Comments received on poems by Neville
Chaos Theory
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away - a compelling outcry against human blindness to planet-abuse and thank you for wording the need so poetically Nev. - - - a meaningful write..................... Fay
July 1st, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away - a compelling outcry against human blindness to planet-abuse and thank you for wording the need so poetically Nev. - - - a meaningful write..................... Fay
July 1st, 2019 04:21
Captivating Games
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Neville, I have already been captured and been that wonderful way for 38 years.
July 1st, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Neville, I have already been captured and been that wonderful way for 38 years.
July 1st, 2019 00:52
Captivating Games
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
June 30th, 2019 20:31
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
June 30th, 2019 20:31
Captivating Games
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Captivating Games
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Captivating Games
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Captivating Games
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
Captivating Games
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
I Found Myself Thinking of You
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Poppy Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Poppy Seeds
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Poppy Seeds
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Poppy Seeds
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poppy Seeds
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Poppy Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
A Sound for Sore Eyes
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
A Sound for Sore Eyes
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Dance
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
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