Comments received on poems by Neville
Morning Coffee
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, I enjoy good coffee.
April 11th, 2019 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, I enjoy good coffee.
April 11th, 2019 15:25
Morning Coffee
Suresh said:
Ohh! I forget my morning coffee, but then, I drink mostly very light tea.
Enjoy your coffee and croissants, I guess I won\'t be on your list of invitees
April 11th, 2019 12:44
Suresh said:
Ohh! I forget my morning coffee, but then, I drink mostly very light tea.
Enjoy your coffee and croissants, I guess I won\'t be on your list of invitees
April 11th, 2019 12:44
Morning Coffee
orchidee said:
You had that coffee today? About 20 cups, as some people seem to have in a day?!
April 11th, 2019 12:14
orchidee said:
You had that coffee today? About 20 cups, as some people seem to have in a day?!
April 11th, 2019 12:14
Morning Coffee
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I’ve enjoyed the read as much as I’m enjoying my drink of choice at this time of the morning...
Un caffé lungo!
Grazie!☕️
~Laura~
April 11th, 2019 04:47
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I’ve enjoyed the read as much as I’m enjoying my drink of choice at this time of the morning...
Un caffé lungo!
Grazie!☕️
~Laura~
April 11th, 2019 04:47
Morning Coffee
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignancy hangs over this small verse of reflection and penned with your usual gift for mystery the write takes on a life of its own - - settled but lonely that morning coffee tells such a story - - - - a compelling read and another winner methinks dear Nev...............
April 11th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignancy hangs over this small verse of reflection and penned with your usual gift for mystery the write takes on a life of its own - - settled but lonely that morning coffee tells such a story - - - - a compelling read and another winner methinks dear Nev...............
April 11th, 2019 03:44
Morning Coffee
orchidee said:
We could pop round for a cup of coffee with him! A nice slice of cake too. Or rather, tea for me. I would spit out black coffee, and most coffee! lol.
And did he have a wild evening the night before - needing black coffee now?
April 11th, 2019 03:36
orchidee said:
We could pop round for a cup of coffee with him! A nice slice of cake too. Or rather, tea for me. I would spit out black coffee, and most coffee! lol.
And did he have a wild evening the night before - needing black coffee now?
April 11th, 2019 03:36
Shadow Envy
Michael Edwards said:
It has a gentle punch in its simplicity - great write Neville.
April 10th, 2019 11:06
Michael Edwards said:
It has a gentle punch in its simplicity - great write Neville.
April 10th, 2019 11:06
Shadow Envy
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. My singing gets in the way. lol.
April 10th, 2019 09:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. My singing gets in the way. lol.
April 10th, 2019 09:30
Shadow Envy
dusk arising said:
Now thats clever and contains such wisdom.
Short and sweet (thus powerful).
Definitely one for my favourites.
Thank you.
April 10th, 2019 08:38
dusk arising said:
Now thats clever and contains such wisdom.
Short and sweet (thus powerful).
Definitely one for my favourites.
Thank you.
April 10th, 2019 08:38
Shadow Envy
Fay Slimm. said:
Shadows of love never impeach on the other to spoil its simplicity-- such a poignant appeal to these honest wishes in today\'s read Nev........
April 10th, 2019 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Shadows of love never impeach on the other to spoil its simplicity-- such a poignant appeal to these honest wishes in today\'s read Nev........
April 10th, 2019 03:49
Canvas
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful canvas on which to produce such wonderful feelings.
April 9th, 2019 14:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful canvas on which to produce such wonderful feelings.
April 9th, 2019 14:58
Canvas
dusk arising said:
Keep her fresh by keeping your love vibrant.
I am a fan of short pieces. The beauty of compact writing is it\'s invitation for each reader to expand the mental picture with their own colours and detail.
Indeed today you provide a canvas upon which many pictures will be painted today.
In a word .. \'enthralling\'.
April 9th, 2019 07:23
dusk arising said:
Keep her fresh by keeping your love vibrant.
I am a fan of short pieces. The beauty of compact writing is it\'s invitation for each reader to expand the mental picture with their own colours and detail.
Indeed today you provide a canvas upon which many pictures will be painted today.
In a word .. \'enthralling\'.
April 9th, 2019 07:23
Canvas
Fay Slimm. said:
Answering -- Not if love is the oil your lips feel my friend - - a warm romantic read.
April 9th, 2019 04:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Answering -- Not if love is the oil your lips feel my friend - - a warm romantic read.
April 9th, 2019 04:17
Poppies
dusk arising said:
This beautiful fragile flower has as you write many associations. Chief amongst them being the flower of our respectful remembrance, and latterly its white brother.
On seeing a field of poppies - a quite remarkable sight - once in Oxfordshire and again in Gloucestershire i was taken with the thought that each one of these hundred of thousands of bloody blooms could well represent a life lost in some ridiculous carnage of WW1 battle. Humbling and moving, just as is your poem today.
\'Lest we forget\'
There must always be another day.
April 8th, 2019 12:05
dusk arising said:
This beautiful fragile flower has as you write many associations. Chief amongst them being the flower of our respectful remembrance, and latterly its white brother.
On seeing a field of poppies - a quite remarkable sight - once in Oxfordshire and again in Gloucestershire i was taken with the thought that each one of these hundred of thousands of bloody blooms could well represent a life lost in some ridiculous carnage of WW1 battle. Humbling and moving, just as is your poem today.
\'Lest we forget\'
There must always be another day.
April 8th, 2019 12:05
Poppies
Suresh said:
With each line I envision the color you so engender. A nice light read.
April 8th, 2019 11:36
Suresh said:
With each line I envision the color you so engender. A nice light read.
April 8th, 2019 11:36
Poppies
Neville said:
Thank you dear Fay, as always, your reasoned responses, both apt and appreciated.... Neville
April 8th, 2019 05:58
Neville said:
Thank you dear Fay, as always, your reasoned responses, both apt and appreciated.... Neville
April 8th, 2019 05:58
Poppies
Fay Slimm. said:
The bearers of so many emotions are poppies and what they have become - you verse them well here along with the reminders of what colour can do to our psyche - crimson shouts out for worldwide remembrance of battlefields past and present. That meaningful sighting of a few early arrivals inspired a fine poem my friend.
April 8th, 2019 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
The bearers of so many emotions are poppies and what they have become - you verse them well here along with the reminders of what colour can do to our psyche - crimson shouts out for worldwide remembrance of battlefields past and present. That meaningful sighting of a few early arrivals inspired a fine poem my friend.
April 8th, 2019 05:38
The Freedom of Slaves
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Woof! Not cos it should be marked 18+, but Fido barked cos I\'m about to sing: \'Born Free...….!\'
All are in slavery to my singing. heehee.
April 8th, 2019 02:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Woof! Not cos it should be marked 18+, but Fido barked cos I\'m about to sing: \'Born Free...….!\'
All are in slavery to my singing. heehee.
April 8th, 2019 02:09
The Freedom of Slaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, those eagles show the freedom and peacefulness that could be everybody\'s.
April 8th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, those eagles show the freedom and peacefulness that could be everybody\'s.
April 8th, 2019 00:33
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