Comments received on poems by Neville
Beautiful Bruises
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this warm and intimate expression of love so tenderly worded.
December 2nd, 2018 14:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this warm and intimate expression of love so tenderly worded.
December 2nd, 2018 14:25
Beautiful Bruises
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is really raw. It shows a beautiful and intimate exchange. I didn’t want it to end!
December 2nd, 2018 12:04
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is really raw. It shows a beautiful and intimate exchange. I didn’t want it to end!
December 2nd, 2018 12:04
Beautiful Bruises
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed the write
Memories fade and bruises pale
but scars remain to tell the tale.
December 2nd, 2018 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed the write
Memories fade and bruises pale
but scars remain to tell the tale.
December 2nd, 2018 10:37
Beautiful Bruises
orchidee said:
Ooh, what\'s going on there? Swoon! heehee.
December 2nd, 2018 09:12
orchidee said:
Ooh, what\'s going on there? Swoon! heehee.
December 2nd, 2018 09:12
Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is always there and it can be found in your words. Autumn is a wonderful season, it is my favourite of them all.
December 2nd, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is always there and it can be found in your words. Autumn is a wonderful season, it is my favourite of them all.
December 2nd, 2018 01:14
Autumn
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful words, Neville, and they take us on a journey through your viewpoint of the four seasons. I like your use of slant rhyme teeth/thief and leaf in the verses.
And it\'s great to know you\'ve never been a liar or a thief. :-)
December 1st, 2018 17:00
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful words, Neville, and they take us on a journey through your viewpoint of the four seasons. I like your use of slant rhyme teeth/thief and leaf in the verses.
And it\'s great to know you\'ve never been a liar or a thief. :-)
December 1st, 2018 17:00
Autumn
orchidee said:
This poem did not \'fall\' down on being a good write, N!
December 1st, 2018 07:38
orchidee said:
This poem did not \'fall\' down on being a good write, N!
December 1st, 2018 07:38
The Long Drop
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
In short, you are my worst nightmare. LOL!
Great poem, Neville, with lots of food for thought. :-)
November 30th, 2018 17:02
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
In short, you are my worst nightmare. LOL!
Great poem, Neville, with lots of food for thought. :-)
November 30th, 2018 17:02
The Long Drop
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can play such awful tricks but those tricks (fears) when faced just add to your experience.
November 30th, 2018 03:21
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can play such awful tricks but those tricks (fears) when faced just add to your experience.
November 30th, 2018 03:21
The Long Drop
orchidee said:
This about someone having a bad hair-day?! heehee.
November 30th, 2018 03:04
orchidee said:
This about someone having a bad hair-day?! heehee.
November 30th, 2018 03:04
A Travelling Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville, those miracles are still there.
November 30th, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville, those miracles are still there.
November 30th, 2018 02:07
A Travelling Man
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Makes me think of \"Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus.\"
Excellent poem and it gives the reader the perspective from both sides and ultimately melds into the G rating. LOL!
Great job, Neville. :-)
November 29th, 2018 17:03
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Makes me think of \"Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus.\"
Excellent poem and it gives the reader the perspective from both sides and ultimately melds into the G rating. LOL!
Great job, Neville. :-)
November 29th, 2018 17:03
A Travelling Man
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for him swanning about, while she\'s left grafting at home! lol. Does he bake some bread too?
I will have to swoon at the end of this poem. heehee.
November 29th, 2018 15:40
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for him swanning about, while she\'s left grafting at home! lol. Does he bake some bread too?
I will have to swoon at the end of this poem. heehee.
November 29th, 2018 15:40
A Travelling Man
Michael Edwards said:
Super write although I would like to think miracles still do happen.
November 29th, 2018 13:20
Michael Edwards said:
Super write although I would like to think miracles still do happen.
November 29th, 2018 13:20
Appetite for Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words in our lives are so important to many of us.
November 29th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words in our lives are so important to many of us.
November 29th, 2018 01:55
Appetite for Words
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
No abibliophobia here!
As a logophile, I very much enjoyed reading your poem!
Check out the acrostic Goldfinch60 posted today...if you haven’t already. You May find it interesting.
~Laura~
November 28th, 2018 18:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
No abibliophobia here!
As a logophile, I very much enjoyed reading your poem!
Check out the acrostic Goldfinch60 posted today...if you haven’t already. You May find it interesting.
~Laura~
November 28th, 2018 18:43
Appetite for Words
Neville said:
In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N
November 28th, 2018 18:14
Neville said:
In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N
November 28th, 2018 18:14
When You Were Perfect
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem Neville that cherishes your once lover and trumpets the fact there is no ill will, at least from your standpoint.
Loved the honesty in this write. :-)
November 27th, 2018 15:49
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem Neville that cherishes your once lover and trumpets the fact there is no ill will, at least from your standpoint.
Loved the honesty in this write. :-)
November 27th, 2018 15:49
When You Were Perfect
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I was perfect all the time - still am! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots. I best eat some humble pie!
November 27th, 2018 02:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I was perfect all the time - still am! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots. I best eat some humble pie!
November 27th, 2018 02:49
A Certain Distance
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned emotional romantic poem. You\'ve chosen your words wisely and, as a result, capture your readers\' hearts.
Great read, Neville. :-)
November 26th, 2018 17:56
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned emotional romantic poem. You\'ve chosen your words wisely and, as a result, capture your readers\' hearts.
Great read, Neville. :-)
November 26th, 2018 17:56
A Certain Distance
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moments can be so near yet so far apart at the same time.
November 26th, 2018 16:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moments can be so near yet so far apart at the same time.
November 26th, 2018 16:33
Zen Hunting
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Spirit can be fond in many ways. I know that My Spirit is always with me and it is nothing to do with a particular religion. I do hope that you bliss stays with you. Good write.
November 26th, 2018 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Spirit can be fond in many ways. I know that My Spirit is always with me and it is nothing to do with a particular religion. I do hope that you bliss stays with you. Good write.
November 26th, 2018 01:11
Zen Hunting
Neville said:
What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts forever though, does it......Many thank you\'s on their way... N
November 25th, 2018 15:41
Neville said:
What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts forever though, does it......Many thank you\'s on their way... N
November 25th, 2018 15:41
The Pyramid of Longing
Neville said:
That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my friend... N
November 25th, 2018 04:30
Neville said:
That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my friend... N
November 25th, 2018 04:30
The Pyramid of Longing
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love increase like the pyramid that you have created. Clever write Neville.
November 25th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love increase like the pyramid that you have created. Clever write Neville.
November 25th, 2018 01:22
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