Comments received on poems by Neville
Catching Flies
Michael Edwards said:
This really disturbs - a haunting read superbly told.
June 10th, 2019 09:13
Michael Edwards said:
This really disturbs - a haunting read superbly told.
June 10th, 2019 09:13
Catching Flies
dusk arising said:
AS my daughter went through her infant special schools we met a lot of disturbed kiddies. Very sadly most of them seemed unhappy little souls who cried often and were very noisey. This in stark contrast to my little darling who was quiet and giggly and seemed to keep herself amused (as she does to this day).
Your piece today finds me reflecting upon the lives of those disturbed kiddies now grown-ups if they survive at all.
Thankfully i have a faith which is a strength through which to contemplate such things.
June 10th, 2019 04:29
dusk arising said:
AS my daughter went through her infant special schools we met a lot of disturbed kiddies. Very sadly most of them seemed unhappy little souls who cried often and were very noisey. This in stark contrast to my little darling who was quiet and giggly and seemed to keep herself amused (as she does to this day).
Your piece today finds me reflecting upon the lives of those disturbed kiddies now grown-ups if they survive at all.
Thankfully i have a faith which is a strength through which to contemplate such things.
June 10th, 2019 04:29
Catching Flies
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read this report of what carers like yourself have to see and attend to dear Neville - - described as only experience can these lines aptly spread warnings of drug abuse - hoping Tomorrow got helped in the end.
June 10th, 2019 04:07
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read this report of what carers like yourself have to see and attend to dear Neville - - described as only experience can these lines aptly spread warnings of drug abuse - hoping Tomorrow got helped in the end.
June 10th, 2019 04:07
Catching Flies
orchidee said:
Not a swoon, but a shudder. Troubled minds and hearts of humanity. You\'ve experienced..... that\'s life. Not the programme That\'s Life, but that was as ghastly! (ooh)
June 10th, 2019 04:06
orchidee said:
Not a swoon, but a shudder. Troubled minds and hearts of humanity. You\'ve experienced..... that\'s life. Not the programme That\'s Life, but that was as ghastly! (ooh)
June 10th, 2019 04:06
Puppy Love
Goldfinch60 said:
That old girl new where to come without being rejected.
June 9th, 2019 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That old girl new where to come without being rejected.
June 9th, 2019 23:56
Borrowed Characters
Suresh said:
It reminds me of a saying in the epic poem GITA,
\"inaction is action as well\"
in reference to your last stanza.
I really, really enjoyed this poem
June 9th, 2019 13:25
Suresh said:
It reminds me of a saying in the epic poem GITA,
\"inaction is action as well\"
in reference to your last stanza.
I really, really enjoyed this poem
June 9th, 2019 13:25
Before Leaving
Suresh said:
At least she left you with those loving memories, that helped you compose this delightful piece
June 9th, 2019 13:18
Suresh said:
At least she left you with those loving memories, that helped you compose this delightful piece
June 9th, 2019 13:18
Puppy Love
Suresh said:
AHHHH!!!! Pets
Children grow up and most move out, hopefully at the right time - but
we are slaves to pets till they live.
Sorry folks, I just don\'t want the responsibility, even though The cost may be love
June 9th, 2019 12:14
Suresh said:
AHHHH!!!! Pets
Children grow up and most move out, hopefully at the right time - but
we are slaves to pets till they live.
Sorry folks, I just don\'t want the responsibility, even though The cost may be love
June 9th, 2019 12:14
Puppy Love
dusk arising said:
The salty truth of a dog\'s affection revealed at last!
June 9th, 2019 11:56
dusk arising said:
The salty truth of a dog\'s affection revealed at last!
June 9th, 2019 11:56
Puppy Love
orchidee said:
This might be swoony. I best not enquire more of it! lol.
June 9th, 2019 08:38
orchidee said:
This might be swoony. I best not enquire more of it! lol.
June 9th, 2019 08:38
Puppy Love
Michael Edwards said:
But they only lick you if they like you salt or no salt. Great three liner.
June 9th, 2019 08:25
Michael Edwards said:
But they only lick you if they like you salt or no salt. Great three liner.
June 9th, 2019 08:25
Puppy Love
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - \'tis but cupboard love Neville doncha agree -a common mistake and we all make it is thinking that pets adore us as a person when salt-licks take first place in their estimation - -but we animal lovers will take second best - ....... would not be without em would we my friend - - - I loved this little wistful three-liner write today.
June 9th, 2019 07:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - \'tis but cupboard love Neville doncha agree -a common mistake and we all make it is thinking that pets adore us as a person when salt-licks take first place in their estimation - -but we animal lovers will take second best - ....... would not be without em would we my friend - - - I loved this little wistful three-liner write today.
June 9th, 2019 07:21
Puppy Love
Poetic Dan said:
Trust, respect and loyalty! We call it love, they call it living!
Inspirational post ;)
June 9th, 2019 04:02
Poetic Dan said:
Trust, respect and loyalty! We call it love, they call it living!
Inspirational post ;)
June 9th, 2019 04:02
Students
Suresh said:
My, my!!
None want to stay silent,
The majic of your prose draws even a devil like me - no mirrors please
June 8th, 2019 12:34
Suresh said:
My, my!!
