Comments received on poems by Neville
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Aislinn Wilson said:
I was surprised just how erotic this got. This feels like if a Zach Helms film delved into \"The Green Room\". Well writ, and much respect.
January 9th, 2019 10:51
Aislinn Wilson said:
I was surprised just how erotic this got. This feels like if a Zach Helms film delved into \"The Green Room\". Well writ, and much respect.
January 9th, 2019 10:51
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
sylviasearcher said:
There is almost a feeling of a ruakistic dance in the way this flows.
Thanks for sharing and capturing the escape from nothing in the white room.
😉
January 9th, 2019 07:47
sylviasearcher said:
There is almost a feeling of a ruakistic dance in the way this flows.
Thanks for sharing and capturing the escape from nothing in the white room.
😉
January 9th, 2019 07:47
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s having fun! heehee. Swoon!
January 9th, 2019 05:34
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s having fun! heehee. Swoon!
January 9th, 2019 05:34
A Handful of Nightingales
dusk arising said:
Far too complicated for a humble sinner like me to attempt. My body clock is already keeping planet Saturn time. Mostly i\'m awake or... is this a dream.
January 3rd, 2019 08:16
dusk arising said:
Far too complicated for a humble sinner like me to attempt. My body clock is already keeping planet Saturn time. Mostly i\'m awake or... is this a dream.
January 3rd, 2019 08:16
A Handful of Nightingales
sylviasearcher said:
I like this one.
Now I don\'t need to only turn to Keats for my nightingales.
Enjoy Italy 😊
January 3rd, 2019 03:27
sylviasearcher said:
I like this one.
Now I don\'t need to only turn to Keats for my nightingales.
Enjoy Italy 😊
January 3rd, 2019 03:27
A Handful of Nightingales
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nice work Neville.....do you really want my phone number?lol
January 3rd, 2019 02:53
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nice work Neville.....do you really want my phone number?lol
January 3rd, 2019 02:53
A Handful of Nightingales
orchidee said:
You got some nightingales for me? We have a Nightingale Road in our area. Not seen many of them birds there though.
January 3rd, 2019 02:49
orchidee said:
You got some nightingales for me? We have a Nightingale Road in our area. Not seen many of them birds there though.
January 3rd, 2019 02:49
A Handful of Nightingales
Goldfinch60 said:
Pretending to be awake in some of the sermons that I have sat through has become quite an art.
January 3rd, 2019 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Pretending to be awake in some of the sermons that I have sat through has become quite an art.
January 3rd, 2019 02:03
A Handful of Nightingales
Michael Edwards said:
In a bizarre sort of way I rather think your poem and mine his morning sort of go together even if they are not all there. Mt widest hand span is 8.24ins - how many will that hold?
Actually I really did enjoy the read.
January 3rd, 2019 01:31
Michael Edwards said:
In a bizarre sort of way I rather think your poem and mine his morning sort of go together even if they are not all there. Mt widest hand span is 8.24ins - how many will that hold?
Actually I really did enjoy the read.
January 3rd, 2019 01:31
Just Take a Look
Goldfinch60 said:
The lady dances throughout our thoughts and feelings.
January 2nd, 2019 16:05
Goldfinch60 said:
The lady dances throughout our thoughts and feelings.
January 2nd, 2019 16:05
Just Take a Look
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! She really gets around.
The wit is obvious in this poem, written by a talented author. The last verse is truly captivating. Thanks for posting. :-)
January 2nd, 2019 12:26
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! She really gets around.
The wit is obvious in this poem, written by a talented author. The last verse is truly captivating. Thanks for posting. :-)
January 2nd, 2019 12:26
Just Take a Look
Michael Edwards said:
And long may she smile - i think she might also be the subject of some of my writes - an enigmatic lass no less
January 2nd, 2019 11:10
Michael Edwards said:
And long may she smile - i think she might also be the subject of some of my writes - an enigmatic lass no less
January 2nd, 2019 11:10
Just Take a Look
sylviasearcher said:
It was the poem: to whom these words belong.
Noone claimed them ironically. I think they were written before I became an enigma so I forgot to pirouette!
January 2nd, 2019 05:24
sylviasearcher said:
It was the poem: to whom these words belong.
Noone claimed them ironically. I think they were written before I became an enigma so I forgot to pirouette!
January 2nd, 2019 05:24
Just Take a Look
orchidee said:
Should I meet here? Will it be swoony?! Do I need to take Fido, me watchdog, with me?! lol
January 2nd, 2019 05:23
orchidee said:
Should I meet here? Will it be swoony?! Do I need to take Fido, me watchdog, with me?! lol
January 2nd, 2019 05:23
Just Take a Look
sylviasearcher said:
Is the ending an invite to collaborate?
