Comments received on poems by Neville
And They Called Her Iris
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty matches the words in your poem Neville.
July 28th, 2019 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty matches the words in your poem Neville.
July 28th, 2019 15:19
And They Called Her Iris
Suresh said:
If this is what you come up with when you give up, maybe you should give up more often and let the creative juices flow, and flow and flow some more
July 28th, 2019 12:06
Suresh said:
If this is what you come up with when you give up, maybe you should give up more often and let the creative juices flow, and flow and flow some more
July 28th, 2019 12:06
And They Called Her Iris
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem...I love the ending! I really wish I could come up with a more educated comment to do this justice but \"beautiful\" is all I have beyond whats been said...C
July 28th, 2019 10:07
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem...I love the ending! I really wish I could come up with a more educated comment to do this justice but \"beautiful\" is all I have beyond whats been said...C
July 28th, 2019 10:07
And They Called Her Iris
dusk arising said:
I\'ll stick with the rainbow mate. A different coloured lady for each day of the week and always vibrant. Besides i get to nuzzle the crock of gold down there at rainbows end..... Iris - shhmirishh my boy.... variety.
July 28th, 2019 08:52
dusk arising said:
I\'ll stick with the rainbow mate. A different coloured lady for each day of the week and always vibrant. Besides i get to nuzzle the crock of gold down there at rainbows end..... Iris - shhmirishh my boy.... variety.
July 28th, 2019 08:52
And They Called Her Iris
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I will leave my mark for all eternity - in singing - but that can\'t be helped! lol.
I\'ll pop in more than momentarily. I\'m a pest! lol.
July 28th, 2019 07:38
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I will leave my mark for all eternity - in singing - but that can\'t be helped! lol.
I\'ll pop in more than momentarily. I\'m a pest! lol.
July 28th, 2019 07:38
And They Called Her Iris
Poetic Dan said:
You just made me cry, rainbow sprinkles.
Thank you!
July 28th, 2019 06:22
Poetic Dan said:
You just made me cry, rainbow sprinkles.
Thank you!
July 28th, 2019 06:22
And They Called Her Iris
sylviasearcher said:
It reminded me of the u2 song iris.
Clever write.
July 28th, 2019 04:57
sylviasearcher said:
It reminded me of the u2 song iris.
Clever write.
July 28th, 2019 04:57
And They Called Her Iris
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - my favourite shade is violet
and thanks for the info. on such a lovely Greek Goddess. Well maybe her beauty was revealed but that Iris used her tints of change to her own advantage methinks --- A tale told expertly as an intriguing weekend read but I then expect no other than alluring mystery from thee mon ami............... Fay
July 28th, 2019 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - my favourite shade is violet
and thanks for the info. on such a lovely Greek Goddess. Well maybe her beauty was revealed but that Iris used her tints of change to her own advantage methinks --- A tale told expertly as an intriguing weekend read but I then expect no other than alluring mystery from thee mon ami............... Fay
July 28th, 2019 03:46
Bring it On
Christina8 said:
This is a very good write, Neville! Such truth to it. Enjoy every moment...
July 27th, 2019 10:37
Christina8 said:
This is a very good write, Neville! Such truth to it. Enjoy every moment...
July 27th, 2019 10:37
Bring it On
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
Thanks for this good write!
Que Sera Sera, whatever will be, will be.
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:04
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
Thanks for this good write!
Que Sera Sera, whatever will be, will be.
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:04
Bring it On
Suresh said:
Memories may fade but they don\'t disappear, and so from time to time they jar us back to that moment, moments that are best forgotten. But how does one forget such poetic words.
July 27th, 2019 09:51
Suresh said:
Memories may fade but they don\'t disappear, and so from time to time they jar us back to that moment, moments that are best forgotten. But how does one forget such poetic words.
July 27th, 2019 09:51
Bring it On
dusk arising said:
In these my later days i have learned to write down such moments. On re-reading years from now i hope to mentally time travel through the few cloudy memory cells i shall have left.
I hope your words prompt others.
July 27th, 2019 06:11
dusk arising said:
In these my later days i have learned to write down such moments. On re-reading years from now i hope to mentally time travel through the few cloudy memory cells i shall have left.
I hope your words prompt others.
July 27th, 2019 06:11
Bring it On
Poetic Dan said:
Loving the sign post my friend, bring it on indeed!
July 27th, 2019 03:53
Poetic Dan said:
Loving the sign post my friend, bring it on indeed!
