Comments received on poems by Neville
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Teddy.15 said:
Well I would hope that its \"I love you\" but then again I\'m a romantic teddy lol ❤️
October 3rd, 2023 00:38
Teddy.15 said:
Well I would hope that its \"I love you\" but then again I\'m a romantic teddy lol ❤️
October 3rd, 2023 00:38
The Map
orchidee said:
And - you got that map? where ya going? when will ya back? And will ya have time to even get there, after wasting time reading my daft questions! lol.
October 2nd, 2023 11:56
orchidee said:
And - you got that map? where ya going? when will ya back? And will ya have time to even get there, after wasting time reading my daft questions! lol.
October 2nd, 2023 11:56
The Map
L. B. Mek said:
\'When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..\'
but that six-pack laughter legacy
of those good times you shared
remains, beneath life\'s fat debris
should chance ever afford you
a reason, to do a few sit-ups
in anticipation of love, revisiting
again...
I am such a a spoilt fan, dear Poet supreme
Thank you! Hyung
(Hope you and yours have a peaceful week) 🍻
October 2nd, 2023 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..\'
but that six-pack laughter legacy
of those good times you shared
remains, beneath life\'s fat debris
should chance ever afford you
a reason, to do a few sit-ups
in anticipation of love, revisiting
again...
I am such a a spoilt fan, dear Poet supreme
Thank you! Hyung
(Hope you and yours have a peaceful week) 🍻
October 2nd, 2023 04:25
Talk About Stupid
L. B. Mek said:
many a perfume company
have to take accountability
for their manslaughter
of shattered hearts, all over the world
...
\'and that\'s all
I will say bout thaaaaat\'
in the wise words of Gump
October 2nd, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
many a perfume company
have to take accountability
for their manslaughter
of shattered hearts, all over the world
...
\'and that\'s all
I will say bout thaaaaat\'
in the wise words of Gump
October 2nd, 2023 04:15
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed Hyung
it\'s sobering how centuries later
your words mirror and shatter
those heart-breaking words
of Elizabeth browning:
\'Do ye hear the children weeping, O my brothers,
Ere the sorrow comes with years ?
They are leaning their young heads against their mothers, —
And that cannot stop their tears.\'
(from \'The cry of the Children\')
I can find a way, to come to terms
with that thread of genesis causality
as our reality
if, our cruel universe
would just
leave the Children alone!!!!!!!!
it is the most morbid of perverse
to hurt something so fragile
and pure of heart
I will NEVER, EVER understand...
(I hope that brave smiling princess
and her parents are holding-on strong..
always in my thoughts)
October 2nd, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed Hyung
it\'s sobering how centuries later
your words mirror and shatter
those heart-breaking words
of Elizabeth browning:
\'Do ye hear the children weeping, O my brothers,
Ere the sorrow comes with years ?
They are leaning their young heads against their mothers, —
And that cannot stop their tears.\'
(from \'The cry of the Children\')
I can find a way, to come to terms
with that thread of genesis causality
as our reality
if, our cruel universe
would just
leave the Children alone!!!!!!!!
it is the most morbid of perverse
to hurt something so fragile
and pure of heart
I will NEVER, EVER understand...
(I hope that brave smiling princess
and her parents are holding-on strong..
always in my thoughts)
October 2nd, 2023 04:12
The Map
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame those times never lasted Neville, I do hope they do one day.
Andy
October 2nd, 2023 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame those times never lasted Neville, I do hope they do one day.
Andy
October 2nd, 2023 03:27
The Map
Teddy.15 said:
Pulling on my heart strings dearest Nev. This is beautiful and so emotional of lost love. ❤️
October 2nd, 2023 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
Pulling on my heart strings dearest Nev. This is beautiful and so emotional of lost love. ❤️
October 2nd, 2023 03:25
The Map
LIZ said:
Mmmm 😔 but the memories remain? Remember, I\'m that glass half full kind of a person, so as sad as this is....I\'m CHOOSING to look at it as...\"at least I loved\" kind of way? So....Can\'t you still use those memories as a map? Just thinking out loud!! 💜
October 2nd, 2023 03:21
LIZ said:
Mmmm 😔 but the memories remain? Remember, I\'m that glass half full kind of a person, so as sad as this is....I\'m CHOOSING to look at it as...\"at least I loved\" kind of way? So....Can\'t you still use those memories as a map? Just thinking out loud!! 💜
October 2nd, 2023 03:21
Talk About Stupid
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can achieve such wonderful things Neville, all it takes is one spark.
Andy
October 2nd, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can achieve such wonderful things Neville, all it takes is one spark.
Andy
October 2nd, 2023 01:00
Talk About Stupid
Parisab said:
Feels like the first time, everytime, and then you are wiser until the next time. This is what makes your poetry so charming and infectious.
October 1st, 2023 22:54
Parisab said:
Feels like the first time, everytime, and then you are wiser until the next time. This is what makes your poetry so charming and infectious.
October 1st, 2023 22:54
Talk About Stupid
Neville said:
You are the weirdest guinea pig I have ever come across and believe me, I came across loads of em in Peru 🐀🦡🐁
October 1st, 2023 07:57
Neville said:
You are the weirdest guinea pig I have ever come across and believe me, I came across loads of em in Peru 🐀🦡🐁
October 1st, 2023 07:57
Talk About Stupid
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, know the feeling - the smell, taste, and hearing of KP and her botox!
