Comments received on poems by Neville
Before I Go Blind
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I daren\'t look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
Great write intriguing yes
I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter
June 14th, 2019 12:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I daren\'t look too hard... there may be nothing to see...
Great write intriguing yes
I hope you get your moons most fairest daughter
June 14th, 2019 12:37
Before I Go Blind
dusk arising said:
But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.
June 14th, 2019 10:58
dusk arising said:
But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures of Uranus.
Best sampled before one is accompanied by an obligatory white stick.
June 14th, 2019 10:58
Before I Go Blind
Suresh said:
I keep reading, but can\'t get into your mindset......
Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
but then 😟😟😟
June 14th, 2019 10:18
Suresh said:
I keep reading, but can\'t get into your mindset......
Blindness for sure, if stare directly at the sun,
but then 😟😟😟
June 14th, 2019 10:18
Before I Go Blind
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay
June 14th, 2019 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before blindness sets in but those final two lines - well please educate me mon ami - - or am I so naive as to miss the obvious....... x Fay
June 14th, 2019 04:52
Once an Item
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories both good and bad will be with you although they may be altered with time.
The line \"Today’s rust was yesterdays chrome\" was very telling.
June 14th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories both good and bad will be with you although they may be altered with time.
The line \"Today’s rust was yesterdays chrome\" was very telling.
June 14th, 2019 00:30
Once an Item
orchidee said:
I gotta remember stuff from about 1066 at least. I woz there!
June 13th, 2019 14:15
orchidee said:
I gotta remember stuff from about 1066 at least. I woz there!
June 13th, 2019 14:15
Once an Item
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks my friend - - lips on lips can fade into oblivion - - - yet sometimes the taste remains...............Fay
June 13th, 2019 08:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks my friend - - lips on lips can fade into oblivion - - - yet sometimes the taste remains...............Fay
June 13th, 2019 08:33
Once an Item
Fay Slimm. said:
Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder Nev. - - Once an item though now rusted memory resurrects many moments to chew over again. Love the pathos in those two last lines ........ Fay
June 13th, 2019 07:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder Nev. - - Once an item though now rusted memory resurrects many moments to chew over again. Love the pathos in those two last lines ........ Fay
June 13th, 2019 07:48
Once an Item
dusk arising said:
The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff you didn\'t do.
A full and active life is going to give the reward of memories. Time takes away the pain of the bad bits fortunately.
If you waded in (and i bet you did) then you\'ll have memories. If you sat on the sidelines well, thats hardly memorable - unless its 1966 world cup final.... \'they think it\'s all over?\' - NEVER
(see what Golfinch commented on my \'beautiful pastime\' piece... he got you and me mixed up)
Inspiring writing and message.
June 13th, 2019 06:41
dusk arising said:
The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff you didn\'t do.
A full and active life is going to give the reward of memories. Time takes away the pain of the bad bits fortunately.
If you waded in (and i bet you did) then you\'ll have memories. If you sat on the sidelines well, thats hardly memorable - unless its 1966 world cup final.... \'they think it\'s all over?\' - NEVER
(see what Golfinch commented on my \'beautiful pastime\' piece... he got you and me mixed up)
Inspiring writing and message.
June 13th, 2019 06:41
When I am Far
Suresh said:
You have mastered the art, as your words have so expressed, as she exclaimed your name
June 12th, 2019 11:04
Suresh said:
You have mastered the art, as your words have so expressed, as she exclaimed your name
June 12th, 2019 11:04
On Being Human
Suresh said:
I know I am all that you so poetically ascribed, now what....
June 12th, 2019 10:55
Suresh said:
I know I am all that you so poetically ascribed, now what....
June 12th, 2019 10:55
On Being Human
dusk arising said:
A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board.
We are very accepting of others individuality aren\'t we.
June 12th, 2019 02:33
dusk arising said:
A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board.
We are very accepting of others individuality aren\'t we.
June 12th, 2019 02:33
On Being Human
Fay Slimm. said:
Starkly true these informed words my friend - yet I see its message in its finalé - - that despite our predicament - \" misery is entirely
optional\" - - a wise and helpful conclusion to ponder Nev. and my thanks to you for sharing it.
