Comments received on poems by Neville
Singular I’s
Christina8 said:
A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.
August 14th, 2019 09:57
Christina8 said:
A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.
August 14th, 2019 09:57
Singular I’s
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A wonderful, imaginative write.
Keep writing FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:15
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A wonderful, imaginative write.
Keep writing FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:15
Singular I’s
sylviasearcher said:
You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.
The lonely page
My favourite line 😊
August 14th, 2019 04:10
sylviasearcher said:
You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.
The lonely page
My favourite line 😊
August 14th, 2019 04:10
Singular I’s
orchidee said:
Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).
August 14th, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).
August 14th, 2019 02:58
Singular I’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love gets forgotten and lonely wings in.......... a telling write Nev and penned with your usual short-line style it has such a poignant feel....................... Fay
August 14th, 2019 02:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love gets forgotten and lonely wings in.......... a telling write Nev and penned with your usual short-line style it has such a poignant feel....................... Fay
August 14th, 2019 02:49
The Long Drop
Fay Slimm. said:
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a love-song and appeal to that special one whom you need to understand how close you really are........... I love this one Nev....... x
August 12th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a love-song and appeal to that special one whom you need to understand how close you really are........... I love this one Nev....... x
August 12th, 2019 03:48
Kunoichi no Geisha
PoeticBiscuit said:
Without danger would being safe feel as comforting? Just a thought. This was well written Neville!
August 11th, 2019 21:54
PoeticBiscuit said:
Without danger would being safe feel as comforting? Just a thought. This was well written Neville!
August 11th, 2019 21:54
Kunoichi no Geisha
Neville said:
You are write of course, and thank you for popping in today my friend... I am struggling making contact as am travelling and my phone is playing up....
August 11th, 2019 11:49
Neville said:
You are write of course, and thank you for popping in today my friend... I am struggling making contact as am travelling and my phone is playing up....
August 11th, 2019 11:49
Kunoichi no Geisha
Suresh said:
Everything beautiful is dangerous, but what is life without a little danger, and mystery as so well penned by you
August 11th, 2019 11:41
Suresh said:
Everything beautiful is dangerous, but what is life without a little danger, and mystery as so well penned by you
August 11th, 2019 11:41
Flawed
Suresh said:
OHHHHHH!!!! The torment of a mans mind in love or is it lust that questions his insecurities,
Your poetry so well deserves all the comments above
August 11th, 2019 11:36
Suresh said:
OHHHHHH!!!! The torment of a mans mind in love or is it lust that questions his insecurities,
Your poetry so well deserves all the comments above
August 11th, 2019 11:36
Kunoichi no Geisha
Neville said:
Thank you so very much Christina, your impression and comment are both much appreciated... Neville
August 11th, 2019 11:31
Neville said:
Thank you so very much Christina, your impression and comment are both much appreciated... Neville
August 11th, 2019 11:31
Kunoichi no Geisha
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and beautiful write Neville! \"Tho softly and broken like a bruised....\"....An amazing metaphor!
August 11th, 2019 11:21
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and beautiful write Neville! \"Tho softly and broken like a bruised....\"....An amazing metaphor!
August 11th, 2019 11:21
Kunoichi no Geisha
Michael Edwards said:
Another top notch write - your pen is magical.
August 11th, 2019 09:00
Michael Edwards said:
Another top notch write - your pen is magical.
August 11th, 2019 09:00
Kunoichi no Geisha
dusk arising said:
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding from the highest bidder. The bidding is not always monetary. These underworld is a cruel and powerful entity.
Another of your haunting mystery pieces penned to thrill today.
August 11th, 2019 05:14
dusk arising said:
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding from the highest bidder. The bidding is not always monetary. These underworld is a cruel and powerful entity.
Another of your haunting mystery pieces penned to thrill today.
August 11th, 2019 05:14
Kunoichi no Geisha
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for taking readers into poignant situations is first rate my friend - I could feel your lonely darkness revealing a remembered loving togetherness with an extraordinary geisha who is now no more............. an emotive read.
August 11th, 2019 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for taking readers into poignant situations is first rate my friend - I could feel your lonely darkness revealing a remembered loving togetherness with an extraordinary geisha who is now no more............. an emotive read.
August 11th, 2019 03:09
Kunoichi no Geisha
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is a wonderful thing but we need to be so careful who we do trust - and love.
I too like sushi.
August 11th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is a wonderful thing but we need to be so careful who we do trust - and love.
I too like sushi.
August 11th, 2019 01:20
Flawed
PoeticBiscuit said:
Giving just enough information to paint a vivid picture yet remain mysterious to leave me wondering. Well done.
August 10th, 2019 21:26
PoeticBiscuit said:
Giving just enough information to paint a vivid picture yet remain mysterious to leave me wondering. Well done.
August 10th, 2019 21:26
Flawed
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing writethat pulled me right into it and made me wonder.
August 10th, 2019 15:29
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing writethat pulled me right into it and made me wonder.
August 10th, 2019 15:29
Flawed
kevin browne said:
The loving charms of the wizadry a women holds close to her majestic heart which lingers deep in a mans heart, also. It\'s enchanting motion of a desperation playing a hand dealt unturned as yet, She sounds like a tiger with claws attached. Brilliantly expressed with a deep feeling of saddened love and connections intertwined within both your loves....
August 10th, 2019 11:31
kevin browne said:
The loving charms of the wizadry a women holds close to her majestic heart which lingers deep in a mans heart, also. It\'s enchanting motion of a desperation playing a hand dealt unturned as yet, She sounds like a tiger with claws attached. Brilliantly expressed with a deep feeling of saddened love and connections intertwined within both your loves....
August 10th, 2019 11:31
Flawed
Christina8 said:
Very well written....so many questions to a female that really gets our attention......i also wonder about that scar but excellent last line.......christina
August 10th, 2019 09:53
Christina8 said:
Very well written....so many questions to a female that really gets our attention......i also wonder about that scar but excellent last line.......christina
August 10th, 2019 09:53
Flawed
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An excellent write.
Vivid and brilliant!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:19
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An excellent write.
Vivid and brilliant!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:19
Flawed
orchidee said:
Oh no, I took a blue pill (eh, you know them?) by mistake. Swoon!
August 10th, 2019 07:55
orchidee said:
Oh no, I took a blue pill (eh, you know them?) by mistake. Swoon!
August 10th, 2019 07:55
Flawed
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there? or a couple? The only buttercup Fido lets me have is the story of Buttercup The Cow, aimed at 3 year olds! heehee.
Oohh I could never have piercings *shudders*.
August 10th, 2019 07:51
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there? or a couple? The only buttercup Fido lets me have is the story of Buttercup The Cow, aimed at 3 year olds! heehee.
Oohh I could never have piercings *shudders*.
August 10th, 2019 07:51
Flawed
Michael Edwards said:
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that scar is all about - I\'m intrigued.
August 10th, 2019 05:04
Michael Edwards said:
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that scar is all about - I\'m intrigued.
August 10th, 2019 05:04
Flawed
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose too has thorns on their stem
I wrote hat once and lost it... This is a much better interpretation very well done Neville
August 10th, 2019 04:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose too has thorns on their stem
I wrote hat once and lost it... This is a much better interpretation very well done Neville
August 10th, 2019 04:38
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