I thought sir did not participate in collaboration?
I like the mystery you create with this one. She seems enigmatic.
One day I would like to be an enigma.
January 2nd, 2019 05:12
sylviasearcher said:
Is the ending an invite to collaborate?
I thought sir did not participate in collaboration?
I like the mystery you create with this one. She seems enigmatic.
One day I would like to be an enigma.
January 2nd, 2019 05:12
Dali’s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
To dream of being in the world of your favourites in the world of art(s) is so awe inspiring.
I feel this way when I see William Holman-Hunt\'s works.
January 2nd, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
To dream of being in the world of your favourites in the world of art(s) is so awe inspiring.
I feel this way when I see William Holman-Hunt\'s works.
January 2nd, 2019 01:20
Dali’s Eyes
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath away\" from all who read it. If Dali were a poet, who would he be? My choice is E. E. Cummings. Inspired by your poem. Thank you. - Phil A..
January 1st, 2019 20:31
MendedFences27 said:
A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath away\" from all who read it. If Dali were a poet, who would he be? My choice is E. E. Cummings. Inspired by your poem. Thank you. - Phil A..
January 1st, 2019 20:31
Dali’s Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both inspirational to help such as me see the elusive in-betweeness of genius.
January 1st, 2019 14:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both inspirational to help such as me see the elusive in-betweeness of genius.
January 1st, 2019 14:10
Dali’s Eyes
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
I like your aspirations. I don\'t know much about the Dali, but I have read my Hemingway and yes; what a writer! Nice concise poem, love your structure, by the way...
January 1st, 2019 10:28
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
I like your aspirations. I don\'t know much about the Dali, but I have read my Hemingway and yes; what a writer! Nice concise poem, love your structure, by the way...
January 1st, 2019 10:28
Dali’s Eyes
dusk arising said:
LOL every writer dreams of such wishes.
But better to see and be who you are and who you will become in your own right (write).
Both the greats u mention had , their inspiration and maybe wished they could emulate them. They didn\'t though.
January 1st, 2019 06:52
dusk arising said:
LOL every writer dreams of such wishes.
But better to see and be who you are and who you will become in your own right (write).
Both the greats u mention had , their inspiration and maybe wished they could emulate them. They didn\'t though.
January 1st, 2019 06:52
Dali’s Eyes
Michael Edwards said:
I go weak at the knees at the mention of Dali - my all time favourite and hope to return to his museum in Figures in the next year or so - often his work is underrated in the glare of his eccentricity but heigh. This is a great write Neville.
January 1st, 2019 06:48
Michael Edwards said:
I go weak at the knees at the mention of Dali - my all time favourite and hope to return to his museum in Figures in the next year or so - often his work is underrated in the glare of his eccentricity but heigh. This is a great write Neville.
January 1st, 2019 06:48
Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:
You have just proved what I have said to many people, when you see a reflection it is not the truth.
Clever write Neville.
January 1st, 2019 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
You have just proved what I have said to many people, when you see a reflection it is not the truth.
Clever write Neville.
January 1st, 2019 02:19
Reflections
dusk arising said:
Now come on! If you wanted to do a proper reflection it should have been left to right as normal but upside down! ... just kidding.
Nice one, i\'ve not seen this done before.
December 31st, 2018 10:24
dusk arising said:
Now come on! If you wanted to do a proper reflection it should have been left to right as normal but upside down! ... just kidding.
Nice one, i\'ve not seen this done before.
December 31st, 2018 10:24
Reflections
Michael Edwards said:
A great look back. have a great New Year.
December 31st, 2018 07:32
Michael Edwards said:
A great look back. have a great New Year.
December 31st, 2018 07:32
Reflections
orchidee said:
Bonjour! is that a bit of French in your poem? Ahh, it\'s all reflected. A good write N. Looks like Welsh.
Oops a \'t\' has not been \'reflected\' at the end. lol.
December 31st, 2018 07:16
orchidee said:
Bonjour! is that a bit of French in your poem? Ahh, it\'s all reflected. A good write N. Looks like Welsh.
Oops a \'t\' has not been \'reflected\' at the end. lol.
December 31st, 2018 07:16
Rough Sketched & True
Goldfinch60 said:
From that sketch a wonderful painting will emerge to complement your words.
December 31st, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
From that sketch a wonderful painting will emerge to complement your words.
December 31st, 2018 01:32
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