Comments received on poems by Neville
A Day Out in The Country
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful scene beset with such tragedy that did not need to be, but for ignorance. Well told my friend.
June 9th, 2024 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful scene beset with such tragedy that did not need to be, but for ignorance. Well told my friend.
June 9th, 2024 10:54
Unstruck
Bella Shepard said:
Breathtaking dear friend! I love the beautiful presentation of this poem, and the unstruck chord resonates throughout, in music of the heart.
June 9th, 2024 10:45
Bella Shepard said:
Breathtaking dear friend! I love the beautiful presentation of this poem, and the unstruck chord resonates throughout, in music of the heart.
June 9th, 2024 10:45
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
Neilton said:
An amazing poem indeed! Excellent work Neville!
June 9th, 2024 10:38
Neilton said:
An amazing poem indeed! Excellent work Neville!
June 9th, 2024 10:38
Perfect By Chance
Bella Shepard said:
By retracing our steps we find a logical explanation for what has come to pass. What a lovely word \"Chance\" can be when in the end it leads Kismet. Beautifully short, but oh so beautiful.
June 9th, 2024 10:37
Bella Shepard said:
By retracing our steps we find a logical explanation for what has come to pass. What a lovely word \"Chance\" can be when in the end it leads Kismet. Beautifully short, but oh so beautiful.
June 9th, 2024 10:37
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
sorenbarrett said:
I have spent thousands of hours with Rorschach cards but not nearly as many as with clouds or grain in wood. Neville this poem is great in its view of how we impose on ambiguous items our own interpretations. I have found this most true of poems as well as intended meaning becomes distorted or reinterpreted in unintended ways in others minds. A great write Neville
June 9th, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
I have spent thousands of hours with Rorschach cards but not nearly as many as with clouds or grain in wood. Neville this poem is great in its view of how we impose on ambiguous items our own interpretations. I have found this most true of poems as well as intended meaning becomes distorted or reinterpreted in unintended ways in others minds. A great write Neville
June 9th, 2024 04:33
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
orchidee said:
I knows Rorschach. He didn\'t live very long, sadly.
June 9th, 2024 03:34
orchidee said:
I knows Rorschach. He didn\'t live very long, sadly.
June 9th, 2024 03:34
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP never leaves me - boohoo I say - not in sadness, but in agony that she stays! lol.
June 8th, 2024 12:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP never leaves me - boohoo I say - not in sadness, but in agony that she stays! lol.
June 8th, 2024 12:55
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are all we have to take along with us. All Sanyasis in life, beggars with only our memories to carry. A most beautiful tribute Neville
June 8th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are all we have to take along with us. All Sanyasis in life, beggars with only our memories to carry. A most beautiful tribute Neville
June 8th, 2024 05:14
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 02:11
Sucker Punched
Goldfinch60 said:
One must be very careful where one places their hands Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
One must be very careful where one places their hands Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 01:49
Sucker Punched
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep I got one of them, possibly slightly (but not much) lighter. A lesson learnt very early. The current permission/consent movement is still trying to catch up!
June 7th, 2024 23:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep I got one of them, possibly slightly (but not much) lighter. A lesson learnt very early. The current permission/consent movement is still trying to catch up!
June 7th, 2024 23:56
Sucker Punched
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical. I\'m dealing with writer\'s groups, far far away and they have that kind of reaction and I didn\'t even touch them there. Lol
June 7th, 2024 11:36
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical. I\'m dealing with writer\'s groups, far far away and they have that kind of reaction and I didn\'t even touch them there. Lol
June 7th, 2024 11:36
Sucker Punched
orchidee said:
Woof! Now you\'ve been and done it, say Fido to me.
I wasn\'t offended. How dare I delete your comments except unwittingly. lol. Sincere apologies, grovel, grovel, and all that guff!
June 7th, 2024 10:51
orchidee said:
Woof! Now you\'ve been and done it, say Fido to me.
I wasn\'t offended. How dare I delete your comments except unwittingly. lol. Sincere apologies, grovel, grovel, and all that guff!
