Comments received on poems by Neville
Broken
orchidee said:
What time did the night arrive for this fine poem? I wish I would shut up sometimes! I never do. lol.
June 7th, 2019 08:03
orchidee said:
What time did the night arrive for this fine poem? I wish I would shut up sometimes! I never do. lol.
June 7th, 2019 08:03
Broken
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 7th, 2019 03:47
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 7th, 2019 03:47
Broken
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender remembrance of how to ease the bruises of life - your last stanza spells the way out most clearly Neville - - aching together and aloud often mends the broken and with that sort of healing I really agree. A poet\'s poem this.......... Fay
June 7th, 2019 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender remembrance of how to ease the bruises of life - your last stanza spells the way out most clearly Neville - - aching together and aloud often mends the broken and with that sort of healing I really agree. A poet\'s poem this.......... Fay
June 7th, 2019 03:39
Famous Last Words
Goldfinch60 said:
So you have read the Bede then Neville, I struggle with reading his Ancient English style.
June 7th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
So you have read the Bede then Neville, I struggle with reading his Ancient English style.
June 7th, 2019 01:11
Famous Last Words
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and some great comments - I shan\'t try to beat them.
June 6th, 2019 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and some great comments - I shan\'t try to beat them.
June 6th, 2019 14:30
Autumn
Suresh said:
Autumn is my favorite season. Maybe it has something to do with being aligned with my birth.
I have lied about my age, as youth has been stolen away from me.
It\'s so nice to reminisce
June 6th, 2019 13:35
Suresh said:
Autumn is my favorite season. Maybe it has something to do with being aligned with my birth.
I have lied about my age, as youth has been stolen away from me.
It\'s so nice to reminisce
June 6th, 2019 13:35
Famous Last Words
orchidee said:
Canst thou bear with a joke from me?!
My famous last words were: \'See ya arooouunndddddddd!\' But why? Cos I was falling off a cliff at the time. It was a tad painful when I landed.
June 6th, 2019 12:59
orchidee said:
Canst thou bear with a joke from me?!
My famous last words were: \'See ya arooouunndddddddd!\' But why? Cos I was falling off a cliff at the time. It was a tad painful when I landed.
June 6th, 2019 12:59
Famous Last Words
Suresh said:
No comment, I cannot compete with thee.
Enjoyable read thou.
June 6th, 2019 12:37
Suresh said:
No comment, I cannot compete with thee.
Enjoyable read thou.
June 6th, 2019 12:37
Famous Last Words
SerenWise said:
Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good historical write ;)
June 6th, 2019 11:53
SerenWise said:
Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good historical write ;)
June 6th, 2019 11:53
Famous Last Words
dusk arising said:
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17
dusk arising said:
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17
Famous Last Words
orchidee said:
Was ye with me, and others, in 1066? I mucked it all up ya know. They say that I said to Harold \'Look up Sir, at the vital moment - and he did!
My famous last words have not been said yet. They will be \'I\'m gonna stop singing!\' Meaning I\'m gonna sing until then. Oh no! lol.
June 6th, 2019 07:16
orchidee said:
Was ye with me, and others, in 1066? I mucked it all up ya know. They say that I said to Harold \'Look up Sir, at the vital moment - and he did!
My famous last words have not been said yet. They will be \'I\'m gonna stop singing!\' Meaning I\'m gonna sing until then. Oh no! lol.
June 6th, 2019 07:16
Famous Last Words
Fay Slimm. said:
By thunder I feeleth those shaftes and lances as ancient battle commences - - a great war lord was Vortiger -- bravo for using archaic words Nev - a linguistic delight for the likes of me to read.
I always did love to read and decipher historical language.
June 6th, 2019 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
By thunder I feeleth those shaftes and lances as ancient battle commences - - a great war lord was Vortiger -- bravo for using archaic words Nev - a linguistic delight for the likes of me to read.
I always did love to read and decipher historical language.
June 6th, 2019 04:40
Penang White Coffee
kevin browne said:
Reminds me of \'A Brimful Of Asha\' by an Indian music band called \'Cornershop\' and it actually means that \'a brimful of asha\' that you\'ve spilled some coffee on a spinning 45 vinyl deck. Nice work.
June 6th, 2019 01:56
kevin browne said:
Reminds me of \'A Brimful Of Asha\' by an Indian music band called \'Cornershop\' and it actually means that \'a brimful of asha\' that you\'ve spilled some coffee on a spinning 45 vinyl deck. Nice work.
June 6th, 2019 01:56
Penang White Coffee
Suresh said:
Never took that ride, but reminds me of many a train ride in India and the movie Bhowani Junction.
Rushing to get the snacks at the various stations, nervous not the miss the train, as it is taking too long, or calling the vendor for a cup of hot tea in the mutka (earthenware), adding its own flavor.
Very enjoyable poem
June 5th, 2019 11:32
Suresh said:
Never took that ride, but reminds me of many a train ride in India and the movie Bhowani Junction.
