Comments received on poems by Neville



A Handful of Nightingales
Goldfinch60 said:

Pretending to be awake in some of the sermons that I have sat through has become quite an art.

January 3rd, 2019 02:03

A Handful of Nightingales
Michael Edwards said:

In a bizarre sort of way I rather think your poem and mine his morning sort of go together even if they are not all there. Mt widest hand span is 8.24ins - how many will that hold?
Actually I really did enjoy the read.

January 3rd, 2019 01:31

Just Take a Look
Goldfinch60 said:

The lady dances throughout our thoughts and feelings.

January 2nd, 2019 16:05

Just Take a Look
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! She really gets around.

The wit is obvious in this poem, written by a talented author. The last verse is truly captivating. Thanks for posting. :-)

January 2nd, 2019 12:26

Just Take a Look
Michael Edwards said:

And long may she smile - i think she might also be the subject of some of my writes - an enigmatic lass no less

January 2nd, 2019 11:10

Just Take a Look
dusk arising said:

Truly enigmatic and very cleverly done.

January 2nd, 2019 09:59

Just Take a Look
sylviasearcher said:

It was the poem: to whom these words belong.

Noone claimed them ironically. I think they were written before I became an enigma so I forgot to pirouette!

January 2nd, 2019 05:24

Just Take a Look
orchidee said:

Should I meet here? Will it be swoony?! Do I need to take Fido, me watchdog, with me?! lol

January 2nd, 2019 05:23

Just Take a Look
sylviasearcher said:

Is the ending an invite to collaborate?

I thought sir did not participate in collaboration?

I like the mystery you create with this one. She seems enigmatic.

One day I would like to be an enigma.

January 2nd, 2019 05:12

Dali’s Eyes
sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful.
Dreamy.

January 2nd, 2019 02:01

Dali’s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

To dream of being in the world of your favourites in the world of art(s) is so awe inspiring.
I feel this way when I see William Holman-Hunt\'s works.

January 2nd, 2019 01:20

Dali’s Eyes
MendedFences27 said:

A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath away\" from all who read it. If Dali were a poet, who would he be? My choice is E. E. Cummings. Inspired by your poem. Thank you. - Phil A..

January 1st, 2019 20:31

Dali’s Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:

Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both inspirational to help such as me see the elusive in-betweeness of genius.

January 1st, 2019 14:10

Dali’s Eyes
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

January 1st, 2019 10:45

Dali’s Eyes
Kevin Michael Bloor said:

I like your aspirations. I don\'t know much about the Dali, but I have read my Hemingway and yes; what a writer! Nice concise poem, love your structure, by the way...

January 1st, 2019 10:28

Dali’s Eyes
dusk arising said:

LOL every writer dreams of such wishes.
But better to see and be who you are and who you will become in your own right (write).
Both the greats u mention had , their inspiration and maybe wished they could emulate them. They didn\'t though.


January 1st, 2019 06:52

Dali’s Eyes
Michael Edwards said:

I go weak at the knees at the mention of Dali - my all time favourite and hope to return to his museum in Figures in the next year or so - often his work is underrated in the glare of his eccentricity but heigh. This is a great write Neville.

January 1st, 2019 06:48

Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:

You have just proved what I have said to many people, when you see a reflection it is not the truth.
Clever write Neville.

January 1st, 2019 02:19

Reflections
dusk arising said:

Now come on! If you wanted to do a proper reflection it should have been left to right as normal but upside down! ... just kidding.
Nice one, i\'ve not seen this done before.

December 31st, 2018 10:24

Reflections
Michael Edwards said:

A great look back. have a great New Year.

December 31st, 2018 07:32

Reflections
orchidee said:

Bonjour! is that a bit of French in your poem? Ahh, it\'s all reflected. A good write N. Looks like Welsh.
Oops a \'t\' has not been \'reflected\' at the end. lol.

December 31st, 2018 07:16

Rough Sketched & True
Goldfinch60 said:

From that sketch a wonderful painting will emerge to complement your words.

December 31st, 2018 01:32

Rough Sketched & True
MendedFences27 said:

Whether it becomes a completed painting or not it will leave a vision in my eyes. A well drawn scene, painted with the poet\'s brush. Words of brilliant color describe the artist\'s eye. A delightful read. - Phil A.

December 30th, 2018 18:37

Rough Sketched & True
Neville said:

then I shall thank you again

December 30th, 2018 12:25

Rough Sketched & True
sylviasearcher said:

And I thought it was because their flowers were bright yellow!

I never liked the term though.

December 30th, 2018 08:23

Rough Sketched & True
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. We should put the dandelion and burdock down then!

December 30th, 2018 08:16

Rough Sketched & True
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud cheers for this lyrical walk around countryside with an artistic eye for what is delightful. An inspiring read Neville.

December 30th, 2018 05:33

Secrets of the Field
MendedFences27 said:

A field filled with feelings. A harvest of Love and rape. A history of death erased, replaced perhaps with new life. A terrific write softly spoken. - Phil A.

December 29th, 2018 19:02

Wind Washed & Flying
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Spectacular! MY favorite stanza...

\"Wait though

Much like the haunted cry of gulls

Neath rocky crags and outposts

Wind washed these eyes and ears of mine do

Catch you flying\"

Kurt

December 29th, 2018 11:46

Wind Washed & Flying
sylviasearcher said:

And it was Avery beautiful cusscword free poem too.

A sensory delight!

December 29th, 2018 05:32



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