Comments received on poems by Neville
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Michael Edwards said:
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49
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sylviasearcher said:
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31
sylviasearcher said:
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31
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Fay Slimm. said:
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l prefer the left side of that finalé - it kinda rounds up the former and sticks in the mind - - whether or not a special form of read Neville. Full marks again for your skill to surprise and delight reviewers like me
February 26th, 2019 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l prefer the left side of that finalé - it kinda rounds up the former and sticks in the mind - - whether or not a special form of read Neville. Full marks again for your skill to surprise and delight reviewers like me
February 26th, 2019 05:12
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dusk arising said:
Maths yuk... i dont believe arithmetic and poetry should mix except when:-
There was a young man from bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
it\'s volume, times weight
divided by eight
was twice the square root of fk all.
February 26th, 2019 05:11
dusk arising said:
Maths yuk... i dont believe arithmetic and poetry should mix except when:-
There was a young man from bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
it\'s volume, times weight
divided by eight
was twice the square root of fk all.
February 26th, 2019 05:11
Bring Along a Lantern
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. It may be dark but the light is always there for us all - go towards it.
February 26th, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. It may be dark but the light is always there for us all - go towards it.
February 26th, 2019 01:36
Bring Along a Lantern
Dovestoneboy said:
Very sparse and moody , nicely drawn.
February 25th, 2019 16:36
Dovestoneboy said:
Very sparse and moody , nicely drawn.
February 25th, 2019 16:36
Bring Along a Lantern
Suresh said:
Bring along a lantern, conjures up images of many a stories written about the Middle Ages.
Thnx, Neville
February 25th, 2019 12:14
Suresh said:
Bring along a lantern, conjures up images of many a stories written about the Middle Ages.
Thnx, Neville
February 25th, 2019 12:14
Bring Along a Lantern
dusk arising said:
Who\'s gonna despise you lit up against the backdrop like that and listening to the snowmen chattering
What did the snowman say to the other snowman? Answer....\"Can you smell carrots?\".
February 25th, 2019 11:32
dusk arising said:
Who\'s gonna despise you lit up against the backdrop like that and listening to the snowmen chattering
What did the snowman say to the other snowman? Answer....\"Can you smell carrots?\".
February 25th, 2019 11:32
Bring Along a Lantern
Fay Slimm. said:
A feel of the true medieval in this atmospheric write - - loved those final two lines especially Nev.... you create mystery which is firstly read and leaves me thirsty for seconds.
February 25th, 2019 10:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A feel of the true medieval in this atmospheric write - - loved those final two lines especially Nev.... you create mystery which is firstly read and leaves me thirsty for seconds.
February 25th, 2019 10:14
Bring Along a Lantern
Michael Edwards said:
Another intriguing write from the writer of enigmatic poetry.
February 25th, 2019 08:26
Michael Edwards said:
Another intriguing write from the writer of enigmatic poetry.
February 25th, 2019 08:26
Bring Along a Lantern
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you intertwined the darkness with a sense of hope.
For me it took me to a nighttime forest with a lantern to light my path
But then again I’m always in the forest!
February 25th, 2019 08:03
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you intertwined the darkness with a sense of hope.
For me it took me to a nighttime forest with a lantern to light my path
But then again I’m always in the forest!
February 25th, 2019 08:03
Bring Along a Lantern
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nicely penned Neville full of intrigue
February 25th, 2019 06:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nicely penned Neville full of intrigue
February 25th, 2019 06:53
Bring Along a Lantern
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. We going for a night-walk? I went once, but the battery in me torch ran out. Doh! Well, you told us to bring a lantern, but I thought a troch would do....
February 25th, 2019 05:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. We going for a night-walk? I went once, but the battery in me torch ran out. Doh! Well, you told us to bring a lantern, but I thought a troch would do....
February 25th, 2019 05:05
Little White Lies
dusk arising said:
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments.
Nonsense on the other hand is something i\'m all too good at publishing on MPS.
Would you rather be remembered for your porkies or a few items of nonsense?
February 24th, 2019 12:28
dusk arising said:
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments.
Nonsense on the other hand is something i\'m all too good at publishing on MPS.
Would you rather be remembered for your porkies or a few items of nonsense?
February 24th, 2019 12:28
Little White Lies
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh I can relate to that
It\'s not a lie if you tell the truth straight away afterwards
That\'s nonesense
Great write Neville good sunday to you
February 24th, 2019 05:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh I can relate to that
It\'s not a lie if you tell the truth straight away afterwards
That\'s nonesense
Great write Neville good sunday to you
February 24th, 2019 05:16
Little White Lies
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they be little black lies - come to that how come they have any colour at all - unless they are written of course and then if they really are white you would need black paper - can you get it anywhere? I am so confused.
February 24th, 2019 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they be little black lies - come to that how come they have any colour at all - unless they are written of course and then if they really are white you would need black paper - can you get it anywhere? I am so confused.
February 24th, 2019 04:50
Little White Lies
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Aww, why they say I talk nonsense any day?! lol.
February 24th, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Aww, why they say I talk nonsense any day?! lol.
February 24th, 2019 03:07
Together Parted
sylviasearcher said:
Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
It made me think of Spring.
The words felt like I already knew them.
February 23rd, 2019 10:04
sylviasearcher said:
Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
It made me think of Spring.
The words felt like I already knew them.
February 23rd, 2019 10:04
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Michael Edwards said:
Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.
February 23rd, 2019 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.
February 23rd, 2019 08:04
Together Parted
FineB said:
Hello Neville.
Thank you this beautiful moment of poetry.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:07
FineB said:
Hello Neville.
Thank you this beautiful moment of poetry.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:07
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville this reads so many ways and with many meanings Perefct!
Bravo!
February 23rd, 2019 03:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville this reads so many ways and with many meanings Perefct!
Bravo!
February 23rd, 2019 03:49
Together Parted
Neville said:
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
February 23rd, 2019 03:02
Neville said:
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
February 23rd, 2019 03:02
Together Parted
orchidee said:
A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the \'p\'s (there\'s one sneaked in). No more left for me to \'*ick u* a *enguin!\'
Why don\'t I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
February 23rd, 2019 02:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the \'p\'s (there\'s one sneaked in). No more left for me to \'*ick u* a *enguin!\'
Why don\'t I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
February 23rd, 2019 02:55
A Certain Point of Beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 22nd, 2019 15:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 22nd, 2019 15:45
A Certain Point of Beauty
orchidee said:
Ooh should I meet her?! (heehee). \'Yeah, go on\', you say. She don\'t sound as fierce as Boudicea.
February 22nd, 2019 15:22
orchidee said:
Ooh should I meet her?! (heehee). \'Yeah, go on\', you say. She don\'t sound as fierce as Boudicea.
February 22nd, 2019 15:22
A Certain Point of Beauty
dusk arising said:
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i go\".
Beauty, being in the eye of the beholder, can be a short lived quality.
February 22nd, 2019 07:20
dusk arising said:
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i go\".
Beauty, being in the eye of the beholder, can be a short lived quality.
February 22nd, 2019 07:20
A Certain Point of Beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the eye of the beholder they say - - but those mentioned exercises sound helpful and methinks to try \'em !! Great read.
February 22nd, 2019 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the eye of the beholder they say - - but those mentioned exercises sound helpful and methinks to try \'em !! Great read.
February 22nd, 2019 06:43
A Certain Point of Beauty
Michael Edwards said:
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a century ago - this is an intriguing write which will live me for some time.
February 22nd, 2019 06:21
Michael Edwards said:
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a century ago - this is an intriguing write which will live me for some time.
February 22nd, 2019 06:21
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