Comments received on poems by Neville



Over Easy
orchidee said:

I might swoon! lol.

July 14th, 2024 01:24

Over Easy
Doggerel Dave said:

Be prepared, that\'s the Girl Guide\'s marching song...
(Apologies to Tom Lehrer..)

July 14th, 2024 01:05

The Way of Us
Thomas W Case said:

You create a mood here. Excellent work.

July 13th, 2024 18:43

The Way of Us
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m a nothing speck in eternity or infinity. Unremembered, unremarkable. But I\'ve largely enjoyed this sliver of experience.
Thanks for this provocation, Neville.....

July 13th, 2024 17:17

The Way of Us
MendedFences27 said:

Someone\'s past, present, and future summed up in three lines. From full, to empty, to remembered. Insightful and wise. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.

July 13th, 2024 15:37

The Way of Us
Accidental Poet said:

Wonderful words of wisdom N. Hindsight is always enlightening. πŸ‘

July 13th, 2024 11:41

The Way of Us
Christina8 said:

I liked this short write...memories are wonderful things too..

July 13th, 2024 11:31

The Way of Us
Bella Shepard said:

The illusion of life is memory, without it we simply \"are\". This one hits a special spot, deeply felt. Great verse my friend!

July 13th, 2024 11:11

For All Those Wearing Pink
Cassie58 said:

Very close to my heart. I count my blessings and am reminded of friends who weren’t so fortunate, and lost out to this awful disease. Your new anthology arrived from Amazon this morning. Yes, I have all eleven. Pleased to support such worthwhile charities Neville.

July 13th, 2024 10:34

The Way of Us
orchidee said:

How was it tomorrow? Eh? I\'m confused of what say it is. lol.

July 13th, 2024 10:23

The Way of Us
2781 said:

It\'s a hard one to like, but I liked it.

July 13th, 2024 09:20

The Way of Us
Tony36 said:

Amazing write

July 13th, 2024 09:14

What Women Want
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. Hysterical work.

July 12th, 2024 18:23

What Women Want
Doggerel Dave said:

Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion, deviant inasmuch as it avoids reality in all manner of ways. What after all is a metaphor other than an attempt to avoid, or make pretty, stark reality?
So take that, Sir!!!!!!!!!


July 12th, 2024 18:19

What Women Want
orchidee said:

I dunno what they want. And I\'m unlikely to find out, being married to KP. lol.

July 12th, 2024 11:26

What Women Want
Accidental Poet said:

Ya know N, I\'ve been contemplating this my whole life. I\'ve come to the conclusion there\'s no single answer. You just have to ask them, \"What do you want?\" πŸ€”

July 12th, 2024 11:03

What Women Want
MendedFences27 said:

Wow! If word gets out about this poem, you may become a lonely man. Regardless of the truth you speak. My take is that deviant poetry is rather common. Most poets leap across boundaries with relish. ( Add a little mustard and you\'ve got a wiener ) Deviant comment.
As regards your poem, it speaks a truth and Wows with the last line. Enjoyed. - Phil A.

July 12th, 2024 08:39

What Women Want
2781 said:

Sounds like fishing in murky waters..

July 12th, 2024 08:14

Temporary Blemishes
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, mate.

July 12th, 2024 06:45

Temporary Blemishes
orchidee said:

Explain no more of that ridge, or I will swoon! lol.

July 12th, 2024 01:22

Temporary Blemishes
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Neville.

Andy

July 12th, 2024 01:20

Temporary Blemishes
Thomas W Case said:

Ah, you devil. Lol. Great work, my friend.

July 11th, 2024 22:58

Temporary Blemishes
Accidental Poet said:

Is it getting hot in here? πŸ€”

July 11th, 2024 22:08

Temporary Blemishes
MendedFences27 said:

Funny how stimulation is often found in the least expected places and moments. We all have such in moments of intimacy and its always a pleasure to recall them. Thanks for pushing the sex button. It was fun. - Phil A.

July 11th, 2024 21:28

Temporary Blemishes
aDarkerMind said:

well that took my mind to a far better place Neville.

come here and shake my hand....

thumbs well and truely up!



July 11th, 2024 15:24

For All Those Wearing Pink
Accidental Poet said:

You know I\'ll take a copy N. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

July 10th, 2024 21:25

Sucker Punched
Thad Wilk said:

OUCh!! πŸ€•
A lesson learned
the hard way!! πŸ˜‚
Thank you for
sharing this
with us today!! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad

July 10th, 2024 14:52

For All Those Wearing Pink
MendedFences27 said:

Have experience both. Will and have donated, this side of the pond. Thanks for caring.

July 10th, 2024 09:40

For All Those Wearing Pink
aDarkerMind said:

a cracking write Neville. and very close to my heart.

good to see you back.

July 10th, 2024 09:04

For All Those Wearing Pink
Tom Dylan said:

A powerful write, and such a good cause.

July 10th, 2024 03:35



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