June 12th, 2019 02:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Starkly true these informed words my friend - yet I see its message in its finalé - - that despite our predicament - \" misery is entirely
optional\" - - a wise and helpful conclusion to ponder Nev. and my thanks to you for sharing it.
June 12th, 2019 02:05
On Being Human
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, plenty of food for thought. I read it all then went back to the start and already my mind is overloaded. Bit early so I\'ll come back for lunch ;)
Great stuff
Thank you
June 12th, 2019 01:54
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, plenty of food for thought. I read it all then went back to the start and already my mind is overloaded. Bit early so I\'ll come back for lunch ;)
Great stuff
Thank you
June 12th, 2019 01:54
On Being Human
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we are what we are. We are all individuals with our own faults foibles and funniness. Being unique is what gives us the joy in our lives.
June 12th, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we are what we are. We are all individuals with our own faults foibles and funniness. Being unique is what gives us the joy in our lives.
June 12th, 2019 01:44
On Being Human
orchidee said:
I\'m half human, half guinea pig, as in my pic! They are not giant hamsters. lol.
June 12th, 2019 01:42
orchidee said:
I\'m half human, half guinea pig, as in my pic! They are not giant hamsters. lol.
June 12th, 2019 01:42
Butterworth Crows
Goldfinch60 said:
What a dreadful thing to witness it must be so hard to come to terms with witnessing this.
June 12th, 2019 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
What a dreadful thing to witness it must be so hard to come to terms with witnessing this.
June 12th, 2019 00:46
The Long Drop
Suresh said:
I AM FEAR, THAT WAS TAUGHT TO KEEP YOU SAFE, AND NOW HAS BECOME AN INTREGAL PART OF YOUR LIFE.
Boy, you piled up our fears, one on top of another - thou poetically
June 11th, 2019 15:58
Suresh said:
I AM FEAR, THAT WAS TAUGHT TO KEEP YOU SAFE, AND NOW HAS BECOME AN INTREGAL PART OF YOUR LIFE.
Boy, you piled up our fears, one on top of another - thou poetically
June 11th, 2019 15:58
Street Art
Suresh said:
Your first and last line takes the reader in a certain direction, just to be confused by the rest. In certain cities, like Pasadena, Californis,mint,mistreat art has been elevated to an annual event - though temporary it leaves a lasting memory, just as your poem
June 11th, 2019 15:54
Suresh said:
Your first and last line takes the reader in a certain direction, just to be confused by the rest. In certain cities, like Pasadena, Californis,mint,mistreat art has been elevated to an annual event - though temporary it leaves a lasting memory, just as your poem
June 11th, 2019 15:54
Butterworth Crows
Suresh said:
Our pain is the same as that of other species on a loss of one of their own kind.
When the loss occurs frequently, the pain becomes short lived.
I used to loathe the scavengers till I realized what a critical part they play.
Your poem moves one from dispicable, to survival to tragedy in a seemless event - truly captivating
June 11th, 2019 15:46
Suresh said:
Our pain is the same as that of other species on a loss of one of their own kind.
When the loss occurs frequently, the pain becomes short lived.
I used to loathe the scavengers till I realized what a critical part they play.
Your poem moves one from dispicable, to survival to tragedy in a seemless event - truly captivating
June 11th, 2019 15:46
Butterworth Crows
Michael Edwards said:
I was truly drawn in and felt the impact - great work Neville
June 11th, 2019 14:25
Michael Edwards said:
I was truly drawn in and felt the impact - great work Neville
June 11th, 2019 14:25
Butterworth Crows
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! - To have seen this must have been a horror. What a great expressional mix of death and crows. Must all horrific events be attended by crows? Loved the way you kept to a surprise ending. it was a pleasant setting...until. Great bit of writing. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 10:26
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! - To have seen this must have been a horror. What a great expressional mix of death and crows. Must all horrific events be attended by crows? Loved the way you kept to a surprise ending. it was a pleasant setting...until. Great bit of writing. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 10:26
Butterworth Crows
dusk arising said:
Poor train driver. Traumatised for life. And SHE has fallen asleep in the arms of her next unsuspecting conquest.
It\'s a porter\'s life in many ways. Quietly sampling the baggage of life for small reward but rich in his ability to move between cases.
June 11th, 2019 03:34
dusk arising said:
Poor train driver. Traumatised for life. And SHE has fallen asleep in the arms of her next unsuspecting conquest.