June 7th, 2024 10:51
Sucker Punched
orchidee said:
Oops, deleted your comment somehow - your reply to me - while trying to delete an empty \'comments\' box of my own.
You commented something like \'I don\'t want to \'go there\'.
Who can bear it! lol.
June 7th, 2024 10:50
orchidee said:
Oops, deleted your comment somehow - your reply to me - while trying to delete an empty \'comments\' box of my own.
You commented something like \'I don\'t want to \'go there\'.
Who can bear it! lol.
June 7th, 2024 10:50
Sucker Punched
Christina8 said:
Ow, guess you\'ve learned a lesson there....very good write!
June 7th, 2024 09:28
Christina8 said:
Ow, guess you\'ve learned a lesson there....very good write!
June 7th, 2024 09:28
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Goldfinch60 said:
May each day be filled with love and harmony Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May each day be filled with love and harmony Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:15
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Cassie58 said:
As night slides into a brand new day. You paint a canvas here of both shadow and light. I saw wet cobblestones and amber lights before the rising of the sun. I saw closed doors and tasted sea salt. You create a familiar ambience of a fishing town. So visual.
June 6th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
As night slides into a brand new day. You paint a canvas here of both shadow and light. I saw wet cobblestones and amber lights before the rising of the sun. I saw closed doors and tasted sea salt. You create a familiar ambience of a fishing town. So visual.
June 6th, 2024 11:20
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You paint this scene well. Great work.
June 6th, 2024 07:35
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You paint this scene well. Great work.
June 6th, 2024 07:35
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Bobby O said:
My friend, I really really like this one. The juxtaposition , the Yin Yang of all , have a starring role. It seems that you say to us that if we just wait, we get to taste both , live for a time in each , and that’s ok , for the completeness defines an authentic world , no matter how we fall on any specific day. The spectral harrier that is without judgement , the night insists not only a shadow upon all but also demands to hand the baton to create next whether it’s our chance to claim joy or be in line waiting to be hanged the inevitability of next is the dynamic reward.
June 6th, 2024 05:05
Bobby O said:
My friend, I really really like this one. The juxtaposition , the Yin Yang of all , have a starring role. It seems that you say to us that if we just wait, we get to taste both , live for a time in each , and that’s ok , for the completeness defines an authentic world , no matter how we fall on any specific day. The spectral harrier that is without judgement , the night insists not only a shadow upon all but also demands to hand the baton to create next whether it’s our chance to claim joy or be in line waiting to be hanged the inevitability of next is the dynamic reward.
June 6th, 2024 05:05
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
My poem goes - and then KP awoke to a new day - summer or whatever season - and asked for more money from me for botox! lol.
June 6th, 2024 01:50
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
My poem goes - and then KP awoke to a new day - summer or whatever season - and asked for more money from me for botox! lol.
June 6th, 2024 01:50
Excess Baggage
Goldfinch60 said:
That hold must be emptied and good things put in it Neville.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That hold must be emptied and good things put in it Neville.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:39
Excess Baggage
orchidee said:
You know the excess baggage KP has now - it\'s on her person. A word starting with B. Rhymes with \'clocks\'. lol.
June 5th, 2024 02:13
orchidee said:
You know the excess baggage KP has now - it\'s on her person. A word starting with B. Rhymes with \'clocks\'. lol.
June 5th, 2024 02:13
Excess Baggage
Doggerel Dave said:
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations, Doc.
June 5th, 2024 01:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations, Doc.
June 5th, 2024 01:52
Excess Baggage
2781 said:
Lucky for me I didn\'t make the first comment-as usual I was off coarse.
June 5th, 2024 01:40
2781 said:
Lucky for me I didn\'t make the first comment-as usual I was off coarse.
June 5th, 2024 01:40
Excess Baggage
Alan R said:
Damn straight you describe the struggle really well, I read it in the context of a fresh trauma....
June 5th, 2024 01:18
Alan R said:
Damn straight you describe the struggle really well, I read it in the context of a fresh trauma....
June 5th, 2024 01:18
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