October 1st, 2023 07:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, know the feeling - the smell, taste, and hearing of KP and her botox!
October 1st, 2023 07:27
Talk About Stupid
LIZ said:
Damn Neville!!! I can hear the.....frustration? I\'ll say it again....your titles are gold!!! 💜
October 1st, 2023 03:19
LIZ said:
Damn Neville!!! I can hear the.....frustration? I\'ll say it again....your titles are gold!!! 💜
October 1st, 2023 03:19
Talk About Stupid
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe she was shy? I like this very much dear Nev. ❤️
October 1st, 2023 02:47
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe she was shy? I like this very much dear Nev. ❤️
October 1st, 2023 02:47
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Parisab said:
So hard to read this but too important of a piece to ignore…
October 1st, 2023 01:46
Parisab said:
So hard to read this but too important of a piece to ignore…
October 1st, 2023 01:46
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:12
So Much More Than A Madness
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our fifteen minutes of fame Neville (or is that infamy).
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our fifteen minutes of fame Neville (or is that infamy).
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:02
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Bella Shepard said:
This breaks the heart dear Nev, for those who are used and abused. Very deeply felt.
September 30th, 2023 15:33
Bella Shepard said:
This breaks the heart dear Nev, for those who are used and abused. Very deeply felt.
September 30th, 2023 15:33
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
Christina8 said:
Oh how sad! Very well done N!
September 30th, 2023 08:39
Christina8 said:
Oh how sad! Very well done N!
September 30th, 2023 08:39
So Much More Than A Madness
LIZ said:
Yes indeed! We want to be SEEN...without all the fake sh#$ in between!! 💜
September 29th, 2023 07:08
LIZ said:
Yes indeed! We want to be SEEN...without all the fake sh#$ in between!! 💜
September 29th, 2023 07:08
So Much More Than A Madness
Christina8 said:
This is really great and said with a rawness not often seen...At the end of your poem, I think we all need to be seen and noticed.....really great stuff!
September 29th, 2023 07:01
Christina8 said:
This is really great and said with a rawness not often seen...At the end of your poem, I think we all need to be seen and noticed.....really great stuff!
September 29th, 2023 07:01
So Much More Than A Madness
L. B. Mek said:
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'But refuse
to eat rainbows or play
silly leaving games ..\'
(I think our write\'s are in sync
today
that\'s always a cherished gift)
what can I say Hyung
I simply bow to your superior talent
oh Supreme poet!
humbly (I read and learn)
September 29th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'But refuse
to eat rainbows or play
silly leaving games ..\'
(I think our write\'s are in sync
today
that\'s always a cherished gift)
what can I say Hyung
I simply bow to your superior talent
oh Supreme poet!
humbly (I read and learn)
September 29th, 2023 04:54
In the Wake of a Wish
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate, cherished Poet
How many have inked their regrets
On those clouds of hope
Wishing their heart\'s may be heard
By those they miss the most..
(I really like the simple delivery
as the content and subject
Is already so heavy, your subtlety
At its refined best)
thank you! Hyung
September 29th, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate, cherished Poet
How many have inked their regrets
On those clouds of hope
Wishing their heart\'s may be heard
By those they miss the most..
(I really like the simple delivery
as the content and subject
Is already so heavy, your subtlety
At its refined best)
thank you! Hyung
September 29th, 2023 04:36
So Much More Than A Madness
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I never knew it was 11.45pm now - eh?! 15 mins left.
I was famous in my life for 15 mins (so far). KP was famous for all of her life except 15 seconds - so she says.
September 29th, 2023 03:54
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I never knew it was 11.45pm now - eh?! 15 mins left.
I was famous in my life for 15 mins (so far). KP was famous for all of her life except 15 seconds - so she says.
September 29th, 2023 03:54
So Much More Than A Madness
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Nev, your reflection and pain is raw in this and I have to say your last lines are truly goosebump lines, because we all need to feel noticed at some point. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:27
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Nev, your reflection and pain is raw in this and I have to say your last lines are truly goosebump lines, because we all need to feel noticed at some point. ❤️
September 29th, 2023 03:27
In the Wake of a Wish
Bella Shepard said:
I love the title, it applies both personally and collectively to so many things. Much of life hangs on a wish, \"if only\". Your introspective nature truly shines through these days, and it\'s wonderful.
September 28th, 2023 11:04
Bella Shepard said:
I love the title, it applies both personally and collectively to so many things. Much of life hangs on a wish, \"if only\". Your introspective nature truly shines through these days, and it\'s wonderful.
September 28th, 2023 11:04
Ned’s View
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes I fear we might technoligize ourselves out of existence as homo sapiens. Pyhsicist Alan Lightman suggests we may be evolving into homo techno in the far distant future, and I have to agree with him. We forget that we are part of the natural world, and we will return to it, one way or another. Great write my friend, you touch on the apprehension in all of us.
September 28th, 2023 10:55
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes I fear we might technoligize ourselves out of existence as homo sapiens. Pyhsicist Alan Lightman suggests we may be evolving into homo techno in the far distant future, and I have to agree with him. We forget that we are part of the natural world, and we will return to it, one way or another. Great write my friend, you touch on the apprehension in all of us.
September 28th, 2023 10:55
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