None want to stay silent,
The majic of your prose draws even a devil like me - no mirrors please
June 8th, 2019 12:34
My Fathers Jacket
Suresh said:
Those grainy photos make it seem like eternity ago, yet memories are as fresh today....
June 8th, 2019 11:58
Suresh said:
Those grainy photos make it seem like eternity ago, yet memories are as fresh today....
June 8th, 2019 11:58
Wanting to be Wanted
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman high on words is often strangled with their hold - your first lines give the telling Nev on what that lady needs to address.......... \"She wants to be wanted
But she needs to be adored\"... best to steer clear methinks of such gross disorder.... but then you know that I am sure my friend - your expressions flow easy in this bold lament of a broken female -just catching up on what I first missed
- - your gift of building intrigue is amazing mon ami.............. x Fay
June 8th, 2019 11:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman high on words is often strangled with their hold - your first lines give the telling Nev on what that lady needs to address.......... \"She wants to be wanted
But she needs to be adored\"... best to steer clear methinks of such gross disorder.... but then you know that I am sure my friend - your expressions flow easy in this bold lament of a broken female -just catching up on what I first missed
- - your gift of building intrigue is amazing mon ami.............. x Fay
June 8th, 2019 11:17
My Fathers Jacket
dusk arising said:
Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which will never leave you. What a fine and honourable way to tell us of this man so dear to you.
Yes it does move me to tears, for we are both fathers and sons.
June 8th, 2019 10:10
dusk arising said:
Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which will never leave you. What a fine and honourable way to tell us of this man so dear to you.
Yes it does move me to tears, for we are both fathers and sons.
June 8th, 2019 10:10
My Fathers Jacket
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well that\'s a fav if ever I\'ve had one my dad was here with me all over again
Thank you Neville a wonderful pre father\'s day gift
June 8th, 2019 09:05
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well that\'s a fav if ever I\'ve had one my dad was here with me all over again
Thank you Neville a wonderful pre father\'s day gift
June 8th, 2019 09:05
Broken
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 8th, 2019 08:41
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 8th, 2019 08:41
My Fathers Jacket
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute that only experience could write Nev......described with words from warm memory\'s heart is your special relationship with a much l missed father whose treasured jacket long held his loved essence....... an ache of a read on this his special day and my thoughts are with your tears of remembrance.
June 8th, 2019 01:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute that only experience could write Nev......described with words from warm memory\'s heart is your special relationship with a much l missed father whose treasured jacket long held his loved essence....... an ache of a read on this his special day and my thoughts are with your tears of remembrance.
June 8th, 2019 01:42
Famous Last Words
Poetic Dan said:
My brain could not cope with the words you wrote but the rest enjoyed it so I enjoyed trying ;)
June 8th, 2019 01:11
Poetic Dan said:
My brain could not cope with the words you wrote but the rest enjoyed it so I enjoyed trying ;)
June 8th, 2019 01:11
My Fathers Jacket
Poetic Dan said:
I see a man that stands with much pride, although I did not know him I can feel him through your writings.
I hope one day my children look back the same and I hope they keep my flame alive as you have kept his.
Thank you for sharing my friend
June 8th, 2019 00:59
Poetic Dan said:
I see a man that stands with much pride, although I did not know him I can feel him through your writings.
I hope one day my children look back the same and I hope they keep my flame alive as you have kept his.
Thank you for sharing my friend
June 8th, 2019 00:59
My Fathers Jacket
Goldfinch60 said:
And I. My father was so special too me. He gave me the gift of patience and the gift of appreciating all music. I am reminded of him every day in the music I listen to.
June 8th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
And I. My father was so special too me. He gave me the gift of patience and the gift of appreciating all music. I am reminded of him every day in the music I listen to.
June 8th, 2019 00:54
Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is so special, when you awake from the darkness all will be well.
June 8th, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is so special, when you awake from the darkness all will be well.
June 8th, 2019 00:51
My Fathers Jacket
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m not ashamed to say my eyes became quite moist reading this gem - for I too had a father who meant so much to me and it really struck a chord.
June 8th, 2019 00:47
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m not ashamed to say my eyes became quite moist reading this gem - for I too had a father who meant so much to me and it really struck a chord.
June 8th, 2019 00:47
Broken
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem.
Alas pain- the pain of life!
Keep writing Fine B
June 7th, 2019 12:48
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem.
Alas pain- the pain of life!
Keep writing Fine B
June 7th, 2019 12:48
Virus
Suresh said:
For every offense we mount, their defensive measures grow strong. In reality, the tiniest, the unseen, the unknown are the fiercest, as you have so poetically sung
June 7th, 2019 12:29
Suresh said:
For every offense we mount, their defensive measures grow strong. In reality, the tiniest, the unseen, the unknown are the fiercest, as you have so poetically sung
June 7th, 2019 12:29
Broken
Suresh said:
Taking from Michaels words:
Until the dawn to wake, and not have the memory of having dreamt at all.
June 7th, 2019 11:40
Suresh said:
Taking from Michaels words:
Until the dawn to wake, and not have the memory of having dreamt at all.
June 7th, 2019 11:40
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