Comments received on poems by Neville
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Suresh said:
My, my!!
None want to stay silent,
The majic of your prose draws even a devil like me - no mirrors please
June 8th, 2019 12:34
Suresh said:
My, my!!
None want to stay silent,
The majic of your prose draws even a devil like me - no mirrors please
June 8th, 2019 12:34
My Fathers Jacket
Suresh said:
Those grainy photos make it seem like eternity ago, yet memories are as fresh today....
June 8th, 2019 11:58
Suresh said:
Those grainy photos make it seem like eternity ago, yet memories are as fresh today....
June 8th, 2019 11:58
Wanting to be Wanted
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman high on words is often strangled with their hold - your first lines give the telling Nev on what that lady needs to address.......... \"She wants to be wanted
But she needs to be adored\"... best to steer clear methinks of such gross disorder.... but then you know that I am sure my friend - your expressions flow easy in this bold lament of a broken female -just catching up on what I first missed
- - your gift of building intrigue is amazing mon ami.............. x Fay
June 8th, 2019 11:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman high on words is often strangled with their hold - your first lines give the telling Nev on what that lady needs to address.......... \"She wants to be wanted
But she needs to be adored\"... best to steer clear methinks of such gross disorder.... but then you know that I am sure my friend - your expressions flow easy in this bold lament of a broken female -just catching up on what I first missed
- - your gift of building intrigue is amazing mon ami.............. x Fay
June 8th, 2019 11:17
My Fathers Jacket
dusk arising said:
Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which will never leave you. What a fine and honourable way to tell us of this man so dear to you.
Yes it does move me to tears, for we are both fathers and sons.
June 8th, 2019 10:10
dusk arising said:
Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which will never leave you. What a fine and honourable way to tell us of this man so dear to you.
Yes it does move me to tears, for we are both fathers and sons.
June 8th, 2019 10:10
My Fathers Jacket
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well that\'s a fav if ever I\'ve had one my dad was here with me all over again
Thank you Neville a wonderful pre father\'s day gift
June 8th, 2019 09:05
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well that\'s a fav if ever I\'ve had one my dad was here with me all over again
Thank you Neville a wonderful pre father\'s day gift
June 8th, 2019 09:05
Broken
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 8th, 2019 08:41
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 8th, 2019 08:41
My Fathers Jacket
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute that only experience could write Nev......described with words from warm memory\'s heart is your special relationship with a much l missed father whose treasured jacket long held his loved essence....... an ache of a read on this his special day and my thoughts are with your tears of remembrance.
June 8th, 2019 01:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A tribute that only experience could write Nev......described with words from warm memory\'s heart is your special relationship with a much l missed father whose treasured jacket long held his loved essence....... an ache of a read on this his special day and my thoughts are with your tears of remembrance.
June 8th, 2019 01:42
Famous Last Words
Poetic Dan said:
My brain could not cope with the words you wrote but the rest enjoyed it so I enjoyed trying ;)
June 8th, 2019 01:11
Poetic Dan said:
My brain could not cope with the words you wrote but the rest enjoyed it so I enjoyed trying ;)
June 8th, 2019 01:11
My Fathers Jacket
Poetic Dan said:
I see a man that stands with much pride, although I did not know him I can feel him through your writings.
I hope one day my children look back the same and I hope they keep my flame alive as you have kept his.
Thank you for sharing my friend
June 8th, 2019 00:59
Poetic Dan said:
I see a man that stands with much pride, although I did not know him I can feel him through your writings.
I hope one day my children look back the same and I hope they keep my flame alive as you have kept his.
Thank you for sharing my friend
June 8th, 2019 00:59
My Fathers Jacket
Goldfinch60 said:
And I. My father was so special too me. He gave me the gift of patience and the gift of appreciating all music. I am reminded of him every day in the music I listen to.
June 8th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
And I. My father was so special too me. He gave me the gift of patience and the gift of appreciating all music. I am reminded of him every day in the music I listen to.
June 8th, 2019 00:54
Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is so special, when you awake from the darkness all will be well.
June 8th, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is so special, when you awake from the darkness all will be well.
June 8th, 2019 00:51
My Fathers Jacket
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m not ashamed to say my eyes became quite moist reading this gem - for I too had a father who meant so much to me and it really struck a chord.
June 8th, 2019 00:47
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m not ashamed to say my eyes became quite moist reading this gem - for I too had a father who meant so much to me and it really struck a chord.
