Comments received on poems by Neville
Out of Sight
dusk arising said:
Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be other worldly.
Sadly your words carry the truth.
Oh the joys of springtime.
June 17th, 2019 05:50
dusk arising said:
Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be other worldly.
Sadly your words carry the truth.
Oh the joys of springtime.
June 17th, 2019 05:50
Out of Sight
orchidee said:
You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me too. Just don\'t think of my singing! lol.
June 17th, 2019 05:02
orchidee said:
You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me too. Just don\'t think of my singing! lol.
June 17th, 2019 05:02
Out of the Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
In life you need to let go of that which has hurt you as the good in life will always outweigh the bad.
June 17th, 2019 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
In life you need to let go of that which has hurt you as the good in life will always outweigh the bad.
June 17th, 2019 00:07
Out of the Blue
dusk arising said:
I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words today:-
“When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.”
― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet
June 16th, 2019 08:59
dusk arising said:
I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words today:-
“When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.”
― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet
June 16th, 2019 08:59
On Being Human
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem and incredibly vivid.
Being human is a complicated aspect of life itself.
Keep on writing
FineB
June 16th, 2019 03:02
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem and incredibly vivid.
Being human is a complicated aspect of life itself.
Keep on writing
FineB
June 16th, 2019 03:02
Old Poets
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words of poets live for ever in the minds of those who read them. Reading your words Neville consigns them to the glory of history, never to be forgotten.
June 16th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words of poets live for ever in the minds of those who read them. Reading your words Neville consigns them to the glory of history, never to be forgotten.
June 16th, 2019 00:28
Versal Law
Suresh said:
Eroticism requires no translation,
whether written, spoken or acted,
where two bodies are entangled,
silence is its own composition
June 15th, 2019 15:46
Suresh said:
Eroticism requires no translation,
whether written, spoken or acted,
where two bodies are entangled,
silence is its own composition
June 15th, 2019 15:46
Old Poets
Suresh said:
So now we shall read you in publications only - though we graduated in the same year, agewise, I have a long way to go before even be called a poet
June 15th, 2019 12:31
Suresh said:
So now we shall read you in publications only - though we graduated in the same year, agewise, I have a long way to go before even be called a poet
June 15th, 2019 12:31
Old Poets
dusk arising said:
Life - a history lesson.
Without a history, whats to write about.
Long may you make more history Neville.
June 15th, 2019 10:56
dusk arising said:
Life - a history lesson.
Without a history, whats to write about.
Long may you make more history Neville.
June 15th, 2019 10:56
Old Poets
kevin browne said:
I\'ll have to agree with Michael, your poetry is quite exciting. I pretend to be a poet, but up against the immortals I am just a whisperer with a pen.
June 15th, 2019 08:51
kevin browne said:
I\'ll have to agree with Michael, your poetry is quite exciting. I pretend to be a poet, but up against the immortals I am just a whisperer with a pen.
June 15th, 2019 08:51
Before I Go Blind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.
June 14th, 2019 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write, may they all come within you sight but be careful of seizing the sun it is a little warm.
June 14th, 2019 23:55
Before I Go Blind
kevin browne said:
Provoking indeed. With such deepness and with such few words has opened up a whole new lot of worlds to dwell upon for people who read this bewildering piece.
June 14th, 2019 18:36
kevin browne said:
Provoking indeed. With such deepness and with such few words has opened up a whole new lot of worlds to dwell upon for people who read this bewildering piece.
June 14th, 2019 18:36
Before I Go Blind
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I daren\'t look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
Great write intriguing yes
I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter
June 14th, 2019 12:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I daren\'t look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
Great write intriguing yes
I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter
June 14th, 2019 12:37
Before I Go Blind
dusk arising said:
But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.
June 14th, 2019 10:58
dusk arising said:
But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.
June 14th, 2019 10:58
Before I Go Blind
Suresh said:
I keep reading, but can\'t get into your mindset......
Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
but then 😟😟😟
June 14th, 2019 10:18
Suresh said:
I keep reading, but can\'t get into your mindset......
Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
but then 😟😟😟
June 14th, 2019 10:18
Before I Go Blind
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay
June 14th, 2019 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay
June 14th, 2019 04:52
Once an Item
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories both good and bad will be with you although they may be altered with time.
The line \"Today’s rust was yesterdays chrome\" was very telling.
June 14th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories both good and bad will be with you although they may be altered with time.
The line \"Today’s rust was yesterdays chrome\" was very telling.
June 14th, 2019 00:30
Once an Item
orchidee said:
I gotta remember stuff from about 1066 at least. I woz there!
June 13th, 2019 14:15
orchidee said:
I gotta remember stuff from about 1066 at least. I woz there!
June 13th, 2019 14:15
Once an Item
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks my friend - - lips on lips can fade into oblivion - - - yet sometimes the taste remains...............Fay
June 13th, 2019 08:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks my friend - - lips on lips can fade into oblivion - - - yet sometimes the taste remains...............Fay
June 13th, 2019 08:33
Once an Item
Fay Slimm. said:
Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder Nev. - - Once an item though now rusted memory resurrects many moments to chew over again. Love the pathos in those two last lines ........ Fay
June 13th, 2019 07:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder Nev. - - Once an item though now rusted memory resurrects many moments to chew over again. Love the pathos in those two last lines ........ Fay
June 13th, 2019 07:48
Once an Item
dusk arising said:
The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff you didn\'t do.
A full and active life is going to give the reward of memories. Time takes away the pain of the bad bits fortunately.
If you waded in (and i bet you did) then you\'ll have memories. If you sat on the sidelines well, thats hardly memorable - unless its 1966 world cup final.... \'they think it\'s all over?\' - NEVER
(see what Golfinch commented on my \'beautiful pastime\' piece... he got you and me mixed up)
Inspiring writing and message.
June 13th, 2019 06:41
dusk arising said:
The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff you didn\'t do.
A full and active life is going to give the reward of memories. Time takes away the pain of the bad bits fortunately.
If you waded in (and i bet you did) then you\'ll have memories. If you sat on the sidelines well, thats hardly memorable - unless its 1966 world cup final.... \'they think it\'s all over?\' - NEVER
(see what Golfinch commented on my \'beautiful pastime\' piece... he got you and me mixed up)
Inspiring writing and message.
June 13th, 2019 06:41
When I am Far
Suresh said:
You have mastered the art, as your words have so expressed, as she exclaimed your name
June 12th, 2019 11:04
Suresh said:
You have mastered the art, as your words have so expressed, as she exclaimed your name
June 12th, 2019 11:04
On Being Human
Suresh said:
I know I am all that you so poetically ascribed, now what....
June 12th, 2019 10:55
Suresh said:
I know I am all that you so poetically ascribed, now what....
June 12th, 2019 10:55
On Being Human
dusk arising said:
A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board.
We are very accepting of others individuality aren\'t we.
June 12th, 2019 02:33
dusk arising said:
A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board.
We are very accepting of others individuality aren\'t we.
June 12th, 2019 02:33
On Being Human
Fay Slimm. said:
Starkly true these informed words my friend - yet I see its message in its finalé - - that despite our predicament - \" misery is entirely
optional\" - - a wise and helpful conclusion to ponder Nev. and my thanks to you for sharing it.
June 12th, 2019 02:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Starkly true these informed words my friend - yet I see its message in its finalé - - that despite our predicament - \" misery is entirely
optional\" - - a wise and helpful conclusion to ponder Nev. and my thanks to you for sharing it.
June 12th, 2019 02:05
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