Comments received on poems by Neville
Boudoir
MendedFences27 said:
What a room, what a scene, What a moment in time. Youth squanders many a moment, but some last forever.
Your poem stirs the imagination. Does such a room truly exist? The lady in question cannot be questioned. The \"Boudoir\" is unique as is your poem. Loved the colorations in it. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:56
MendedFences27 said:
What a room, what a scene, What a moment in time. Youth squanders many a moment, but some last forever.
Your poem stirs the imagination. Does such a room truly exist? The lady in question cannot be questioned. The \"Boudoir\" is unique as is your poem. Loved the colorations in it. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:56
Boudoir
Michael Edwards said:
Never seen lacquered walls and can only guess at the type of women - super write nonetheless.
March 8th, 2019 08:32
Michael Edwards said:
Never seen lacquered walls and can only guess at the type of women - super write nonetheless.
March 8th, 2019 08:32
Boudoir
dusk arising said:
Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel where he played piano. Strangely he never talked about the ladies or his wage.
Getting shackled for shekels isn\'t the same as real love but... in for a penny, in for a pounding.
March 8th, 2019 06:05
dusk arising said:
Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel where he played piano. Strangely he never talked about the ladies or his wage.
Getting shackled for shekels isn\'t the same as real love but... in for a penny, in for a pounding.
March 8th, 2019 06:05
Boudoir
dusk arising said:
Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel where he played piano. Strangely he never talked about the ladies or his wage.
Getting shackled for shekels isn\'t the same as real love but... in for a penny, in for a pounding.
March 8th, 2019 05:50
dusk arising said:
Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel where he played piano. Strangely he never talked about the ladies or his wage.
Getting shackled for shekels isn\'t the same as real love but... in for a penny, in for a pounding.
March 8th, 2019 05:50
Boudoir
orchidee said:
Ooh what am I doing creeping around, having a look in this boudoir? What would I know of such places? I\'m a dark horse, remember. A sneaky \'Tee Hee\'.
March 8th, 2019 05:01
orchidee said:
Ooh what am I doing creeping around, having a look in this boudoir? What would I know of such places? I\'m a dark horse, remember. A sneaky \'Tee Hee\'.
March 8th, 2019 05:01
Boudoir
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene - penned so well has a certain poignancy added as a finalé -- those kinda women are best left within lacquered walls doncha think? A tender feel despite losing naiveity in this clever write Nev. .
March 8th, 2019 04:45
Fay Slimm. said:
The scene - penned so well has a certain poignancy added as a finalé -- those kinda women are best left within lacquered walls doncha think? A tender feel despite losing naiveity in this clever write Nev. .
March 8th, 2019 04:45
Prolet
Neville said:
I feel that I should write something profound, like how these words have let you down.. but I know it has nothing to do with these words
I would like to say things will improve and you will fell joy again and pleasure etc
However, I know that I can only hope such things.... And true...
March 7th, 2019 15:42
Neville said:
I feel that I should write something profound, like how these words have let you down.. but I know it has nothing to do with these words
I would like to say things will improve and you will fell joy again and pleasure etc
However, I know that I can only hope such things.... And true...
March 7th, 2019 15:42
Prolet
sylviasearcher said:
I used to get excited at the first sight of little green buds on trees.
I used to wonder who else noticed them and felt the same funny little joy.
It used to remind me of renewal and hope and beauty and wonder. Of Mother Nature and her endless rhythms and endurance, painting her beauty across the seasons, in spite of the state of the world.
Some how I just can’t feel it right now, but I tried and I felt a little bit sad for the loss of it.
March 7th, 2019 15:28
sylviasearcher said:
I used to get excited at the first sight of little green buds on trees.
I used to wonder who else noticed them and felt the same funny little joy.
It used to remind me of renewal and hope and beauty and wonder. Of Mother Nature and her endless rhythms and endurance, painting her beauty across the seasons, in spite of the state of the world.
Some how I just can’t feel it right now, but I tried and I felt a little bit sad for the loss of it.
March 7th, 2019 15:28
Prolet
dusk arising said:
And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on.
A fitting tribute to this rebirth time of year.
March 7th, 2019 15:18
dusk arising said:
And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on.
A fitting tribute to this rebirth time of year.
March 7th, 2019 15:18
Prolet
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m currently working with a rescue German Shepherd and today he gave me a lot of jip trying to rush me out the door! I will admit I couldn\'t blame him.... Spring is here!
March 7th, 2019 07:27
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m currently working with a rescue German Shepherd and today he gave me a lot of jip trying to rush me out the door! I will admit I couldn\'t blame him.... Spring is here!
March 7th, 2019 07:27
Prolet
JaydeVictoria said:
A wonderful write as always, thoroughly enjoyed Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:25
JaydeVictoria said:
A wonderful write as always, thoroughly enjoyed Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:25
Prolet
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspirational my friend to say the least. - -this revered tribute to something called Spring - - or be it Prolet - tis versed to perfection in this special invite to stay with the beauty of here and now.
March 7th, 2019 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspirational my friend to say the least. - -this revered tribute to something called Spring - - or be it Prolet - tis versed to perfection in this special invite to stay with the beauty of here and now.
March 7th, 2019 05:27
Prolet
orchidee said:
A fine write. Glad ya told me that N! If I hadn\'t have known, I would have thought Prolet was a Property Service Agency - really exists - based on pro-let?
