Comments received on poems by Neville
Empty Sky
orchidee said:
A light bulb will light up in ya head soon again, saying \'IDEA!\'. Just as long as we don\'t blow a fuse, and the bulb goes \'Kaput!\'
April 28th, 2019 04:04
orchidee said:
A light bulb will light up in ya head soon again, saying \'IDEA!\'. Just as long as we don\'t blow a fuse, and the bulb goes \'Kaput!\'
April 28th, 2019 04:04
Empty Sky
Fay Slimm. said:
A languid lament that follows from time to time productive writers but described here in such admirable imagery that you are far from drained and dry my friend....Muse strikes when least expected they say Nev. and waits while we rest..... a very relatable read.
April 28th, 2019 03:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A languid lament that follows from time to time productive writers but described here in such admirable imagery that you are far from drained and dry my friend....Muse strikes when least expected they say Nev. and waits while we rest..... a very relatable read.
April 28th, 2019 03:57
Orchid
Goldfinch60 said:
No need for a storm, we have many orchids and they fade after a time but we are secure in the knowledge that they will return.
April 28th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
No need for a storm, we have many orchids and they fade after a time but we are secure in the knowledge that they will return.
April 28th, 2019 00:38
Blank Pages
Suresh said:
That which flows
Effortlessly flows
Let it flow
That I find is the sincerest form of writing
April 27th, 2019 21:17
Suresh said:
That which flows
Effortlessly flows
Let it flow
That I find is the sincerest form of writing
April 27th, 2019 21:17
Beautiful Bruises
Suresh said:
Some like it wild, but I\'m in tune with you.
Nothing beats the estacy of a gentle caress.
Very pleasing to the sense of imagination
April 27th, 2019 21:14
Suresh said:
Some like it wild, but I\'m in tune with you.
Nothing beats the estacy of a gentle caress.
Very pleasing to the sense of imagination
April 27th, 2019 21:14
A Travelling Man
Suresh said:
If we can spill our inner self for all to see, we may find a true soul mate we never knew.
What a wonderful world that would be.
Your words are spilled emotions
April 27th, 2019 21:08
Suresh said:
If we can spill our inner self for all to see, we may find a true soul mate we never knew.
What a wonderful world that would be.
Your words are spilled emotions
April 27th, 2019 21:08
A Taste of Nothing
Suresh said:
A silent lover/admirer, whose not even on the radar, feels the pain of their subject, and feels helpless to do anything
April 27th, 2019 20:39
Suresh said:
A silent lover/admirer, whose not even on the radar, feels the pain of their subject, and feels helpless to do anything
April 27th, 2019 20:39
The Pyramid of Longing
Suresh said:
This was not a scribble, and it may have been a long time ago, but the memory of it is as fresh in your mind, as if it happened only an instant ago.
You have and will continue to CHEERISH them forever...
April 27th, 2019 17:18
Suresh said:
This was not a scribble, and it may have been a long time ago, but the memory of it is as fresh in your mind, as if it happened only an instant ago.
You have and will continue to CHEERISH them forever...
April 27th, 2019 17:18
Orchid
orchidee said:
What you doing, writing about me?! heehee. Me singing is not beautiful, so it\'s a true write, to be sure!
I was an orchid in a storm today too. Not much rain, so it seemed like a sand storm, blowing dust, blossom, etc. Could hardly see a thing! Horrid.
April 27th, 2019 09:59
orchidee said:
What you doing, writing about me?! heehee. Me singing is not beautiful, so it\'s a true write, to be sure!
I was an orchid in a storm today too. Not much rain, so it seemed like a sand storm, blowing dust, blossom, etc. Could hardly see a thing! Horrid.
April 27th, 2019 09:59
A Travelling Man
Fay Slimm. said:
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a decent loaf or two -- looking for miracles though and hoping they yet happen - or am I a lost cause.... glad to read your very first offering on this friendly site my romantic friend.
April 27th, 2019 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a decent loaf or two -- looking for miracles though and hoping they yet happen - or am I a lost cause.... glad to read your very first offering on this friendly site my romantic friend.
April 27th, 2019 05:51
Orchid
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEV and a reminder that BEAUTY is transient. Im only 31 so I maintain much of my Inner & Outer BEAUTY. But BRIAN & I have found TRUE LOVE and the Beauty of True Love never diminishes : AMEN
Yours ANGELA 🧡
April 27th, 2019 04:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEV and a reminder that BEAUTY is transient. Im only 31 so I maintain much of my Inner & Outer BEAUTY. But BRIAN & I have found TRUE LOVE and the Beauty of True Love never diminishes : AMEN
Yours ANGELA 🧡
April 27th, 2019 04:41
Orchid
Fay Slimm. said:
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn orchid will stand taller when love calls again - - - interesting read Nev.
April 27th, 2019 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn orchid will stand taller when love calls again - - - interesting read Nev.
April 27th, 2019 03:35
Orchid
dusk arising said:
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of argument taints the appeal.
April 27th, 2019 03:24
dusk arising said:
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of argument taints the appeal.
April 27th, 2019 03:24
In a Moment Gone
Suresh said:
MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens
Thnx Nev
P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'
April 26th, 2019 10:33
Suresh said:
MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens
Thnx Nev
P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'
April 26th, 2019 10:33
In a Moment Gone
dusk arising said:
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).
April 26th, 2019 10:27
dusk arising said:
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).
April 26th, 2019 10:27
In a Moment Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.
April 26th, 2019 10:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.
April 26th, 2019 10:23
Ten Dead Chickens
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
The Pyramid of Longing
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Ten Dead Chickens
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Ten Dead Chickens
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
Head Rest
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
Ten Dead Chickens
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
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