Rushing to get the snacks at the various stations, nervous not the miss the train, as it is taking too long, or calling the vendor for a cup of hot tea in the mutka (earthenware), adding its own flavor.
Very enjoyable poem
June 5th, 2019 11:32
Penang White Coffee
dusk arising said:
Some people will travel to who knows where just to sample that once mentioned rarity. Then home to shop doorway sleepers, carbon emissions, and global commercial warfare.
June 5th, 2019 08:08
dusk arising said:
Some people will travel to who knows where just to sample that once mentioned rarity. Then home to shop doorway sleepers, carbon emissions, and global commercial warfare.
June 5th, 2019 08:08
Penang White Coffee
Lorna said:
Wow.. and I love the idea of white coffee.........
June 5th, 2019 07:27
Lorna said:
Wow.. and I love the idea of white coffee.........
June 5th, 2019 07:27
Penang White Coffee
Michael Edwards said:
I quite fancy that journey - malaysia here I come. As for the poem it is simply superb - although only stanzas long it still manages to capture two different ideas in simple terms and leaves the reader both thinking about the journey itself and wondering about the story behind the visit - who why when.
June 5th, 2019 06:18
Michael Edwards said:
I quite fancy that journey - malaysia here I come. As for the poem it is simply superb - although only stanzas long it still manages to capture two different ideas in simple terms and leaves the reader both thinking about the journey itself and wondering about the story behind the visit - who why when.
June 5th, 2019 06:18
Penang White Coffee
Goldfinch60 said:
That romance however brief will always be with you.
June 5th, 2019 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That romance however brief will always be with you.
June 5th, 2019 03:15
Penang White Coffee
Fay Slimm. said:
What could be better than the lure of romance as reason for recording that visit ......sweet mystery always scents your love-poetry Neville. - - - such an engaging read again..............
June 5th, 2019 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
What could be better than the lure of romance as reason for recording that visit ......sweet mystery always scents your love-poetry Neville. - - - such an engaging read again..............
June 5th, 2019 02:15
Wanting to be Wanted
Suresh said:
Me thinks, she thinks, she\'s grossly misunderstood - but isn\'t that what they all feel, for they never see in themselves being massively self centered - that is so poetically exclaimed here.
June 4th, 2019 15:42
Suresh said:
Me thinks, she thinks, she\'s grossly misunderstood - but isn\'t that what they all feel, for they never see in themselves being massively self centered - that is so poetically exclaimed here.
June 4th, 2019 15:42
Everywhere I Look
Goldfinch60 said:
It is dreadful that there are people out there that do this, they just do not care of the hurt and frustration they cause. The person is a bully in some respects and as you are aware all bullies are cowards!
June 4th, 2019 15:16
Goldfinch60 said:
It is dreadful that there are people out there that do this, they just do not care of the hurt and frustration they cause. The person is a bully in some respects and as you are aware all bullies are cowards!
June 4th, 2019 15:16
Everywhere I Look
Michael Edwards said:
If I knew his name I\'d get him for you.
June 4th, 2019 13:27
Michael Edwards said:
If I knew his name I\'d get him for you.
June 4th, 2019 13:27
Everywhere I Look
Suresh said:
There are always those that take a short cut, and regrettably in the age of new mediums, their number is increasing geometrically - in all walks of life. Even more train is that they are gaining momentum because of the internet.
June 4th, 2019 13:22
Suresh said:
There are always those that take a short cut, and regrettably in the age of new mediums, their number is increasing geometrically - in all walks of life. Even more train is that they are gaining momentum because of the internet.
June 4th, 2019 13:22
Everywhere I Look
orchidee said:
Well, I only sing (99% of the time), so it can\'t be me! (heehee). It\'s a pain though. Is it a case of \'You know who you are, you....\'. (all what I wrote yesterday. oohh!).
June 4th, 2019 07:52
orchidee said:
Well, I only sing (99% of the time), so it can\'t be me! (heehee). It\'s a pain though. Is it a case of \'You know who you are, you....\'. (all what I wrote yesterday. oohh!).
June 4th, 2019 07:52
Everywhere I Look
dusk arising said:
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and naive.
Wherever one goes as an individual on the web there seems to be a prat lurking with a chip on their shoulder waiting to amuse themselves by being negative about ones input. Sometimes they may have an appreciative audience of one or two like-minded similarly \'chipped\' sad individuals but gladly 99% of people see them for the inadequate souls they truly are.
June 4th, 2019 07:51
dusk arising said:
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and naive.
Wherever one goes as an individual on the web there seems to be a prat lurking with a chip on their shoulder waiting to amuse themselves by being negative about ones input. Sometimes they may have an appreciative audience of one or two like-minded similarly \'chipped\' sad individuals but gladly 99% of people see them for the inadequate souls they truly are.
June 4th, 2019 07:51
Arbeit Macht Frie
Lorna said:
For \"Nazis\" substitute \"Corporations\" and you have it in a nutshell.
June 4th, 2019 06:46
Lorna said:
For \"Nazis\" substitute \"Corporations\" and you have it in a nutshell.
June 4th, 2019 06:46
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