Comments received on poems by Neville
Paper Cuts
dusk arising said:
Yes we do see them along the high street, in their chains of magazine picture devotion. Hearts bleeding from failure to connect with the rest of humanity..... but some of them look marvellous.
March 3rd, 2019 12:09
dusk arising said:
Yes we do see them along the high street, in their chains of magazine picture devotion. Hearts bleeding from failure to connect with the rest of humanity..... but some of them look marvellous.
March 3rd, 2019 12:09
Paper Cuts
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts that close should never feel more than a whisper away when apart.......... another good slice of food for thought Nev.
March 3rd, 2019 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts that close should never feel more than a whisper away when apart.......... another good slice of food for thought Nev.
March 3rd, 2019 06:58
Paper Cuts
sylviasearcher said:
Faceless.
A painful metaphor.
But maybe I’m just having a grey paper day...
March 3rd, 2019 06:21
sylviasearcher said:
Faceless.
A painful metaphor.
But maybe I’m just having a grey paper day...
March 3rd, 2019 06:21
The Last Hurt
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write Neville, those hurts can really affect us but I am so glad that it was a while ago and your life appears to be back on a smooth course. We all have those hurts but we also have had the time to get over them.
March 3rd, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write Neville, those hurts can really affect us but I am so glad that it was a while ago and your life appears to be back on a smooth course. We all have those hurts but we also have had the time to get over them.
March 3rd, 2019 01:49
The Last Hurt
MendedFences27 said:
Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a lifelong mark. We try to remove it, to hide it, to rid ourselves of it in any way possible Yet it remains. Knowledge, that the other will one day suffer the same fate lets us balance out our lives. At least the knife gets removed. Nice poem of recovery this. Enjoyed its small taste of vengeance. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2019 21:18
MendedFences27 said:
Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a lifelong mark. We try to remove it, to hide it, to rid ourselves of it in any way possible Yet it remains. Knowledge, that the other will one day suffer the same fate lets us balance out our lives. At least the knife gets removed. Nice poem of recovery this. Enjoyed its small taste of vengeance. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2019 21:18
The Last Hurt
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow- - this must come from the core of one who has suffered real hurt that takes a while to get over, if ever - - I know - - - - only a quick read for me at the weekend but those last couple of lines went close to the cause of a breaking or broken relationship and stung me to comment. Brave and honest those lines my friend
March 2nd, 2019 10:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow- - this must come from the core of one who has suffered real hurt that takes a while to get over, if ever - - I know - - - - only a quick read for me at the weekend but those last couple of lines went close to the cause of a breaking or broken relationship and stung me to comment. Brave and honest those lines my friend
March 2nd, 2019 10:32
The Last Hurt
orchidee said:
I\'ll hurt ya - continually. Hurt ya ears that is. But how? Well, I\'ll just sing. Then they\'ll hurt me in return, so I\'ll never be able to sing again. I can\'t give details of what they\'ll do to me. I will only make myself swoon.
I just popped in to post this waffle. lol
March 2nd, 2019 09:12
orchidee said:
I\'ll hurt ya - continually. Hurt ya ears that is. But how? Well, I\'ll just sing. Then they\'ll hurt me in return, so I\'ll never be able to sing again. I can\'t give details of what they\'ll do to me. I will only make myself swoon.
I just popped in to post this waffle. lol
March 2nd, 2019 09:12
The Last Hurt
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I just love the last line. M
March 2nd, 2019 06:53
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I just love the last line. M
March 2nd, 2019 06:53
The Last Hurt
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville although I always find the pain we have (When we have it) it the worst pain in the world don\'t you?
I guess there is always someone worse off than us?
March 2nd, 2019 05:04
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville although I always find the pain we have (When we have it) it the worst pain in the world don\'t you?
I guess there is always someone worse off than us?
March 2nd, 2019 05:04
The Last Hurt
sylviasearcher said:
Ouch?
This is what I say to myself every morning lol.
Not sure I got it though?
As if it is about being hurt I should not make light of it.
