Comments received on poems by Neville
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Christina8 said:
It doesn\'t take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
October 10th, 2023 08:26
Christina8 said:
It doesn\'t take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
October 10th, 2023 08:26
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Natalie Gladmir said:
I see how it boiled in your soul. It\'s a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I\'m wrong.
October 10th, 2023 05:31
Natalie Gladmir said:
I see how it boiled in your soul. It\'s a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I\'m wrong.
October 10th, 2023 05:31
No Contest
Goldfinch60 said:
We all struggle sometimes but we always find a way to move on Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We all struggle sometimes but we always find a way to move on Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:44
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful descriptive words Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful descriptive words Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:42
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Neville, in time all will be found.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Neville, in time all will be found.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:30
Scammed
MendedFences27 said:
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever happened to morals. Maybe we all need to do more than wish and hope, maybe then this will end, and maybe yours is the first step in the right direction. A great statement of truth. - Phil A.
October 9th, 2023 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever happened to morals. Maybe we all need to do more than wish and hope, maybe then this will end, and maybe yours is the first step in the right direction. A great statement of truth. - Phil A.
October 9th, 2023 15:03
Scammed
Christina8 said:
Preach! There is definitely too much hypocrisy and lies these days..although I am lucky not to count myself among those being scammed. Great piece!
October 9th, 2023 11:59
Christina8 said:
Preach! There is definitely too much hypocrisy and lies these days..although I am lucky not to count myself among those being scammed. Great piece!
October 9th, 2023 11:59
Scammed
L. B. Mek said:
It\'s all a scamm
we knew it at first arrival
that\'s why we screeched loud
and had ourselves a real good cry
(your words voiced my
mood of impotent rage
Hyung)
hope you n yours have a peaceful week, cherished Poet
(my 🙏 especially with the young ones)
🍻 cheers my friend, to you for being YOU!
October 9th, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
It\'s all a scamm
we knew it at first arrival
that\'s why we screeched loud
and had ourselves a real good cry
(your words voiced my
mood of impotent rage
Hyung)
hope you n yours have a peaceful week, cherished Poet
(my 🙏 especially with the young ones)
🍻 cheers my friend, to you for being YOU!
October 9th, 2023 03:53
No Contest
L. B. Mek said:
they call it a fence
I call it my survival rope
they call it running
I call it seeing another day
they call it scared
I call it wise..
(still each to their own
an eye for an eye
is a great way to live
in a world
blinded by hate..)
October 9th, 2023 02:06
L. B. Mek said:
they call it a fence
I call it my survival rope
they call it running
I call it seeing another day
they call it scared
I call it wise..
(still each to their own
an eye for an eye
is a great way to live
in a world
blinded by hate..)
October 9th, 2023 02:06
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
L. B. Mek said:
I have seen a few abandoned wrecks
trains and ships, in my time
always a tinge of dramatic sorrow
in the scene
and the lost past it conveyed to me..
yet, still
it\'s the abandon human faces
at the bus stops, supermarkets
and shuffling along bravely
on those busy highstreets
that give me nightmares
and remind me
of what awaits, most of us
at that cruel twist of fate
in our days of laboured breath
dim minds
and yet, still inside
is that caged child
wishing.. hoping.. regretting
waiting...
(simply BRILIANT Hyung
you already know how much
I love your subtle writes!!)
thank you, this has made my morning
October 9th, 2023 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
I have seen a few abandoned wrecks
trains and ships, in my time
always a tinge of dramatic sorrow
in the scene
and the lost past it conveyed to me..
yet, still
it\'s the abandon human faces
at the bus stops, supermarkets
and shuffling along bravely
on those busy highstreets
that give me nightmares
and remind me
of what awaits, most of us
at that cruel twist of fate
in our days of laboured breath
dim minds
and yet, still inside
is that caged child
wishing.. hoping.. regretting
waiting...
(simply BRILIANT Hyung
you already know how much
I love your subtle writes!!)
thank you, this has made my morning
October 9th, 2023 02:02
No Contest
MendedFences27 said:
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat. Seems like a plan, if everyone else agrees to lose. Maybe some things are best left to their natural outcomes.
