Comments received on poems by Neville
I Am That Guy
dusk arising said:
I could cuss you but you\'re the guy i always wanted to be?
The guy i always wanted to be was a jailbird who seemed able to hold the devotion of the most desireable ladies i happened to fail to woo.
Owlish, i was a twit to woo.
March 4th, 2019 03:16
dusk arising said:
I could cuss you but you\'re the guy i always wanted to be?
The guy i always wanted to be was a jailbird who seemed able to hold the devotion of the most desireable ladies i happened to fail to woo.
Owlish, i was a twit to woo.
March 4th, 2019 03:16
I Am That Guy
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, our imagination holds so many people within it it that are not ourselves. Congrats on reaching one hundred.
March 4th, 2019 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, our imagination holds so many people within it it that are not ourselves. Congrats on reaching one hundred.
March 4th, 2019 02:43
I Am That Guy
sylviasearcher said:
Yes an interesting read,
Tis true, just because we write it does not make it who we are.
I am that girl,
Dust
Maybe
March 4th, 2019 02:39
sylviasearcher said:
Yes an interesting read,
Tis true, just because we write it does not make it who we are.
I am that girl,
Dust
Maybe
March 4th, 2019 02:39
I Am That Guy
orchidee said:
I wondered who that guy was - now I know! I thought it was Joe Bloggs, until I read your poem N.
March 4th, 2019 02:38
orchidee said:
I wondered who that guy was - now I know! I thought it was Joe Bloggs, until I read your poem N.
March 4th, 2019 02:38
I Am That Guy
Michael Edwards said:
This is what I mean by a \'good poet\' - one who can write from imagination and doesn\'t rely solely on personal experiences. another great posting Neville and congrats on your 100th posting.
March 4th, 2019 02:18
Michael Edwards said:
This is what I mean by a \'good poet\' - one who can write from imagination and doesn\'t rely solely on personal experiences. another great posting Neville and congrats on your 100th posting.
March 4th, 2019 02:18
Paper Cuts
Amherrera1190 said:
Very nice write the title pulled me in and i was very pleased.awesome write.
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March 4th, 2019 01:51
Amherrera1190 said:
Very nice write the title pulled me in and i was very pleased.awesome write.
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March 4th, 2019 01:51
Paper Cuts
FineB said:
Thanks Neville.
An excellent poem.
We must preserve paper more to prevent the pain.
Keep writing Fine B.
March 4th, 2019 01:19
FineB said:
Thanks Neville.
An excellent poem.
We must preserve paper more to prevent the pain.
Keep writing Fine B.
March 4th, 2019 01:19
Paper Cuts
MendedFences27 said:
Faceless, paper dolls are truly dangerous to a man\'s heart. However, with a face, some flesh, and a name, they can hurt even more. Great little thought provoking ditty. Loved it.- Phil A.
March 3rd, 2019 16:48
MendedFences27 said:
Faceless, paper dolls are truly dangerous to a man\'s heart. However, with a face, some flesh, and a name, they can hurt even more. Great little thought provoking ditty. Loved it.- Phil A.
March 3rd, 2019 16:48
Paper Cuts
Michael Edwards said:
Can\'t they just - makes me think of Russian dolls - so full of themselves - love the shorty .
March 3rd, 2019 12:19
Michael Edwards said:
Can\'t they just - makes me think of Russian dolls - so full of themselves - love the shorty .
March 3rd, 2019 12:19
Paper Cuts
dusk arising said:
Yes we do see them along the high street, in their chains of magazine picture devotion. Hearts bleeding from failure to connect with the rest of humanity..... but some of them look marvellous.
March 3rd, 2019 12:09
dusk arising said:
Yes we do see them along the high street, in their chains of magazine picture devotion. Hearts bleeding from failure to connect with the rest of humanity..... but some of them look marvellous.
March 3rd, 2019 12:09
Paper Cuts
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts that close should never feel more than a whisper away when apart.......... another good slice of food for thought Nev.
March 3rd, 2019 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts that close should never feel more than a whisper away when apart.......... another good slice of food for thought Nev.
March 3rd, 2019 06:58
Paper Cuts
sylviasearcher said:
Faceless.
A painful metaphor.
But maybe Iām just having a grey paper day...
March 3rd, 2019 06:21
sylviasearcher said:
Faceless.
A painful metaphor.
But maybe Iām just having a grey paper day...
March 3rd, 2019 06:21
The Last Hurt
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write Neville, those hurts can really affect us but I am so glad that it was a while ago and your life appears to be back on a smooth course. We all have those hurts but we also have had the time to get over them.
March 3rd, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write Neville, those hurts can really affect us but I am so glad that it was a while ago and your life appears to be back on a smooth course. We all have those hurts but we also have had the time to get over them.
