Comments received on poems by Neville
Together Parted
Neville said:
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
February 23rd, 2019 03:02
Neville said:
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
February 23rd, 2019 03:02
Together Parted
orchidee said:
A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the \'p\'s (there\'s one sneaked in). No more left for me to \'*ick u* a *enguin!\'
Why don\'t I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
February 23rd, 2019 02:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the \'p\'s (there\'s one sneaked in). No more left for me to \'*ick u* a *enguin!\'
Why don\'t I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
February 23rd, 2019 02:55
A Certain Point of Beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 22nd, 2019 15:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 22nd, 2019 15:45
A Certain Point of Beauty
orchidee said:
Ooh should I meet her?! (heehee). \'Yeah, go on\', you say. She don\'t sound as fierce as Boudicea.
February 22nd, 2019 15:22
orchidee said:
Ooh should I meet her?! (heehee). \'Yeah, go on\', you say. She don\'t sound as fierce as Boudicea.
February 22nd, 2019 15:22
A Certain Point of Beauty
dusk arising said:
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i go\".
Beauty, being in the eye of the beholder, can be a short lived quality.
February 22nd, 2019 07:20
dusk arising said:
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i go\".
Beauty, being in the eye of the beholder, can be a short lived quality.
February 22nd, 2019 07:20
A Certain Point of Beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the eye of the beholder they say - - but those mentioned exercises sound helpful and methinks to try \'em !! Great read.
February 22nd, 2019 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the eye of the beholder they say - - but those mentioned exercises sound helpful and methinks to try \'em !! Great read.
February 22nd, 2019 06:43
A Certain Point of Beauty
Michael Edwards said:
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a century ago - this is an intriguing write which will live me for some time.
February 22nd, 2019 06:21
Michael Edwards said:
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a century ago - this is an intriguing write which will live me for some time.
February 22nd, 2019 06:21
A Certain Point of Beauty
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NOW,,, That is a moement WELL Captured
Truly a beautiful write
BUT... Did he stay or did he leave that is one of life\'s great questions
February 22nd, 2019 04:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NOW,,, That is a moement WELL Captured
Truly a beautiful write
BUT... Did he stay or did he leave that is one of life\'s great questions
February 22nd, 2019 04:49
A Certain Point of Beauty
sylviasearcher said:
Reminded me of the moments when I sometimes manage to write a beautiful poem.
February 22nd, 2019 04:43
sylviasearcher said:
Reminded me of the moments when I sometimes manage to write a beautiful poem.
February 22nd, 2019 04:43
Heathen
sylviasearcher said:
I had to come back to this one after letting it linger in my senses.
It made me want to reconnect with my inner heathen.
To let go of something.
February 22nd, 2019 03:17
sylviasearcher said:
I had to come back to this one after letting it linger in my senses.
It made me want to reconnect with my inner heathen.
To let go of something.
February 22nd, 2019 03:17
Heathen
Goldfinch60 said:
We find out so much about our previous selves nowadays.
Good write Neville.
February 22nd, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
We find out so much about our previous selves nowadays.
Good write Neville.
February 22nd, 2019 01:33
Heathen
SerenWise said:
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09
SerenWise said:
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09
Heathen
Suresh said:
I stare at those relic and wonder. .....
....in the absence of being there, wonder is all I can do!
Love the read
February 21st, 2019 13:05
Suresh said:
I stare at those relic and wonder. .....
....in the absence of being there, wonder is all I can do!
Love the read
February 21st, 2019 13:05
Heathen
Fay Slimm. said:
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics with seeing and tasting flakes of past loves - which your verse has done well - in fact so well that i felt myself there wearing the clay mask - - another thrill of a read Nev.
February 21st, 2019 12:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics with seeing and tasting flakes of past loves - which your verse has done well - in fact so well that i felt myself there wearing the clay mask - - another thrill of a read Nev.
February 21st, 2019 12:03
Heathen
Neville said:
That may have been becoz you were lagging behind... thanks for throwing yourself into this scribble DA..... N
February 21st, 2019 10:36
Neville said:
That may have been becoz you were lagging behind... thanks for throwing yourself into this scribble DA..... N
February 21st, 2019 10:36
Heathen
dusk arising said:
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys invented the spear you know.
