lyrics lessons could be learned. Maybe a greater understanding of each other would be the reward. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2021 21:55
Love like a Song
FredPeyer said:
You hit on something we all should do much more often: Pause, tune-in and listen. Love the poem!
March 7th, 2021 16:22
FredPeyer said:
You hit on something we all should do much more often: Pause, tune-in and listen. Love the poem!
March 7th, 2021 16:22
Love like a Song
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. I\'ll be OK meeting gals such as these. It don\'t seen swoony, in the sense that Fido tries to save me from certain swoons! lol.
March 7th, 2021 03:17
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. I\'ll be OK meeting gals such as these. It don\'t seen swoony, in the sense that Fido tries to save me from certain swoons! lol.
March 7th, 2021 03:17
Love like a Song
dusk arising said:
kinda like... with feeling!
well as an ex singer turned instrumentalist... what other way can there be to love. Put your all into it.
March 7th, 2021 03:06
dusk arising said:
kinda like... with feeling!
well as an ex singer turned instrumentalist... what other way can there be to love. Put your all into it.
March 7th, 2021 03:06
Some Sounds Easily Missed
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Good read, inspiring images.
March 6th, 2021 17:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Good read, inspiring images.
March 6th, 2021 17:51
Some Sounds Easily Missed
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, If I haven\'t got anything to put here, you do know it doesn\'t mean I don\'t like it - It just means I haven\'t got anything to put?
I do think I missed one...
March 6th, 2021 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, If I haven\'t got anything to put here, you do know it doesn\'t mean I don\'t like it - It just means I haven\'t got anything to put?
I do think I missed one...
March 6th, 2021 17:21
Some Sounds Easily Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sounds are so important in our lives. In saying that though silence is also important.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 15:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sounds are so important in our lives. In saying that though silence is also important.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 15:24
Some Sounds Easily Missed
FredPeyer said:
Your incredible poem made me grateful not to be deaf.
March 6th, 2021 10:55
FredPeyer said:
Your incredible poem made me grateful not to be deaf.
March 6th, 2021 10:55
Some Sounds Easily Missed
SureshG said:
Your sound of muffled words, bring back to memory the past into present
Thank you
March 6th, 2021 10:38
SureshG said:
Your sound of muffled words, bring back to memory the past into present
Thank you
March 6th, 2021 10:38
Let’s Talk Scars
L. B. Mek said:
\'I read your words and faces visit
with accusatory tones coiled upon sullen tongues, behind
their tight-lipped restraint, of resolve,
ah my friend what a cupboard of skeletons you\'ve shaken loose
with your subtle words of truth,
I shall choose your path then, and bravely look back
at those once adoring eyes,
communing within memory\'s vocabulary
release a deep sigh of ashamed belated realisation, then
simply whisper my apologies
to those forgiving clouds of hope
within this breeze of accountability;
dear sisters, forgive me: I offer no shirking excuses for my brazen youthful deeds
just my eyes, now singed within humility\'s tears..\'
forgive me my friend I must have missed this post somehow, came looking for a dose of your poetic subtle brilliance, and as seemingly always - you delivered beyond my wildest hopes!
a brilliant write my friend, thank you for inspiring my feeble reply, though in actuality its probably the best thing I\'ve penned in a long while
March 5th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'I read your words and faces visit
with accusatory tones coiled upon sullen tongues, behind
their tight-lipped restraint, of resolve,
ah my friend what a cupboard of skeletons you\'ve shaken loose
with your subtle words of truth,
I shall choose your path then, and bravely look back
at those once adoring eyes,
communing within memory\'s vocabulary
release a deep sigh of ashamed belated realisation, then
simply whisper my apologies
to those forgiving clouds of hope
within this breeze of accountability;
dear sisters, forgive me: I offer no shirking excuses for my brazen youthful deeds
just my eyes, now singed within humility\'s tears..\'
forgive me my friend I must have missed this post somehow, came looking for a dose of your poetic subtle brilliance, and as seemingly always - you delivered beyond my wildest hopes!
a brilliant write my friend, thank you for inspiring my feeble reply, though in actuality its probably the best thing I\'ve penned in a long while
March 5th, 2021 05:42
Lockdown Time
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s been following us from the day we were born!
Nice Post
March 1st, 2021 01:59
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s been following us from the day we were born!
Nice Post
March 1st, 2021 01:59
Lockdown Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes each one of us one day will lose our time on earth but I won\'t be going yet I have too many people to still upset! LOL
Andy
March 1st, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes each one of us one day will lose our time on earth but I won\'t be going yet I have too many people to still upset! LOL
Andy
March 1st, 2021 01:44
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