Comments received on poems by Neville
Poppies
Suresh said:
With each line I envision the color you so engender. A nice light read.
April 8th, 2019 11:36
Suresh said:
With each line I envision the color you so engender. A nice light read.
April 8th, 2019 11:36
Poppies
Neville said:
Thank you dear Fay, as always, your reasoned responses, both apt and appreciated.... Neville
April 8th, 2019 05:58
Neville said:
Thank you dear Fay, as always, your reasoned responses, both apt and appreciated.... Neville
April 8th, 2019 05:58
Poppies
Fay Slimm. said:
The bearers of so many emotions are poppies and what they have become - you verse them well here along with the reminders of what colour can do to our psyche - crimson shouts out for worldwide remembrance of battlefields past and present. That meaningful sighting of a few early arrivals inspired a fine poem my friend.
April 8th, 2019 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
The bearers of so many emotions are poppies and what they have become - you verse them well here along with the reminders of what colour can do to our psyche - crimson shouts out for worldwide remembrance of battlefields past and present. That meaningful sighting of a few early arrivals inspired a fine poem my friend.
April 8th, 2019 05:38
The Freedom of Slaves
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Woof! Not cos it should be marked 18+, but Fido barked cos I\'m about to sing: \'Born Free...….!\'
All are in slavery to my singing. heehee.
April 8th, 2019 02:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Woof! Not cos it should be marked 18+, but Fido barked cos I\'m about to sing: \'Born Free...….!\'
All are in slavery to my singing. heehee.
April 8th, 2019 02:09
The Freedom of Slaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, those eagles show the freedom and peacefulness that could be everybody\'s.
April 8th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, those eagles show the freedom and peacefulness that could be everybody\'s.
April 8th, 2019 00:33
The Freedom of Slaves
dusk arising said:
Slaves are human beings and like you and me and our loved ones have human awareness, desisres, needs and hopes.
Your writing today is so powerful a reminder of injustices in our world. Love the way you have started with such an innocent mind picture drawing your reader in and finally zapping with a cruel reality.
April 8th, 2019 00:21
dusk arising said:
Slaves are human beings and like you and me and our loved ones have human awareness, desisres, needs and hopes.
Your writing today is so powerful a reminder of injustices in our world. Love the way you have started with such an innocent mind picture drawing your reader in and finally zapping with a cruel reality.
April 8th, 2019 00:21
The Freedom of Slaves
Fay Slimm. said:
The wonder of flying to freedom never ceases to draw eyes of the captured I imagine - - a great tribute to the majesty of birds like the eagle who shows the way to the stars will always be there. x
April 7th, 2019 16:37
Fay Slimm. said:
The wonder of flying to freedom never ceases to draw eyes of the captured I imagine - - a great tribute to the majesty of birds like the eagle who shows the way to the stars will always be there. x
April 7th, 2019 16:37
The Freedom of Slaves
Poetic Dan said:
What a brilliant way to end my day
Thinking of that feeling will be mine, one day.
Thank you very much
April 7th, 2019 16:15
Poetic Dan said:
What a brilliant way to end my day
Thinking of that feeling will be mine, one day.
Thank you very much
April 7th, 2019 16:15
The Freedom of Slaves
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the great song, BORN FREE...
“Born free and life is worth living
But only worth living
‘Cause you’re born”
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2019 13:38
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the great song, BORN FREE...
“Born free and life is worth living
But only worth living
‘Cause you’re born”
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2019 13:38
The Freedom of Slaves
Suresh said:
For a moment I thought you were going somewhere else (eagles circling usually means death) till I got to the last line.
To be eternally free is everyone\'s BIRTH RIGHT.
Individuals labor is for sale, but not the individual itself.
April 7th, 2019 11:53
Suresh said:
For a moment I thought you were going somewhere else (eagles circling usually means death) till I got to the last line.
To be eternally free is everyone\'s BIRTH RIGHT.
Individuals labor is for sale, but not the individual itself.
April 7th, 2019 11:53
Ballerina
orchidee said:
Reminds me of \'Dance of the sugar plum fairy\' by someone or another. I\'m not \'into\' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.
April 6th, 2019 07:07
orchidee said:
Reminds me of \'Dance of the sugar plum fairy\' by someone or another. I\'m not \'into\' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.
April 6th, 2019 07:07
Ballerina
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.
April 6th, 2019 04:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.
April 6th, 2019 04:28
Our Lady of the Harbour
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write and take if histiric value.
April 5th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write and take if histiric value.
April 5th, 2019 14:52
Our Lady of the Harbour
Suresh said:
Much has been written, but you captured it well.
April 5th, 2019 11:08
Suresh said:
Much has been written, but you captured it well.
April 5th, 2019 11:08
Our Lady of the Harbour
Michael Edwards said:
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26
Our Lady of the Harbour
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written! Very evocative and enjoyable read.
April 5th, 2019 10:23
Our Lady of the Harbour
dusk arising said:
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those must have been for all humanity.
April 5th, 2019 09:14
dusk arising said:
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those must have been for all humanity.
April 5th, 2019 09:14
Our Lady of the Harbour
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Ahh, I can\'t meet her then? Did you meet her in person?! Such a short life. I\'ve not brushed up on her history.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Our Lady of the Harbour
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode brazenly draped in Saint George - her fate was a scorcher but lest we forget this verse raises issues we may never have known.An engaging write Nev.
April 5th, 2019 03:59
A Thirst Well Quenched
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
SerenWise said:
I really enjoyed this, simplicity in perfection.
April 4th, 2019 12:41
Read Yourself
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
Poetic Dan said:
This has just blown me away!
It\'s What I feel every time I come and share with you and all of these other magnificent souls on this site but with this one, I would suit you sir!
Hats off!
Much appreciated
With love and respect
April 4th, 2019 08:36
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