Comments received on poems by Neville
Last Words
dusk arising said:
A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost battle of the heart and wounds take their time to heal.
I particularly like the way your pulse will dance on into high and wonderful places. Life goes on and has wonders yet to come.
February 10th, 2019 04:50
dusk arising said:
A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost battle of the heart and wounds take their time to heal.
I particularly like the way your pulse will dance on into high and wonderful places. Life goes on and has wonders yet to come.
February 10th, 2019 04:50
Bethune Re-visited
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write showing us two paths within our mind.
February 10th, 2019 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write showing us two paths within our mind.
February 10th, 2019 01:38
Bethune Re-visited
Michael Edwards said:
Interesting about Bethune and a good write to boot.
February 9th, 2019 13:19
Michael Edwards said:
Interesting about Bethune and a good write to boot.
February 9th, 2019 13:19
Bethune Re-visited
dusk arising said:
War is disgusting, now a lovely place is known for it\'s part in three wars and is on the tourist map for its cemetery. Three thousand souls, victims of politicians war game lay there.
February 9th, 2019 09:14
dusk arising said:
War is disgusting, now a lovely place is known for it\'s part in three wars and is on the tourist map for its cemetery. Three thousand souls, victims of politicians war game lay there.
February 9th, 2019 09:14
Bethune Re-visited
orchidee said:
I\'ve gone up some garden path or summat, and got lost - Bethune? Some University comes up when I google it. I dunno these things! Just as well? Fido might bark on some interpreting of this poem, if it was not marked18+. lol. Ahh, I need to scroll through Bethune meanings.
February 9th, 2019 05:03
orchidee said:
I\'ve gone up some garden path or summat, and got lost - Bethune? Some University comes up when I google it. I dunno these things! Just as well? Fido might bark on some interpreting of this poem, if it was not marked18+. lol. Ahh, I need to scroll through Bethune meanings.
February 9th, 2019 05:03
Love and Warm Toast
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Neville, that memory will never ever leave you.
February 9th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Neville, that memory will never ever leave you.
February 9th, 2019 01:10
Love and Warm Toast
Caleb.A said:
Lovely write, I now crave a slice of such toast.
February 8th, 2019 10:30
Caleb.A said:
Lovely write, I now crave a slice of such toast.
February 8th, 2019 10:30
Love and Warm Toast
Michael Edwards said:
I just love this - the progression so elegantly yet so simply expressed - into faves.
February 8th, 2019 04:35
Michael Edwards said:
I just love this - the progression so elegantly yet so simply expressed - into faves.
February 8th, 2019 04:35
Love and Warm Toast
dusk arising said:
I\' ve just been enjoying a refreshing cup of viagra tea. It doesn\'t do anything for you sexually but stops your dunked biscuits from going floppy.
I am an occasional toast eater. Your piece has whet my appetite for some .... hmm i\'m almost smelling the stuff.
February 8th, 2019 04:34
dusk arising said:
I\' ve just been enjoying a refreshing cup of viagra tea. It doesn\'t do anything for you sexually but stops your dunked biscuits from going floppy.
I am an occasional toast eater. Your piece has whet my appetite for some .... hmm i\'m almost smelling the stuff.
February 8th, 2019 04:34
Love and Warm Toast
orchidee said:
A lovely write N. I had tea and soggy biccies, made by myself. Erm, not quite the same thing! lol.
February 8th, 2019 04:03
orchidee said:
A lovely write N. I had tea and soggy biccies, made by myself. Erm, not quite the same thing! lol.
February 8th, 2019 04:03
Victims of Indifference
Goldfinch60 said:
That indifference is a strong weapon that those in power apply to those they supposedly work for, but all they want is their own lives in their castles in the clouds and blow the rest of us.
February 8th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
That indifference is a strong weapon that those in power apply to those they supposedly work for, but all they want is their own lives in their castles in the clouds and blow the rest of us.
February 8th, 2019 01:21
Victims of Indifference
Fay Slimm. said:
Labels are often meant to be negative where people who have them attached are not seen to \"fit in\" - - a forceful exposure of labeling and something which I resent too Neville.