March 3rd, 2019 01:49
The Last Hurt
MendedFences27 said:
Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a lifelong mark. We try to remove it, to hide it, to rid ourselves of it in any way possible Yet it remains. Knowledge, that the other will one day suffer the same fate lets us balance out our lives. At least the knife gets removed. Nice poem of recovery this. Enjoyed its small taste of vengeance. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2019 21:18
MendedFences27 said:
Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a lifelong mark. We try to remove it, to hide it, to rid ourselves of it in any way possible Yet it remains. Knowledge, that the other will one day suffer the same fate lets us balance out our lives. At least the knife gets removed. Nice poem of recovery this. Enjoyed its small taste of vengeance. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2019 21:18
The Last Hurt
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow- - this must come from the core of one who has suffered real hurt that takes a while to get over, if ever - - I know - - - - only a quick read for me at the weekend but those last couple of lines went close to the cause of a breaking or broken relationship and stung me to comment. Brave and honest those lines my friend
March 2nd, 2019 10:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow- - this must come from the core of one who has suffered real hurt that takes a while to get over, if ever - - I know - - - - only a quick read for me at the weekend but those last couple of lines went close to the cause of a breaking or broken relationship and stung me to comment. Brave and honest those lines my friend
March 2nd, 2019 10:32
The Last Hurt
orchidee said:
I\'ll hurt ya - continually. Hurt ya ears that is. But how? Well, I\'ll just sing. Then they\'ll hurt me in return, so I\'ll never be able to sing again. I can\'t give details of what they\'ll do to me. I will only make myself swoon.
I just popped in to post this waffle. lol
March 2nd, 2019 09:12
orchidee said:
I\'ll hurt ya - continually. Hurt ya ears that is. But how? Well, I\'ll just sing. Then they\'ll hurt me in return, so I\'ll never be able to sing again. I can\'t give details of what they\'ll do to me. I will only make myself swoon.
I just popped in to post this waffle. lol
March 2nd, 2019 09:12
The Last Hurt
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I just love the last line. M
March 2nd, 2019 06:53
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I just love the last line. M
March 2nd, 2019 06:53
The Last Hurt
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville although I always find the pain we have (When we have it) it the worst pain in the world don\'t you?
I guess there is always someone worse off than us?
March 2nd, 2019 05:04
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville although I always find the pain we have (When we have it) it the worst pain in the world don\'t you?
I guess there is always someone worse off than us?
March 2nd, 2019 05:04
The Last Hurt
sylviasearcher said:
Ouch?
This is what I say to myself every morning lol.
Not sure I got it though?
As if it is about being hurt I should not make light of it.
Sorry,
I always struggle with vengeance and retribution though. I would never want another to feel misery I would always try and absolve that as much as I could. Even if that person causes me abject misery.
Of course then there is another way I could read this too.
I think I have a hangover, sorry.
March 2nd, 2019 05:00
sylviasearcher said:
Ouch?
This is what I say to myself every morning lol.
Not sure I got it though?
As if it is about being hurt I should not make light of it.
Sorry,
I always struggle with vengeance and retribution though. I would never want another to feel misery I would always try and absolve that as much as I could. Even if that person causes me abject misery.
Of course then there is another way I could read this too.
I think I have a hangover, sorry.
March 2nd, 2019 05:00
E.U.
dusk arising said:
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to read and think about, loved the balcony quip.
March 1st, 2019 10:27
dusk arising said:
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to read and think about, loved the balcony quip.
March 1st, 2019 10:27
E.U.
Michael Edwards said:
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and especialy so the invite.. great read.
March 1st, 2019 09:08
Michael Edwards said:
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and especialy so the invite.. great read.
March 1st, 2019 09:08
E.U.
orchidee said:
This poem anything to do with sheep - ewe?! (groans at corny joke). I gotta laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does. heehee! Oh, delusions of grandeur - there ya go!
March 1st, 2019 06:59
orchidee said:
This poem anything to do with sheep - ewe?! (groans at corny joke). I gotta laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does. heehee! Oh, delusions of grandeur - there ya go!
March 1st, 2019 06:59
E.U.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Watch Vladimir ride a horse topless?
NO
Just me then!
ORKWaaard!
March 1st, 2019 06:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Watch Vladimir ride a horse topless?
NO
Just me then!
ORKWaaard!
March 1st, 2019 06:08
E.U.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41
E.U.
orchidee said:
I\'ll be in Cuckoo Land with all that Rakia and stuff! No change there then?! lol.
March 1st, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
I\'ll be in Cuckoo Land with all that Rakia and stuff! No change there then?! lol.
March 1st, 2019 03:07
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