Sorry,
I always struggle with vengeance and retribution though. I would never want another to feel misery I would always try and absolve that as much as I could. Even if that person causes me abject misery.
Of course then there is another way I could read this too.
I think I have a hangover, sorry.
March 2nd, 2019 05:00
sylviasearcher said:
Ouch?
This is what I say to myself every morning lol.
Not sure I got it though?
As if it is about being hurt I should not make light of it.
Sorry,
I always struggle with vengeance and retribution though. I would never want another to feel misery I would always try and absolve that as much as I could. Even if that person causes me abject misery.
Of course then there is another way I could read this too.
I think I have a hangover, sorry.
March 2nd, 2019 05:00
E.U.
dusk arising said:
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to read and think about, loved the balcony quip.
March 1st, 2019 10:27
dusk arising said:
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to read and think about, loved the balcony quip.
March 1st, 2019 10:27
E.U.
Michael Edwards said:
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and especialy so the invite.. great read.
March 1st, 2019 09:08
Michael Edwards said:
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and especialy so the invite.. great read.
March 1st, 2019 09:08
E.U.
orchidee said:
This poem anything to do with sheep - ewe?! (groans at corny joke). I gotta laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does. heehee! Oh, delusions of grandeur - there ya go!
March 1st, 2019 06:59
orchidee said:
This poem anything to do with sheep - ewe?! (groans at corny joke). I gotta laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does. heehee! Oh, delusions of grandeur - there ya go!
March 1st, 2019 06:59
E.U.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Watch Vladimir ride a horse topless?
NO
Just me then!
ORKWaaard!
March 1st, 2019 06:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Watch Vladimir ride a horse topless?
NO
Just me then!
ORKWaaard!
March 1st, 2019 06:08
E.U.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41
E.U.
orchidee said:
I\'ll be in Cuckoo Land with all that Rakia and stuff! No change there then?! lol.
March 1st, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
I\'ll be in Cuckoo Land with all that Rakia and stuff! No change there then?! lol.
March 1st, 2019 03:07
Unfinished
Michael Edwards said:
Great write.
Make my next moment
A moment on Monet’s palette.
Magical lines.
February 28th, 2019 10:32
Michael Edwards said:
Great write.
Make my next moment
A moment on Monet’s palette.
Magical lines.
February 28th, 2019 10:32
Unfinished
sylviasearcher said:
I found this quite an intrigue,
Do not mention love, but lay as lover might?
It sounds like it was something you did not want to end. Unfinished?
February 28th, 2019 08:41
sylviasearcher said:
I found this quite an intrigue,
Do not mention love, but lay as lover might?
It sounds like it was something you did not want to end. Unfinished?
February 28th, 2019 08:41
Unfinished
Fay Slimm. said:
To be whole and in the moment comes through clearly in this plea for friendship that need not be love - a piece to read over again - good this thought is and true that close friendship should never be finished. A compelling read Nev. .
February 28th, 2019 06:06
Fay Slimm. said:
To be whole and in the moment comes through clearly in this plea for friendship that need not be love - a piece to read over again - good this thought is and true that close friendship should never be finished. A compelling read Nev. .
February 28th, 2019 06:06
Unfinished
orchidee said:
Should I try some of this?! How come you finished this poem, if it\'s called Unfinished? heehee.
February 28th, 2019 05:41
orchidee said:
Should I try some of this?! How come you finished this poem, if it\'s called Unfinished? heehee.
February 28th, 2019 05:41
Unfinished
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well it\'s an option...
Love the hopeful title
Great write again Neville
February 28th, 2019 04:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well it\'s an option...
Love the hopeful title
Great write again Neville
February 28th, 2019 04:48
Incrementally Speaking
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment id special, treasure them.
February 28th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment id special, treasure them.
February 28th, 2019 01:40
Incrementally Speaking
dusk arising said:
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone\'s work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
February 27th, 2019 14:54
dusk arising said:
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone\'s work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
February 27th, 2019 14:54
Bring Along a Lantern
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written, beautiful imagery
February 27th, 2019 14:10
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