Comments received on poems by Neville
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich and complex with progress and change conveyed by strong structure...Yes - got this one Neville.
April 28th, 2024 06:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich and complex with progress and change conveyed by strong structure...Yes - got this one Neville.
April 28th, 2024 06:52
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
Teddy.15 said:
Truth and time oh so very beautiful dear Nev, we certainly cannot hide from that. 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
Truth and time oh so very beautiful dear Nev, we certainly cannot hide from that. 🌹
April 28th, 2024 03:38
The Cruelest of All Bed Partners
orchidee said:
Good write N.
It\'s surprising what some poets on here know about KP.
Ahh, so you know that her botox cracks?! lol. Last line of verse 2.
April 28th, 2024 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
It\'s surprising what some poets on here know about KP.
Ahh, so you know that her botox cracks?! lol. Last line of verse 2.
April 28th, 2024 02:47
Time to Call Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Waking up from dreams can leave you in a wonderful place Neville.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Waking up from dreams can leave you in a wonderful place Neville.
Andy
April 28th, 2024 02:21
Time to Call Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Patchouli over there is, given the distances involved, no substitute for a poem lost, which could have, perhaps, transcended time and space, thus reaching here in all its innate perfection...and so on.... got any spare commas anyone? 😊
April 27th, 2024 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Patchouli over there is, given the distances involved, no substitute for a poem lost, which could have, perhaps, transcended time and space, thus reaching here in all its innate perfection...and so on.... got any spare commas anyone? 😊
April 27th, 2024 19:10
Time to Call Time
Teddy.15 said:
That certainly happened to me, but sometimes we have to let them go, most annoying but just a fact of musing with the tired mind. Wonderful 🌹
April 27th, 2024 15:03
Teddy.15 said:
That certainly happened to me, but sometimes we have to let them go, most annoying but just a fact of musing with the tired mind. Wonderful 🌹
April 27th, 2024 15:03
Time to Call Time
Bella Shepard said:
As they say \"Dreams are the windows of our souls\", and they can be can be very powerful. Sometimes it seems we don\'t write the poems at all, we simply take dictation. Sleep well my friend and cherish that wonderful stage of sleep, for it leads to your wonderful words.
April 27th, 2024 13:37
Bella Shepard said:
As they say \"Dreams are the windows of our souls\", and they can be can be very powerful. Sometimes it seems we don\'t write the poems at all, we simply take dictation. Sleep well my friend and cherish that wonderful stage of sleep, for it leads to your wonderful words.
April 27th, 2024 13:37
Time to Call Time
orchidee said:
How was it when ya felt a piggy paw of mine across your tightly closed eyes?! lol.
April 27th, 2024 09:45
orchidee said:
How was it when ya felt a piggy paw of mine across your tightly closed eyes?! lol.
April 27th, 2024 09:45
Time to Call Time
Accidental Poet said:
Time in or time out, Its well penned N. 👍
April 27th, 2024 07:18
Accidental Poet said:
Time in or time out, Its well penned N. 👍
April 27th, 2024 07:18
Time to Call Time
Cassie58 said:
A poem may be lost, but in return the cool touch of a palm, across closed tired eyes giving them light. What’s not to like about that?
what a blessing that could be after a stressful day
patchouli, wards off negative energy and attracts positive spirits of love and peace,
it has healing properties
maybe a good night’s sleep was in store
Have a good day Neville, on this wet April Saturday. Love the scent of patchouli. .
April 27th, 2024 05:03
Cassie58 said:
A poem may be lost, but in return the cool touch of a palm, across closed tired eyes giving them light. What’s not to like about that?
what a blessing that could be after a stressful day
patchouli, wards off negative energy and attracts positive spirits of love and peace,
it has healing properties
maybe a good night’s sleep was in store
Have a good day Neville, on this wet April Saturday. Love the scent of patchouli. .
April 27th, 2024 05:03
Wild Garlic
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of the senses. I wouldn\'t be without garlic. Tremendous work.
April 26th, 2024 15:34
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of the senses. I wouldn\'t be without garlic. Tremendous work.
April 26th, 2024 15:34
Wild Garlic
Bella Shepard said:
Nature gives us such simple pleasures, growing in our own backyards. Add your wild garlic to some dandelion greens and voila! There\'s also nothing like catching the smell of wild garlic as you mow the lawn. That omlette sounds delicious, as is this poem is my friend.
April 26th, 2024 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
Nature gives us such simple pleasures, growing in our own backyards. Add your wild garlic to some dandelion greens and voila! There\'s also nothing like catching the smell of wild garlic as you mow the lawn. That omlette sounds delicious, as is this poem is my friend.
April 26th, 2024 14:00
Wild Garlic
Doggerel Dave said:
Gets the good old digestive juices flowing nicely Neville.
April 26th, 2024 06:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Gets the good old digestive juices flowing nicely Neville.