It\'s a porter\'s life in many ways. Quietly sampling the baggage of life for small reward but rich in his ability to move between cases.
June 11th, 2019 03:34
Butterworth Crows
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for weaving surprise into stories is second to none my friend - a better description of birds and victims would be hard to find. Must save this haunt of a write.
June 11th, 2019 03:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for weaving surprise into stories is second to none my friend - a better description of birds and victims would be hard to find. Must save this haunt of a write.
June 11th, 2019 03:34
Catching Flies
Poetic Dan said:
This a hard read as my son thinks he has problems and is told by many that he goes and they are here to help him cope.
He comes to me and I\'ve never used these words, he may well struggle to use his analytical brain but he has never had a problem having a outstanding ability to use his body in activities with no hesitation.
Many I know say they could never skate or run and climb trees, but yet from the beginning he found it breeze.
To judge us all the same is insanity, as same thing over and over again expecting different results.
Much peace and respect
You are a legend in your own right
June 11th, 2019 02:54
Poetic Dan said:
This a hard read as my son thinks he has problems and is told by many that he goes and they are here to help him cope.
He comes to me and I\'ve never used these words, he may well struggle to use his analytical brain but he has never had a problem having a outstanding ability to use his body in activities with no hesitation.
Many I know say they could never skate or run and climb trees, but yet from the beginning he found it breeze.
To judge us all the same is insanity, as same thing over and over again expecting different results.
Much peace and respect
You are a legend in your own right
June 11th, 2019 02:54
Catching Flies
Goldfinch60 said:
A frightening read Neville, it is such a tremendous shame that people are so ill with those sort of problems.
This self harming problem is all over the place. I used to be the Chaplain at a Sea Cadet Station and a couple of the young girls used to self hate there, I could talk to them and listen to them but I am not sure it helped as they would not admit why they did it.
June 10th, 2019 14:50
Goldfinch60 said:
A frightening read Neville, it is such a tremendous shame that people are so ill with those sort of problems.
This self harming problem is all over the place. I used to be the Chaplain at a Sea Cadet Station and a couple of the young girls used to self hate there, I could talk to them and listen to them but I am not sure it helped as they would not admit why they did it.
June 10th, 2019 14:50
Catching Flies
MendedFences27 said:
A very poignant poem, describing some horrific scenes which, I assume, only get worse. It takes great courage to have to deal with this every day. Someday, as they make great strides in understanding the human brain, some of these conditions will be treatable in a more humane way. Thanks just for being there, and portraying it so well in your poem. -Phil A.
June 10th, 2019 14:06
MendedFences27 said:
A very poignant poem, describing some horrific scenes which, I assume, only get worse. It takes great courage to have to deal with this every day. Someday, as they make great strides in understanding the human brain, some of these conditions will be treatable in a more humane way. Thanks just for being there, and portraying it so well in your poem. -Phil A.
June 10th, 2019 14:06
Catching Flies
Suresh said:
Detached from our reality, their mind continuously fighting its own hellish battles -
Witnessing such pain, makes one question all
June 10th, 2019 11:59
Suresh said:
Detached from our reality, their mind continuously fighting its own hellish battles -
Witnessing such pain, makes one question all
June 10th, 2019 11:59
Catching Flies
kevin browne said:
For me this is quite a sentimental worded write. My Irish Grandfather was admitted into a psychiatric ward in Scotland before passing away 5 years later. He worked building electricity pylons and apparently had too many big metal bolts land on his his head during the 40 years at his job. I only ever met him twice when I was around 7 or 8 years old, yet even then I could see sadness in his forlorn face which I can still picture till this day. Good write and good for you to do such a daunting task of a job. I\'ll tip my hat to you and you poem.
June 10th, 2019 10:13
kevin browne said:
For me this is quite a sentimental worded write. My Irish Grandfather was admitted into a psychiatric ward in Scotland before passing away 5 years later. He worked building electricity pylons and apparently had too many big metal bolts land on his his head during the 40 years at his job. I only ever met him twice when I was around 7 or 8 years old, yet even then I could see sadness in his forlorn face which I can still picture till this day. Good write and good for you to do such a daunting task of a job. I\'ll tip my hat to you and you poem.
June 10th, 2019 10:13
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