June 8th, 2019 00:47
Broken
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem.
Alas pain- the pain of life!
Keep writing Fine B
June 7th, 2019 12:48
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An awesome poem.
Alas pain- the pain of life!
Keep writing Fine B
June 7th, 2019 12:48
Virus
Suresh said:
For every offense we mount, their defensive measures grow strong. In reality, the tiniest, the unseen, the unknown are the fiercest, as you have so poetically sung
June 7th, 2019 12:29
Suresh said:
For every offense we mount, their defensive measures grow strong. In reality, the tiniest, the unseen, the unknown are the fiercest, as you have so poetically sung
June 7th, 2019 12:29
Broken
Suresh said:
Taking from Michaels words:
Until the dawn to wake, and not have the memory of having dreamt at all.
June 7th, 2019 11:40
Suresh said:
Taking from Michaels words:
Until the dawn to wake, and not have the memory of having dreamt at all.
June 7th, 2019 11:40
Broken
orchidee said:
What time did the night arrive for this fine poem? I wish I would shut up sometimes! I never do. lol.
June 7th, 2019 08:03
orchidee said:
What time did the night arrive for this fine poem? I wish I would shut up sometimes! I never do. lol.
June 7th, 2019 08:03
Broken
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 7th, 2019 03:47
dusk arising said:
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be perceived so very differently the next day.
June 7th, 2019 03:47
Broken
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender remembrance of how to ease the bruises of life - your last stanza spells the way out most clearly Neville - - aching together and aloud often mends the broken and with that sort of healing I really agree. A poet\'s poem this.......... Fay
June 7th, 2019 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender remembrance of how to ease the bruises of life - your last stanza spells the way out most clearly Neville - - aching together and aloud often mends the broken and with that sort of healing I really agree. A poet\'s poem this.......... Fay
June 7th, 2019 03:39
Famous Last Words
Goldfinch60 said:
So you have read the Bede then Neville, I struggle with reading his Ancient English style.
June 7th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
So you have read the Bede then Neville, I struggle with reading his Ancient English style.
June 7th, 2019 01:11
Famous Last Words
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and some great comments - I shan\'t try to beat them.
June 6th, 2019 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and some great comments - I shan\'t try to beat them.
June 6th, 2019 14:30
Autumn
Suresh said:
Autumn is my favorite season. Maybe it has something to do with being aligned with my birth.
I have lied about my age, as youth has been stolen away from me.
It\'s so nice to reminisce
June 6th, 2019 13:35
Suresh said:
Autumn is my favorite season. Maybe it has something to do with being aligned with my birth.
I have lied about my age, as youth has been stolen away from me.
It\'s so nice to reminisce
June 6th, 2019 13:35
Famous Last Words
orchidee said:
Canst thou bear with a joke from me?!
My famous last words were: \'See ya arooouunndddddddd!\' But why? Cos I was falling off a cliff at the time. It was a tad painful when I landed.
June 6th, 2019 12:59
orchidee said:
Canst thou bear with a joke from me?!
My famous last words were: \'See ya arooouunndddddddd!\' But why? Cos I was falling off a cliff at the time. It was a tad painful when I landed.
June 6th, 2019 12:59
Famous Last Words
Suresh said:
No comment, I cannot compete with thee.
Enjoyable read thou.
June 6th, 2019 12:37
Suresh said:
No comment, I cannot compete with thee.
Enjoyable read thou.
June 6th, 2019 12:37
Famous Last Words
SerenWise said:
Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good historical write ;)
June 6th, 2019 11:53
SerenWise said:
Really cool poem, as a history masters student I appreciate a good historical write ;)
June 6th, 2019 11:53
Famous Last Words
dusk arising said:
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17
dusk arising said:
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17
Famous Last Words
orchidee said:
Was ye with me, and others, in 1066? I mucked it all up ya know. They say that I said to Harold \'Look up Sir, at the vital moment - and he did!
My famous last words have not been said yet. They will be \'I\'m gonna stop singing!\' Meaning I\'m gonna sing until then. Oh no! lol.
June 6th, 2019 07:16
orchidee said:
Was ye with me, and others, in 1066? I mucked it all up ya know. They say that I said to Harold \'Look up Sir, at the vital moment - and he did!
My famous last words have not been said yet. They will be \'I\'m gonna stop singing!\' Meaning I\'m gonna sing until then. Oh no! lol.
June 6th, 2019 07:16
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