April 26th, 2024 06:17
Wild Garlic
orchidee said:
Gives me a sort of hot flush - maybe swoon - if I have too much of it! KP adds 10 cloves of it to my every evening meal when she cooks. lol.
April 26th, 2024 02:33
orchidee said:
Gives me a sort of hot flush - maybe swoon - if I have too much of it! KP adds 10 cloves of it to my every evening meal when she cooks. lol.
April 26th, 2024 02:33
Wild Garlic
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing quite like freedom of choice my friend. 😊👍
April 26th, 2024 02:14
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing quite like freedom of choice my friend. 😊👍
April 26th, 2024 02:14
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Parisab said:
You have seen and served far and wide while keeping the heart of a poet…Your poems are still a breath of fresh air:)
April 26th, 2024 00:49
Parisab said:
You have seen and served far and wide while keeping the heart of a poet…Your poems are still a breath of fresh air:)
April 26th, 2024 00:49
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work Neville.
April 25th, 2024 21:56
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work Neville.
April 25th, 2024 21:56
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Teddy.15 said:
Living on the edge, I guess you wouldn\'t be you if you didn\'t dear Nev. Fab adventures. 🌹
April 25th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
Living on the edge, I guess you wouldn\'t be you if you didn\'t dear Nev. Fab adventures. 🌹
April 25th, 2024 14:08
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations Neville. Don\'t know how to phrase this tactfully (definitely a deficiency - see recent entry above somewhere), but why the hell do you bother yourself with erotica, when you could be laying out those experiences one by one here??
Or are they reserved for your memoir?
April 25th, 2024 06:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations Neville. Don\'t know how to phrase this tactfully (definitely a deficiency - see recent entry above somewhere), but why the hell do you bother yourself with erotica, when you could be laying out those experiences one by one here??
Or are they reserved for your memoir?
April 25th, 2024 06:34
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Accidental Poet said:
You may also be called a Frequent Flyer N. 😊
April 25th, 2024 05:29
Accidental Poet said:
You may also be called a Frequent Flyer N. 😊
April 25th, 2024 05:29
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Cassie58 said:
You have led a full life and experienced much. You have put yourself at times in danger to help others. Most worthy. I wouldn’t concern yourself too much if you need a little help on the admin side. If you aren’t great at IT, better leave it to someone who won’t make a disaster of it:) I like that name Sponge, it suits you in the African context. A man who clearly enjoys being a traveller. Have a sunny day Neville.
April 25th, 2024 03:14
Cassie58 said:
You have led a full life and experienced much. You have put yourself at times in danger to help others. Most worthy. I wouldn’t concern yourself too much if you need a little help on the admin side. If you aren’t great at IT, better leave it to someone who won’t make a disaster of it:) I like that name Sponge, it suits you in the African context. A man who clearly enjoys being a traveller. Have a sunny day Neville.
April 25th, 2024 03:14
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
orchidee said:
I been travelling far and wide with many adventures too - to the Co-op in the next road! lol.
April 25th, 2024 02:36
orchidee said:
I been travelling far and wide with many adventures too - to the Co-op in the next road! lol.
April 25th, 2024 02:36
My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters
Goldfinch60 said:
A life full of seeing bad times Neville but I bet you came out of each one a stronger wiser person.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
A life full of seeing bad times Neville but I bet you came out of each one a stronger wiser person.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:49
She Loved Him Because ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville, I know how this feels.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville, I know how this feels.
Andy
April 25th, 2024 01:24
She Loved Him Because ..
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. It is superb work and very well crafted. Beautiful.
April 24th, 2024 12:12
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. It is superb work and very well crafted. Beautiful.
April 24th, 2024 12:12
She Loved Him Because ..
Accidental Poet said:
Another example of why you are the professional you are N. 😉👍
April 24th, 2024 08:41
Accidental Poet said:
Another example of why you are the professional you are N. 😉👍
April 24th, 2024 08:41
She Loved Him Because ..
Alan R said:
....he listened
to the words of
young children and was
never afraid
to admit on occasion he
spoke to trees....
Wish to meet more people who are like this, in this lifetime!
April 24th, 2024 07:13
Alan R said:
....he listened
to the words of
young children and was
never afraid
to admit on occasion he
spoke to trees....
Wish to meet more people who are like this, in this lifetime!
April 24th, 2024 07:13
She Loved Him Because ..
Neville said:
That would make you one of them three quarters empty kinda fun guys who enjoy nothing more than bouncing around in purpose built rubber rooms now .wouldn’t it .. maybe .. thanks muchly ..
April 24th, 2024 06:57
Neville said:
That would make you one of them three quarters empty kinda fun guys who enjoy nothing more than bouncing around in purpose built rubber rooms now .wouldn’t it .. maybe .. thanks muchly ..
April 24th, 2024 06:57
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