Comments received on poems by Neville
Shield Maiden
sylviasearcher said:
This piece intrigued me.
I was left a little uncertain about how the author felt about his creation or the image in his head?
It reminded me of baba yaga or such mythical wild woman ideas.
There is a calmness yet a dread.
An emptiness yet battlefield ablaze.
Perhaps an acceptance of fate?
February 19th, 2019 06:09
sylviasearcher said:
This piece intrigued me.
I was left a little uncertain about how the author felt about his creation or the image in his head?
It reminded me of baba yaga or such mythical wild woman ideas.
There is a calmness yet a dread.
An emptiness yet battlefield ablaze.
Perhaps an acceptance of fate?
February 19th, 2019 06:09
Shield Maiden
Fay Slimm. said:
A dark and sad shape indeed is your feral maiden Neville - - loved the cold flow of this shivery piece -
- -a wraith of the tarot-card table so adeptly described makes a haunt of a read.
February 19th, 2019 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A dark and sad shape indeed is your feral maiden Neville - - loved the cold flow of this shivery piece -
- -a wraith of the tarot-card table so adeptly described makes a haunt of a read.
February 19th, 2019 04:47
Shield Maiden
orchidee said:
Oohh what\'s she up to there, battling on? She certainly \'gets out more\' - like I should do! Did she \'get her coat\' having \'over-stayed her welcome\' somewhere, then go off on these adventures?!
February 19th, 2019 04:25
orchidee said:
Oohh what\'s she up to there, battling on? She certainly \'gets out more\' - like I should do! Did she \'get her coat\' having \'over-stayed her welcome\' somewhere, then go off on these adventures?!
February 19th, 2019 04:25
Away With Words
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha - - well one was to think about NAKED - - but the others are too near the bone...........
February 18th, 2019 13:41
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha - - well one was to think about NAKED - - but the others are too near the bone...........
February 18th, 2019 13:41
Away With Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Hey Neville - what a great idea for reader participation - - - I thought of a few cheeky ones but settled for - --
\"Lets all think about FUN for a change\"
February 18th, 2019 07:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Hey Neville - what a great idea for reader participation - - - I thought of a few cheeky ones but settled for - --
\"Lets all think about FUN for a change\"
February 18th, 2019 07:45
Away With Words
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great right Neville
My word would be compassion or forgivemess or care or concern or humaness or oh I don\'t know now I\'m all stressed thinking about what word it would be thanks Nev!
lol
February 18th, 2019 05:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great right Neville
My word would be compassion or forgivemess or care or concern or humaness or oh I don\'t know now I\'m all stressed thinking about what word it would be thanks Nev!
lol
February 18th, 2019 05:15
Away With Words
Michael Edwards said:
Under water basket weaving?
Oh sorry that\'s four words - how about privycleaning ?
Great fun write.
February 18th, 2019 04:13
Michael Edwards said:
Under water basket weaving?
Oh sorry that\'s four words - how about privycleaning ?
Great fun write.
February 18th, 2019 04:13
Away With Words
orchidee said:
Yes, those pesky words - they are cads, bounders, jolly bad shows, eh?!
February 18th, 2019 03:03
orchidee said:
Yes, those pesky words - they are cads, bounders, jolly bad shows, eh?!
February 18th, 2019 03:03
Away With Words
sylviasearcher said:
Aphasia?
Voicelessness?
Emptiness?
Apathy?
Powerlessness?
Oh so many words could fill that void.
It reminded me of a poem I wrote.
February 18th, 2019 02:56
sylviasearcher said:
Aphasia?
Voicelessness?
Emptiness?
Apathy?
Powerlessness?
Oh so many words could fill that void.
It reminded me of a poem I wrote.
February 18th, 2019 02:56
Embu
dusk arising said:
What need of words when they are only a carriage of sentiment. The prayer is within not without. For who is there to hear.
