Comments received on poems by Neville
Harbour Side
SerenWise said:
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
April 18th, 2019 14:37
SerenWise said:
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
April 18th, 2019 14:37
Harbour Side
dusk arising said:
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a must for my fav\'s.
Thank you Neville, a joy to read.
April 18th, 2019 05:33
dusk arising said:
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a must for my fav\'s.
Thank you Neville, a joy to read.
April 18th, 2019 05:33
Harbour Side
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I will bring Fido along to bark at them voyeurs.
I would said shuperb shensous etc too, but I been on the sherry, as you see!
April 18th, 2019 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I will bring Fido along to bark at them voyeurs.
I would said shuperb shensous etc too, but I been on the sherry, as you see!
April 18th, 2019 01:59
Harbour Side
Fay Slimm. said:
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am sure Nev ---- with all its assertions I do assure you it leaves this reader breathless........... saved into faves.
April 18th, 2019 01:34
Fay Slimm. said:
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am sure Nev ---- with all its assertions I do assure you it leaves this reader breathless........... saved into faves.
April 18th, 2019 01:34
Turn Toward the Window
Michael Edwards said:
You\'d better search that shed for some more gems.
April 17th, 2019 13:00
Michael Edwards said:
You\'d better search that shed for some more gems.
April 17th, 2019 13:00
Turn Toward the Window
SerenWise said:
Very emotional and elegantly written, well done
April 17th, 2019 12:35
SerenWise said:
Very emotional and elegantly written, well done
April 17th, 2019 12:35
Turn Toward the Window
Suresh said:
So did I, but left them scribbled, unpublished... untitled....unfinished
All I needed to know
Is how could you let me go
All I knew
Is that I loved you so
You strayed, you betrayed
Your heart was never in it
You knew it, you blew it
I hope it was worth it
Being free of all that frost
How come I feel so lost
Ever since then I confess
I\'m a mess
Ever since then n now
All we know, love is blind
Yet, I must move forward
Alone, my place, I must find
My words show simplicity of youth and immaturity of composition
April 17th, 2019 11:05
Suresh said:
So did I, but left them scribbled, unpublished... untitled....unfinished
All I needed to know
Is how could you let me go
All I knew
Is that I loved you so
You strayed, you betrayed
Your heart was never in it
You knew it, you blew it
I hope it was worth it
Being free of all that frost
How come I feel so lost
Ever since then I confess
I\'m a mess
Ever since then n now
All we know, love is blind
Yet, I must move forward
Alone, my place, I must find
My words show simplicity of youth and immaturity of composition
April 17th, 2019 11:05
Turn Toward the Window
dusk arising said:
A good \'loves epitaph\' written with the feeling of the moment which really comes through. Definitely an \'I\'ve had enough of you\' air about this.
Did it bring the moment back vividly. I expect so. (Mine do for me).
April 17th, 2019 06:38
dusk arising said:
A good \'loves epitaph\' written with the feeling of the moment which really comes through. Definitely an \'I\'ve had enough of you\' air about this.
Did it bring the moment back vividly. I expect so. (Mine do for me).
April 17th, 2019 06:38
Another New Day
orchidee said:
Oohh 40 views of this poem you have had. Prob cos I kept commenting, about 36 of those times. I\'m a pest! lol.
Erm, another day is here now. That\'s \'Today\'s Useless (or Obvious) Information\' for ya. So don\'t say I don\'t ya anything (i.e.info).
April 17th, 2019 04:24
orchidee said:
Oohh 40 views of this poem you have had. Prob cos I kept commenting, about 36 of those times. I\'m a pest! lol.
Erm, another day is here now. That\'s \'Today\'s Useless (or Obvious) Information\' for ya. So don\'t say I don\'t ya anything (i.e.info).
April 17th, 2019 04:24
Turn Toward the Window
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of well-written insistence - - good that you found it to share here Nev.
April 17th, 2019 03:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of well-written insistence - - good that you found it to share here Nev.
April 17th, 2019 03:08
Turn Toward the Window
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I tried writing in my shed. The light bulb went out. Couldn\'t see a thing. So I wrote a poem: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'. lol.
April 17th, 2019 03:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I tried writing in my shed. The light bulb went out. Couldn\'t see a thing. So I wrote a poem: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'. lol.
April 17th, 2019 03:04
Another New Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment of each day is so very special, do not waste them.
April 17th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment of each day is so very special, do not waste them.
April 17th, 2019 00:24
Another New Day
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
April 16th, 2019 19:02
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
April 16th, 2019 19:02
Another New Day
kevin browne said:
And when those grey clouds clear they will reveal a landscape of though so intricate and beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Great work.
April 16th, 2019 13:54
kevin browne said:
And when those grey clouds clear they will reveal a landscape of though so intricate and beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Great work.
April 16th, 2019 13:54
Another New Day
Suresh said:
How beautifully described the dawning of the day,
To open ones eyes (curtains) and move one butts and get going on their merry way
April 16th, 2019 11:26
Suresh said:
How beautifully described the dawning of the day,
To open ones eyes (curtains) and move one butts and get going on their merry way
April 16th, 2019 11:26
Another New Day
dusk arising said:
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i say never take the lid off my coffin till after dusk....
Nice writing N.... so that\'s what it\'s like at dawn...
...but what strange habits some folk must have wiping things on the curtains to leave them damp overnight..... surely the central heating would dry them out.
April 16th, 2019 05:09
dusk arising said:
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i say never take the lid off my coffin till after dusk....
Nice writing N.... so that\'s what it\'s like at dawn...
...but what strange habits some folk must have wiping things on the curtains to leave them damp overnight..... surely the central heating would dry them out.
April 16th, 2019 05:09
Another New Day
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Pity I have to ruin every day by coming along and singing! Fido tries to bark loud enough to drown it out. He has ear-plugs too.
April 16th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Pity I have to ruin every day by coming along and singing! Fido tries to bark loud enough to drown it out. He has ear-plugs too.
April 16th, 2019 04:16
Another New Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new day is to see all the shades of colour waiting behind greyness - -huge thank yous for this most inspirational read my friend .
April 16th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new day is to see all the shades of colour waiting behind greyness - -huge thank yous for this most inspirational read my friend .
April 16th, 2019 03:44
Plum Pencil Skirt
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are never forgotten even if you cannot remember their names.
April 15th, 2019 15:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are never forgotten even if you cannot remember their names.
April 15th, 2019 15:06
Old Sunlight
Fay Slimm. said:
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old houses amid dust and decay - so glad I caught this one mon amii - just love the slow flow of your pen on the canvas as it draws scenes of still life for those who love past things. First class writing again.
April 15th, 2019 12:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old houses amid dust and decay - so glad I caught this one mon amii - just love the slow flow of your pen on the canvas as it draws scenes of still life for those who love past things. First class writing again.
April 15th, 2019 12:53
The Birth of Opals
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic adjectives and comparisons which hide well the sweat after making naked-hot love on Somerset grass - -- or am I wrong ???
April 15th, 2019 05:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic adjectives and comparisons which hide well the sweat after making naked-hot love on Somerset grass - -- or am I wrong ???
April 15th, 2019 05:57
Whale Whispering
Fay Slimm. said:
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of those whales - if wishes were watches I was there viewing leviathan coupling and sharing their dappled delight along with you Nev.
April 15th, 2019 05:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of those whales - if wishes were watches I was there viewing leviathan coupling and sharing their dappled delight along with you Nev.
April 15th, 2019 05:14
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