57 varieties of us there was. They called me ketchup.
February 21st, 2019 09:45
dusk arising said:
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys invented the spear you know.
57 varieties of us there was. They called me ketchup.
February 21st, 2019 09:45
Heathen
orchidee said:
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was you too?!
February 21st, 2019 05:14
orchidee said:
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was you too?!
February 21st, 2019 05:14
What Do You Drive
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes a good fun write that fits well with the music -da doo.
February 21st, 2019 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes a good fun write that fits well with the music -da doo.
February 21st, 2019 01:41
What Do You Drive
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but haven\'t a clue how Lou Reed\'s (who is Lou Reed - must google him) Walk On The Wild Side goes - might know if I heard it though,.
February 20th, 2019 10:01
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but haven\'t a clue how Lou Reed\'s (who is Lou Reed - must google him) Walk On The Wild Side goes - might know if I heard it though,.
February 20th, 2019 10:01
What Do You Drive
dusk arising said:
I can hear that baritone sax solo..... and the coloured girls say \'do da do - dad doo dad doo\' etc
Feels odd writing \'coloured\' in 2019
The song by Lou Reed was actually about a transvestite friend of his so maybe the \'lady\' in your piece did u a favour being gone. But i don\'t know which way you swing LOL.
February 20th, 2019 07:52
dusk arising said:
I can hear that baritone sax solo..... and the coloured girls say \'do da do - dad doo dad doo\' etc
Feels odd writing \'coloured\' in 2019
The song by Lou Reed was actually about a transvestite friend of his so maybe the \'lady\' in your piece did u a favour being gone. But i don\'t know which way you swing LOL.
February 20th, 2019 07:52
What Do You Drive
Fay Slimm. said:
The shame of being taken in by a two-timing dame eh Nev ? - - Loved this fun poem with its excellent flow and amazing rhyme-schemes - am still singin\' it in my head.
February 20th, 2019 06:40
Fay Slimm. said:
The shame of being taken in by a two-timing dame eh Nev ? - - Loved this fun poem with its excellent flow and amazing rhyme-schemes - am still singin\' it in my head.
February 20th, 2019 06:40
What Do You Drive
sylviasearcher said:
I think it all went wrong at ‘hey babe’ lol.
Need to work on your chat up lines!
Catchy expression of it though.
Played like a comedy sketch in my mind.
Not sure if that was the intention? 😂
Ps by all went wrong I meant the man in your poem not your poem. I liked the poem, it made me laugh. Laughing is good.
February 20th, 2019 04:10
sylviasearcher said:
I think it all went wrong at ‘hey babe’ lol.
Need to work on your chat up lines!
Catchy expression of it though.
Played like a comedy sketch in my mind.
Not sure if that was the intention? 😂
Ps by all went wrong I meant the man in your poem not your poem. I liked the poem, it made me laugh. Laughing is good.
February 20th, 2019 04:10
What Do You Drive
orchidee said:
Where did she go? Was she related to Boadicea? Oh, that was yesterday\'s gal! lol.
February 20th, 2019 03:57
orchidee said:
Where did she go? Was she related to Boadicea? Oh, that was yesterday\'s gal! lol.
February 20th, 2019 03:57
What Do You Drive
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dooh Da Doo Dad Doo Do
Thanks Neville... I think
Love Lou Reed
Great concept
Andrew
February 20th, 2019 03:56
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dooh Da Doo Dad Doo Do
Thanks Neville... I think
Love Lou Reed
Great concept
Andrew
February 20th, 2019 03:56
Shield Maiden
SerenWise said:
This is awesome, I love the use of language and metaphor! Good job :)
February 19th, 2019 17:37
SerenWise said:
This is awesome, I love the use of language and metaphor! Good job :)
February 19th, 2019 17:37
Shield Maiden
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dark and powerful Neville I liked it Great write AGAIN!
February 19th, 2019 17:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dark and powerful Neville I liked it Great write AGAIN!
February 19th, 2019 17:03
Shield Maiden
Michael Edwards said:
A right shudder of a read that stays with you - fine work Neville.
February 19th, 2019 12:11
Michael Edwards said:
A right shudder of a read that stays with you - fine work Neville.
February 19th, 2019 12:11
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