Comments received on poems by Neville



For All Those Once Beautiful
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

February 27th, 2024 13:10

For All Those Once Beautiful
Teddy.15 said:

lol definitely humourous. Yeh tell me about it 🤣 I used to walk the catwalk I mean walk the cat lol ok on a serious note those who believe they are gorgeous are usually the ones who are not! That\'s what I believe anyway. A wonderful provoking piece here dear Nev. 🌹

February 27th, 2024 12:15

For All Those Once Beautiful
Christina8 said:

Wonderfully said!! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.....

February 27th, 2024 10:33

For All Those Once Beautiful
Cassie58 said:

Youth thankfully does not define beauty. There is beauty everywhere for those who look and inner beauty lasts forever. What’s more I recognize it when I come across it.

Wisdom comes with age.

I’ll always raise my glass to you Neville.

February 27th, 2024 10:18

For All Those Once Beautiful
Accidental Poet said:

Yes, but beauty within one\'s heart is eternal. Well penned my gifted friend. 👍

February 27th, 2024 09:26

For All Those Once Beautiful
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP was once beautiful, but I can\'t think when! lol.

February 27th, 2024 09:14

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Goldfinch60 said:

Your father will always be with you Neville as mine is with me.

Andy

February 27th, 2024 02:22

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Bella Shepard said:

This poem requires words it is hard to find, to tell you how deeply moving it is. I sense a selfless man, who loved you unconditionally as you gazed into those eyes, a very special smile he tried to forge, just for you. I visited my father in the hospital on a Saturday morning, and that afternoon he died alone, in a hospital bed. I envy you those moments you had and cherish. God bless dear Nev.

February 26th, 2024 17:12

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Teddy.15 said:

Very beautiful. Your last lines really powerful and speak by themselves 🌹

February 26th, 2024 15:19

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Accidental Poet said:

A very emotional write here N. Brings back my own memories of both my parents passing. 🫂

February 26th, 2024 09:53

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
orchidee said:

Yes, a moving piece N.
Meanwhile - I wish KP would move - to the Moon permanently. lol.

February 26th, 2024 09:08

575
Neville said:


Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …

February 26th, 2024 08:30

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Tom Dylan said:

A moving piece, Neville.

February 26th, 2024 08:10

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Cassie58 said:

Now you’ve gone and done it! Started the water works off in the company of rain on the window pane. This piece apart from being incredibly moving is also inspirational poetry. I feel sad for you too and you have me thinking about my own father and how much I miss him. Good morning my friend.

February 26th, 2024 06:29

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Doggerel Dave said:

Takes more than a clinician\'s view of the world to cope with....
A very pain filled piece, Neville.

February 26th, 2024 05:06

575
Goldfinch60 said:

I know you still are
Your words bring joy to us all
Just keep on looking

Andy

February 26th, 2024 02:23

575
Bella Shepard said:

\"I grieve, therefore I am\". We must have both sides to feel deeply, and to know what love truly is. Beautifully said in 3 perfect lines!

February 25th, 2024 18:01

575
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

February 25th, 2024 16:45

No Comment
Neilton said:

a very sensitive topic..Amazing work!!

February 25th, 2024 15:09

Three Summers
Parisab said:

One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title and the heat the poem gives off, poetic friend.

February 25th, 2024 11:32

575
Accidental Poet said:

An interesting scribble
Far removed from any quibble
A poet not in sight will belittle
Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍

February 25th, 2024 11:24

575
Neville said:


Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …

February 25th, 2024 10:59

575
Christina8 said:

Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!

February 25th, 2024 10:14

Three Summers
rhmn_7 said:

Maybe the next summer is already upon us, (hopefully).

February 25th, 2024 09:22

575
Cassie58 said:

A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.

February 25th, 2024 06:58

575
Teddy.15 said:

Painful. 🌹 Yet a perfect 575 ❤️

February 25th, 2024 05:06

575
Doggerel Dave said:

Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....

February 25th, 2024 04:57

575
orchidee said:

I\'m afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They\'ve all cracked! lol.

February 25th, 2024 04:53

Three Summers
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a shame but I am sure you found a new life Neville.

Andy

February 25th, 2024 02:00

Three Summers
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work. Powerful.

February 24th, 2024 21:39



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