February 7th, 2019 09:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Labels are often meant to be negative where people who have them attached are not seen to \"fit in\" - - a forceful exposure of labeling and something which I resent too Neville.
February 7th, 2019 09:47
Victims of Indifference
dusk arising said:
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be cursing the detatched society members we call government for their superior knowledge of how low we bearing the \'hoi polloi\' title live out our existence. A poetic bomb Mr Fawkes?
February 7th, 2019 06:39
dusk arising said:
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be cursing the detatched society members we call government for their superior knowledge of how low we bearing the \'hoi polloi\' title live out our existence. A poetic bomb Mr Fawkes?
February 7th, 2019 06:39
Victims of Indifference
dusk arising said:
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be cursing the detatched society members we call government for their superior knowledge of how low we bearing the \'hoi polloi\' title live out our existence. A poetic bomb Mr Fawkes?
February 7th, 2019 06:10
dusk arising said:
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be cursing the detatched society members we call government for their superior knowledge of how low we bearing the \'hoi polloi\' title live out our existence. A poetic bomb Mr Fawkes?
February 7th, 2019 06:10
Victims of Indifference
Neville said:
it can be anything you so desire... sir..
February 7th, 2019 05:18
Neville said:
it can be anything you so desire... sir..
February 7th, 2019 05:18
Victims of Indifference
orchidee said:
Erm, it has not perceived me brain cells, what \'Latin name\' it is! Should I think more on it?
February 7th, 2019 05:11
orchidee said:
Erm, it has not perceived me brain cells, what \'Latin name\' it is! Should I think more on it?
February 7th, 2019 05:11
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Fay Slimm. said:
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad to catch someone\'s eye - I could not believe that saucy wanton did not know she was being a-watched on that tablecloth - - ha ha your mind weaves a cheeky story really well Neville.
February 6th, 2019 14:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad to catch someone\'s eye - I could not believe that saucy wanton did not know she was being a-watched on that tablecloth - - ha ha your mind weaves a cheeky story really well Neville.
February 6th, 2019 14:47
Once Upon a Tablecloth
dusk arising said:
Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle.
And yea, verily, a most rewarding read. Was that Alice and the march hare peeping from concealment. Were that there was jam upon the chequered blue and white, for thence he would not have held back methinks.
February 6th, 2019 12:43
dusk arising said:
Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle.
And yea, verily, a most rewarding read. Was that Alice and the march hare peeping from concealment. Were that there was jam upon the chequered blue and white, for thence he would not have held back methinks.
February 6th, 2019 12:43
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Lorna said:
ha ha - here\'s to all the wanton hussies - may they be free forever!
February 6th, 2019 06:59
Lorna said:
ha ha - here\'s to all the wanton hussies - may they be free forever!
February 6th, 2019 06:59
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Michael Edwards said:
Sounds idyllic but what about the wine?
February 6th, 2019 04:38
Michael Edwards said:
Sounds idyllic but what about the wine?
February 6th, 2019 04:38
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Neville said:
thanks for visiting orchidee.. she is somebodies wife, I believe.. not mine tho.... oops does that warrant a double mature warning label :)
February 6th, 2019 04:00
Neville said:
thanks for visiting orchidee.. she is somebodies wife, I believe.. not mine tho.... oops does that warrant a double mature warning label :)
February 6th, 2019 04:00
Once Upon a Tablecloth
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Should I meet her? Or is that the wife?!
February 6th, 2019 03:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Should I meet her? Or is that the wife?!
February 6th, 2019 03:53
Jun Kenshi
psychofemale said:
Need a little background on the subject I think....
February 5th, 2019 20:58
psychofemale said:
Need a little background on the subject I think....
February 5th, 2019 20:58
Jun Kenshi
Michael Edwards said:
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39
Michael Edwards said:
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39
Wanting to be Wanted
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, was taken on an awesome ride.
Much appreciated
February 5th, 2019 10:43
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, was taken on an awesome ride.
Much appreciated
February 5th, 2019 10:43
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