Comments received on poems by Neville
Excess Baggage
orchidee said:
You know the excess baggage KP has now - it\'s on her person. A word starting with B. Rhymes with \'clocks\'. lol.
June 5th, 2024 02:13
orchidee said:
You know the excess baggage KP has now - it\'s on her person. A word starting with B. Rhymes with \'clocks\'. lol.
June 5th, 2024 02:13
Excess Baggage
Doggerel Dave said:
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations, Doc.
June 5th, 2024 01:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations, Doc.
June 5th, 2024 01:52
Excess Baggage
2781 said:
Lucky for me I didn\'t make the first comment-as usual I was off coarse.
June 5th, 2024 01:40
2781 said:
Lucky for me I didn\'t make the first comment-as usual I was off coarse.
June 5th, 2024 01:40
Excess Baggage
Alan R said:
Damn straight you describe the struggle really well, I read it in the context of a fresh trauma....
June 5th, 2024 01:18
Alan R said:
Damn straight you describe the struggle really well, I read it in the context of a fresh trauma....
June 5th, 2024 01:18
Holocaust
Doggerel Dave said:
Australia, \'\"a harmonious multicultural country\" has its moments of trauma when hostilities break out in other parts of the world. University campuses, given the Israel/Hamas Gaza war are not places anyone could be comfortable with.
As for your title and and the sadness embodied there..... History is full of lies which refuse to be refuted, not only truths.
June 4th, 2024 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Australia, \'\"a harmonious multicultural country\" has its moments of trauma when hostilities break out in other parts of the world. University campuses, given the Israel/Hamas Gaza war are not places anyone could be comfortable with.
As for your title and and the sadness embodied there..... History is full of lies which refuse to be refuted, not only truths.
June 4th, 2024 20:43
Holocaust
orchidee said:
There\'s the chance of forgiveness for everyone, but who could possibly say the death penalty was not right for Nazi murderers? All evil ones day will come - sooner or later.
Old Testament times were harsh - a life for a life - or should that be \'fair\', not \'harsh\'?
Meanwhile KP says - a botox for a botox. She says not much else! lol.
June 4th, 2024 09:43
orchidee said:
There\'s the chance of forgiveness for everyone, but who could possibly say the death penalty was not right for Nazi murderers? All evil ones day will come - sooner or later.
Old Testament times were harsh - a life for a life - or should that be \'fair\', not \'harsh\'?
Meanwhile KP says - a botox for a botox. She says not much else! lol.
June 4th, 2024 09:43
Eleven and A Half Minutes
orchidee said:
Reminds more of that silent piece 4 mins 33 seconds.
You wish I wouldn\'t sing for 11 and half minutes each day? That would be a start to stop me singing! lol.
June 4th, 2024 01:36
orchidee said:
Reminds more of that silent piece 4 mins 33 seconds.
You wish I wouldn\'t sing for 11 and half minutes each day? That would be a start to stop me singing! lol.
June 4th, 2024 01:36
Eleven and A Half Minutes
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of love and an apology for the silent years. And prayers too for healing. Sounds like a reconciliation.of lovers and the title must be of special significance. Love over conflict , satisfaction for the heart and soul. Words of adoration. Very nicely expressed Neville.
June 3rd, 2024 23:14
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of love and an apology for the silent years. And prayers too for healing. Sounds like a reconciliation.of lovers and the title must be of special significance. Love over conflict , satisfaction for the heart and soul. Words of adoration. Very nicely expressed Neville.
June 3rd, 2024 23:14
Eleven and A Half Minutes
Doggerel Dave said:
So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?
June 3rd, 2024 21:21
Doggerel Dave said:
So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?
June 3rd, 2024 21:21
Eleven and A Half Minutes
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like a man who comes straight to the point. 😉👍
June 3rd, 2024 16:52
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like a man who comes straight to the point. 😉👍
June 3rd, 2024 16:52
Different Measures
Thomas W Case said:
You bring home the fact that our time is limited. Carpe Diem brother. Great work.
June 3rd, 2024 04:15
Thomas W Case said:
You bring home the fact that our time is limited. Carpe Diem brother. Great work.
June 3rd, 2024 04:15
Different Measures
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned N. Time, distance and love may well heal the heart, but none the less lonely. 🌹
June 3rd, 2024 03:12
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned N. Time, distance and love may well heal the heart, but none the less lonely. 🌹
June 3rd, 2024 03:12
Different Measures
Goldfinch60 said:
Times and distances are all relative Neville and in reality we can chose to be close,
Andy
June 3rd, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Times and distances are all relative Neville and in reality we can chose to be close,
Andy
June 3rd, 2024 01:55
Different Measures
Doggerel Dave said:
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!
June 2nd, 2024 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!
June 2nd, 2024 17:52
Different Measures
MendedFences27 said:
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 16:02
MendedFences27 said:
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 16:02
Different Measures
orchidee said:
I\'m there waiting too - for the No.7 bus to take me away from KP! lol.
June 2nd, 2024 14:53
orchidee said:
I\'m there waiting too - for the No.7 bus to take me away from KP! lol.
June 2nd, 2024 14:53
Different Measures
Alan R said:
time and distance
were both quite distinctly
different measures
That\'s quite thought provoking!
June 2nd, 2024 11:31
Alan R said:
time and distance
were both quite distinctly
different measures
That\'s quite thought provoking!
June 2nd, 2024 11:31
It is What it Is
Thomas W Case said:
Superbly written. I love this. I have used the C word in a few poems too. At least one. Lol.
June 2nd, 2024 06:26
Thomas W Case said:
Superbly written. I love this. I have used the C word in a few poems too. At least one. Lol.
June 2nd, 2024 06:26
It is What it Is
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....
June 1st, 2024 08:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....
June 1st, 2024 08:25
It is What it Is
Alan R said:
Feels like sin to love this poem the way I love this poem!!
June 1st, 2024 03:43
Alan R said:
Feels like sin to love this poem the way I love this poem!!
June 1st, 2024 03:43
It is What it Is
orchidee said:
KP\'s a fish, as ya know - an old trout. Are there plenty more fish in the sea for me? If so, I\'ll throw her back into the sea. lol.
June 1st, 2024 01:39
orchidee said:
KP\'s a fish, as ya know - an old trout. Are there plenty more fish in the sea for me? If so, I\'ll throw her back into the sea. lol.
June 1st, 2024 01:39
Oh’ to Be Vaporized
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is certainly sweet tasting and perfumed in my life Neville.
Andy
June 1st, 2024 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is certainly sweet tasting and perfumed in my life Neville.
Andy
June 1st, 2024 00:48
Oh’ to Be Vaporized
aDarkerMind said:
bang!
that hit me on all sides....
worthy of much applause Neville;
May 31st, 2024 10:15
aDarkerMind said:
bang!
that hit me on all sides....
worthy of much applause Neville;
May 31st, 2024 10:15
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