Comments received on poems by Neville
The Birth of Opals
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic adjectives and comparisons which hide well the sweat after making naked-hot love on Somerset grass - -- or am I wrong ???
April 15th, 2019 05:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic adjectives and comparisons which hide well the sweat after making naked-hot love on Somerset grass - -- or am I wrong ???
April 15th, 2019 05:57
Whale Whispering
Fay Slimm. said:
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of those whales - if wishes were watches I was there viewing leviathan coupling and sharing their dappled delight along with you Nev.
April 15th, 2019 05:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of those whales - if wishes were watches I was there viewing leviathan coupling and sharing their dappled delight along with you Nev.
April 15th, 2019 05:14
Plum Pencil Skirt
dusk arising said:
Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable ladies.
April 15th, 2019 04:54
dusk arising said:
Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable ladies.
April 15th, 2019 04:54
Watching
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, I see why we fall for each others spells!
April 15th, 2019 04:45
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, I see why we fall for each others spells!
April 15th, 2019 04:45
Plum Pencil Skirt
Michael Edwards said:
A great observational write - it held me with every word.
April 15th, 2019 03:00
Michael Edwards said:
A great observational write - it held me with every word.
April 15th, 2019 03:00
Plum Pencil Skirt
Fay Slimm. said:
Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes take centre stage !!...... I like the comparisons made in this little sketch of what school reunions can resurrect - good read.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes take centre stage !!...... I like the comparisons made in this little sketch of what school reunions can resurrect - good read.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
Tis Only Angels Crying
dusk arising said:
Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let us wait till we can dance to the joyous trill of angels laughter.
There will be days like that.....
April 15th, 2019 00:18
dusk arising said:
Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let us wait till we can dance to the joyous trill of angels laughter.
There will be days like that.....
April 15th, 2019 00:18
Tis Only Angels Crying
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of Angels are so wonderful to dance in.
April 15th, 2019 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of Angels are so wonderful to dance in.
April 15th, 2019 00:00
Tis Only Angels Crying
Michael Edwards said:
Are you saying rain isn\'t angels tears - bang goes another childhood dream. lol
A beautiful shortie Neville.
April 14th, 2019 08:17
Michael Edwards said:
Are you saying rain isn\'t angels tears - bang goes another childhood dream. lol
A beautiful shortie Neville.
April 14th, 2019 08:17
Tis Only Angels Crying
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet
On this crisp
Sunday morning
Cheers captain!
April 14th, 2019 05:13
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet
On this crisp
Sunday morning
Cheers captain!
April 14th, 2019 05:13
Tis Only Angels Crying
orchidee said:
You got that brolly if ya are going out?!
April 14th, 2019 04:41
orchidee said:
You got that brolly if ya are going out?!
April 14th, 2019 04:41
Tis Only Angels Crying
Fay Slimm. said:
Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a meaningful and loved first read of my day dear friend. Saved of course.
April 14th, 2019 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a meaningful and loved first read of my day dear friend. Saved of course.
April 14th, 2019 04:22
Watching
Suresh said:
I\'ve always told a woman that she holds a power much stronger than an army of men. - foolish men, one whiff and we melt away like butter on a hot tin can
April 13th, 2019 19:26
Suresh said:
I\'ve always told a woman that she holds a power much stronger than an army of men. - foolish men, one whiff and we melt away like butter on a hot tin can
April 13th, 2019 19:26
Watching
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are just teasers, you would not be able to get near them.
April 13th, 2019 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are just teasers, you would not be able to get near them.
April 13th, 2019 15:12
Watching
Fay Slimm. said:
Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - - manipulation is the word she enjoys metninks.
April 13th, 2019 10:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - - manipulation is the word she enjoys metninks.
April 13th, 2019 10:48
Watching
Michael Edwards said:
Bit like mmmm - why does it never happen to me ?
Bit like the life class - expecting a curvacious young lady and the model turned out to be an old boy in his eighties.
April 13th, 2019 05:49
Michael Edwards said:
Bit like mmmm - why does it never happen to me ?
Bit like the life class - expecting a curvacious young lady and the model turned out to be an old boy in his eighties.
April 13th, 2019 05:49
Watching
orchidee said:
Should Fido bark?! He\'s a pest. That is his life, or a main part of it - barking at certain poems. And when did he learn to read?! And -- should I meet her?
April 13th, 2019 04:40
orchidee said:
Should Fido bark?! He\'s a pest. That is his life, or a main part of it - barking at certain poems. And when did he learn to read?! And -- should I meet her?
April 13th, 2019 04:40
La Petit Mort
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m just recovering from one - fine write N
April 12th, 2019 13:29
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m just recovering from one - fine write N
April 12th, 2019 13:29
La Petit Mort
SerenWise said:
Lovely erotic piece, I\'ve always loved the term \'la petit mort\'
April 12th, 2019 11:44
SerenWise said:
Lovely erotic piece, I\'ve always loved the term \'la petit mort\'
April 12th, 2019 11:44
La Petit Mort
dusk arising said:
What wakes me from le petit mort... are we talking the flare or the afterglow..... the blissful afterglow for me..... do not wake me, do not disturb...let no doorbell sound... no amazon delivery of crayons for the grandchilds birthday demand my arising...no. Leave me in bliss....
See what you do? ... you\'re dangerous you are...
April 12th, 2019 11:09
dusk arising said:
What wakes me from le petit mort... are we talking the flare or the afterglow..... the blissful afterglow for me..... do not wake me, do not disturb...let no doorbell sound... no amazon delivery of crayons for the grandchilds birthday demand my arising...no. Leave me in bliss....
See what you do? ... you\'re dangerous you are...
April 12th, 2019 11:09
La Petit Mort
orchidee said:
Oohh, should I try this?! Fido don\'t let me have any excitement, so if it\'s that category…..
April 12th, 2019 08:22
orchidee said:
Oohh, should I try this?! Fido don\'t let me have any excitement, so if it\'s that category…..
April 12th, 2019 08:22
La Petit Mort
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic exposure of la petit mort Nev. and in such delicate language - a most sensuous read of which I take note....... must read it again so most breathlessly saved................
April 12th, 2019 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic exposure of la petit mort Nev. and in such delicate language - a most sensuous read of which I take note....... must read it again so most breathlessly saved................
April 12th, 2019 05:18
La Petit Mort
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding! I\'ve read it a few times now and every time I feel a bit more grounded as I\'m losing the plot this morning!
Thank you in so many ways
April 12th, 2019 05:07
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding! I\'ve read it a few times now and every time I feel a bit more grounded as I\'m losing the plot this morning!
Thank you in so many ways
April 12th, 2019 05:07
Morning Coffee
dusk arising said:
Lucky sod! Most blokes have to suffer the earache of her indoors innit.
April 11th, 2019 16:12
dusk arising said:
Lucky sod! Most blokes have to suffer the earache of her indoors innit.
April 11th, 2019 16:12
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