A very thought provoking poem. It stirs the reader to ponder many things; Wisdom, conquest, winning, losing, self, empathy, and morality. I believe you\'ll get varied opinions on this one. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 15:38
MendedFences27 said:
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat. Seems like a plan, if everyone else agrees to lose. Maybe some things are best left to their natural outcomes.
A very thought provoking poem. It stirs the reader to ponder many things; Wisdom, conquest, winning, losing, self, empathy, and morality. I believe you\'ll get varied opinions on this one. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 15:38
No Contest
Bella Shepard said:
I think I would say, the battles you pick in life should be worth the effort. Very thought provoking of you my friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
I think I would say, the battles you pick in life should be worth the effort. Very thought provoking of you my friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:52
No Contest
Christina8 said:
I really like this message. Like me with my anxiety, i must overcome. Do I let anything defeat me? Not usually lol. i know this write was not about me but you did an awesome job!
October 8th, 2023 08:04
Christina8 said:
I really like this message. Like me with my anxiety, i must overcome. Do I let anything defeat me? Not usually lol. i know this write was not about me but you did an awesome job!
October 8th, 2023 08:04
No Contest
LIZ said:
To attemp to defeat by force is often useless!! A difficult struggle of power! Our choice though!! 💜💜💜
October 8th, 2023 04:16
LIZ said:
To attemp to defeat by force is often useless!! A difficult struggle of power! Our choice though!! 💜💜💜
October 8th, 2023 04:16
No Contest
Teddy.15 said:
Put two types of crazy in a boxing ring and no one wins ❤️
October 8th, 2023 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Put two types of crazy in a boxing ring and no one wins ❤️
October 8th, 2023 03:01
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less value these days. it\'s tough to lose another wooden ship, for they\'ll not be building any more. I guess she was \"waiting on the tide\" for quite some time. A sad but beautiful poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2023 21:20
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less value these days. it\'s tough to lose another wooden ship, for they\'ll not be building any more. I guess she was \"waiting on the tide\" for quite some time. A sad but beautiful poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2023 21:20
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Bobby O said:
Splintered Oaken Seams
The whole body of the piece was sublime and it fed quality that surged and culminated with that wonderfully descriptive phrase that painted in 3D
October 7th, 2023 15:53
Bobby O said:
Splintered Oaken Seams
The whole body of the piece was sublime and it fed quality that surged and culminated with that wonderfully descriptive phrase that painted in 3D
October 7th, 2023 15:53
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Teddy.15 said:
Epic scribbles wow dear Nev, your imagery is outstanding loved this imagery so very detailed
but the finding
that really matters,
isn’t it my darling ..
For instance,
take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ❤️
October 7th, 2023 15:37
Teddy.15 said:
Epic scribbles wow dear Nev, your imagery is outstanding loved this imagery so very detailed
but the finding
that really matters,
isn’t it my darling ..
For instance,
take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ❤️
October 7th, 2023 15:37
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Accidental Poet said:
That\'s just like the feeling of falling in love N. You know you\'re about to walk through that door even though you cant see the door. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:55
Accidental Poet said:
That\'s just like the feeling of falling in love N. You know you\'re about to walk through that door even though you cant see the door. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:55
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Accidental Poet said:
But like an old truck rusting away in a field, it will take on artistic look and may someday even be the subject of oil paintings. Finely penned write N. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:46
Accidental Poet said:
But like an old truck rusting away in a field, it will take on artistic look and may someday even be the subject of oil paintings. Finely penned write N. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:46
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Bella Shepard said:
As with any carcass, the bones are be picked clean, and the
remains, a sad memory of what once was. A woeful tale, beautifully told dear friend!
October 7th, 2023 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
As with any carcass, the bones are be picked clean, and the
remains, a sad memory of what once was. A woeful tale, beautifully told dear friend!
October 7th, 2023 12:19
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Michaelpoet said:
This is some awesome writing.
October 7th, 2023 07:23
Michaelpoet said:
This is some awesome writing.
October 7th, 2023 07:23
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