February 17th, 2019 08:56
dusk arising said:
What need of words when they are only a carriage of sentiment. The prayer is within not without. For who is there to hear.
February 17th, 2019 08:56
Embu
orchidee said:
I could do with an embu, seeing as I\'m 21 again tomorrow, N. lol. I do meditation sometimes. Nope, not to think myself into being younger!
February 17th, 2019 08:39
orchidee said:
I could do with an embu, seeing as I\'m 21 again tomorrow, N. lol. I do meditation sometimes. Nope, not to think myself into being younger!
February 17th, 2019 08:39
A Handful of Ghosts
SerenWise said:
This is very thought-provoking, nicely done
February 16th, 2019 11:06
SerenWise said:
This is very thought-provoking, nicely done
February 16th, 2019 11:06
A Handful of Ghosts
dusk arising said:
A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole journey but a few pleasant day trips are on the cards by the look of it.
February 16th, 2019 09:41
dusk arising said:
A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole journey but a few pleasant day trips are on the cards by the look of it.
February 16th, 2019 09:41
A Handful of Ghosts
sylviasearcher said:
I sometimes
Wonder
If I share
My bed
With more than
A handful
Of
Ghosts
And whether
There is any
Space
In that bed
Left
For me
Just a thought...
From your words
February 16th, 2019 08:29
sylviasearcher said:
I sometimes
Wonder
If I share
My bed
With more than
A handful
Of
Ghosts
And whether
There is any
Space
In that bed
Left
For me
Just a thought...
From your words
February 16th, 2019 08:29
When I am Far
sylviasearcher said:
There is something quite tender about this one.
February 15th, 2019 09:07
sylviasearcher said:
There is something quite tender about this one.
February 15th, 2019 09:07
When I am Far
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again
with your magical pen.
February 15th, 2019 05:16
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again
with your magical pen.
February 15th, 2019 05:16
When I am Far
dusk arising said:
Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of telecommunications.
Wonderful thinly veiled lubrication of the libido from a talented wordsmith.
February 15th, 2019 04:17
dusk arising said:
Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of telecommunications.
Wonderful thinly veiled lubrication of the libido from a talented wordsmith.
February 15th, 2019 04:17
When I am Far
Fay Slimm. said:
Steeped in poignancy the feel of these words lingers long after the read - another gem of a write dear Neville.
February 15th, 2019 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Steeped in poignancy the feel of these words lingers long after the read - another gem of a write dear Neville.
February 15th, 2019 04:14
When I am Far
orchidee said:
I best not ask what\'s going on there. Someone having fun? If so, I\'m glad at least someone is! And is the time going quick, cos it\'s said \'Time goes quick when ya are enjoying yourself\'.
February 15th, 2019 03:51
orchidee said:
I best not ask what\'s going on there. Someone having fun? If so, I\'m glad at least someone is! And is the time going quick, cos it\'s said \'Time goes quick when ya are enjoying yourself\'.
February 15th, 2019 03:51
Sans Sustenance
Goldfinch60 said:
Imagery can be a wonderful sustenance to the mind.
February 15th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Imagery can be a wonderful sustenance to the mind.
February 15th, 2019 01:40
Sans Sustenance
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Yes, indeed...
āSans Sustenanceā...
As you so aptly addressed those with an appetite in the authorās comment space, we all experience hunger!
Enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2019 16:33
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Yes, indeed...
āSans Sustenanceā...
As you so aptly addressed those with an appetite in the authorās comment space, we all experience hunger!
Enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2019 16:33
Sans Sustenance
orchidee said:
I drag on and on....ā¦ I\'m known for it (I expect so!) heehee. Woo... should Fido bark at this poem?! lol.
February 14th, 2019 14:14
orchidee said:
I drag on and on....ā¦ I\'m known for it (I expect so!) heehee. Woo... should Fido bark at this poem?! lol.
February 14th, 2019 14:14
Sans Sustenance
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:49
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:49
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