July 27th, 2019 03:53
Bring it On
orchidee said:
A good write Neville.
Yes - the moment of truth... when ya realised my singing was an impostor! lol
July 27th, 2019 01:47
orchidee said:
A good write Neville.
Yes - the moment of truth... when ya realised my singing was an impostor! lol
July 27th, 2019 01:47
Bring it On
Fay Slimm. said:
Happenings welcomed are to be treasured as that moment does not come again - stowing away truths in the memory is a wise conception Nev and you write it so very well.
July 27th, 2019 01:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Happenings welcomed are to be treasured as that moment does not come again - stowing away truths in the memory is a wise conception Nev and you write it so very well.
July 27th, 2019 01:34
Bring it On
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment is special, enjoy them all as they will not come again.
Bring them on.
July 27th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment is special, enjoy them all as they will not come again.
Bring them on.
July 27th, 2019 00:44
Always & Forever
Goldfinch60 said:
So few words used but the complexity comes through showing how the complexity of love can enslave you. Brilliant.
July 27th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So few words used but the complexity comes through showing how the complexity of love can enslave you. Brilliant.
July 27th, 2019 00:30
Captivating Games
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem! I think most of us want these things.....a fun read!--C
July 26th, 2019 23:42
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem! I think most of us want these things.....a fun read!--C
July 26th, 2019 23:42
Always & Forever
Silkseduction said:
Neville,
You are magical with your pen- you have written an exceptional piece here. Wonderful job, my friend.
-L
July 26th, 2019 15:50
Silkseduction said:
Neville,
You are magical with your pen- you have written an exceptional piece here. Wonderful job, my friend.
-L
July 26th, 2019 15:50
Always & Forever
Suresh said:
We are all slaves of our desires and our circumstances.......
...... so whence is freedom
.....in dreams
Well penned my friend
July 26th, 2019 11:16
Suresh said:
We are all slaves of our desires and our circumstances.......
...... so whence is freedom
.....in dreams
Well penned my friend
July 26th, 2019 11:16
Always & Forever
Christina8 said:
This poem is very sweet. Instantly got me thinking of the slow song (the title did) but overall done very well!--C
July 26th, 2019 10:54
Christina8 said:
This poem is very sweet. Instantly got me thinking of the slow song (the title did) but overall done very well!--C
July 26th, 2019 10:54
Always & Forever
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Quite a read!
Interesting question...
“What more
might a slave possibly want
discounting freedom....”
I suppose it depends on the slave and the type of freedom the slave seeks!
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 10:09
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Quite a read!
Interesting question...
“What more
might a slave possibly want
discounting freedom....”
I suppose it depends on the slave and the type of freedom the slave seeks!
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 10:09
Always & Forever
dusk arising said:
Oh my, here writes a man who has surrendered his credit card to the lady of a dream he once had before bank managers chased him down the high street of his bankrupt finances and wizened now shares a warning to malekind.
Could have just written DON\'T DO IT!
Tongue firmly in cheek of course. Another of your two edged beauties today.
July 26th, 2019 09:54
dusk arising said:
Oh my, here writes a man who has surrendered his credit card to the lady of a dream he once had before bank managers chased him down the high street of his bankrupt finances and wizened now shares a warning to malekind.
Could have just written DON\'T DO IT!
Tongue firmly in cheek of course. Another of your two edged beauties today.
July 26th, 2019 09:54
Always & Forever
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I thought it was gonna be a tortuous poem on my singing, with that title! heehee.
July 26th, 2019 06:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I thought it was gonna be a tortuous poem on my singing, with that title! heehee.
July 26th, 2019 06:47
Always & Forever
Fay Slimm. said:
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in warm allure .................. Fay.
July 26th, 2019 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in warm allure .................. Fay.
July 26th, 2019 03:35
A Silent Refrain
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Neville, to go forward in love or to refrain is a question that we have all probably asked at some point in our lives - is there an answer?
July 26th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Neville, to go forward in love or to refrain is a question that we have all probably asked at some point in our lives - is there an answer?
July 26th, 2019 00:52
A Silent Refrain
Suresh said:
Some things are better left unlearned, but heartache is a pseudonym for romance, and maybe poverty and hard times too.
July 25th, 2019 16:19
Suresh said:
Some things are better left unlearned, but heartache is a pseudonym for romance, and maybe poverty and hard times too.
July 25th, 2019 16:19
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