Comments received on poems by Neville



Fleeced
Bella Shepard said:

Memories and emotions, inextricably linked. They run the gamut of who we are, and how we deal with them. Your poem is such food for thought, for those days will come when we\'re lost in them.

March 4th, 2024 14:00

Recall
Cloie said:

Your poem beautifully reflects on the act of reminiscing. It\'s a poignant reminder to cherish our memories and reflect on our past. Well said!

March 4th, 2024 13:01

Recall
Teddy.15 said:

A painful bump at the very least 🌹

March 4th, 2024 12:26

Recall
Accidental Poet said:

Just another case of the future bumping into the past. 😉👍

March 4th, 2024 10:34

Recall
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot? to look back on what might have been but wasn\'t....I don\'t feel that\'s much fun at all.....unless, it has to be admitted, there are certain situations (no details lest it gives orchi the vapours) where an extension of the reality in my head is simple straightforward and with no complicated aftertaste.

March 4th, 2024 06:26

Recall
orchidee said:

You could walk backwards and be able to see those pleasant things of the past in front of you! lol.

March 4th, 2024 05:48

Entres
Goldfinch60 said:

It all depends how big a breakfast you have Neville. LOL

Andy

March 4th, 2024 02:14

Entres
Thomas W Case said:

Sharp and vivid imagery. Powerful work my friend.

March 3rd, 2024 17:40

Entres
orchidee said:

Is it the Honey Monster? No it\'s..... oh you know by now! lol.

March 3rd, 2024 11:40

Entres
Accidental Poet said:

Taking the time difference between us, it\'s your mid-day. And fortunately it\'s my morning as I couldn\'t wait for my mid-day. 😉👍

March 3rd, 2024 11:35

Entres
Teddy.15 said:

I could actually name so may chocolate treats I so do miss being away from home and how many of them I\'d love to eat right now, I\'d also settle for the milk tray man too. lol oh Nev, my nostalgia of home just kicked in all it took was the on tray 🌹 thank you.

March 3rd, 2024 09:45

Where Truth Lies
rhmn_7 said:

Having even a glimmer of truth inside, is better than nothing..

March 3rd, 2024 07:47

Entres
Dove said:

The Chocolate Monster always gets me.

March 3rd, 2024 07:43

Entres
Cloie said:

Your poem paints a vivid picture of the sky and its slow, deliberate movements. The imagery of monsters emerging at midnight is striking and adds depth to the piece. The connection between these images and the hunger by midday is thought-provoking. It is such a great piece with a unique perspective!

March 3rd, 2024 05:34

Where Truth Lies
Goldfinch60 said:

We seem not to be able to hear much truth in the world today Neville.

Andy

March 3rd, 2024 02:13

Where Truth Lies
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

March 2nd, 2024 23:20

Almost Famous Last Words
Dove said:

So sad, I wondered who passed away... Perhaps it was just time hitting the hay.😎

March 2nd, 2024 17:22

My Very Dearest Sigmund
Dove said:

I read Sig in High School. The keyboard music definitely more soothing

March 2nd, 2024 17:19

Arc
Dove said:

Awesome! I picture pink puckered pretty lips

March 2nd, 2024 17:14

Where Truth Lies
Dove said:

Oh my!

March 2nd, 2024 17:13

Where Truth Lies
Parisab said:

I think that I found a treasure in your poem : in the last line: there’s not a lot of it to hide
There isn’t much absolute truth left I’m afraid…

March 2nd, 2024 11:46

Arc
Cloie said:

Your poem beautifully captures the elegance of a smile! It\'s so warm and positive. Great job!

March 2nd, 2024 11:01

Arc
Rocky Lagou said:

YES!

March 2nd, 2024 09:19

Where Truth Lies
Cassie58 said:

Whose truth. Mine , yours, theirs? Truth is so subjective. Just read an article across different newspapers. Everyone has their own version of the truth. As for being eaten from the inside, oh no no no. I don’t carry guilt well, better to be honest. Such a good quality. Nice bit of thought provoking brevity for a Saturday afternoon Neville. Make sure yours is a good one.

March 2nd, 2024 09:03

Where Truth Lies
Teddy.15 said:

Well as I am a woman who has always believed in justice and honesty I say there\'s a lot of dishonesty and lack of morals right now in our world. Great subject. 🌹

March 2nd, 2024 06:42

Where Truth Lies
Doggerel Dave said:

But (good start) all truth inside would be subjective, and thus oftimes not worth outing anyway.....unless, of course, I\'ve got something to say....
I\'m enjoying these shorties, Neville (but that\'s very subjective...so don\'t let it influence you.)...........

March 2nd, 2024 06:07

Where Truth Lies
orchidee said:

You know I will say this - it eats KP\'s botox from inside. That\'s a lot of truth! lol.

March 2nd, 2024 05:52

Arc
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful and most understand of words Neville.

Andy

March 2nd, 2024 02:08

Arc
Accidental Poet said:

A description I\'m very familiar with and lives within me. Beautifully put N. 🌹

March 2nd, 2024 01:47

Arc
Doggerel Dave said:

Garn - the air\'s just misdirection, \'twas the smile wot got you going....

The gentlest of poems.

March 2nd, 2024 00:06



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