Comments received on poems by Neville
Arbeit Macht Frie
Michael Edwards said:
The fruits of my endeavours contain the seeds of my childrens aspirations - fine write Neville.
June 3rd, 2019 01:57
Michael Edwards said:
The fruits of my endeavours contain the seeds of my childrens aspirations - fine write Neville.
June 3rd, 2019 01:57
Salt Marsh Fields
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and beautiful memories, those times were so very special, thank you for taking me there with your words.
June 3rd, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and beautiful memories, those times were so very special, thank you for taking me there with your words.
June 3rd, 2019 00:44
Bethune Re-visited
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was the first time taken in covert positions and shamed would surely remember her fall to false innocence during the re-visit as this impressive piece so well relates ........ your talent for half-obscured meanings which need interpretation stands alone methinks. Top marks yet again mon ami.
June 2nd, 2019 13:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was the first time taken in covert positions and shamed would surely remember her fall to false innocence during the re-visit as this impressive piece so well relates ........ your talent for half-obscured meanings which need interpretation stands alone methinks. Top marks yet again mon ami.
June 2nd, 2019 13:05
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Suresh said:
She caught ya looking, and heard ya panting. Now she wants ya for herself, you dog, you.....
Enjoyed it
June 2nd, 2019 12:17
Suresh said:
She caught ya looking, and heard ya panting. Now she wants ya for herself, you dog, you.....
Enjoyed it
June 2nd, 2019 12:17
Salt Marsh Fields
orchidee said:
Thanks N. This sounds like some \'classical\' poet\'s words. Being a bit un-cultured (am I?) I\'m not \'into\' being an authority on many well-known poets!
June 2nd, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
Thanks N. This sounds like some \'classical\' poet\'s words. Being a bit un-cultured (am I?) I\'m not \'into\' being an authority on many well-known poets!
June 2nd, 2019 11:20
Salt Marsh Fields
orchidee said:
A fine write N - you in meadows and pastures green?!
June 2nd, 2019 07:56
orchidee said:
A fine write N - you in meadows and pastures green?!
June 2nd, 2019 07:56
Salt Marsh Fields
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried kissing and you verse it so well with the sounds, the smells and the wild flowers - - took me back to Billingham\'s Field near our local reservoire and being sixteen....... x
June 2nd, 2019 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried kissing and you verse it so well with the sounds, the smells and the wild flowers - - took me back to Billingham\'s Field near our local reservoire and being sixteen....... x
June 2nd, 2019 05:33
Salt Marsh Fields
dusk arising said:
Great visions come out of this. I think youve encapsulated the magic of a certain stage when we begin to sense something else about girlies. Spring in the air and sap rises.
June 2nd, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
Great visions come out of this. I think youve encapsulated the magic of a certain stage when we begin to sense something else about girlies. Spring in the air and sap rises.
June 2nd, 2019 05:06
A Moment
dusk arising said:
Dramatic Neville, very dramatic. Which is exactly what the subject deserves..
That is one very well crafted piece. It gets better on successive re-reads too!
June 2nd, 2019 01:08
dusk arising said:
Dramatic Neville, very dramatic. Which is exactly what the subject deserves..
That is one very well crafted piece. It gets better on successive re-reads too!
June 2nd, 2019 01:08
A Moment
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m up late and can\'t sleep, this one my friend was so perfectly deep.
Thank you
June 1st, 2019 19:32
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m up late and can\'t sleep, this one my friend was so perfectly deep.
Thank you
June 1st, 2019 19:32
The Drowning Game
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the title appealed and am pleased I caught your nymph who with poetic whispers wooed males to a watery grave........ you so easily take me along Nev with your gift for telling romantic tales. Luverly last read of my day .........x Fay
June 1st, 2019 16:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the title appealed and am pleased I caught your nymph who with poetic whispers wooed males to a watery grave........ you so easily take me along Nev with your gift for telling romantic tales. Luverly last read of my day .........x Fay
June 1st, 2019 16:22
A Moment
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write and it can happen to us all. Treasure each good moment though.
June 1st, 2019 12:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write and it can happen to us all. Treasure each good moment though.
June 1st, 2019 12:01
A Moment
Fay Slimm. said:
The time when truth hits is often just one moment and you describe the effect so well in this sad little verse - - another heart-tugger Nev. - - but I love your romantic laments.
June 1st, 2019 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
The time when truth hits is often just one moment and you describe the effect so well in this sad little verse - - another heart-tugger Nev. - - but I love your romantic laments.
June 1st, 2019 02:25
A Moment
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That my friend will hit and resonate with so many of us here.
Great piece
June 1st, 2019 02:14
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That my friend will hit and resonate with so many of us here.
Great piece
June 1st, 2019 02:14
Aithō
Suresh said:
A thought it was about a quite but active volcano, which gives the appearance of a crown on top of the snowy mountain. If so,
I really enjoyed the scenic journey
May 31st, 2019 10:42
Suresh said:
A thought it was about a quite but active volcano, which gives the appearance of a crown on top of the snowy mountain. If so,
I really enjoyed the scenic journey
May 31st, 2019 10:42
Aithō
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Mount Etna is a wondrous site
as are those blood orange groves!
A great nostalgic read!
It brought me back to Sicily...
for a moment!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 06:21
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Mount Etna is a wondrous site
as are those blood orange groves!
A great nostalgic read!
It brought me back to Sicily...
for a moment!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 06:21
Aithō
Fay Slimm. said:
Sunset (or rise) seen from a mountain comes to my mind after viewing these few haunting lines. A dream of a read................... Fay
May 31st, 2019 04:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Sunset (or rise) seen from a mountain comes to my mind after viewing these few haunting lines. A dream of a read................... Fay
May 31st, 2019 04:12
Aithō
orchidee said:
A fine write N. How do you do that \'o\' with dash on top? I must know these things! lol
May 31st, 2019 03:56
orchidee said:
A fine write N. How do you do that \'o\' with dash on top? I must know these things! lol
May 31st, 2019 03:56
The NHS Alarm Call
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
Thank you for this powerful and good write on the NHS. I worked for the NHS for a time in the area of mental health and there was a lot of good will there in this area but sadly a lack of funding as with the NHS at most times.
Sorry for the way your father was treated. Years of Tory government has not helped the NHS especially under the champion cost cutters Mr Cameron and Mr Osborne.
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 03:49
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
Thank you for this powerful and good write on the NHS. I worked for the NHS for a time in the area of mental health and there was a lot of good will there in this area but sadly a lack of funding as with the NHS at most times.
Sorry for the way your father was treated. Years of Tory government has not helped the NHS especially under the champion cost cutters Mr Cameron and Mr Osborne.
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 03:49
No Cage for Thee
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is there for you as it is for all of us.
Wonderful words Neville.
May 31st, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is there for you as it is for all of us.
Wonderful words Neville.
May 31st, 2019 01:31
Sans Sustenance
Fay Slimm. said:
When in need turn to imagery - - that describes me........... a telling one Nev................ x
May 30th, 2019 15:20
Fay Slimm. said:
When in need turn to imagery - - that describes me........... a telling one Nev................ x
May 30th, 2019 15:20
No Cage for Thee
Suresh said:
Love cannot be possessed, no matter how eloquently we may proclaim it, as done here
May 30th, 2019 11:57
Suresh said:
Love cannot be possessed, no matter how eloquently we may proclaim it, as done here
May 30th, 2019 11:57
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