March 7th, 2019 05:22
orchidee said:
A fine write. Glad ya told me that N! If I hadn\'t have known, I would have thought Prolet was a Property Service Agency - really exists - based on pro-let?
March 7th, 2019 05:22
Precious Scars
Suresh said:
Loves scars are deeper
But those who mend them are even more precious
March 6th, 2019 17:36
Suresh said:
Loves scars are deeper
But those who mend them are even more precious
March 6th, 2019 17:36
Precious Scars
Goldfinch60 said:
Those scars can be so meaningful within your life.
March 6th, 2019 15:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those scars can be so meaningful within your life.
March 6th, 2019 15:55
Precious Scars
orchidee said:
Good write N. Can ya mend those fossils that I dropped at an antiques show?!
March 6th, 2019 09:18
orchidee said:
Good write N. Can ya mend those fossils that I dropped at an antiques show?!
March 6th, 2019 09:18
Precious Scars
Michael Edwards said:
My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had a kidney removed - it saved her life but left her with a 14ins scar - that scar is the most beautiful reminder of how blessed we both are.
A precious scar as reminded by this super little write.
March 6th, 2019 09:18
Michael Edwards said:
My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had a kidney removed - it saved her life but left her with a 14ins scar - that scar is the most beautiful reminder of how blessed we both are.
A precious scar as reminded by this super little write.
March 6th, 2019 09:18
Precious Scars
dusk arising said:
OK, so you noticed i\'m a broken old croc. I didn\'t get this cracked up without working at it you know.
Your words reminded me of the piece \'scars\' i published last month. Whereas my suggestion was we conceal the damage life has inflicted upon us, kintsugi is a proudly displayed scar adding or even validating the age or preciousness of the article.
Gosh you must be hideous! LOL
March 6th, 2019 06:41
dusk arising said:
OK, so you noticed i\'m a broken old croc. I didn\'t get this cracked up without working at it you know.
Your words reminded me of the piece \'scars\' i published last month. Whereas my suggestion was we conceal the damage life has inflicted upon us, kintsugi is a proudly displayed scar adding or even validating the age or preciousness of the article.
Gosh you must be hideous! LOL
March 6th, 2019 06:41
Precious Scars
Fay Slimm. said:
ah I meant to mention how apt the illustration of Jananese Kintsugi - - another something new learnt today...
March 6th, 2019 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
ah I meant to mention how apt the illustration of Jananese Kintsugi - - another something new learnt today...
March 6th, 2019 05:30
Precious Scars
Fay Slimm. said:
Your loving assurance of the value of scars when faced and borne comes through these three tender and informative lines - - a revealing write about love my friend.
March 6th, 2019 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Your loving assurance of the value of scars when faced and borne comes through these three tender and informative lines - - a revealing write about love my friend.
March 6th, 2019 05:28
What We Have Here
Goldfinch60 said:
That tree is for us all to embrace. Race you to the top.
March 6th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That tree is for us all to embrace. Race you to the top.
March 6th, 2019 01:11
What We Have Here
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll keep a low profile - now where\'s that pen and paper.
March 5th, 2019 14:33
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll keep a low profile - now where\'s that pen and paper.
March 5th, 2019 14:33
What We Have Here
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Out of the park with this one my friend. I\'m climbing and stopping to embrace along the way ;)
March 5th, 2019 08:48
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Out of the park with this one my friend. I\'m climbing and stopping to embrace along the way ;)
March 5th, 2019 08:48
I Am That Guy
Poetic Dan said:
I love what you have done and dam did my trigger go off when you spiked the drink....
Look forward to the next ton under your belt!
March 5th, 2019 08:40
Poetic Dan said:
I love what you have done and dam did my trigger go off when you spiked the drink....
Look forward to the next ton under your belt!
March 5th, 2019 08:40
What We Have Here
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A bit like a mirror for me... I\'m a creature of mood.
You do have some brill ideas.
March 5th, 2019 05:51
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A bit like a mirror for me... I\'m a creature of mood.
You do have some brill ideas.
March 5th, 2019 05:51
What We Have Here
Fay Slimm. said:
Good message my friend with quite a few moves toward getting a grip on black loneliness. I second that - yes indeed.
March 5th, 2019 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Good message my friend with quite a few moves toward getting a grip on black loneliness. I second that - yes indeed.
March 5th, 2019 05:34
What We Have Here
orchidee said:
I\'m getting off me horse then - me \'high\' moral hobby-horse! lol. It\'s called Trigger.
March 5th, 2019 05:15
orchidee said:
I\'m getting off me horse then - me \'high\' moral hobby-horse! lol. It\'s called Trigger.
March 5th, 2019 05:15
I Am That Guy
MendedFences27 said:
Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All things are possible, the limits are those of the universe. Creativity is the brush in the hand of the artist or the pen with the poet. Your poem offers a walk on the wild side of creativity. We can be evil or good, human or other, we can relate truth or falsehoods, the possible or the fantastic. We can frighten or sooth, express beauty or ugliness.
Awesome write, thoughtful and provoking. You are mayhem waiting to happen. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:08
MendedFences27 said:
Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All things are possible, the limits are those of the universe. Creativity is the brush in the hand of the artist or the pen with the poet. Your poem offers a walk on the wild side of creativity. We can be evil or good, human or other, we can relate truth or falsehoods, the possible or the fantastic. We can frighten or sooth, express beauty or ugliness.
Awesome write, thoughtful and provoking. You are mayhem waiting to happen. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2019 13:08
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