Comments received on poems by Neville



Lemon Lined Streets
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

April 22nd, 2024 19:32

Lemon Lined Streets
Alan R said:

Just one word, Italia ❀️🌱

April 22nd, 2024 17:05

Lemon Lined Streets
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful imagery Neville. LOve this poem.

April 22nd, 2024 14:20

Lemon Lined Streets
Accidental Poet said:

I confess to many younger days riding my bike all over town N. That rear view mirror never disappoints. Great write. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

April 22nd, 2024 06:59

Lemon Lined Streets
Doggerel Dave said:

Pneumatic tyres then, Neville? πŸ˜‚

April 22nd, 2024 06:47

Lemon Lined Streets
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP likes streets lined with b...... you knows it! lol

April 22nd, 2024 02:10

Lemon Lined Streets
Cassie58 said:

We are a long time dead. This poem speaks to me about making the most of life. This imagery makes me smile. I see an older bloke in his Levi’s acting like a kid. Let that inner child out. Speed on cobbled stones on a bike, I ask you. I like the lemon trees for their symbolism. Have an easy Monday Neville.

April 22nd, 2024 02:01

Lemon Lined Streets
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful times remembered of times brought to today Neville.

Andy

April 22nd, 2024 01:54

Lemon Lined Streets
Teddy.15 said:

Sounds like a southern Italian street to me and how very romantic. I\'m not going to lie this romantic muse is my favourite of yours. 🌹

April 22nd, 2024 01:41

Uncommon Good Scents
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Neville, that smell will always be there for you.

Andy

April 22nd, 2024 00:51

Uncommon Good Scents
Teddy.15 said:

My dear Nev, absolutely gorgeous, I can\'t help thinking this is about your beautiful mum, who ever it be it\'s simply gorgeous. 🌹

April 21st, 2024 16:05

Uncommon Good Scents
Doggerel Dave said:

You would have more than a passing knowledge, Neville of the way the olfactory organs take a smell and transmit it to the brain (or something like that)
All I know is that smells long ago experienced, when re-presented evoke incredibly rich memories.
So on that basis you’ve given us a rich piece of poetic memorabilia.


April 21st, 2024 06:48

Uncommon Good Scents
Cassie58 said:

What beautiful poetry you write Neville. Make sure the sun shines on you today.

April 21st, 2024 03:56

Uncommon Good Scents
2781 said:

3:24

April 21st, 2024 03:32

Uncommon Good Scents
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Yes, I sense KP\'s presence. She wears Eau de Trout! lol.

April 21st, 2024 03:07

Uncommon Good Scents
Accidental Poet said:

Such as it is when love is in the air. Great write N. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

April 21st, 2024 02:25

Uncommon Good Scents
Alan R said:

Very elegant!

April 21st, 2024 02:05

It Took Three Coats
Goldfinch60 said:

I don\'t feel the cold much so I may put one jacket on over my short sleeved shirt occasionally Neville.

Andy

April 21st, 2024 01:23

It Took Three Coats
Accidental Poet said:

Just when I thought it was warming up. BRRRR. πŸ₯Ά

April 20th, 2024 09:04

It Took Three Coats
Teddy.15 said:

Metaphorically beautiful, I still have a coat my dear mum gave me years ago. This is beautiful dear Nev. 🌹

April 20th, 2024 08:36

It Took Three Coats
Cassie58 said:

Nothing like cuddling under coats to keep you warm in freezing weather. We have been spoiled with central heating. Yes I remember ice on window panes and coats on top of blankets. That was one of my Nan’s tricks. Your poem though is about young love. You must have been captivated a great deal to wear that Moroccan thingy that crawled:) Neville your nostalgic writes are ace. Happy Saturday to you and yours.

April 20th, 2024 06:52

It Took Three Coats
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Someone - you knows her - wears 3 coats/layers of botox! lol. More like 30 layers.

April 20th, 2024 06:42

It Took Three Coats
2781 said:

It\'s turned cold today, I wore my new 2nd hand leather jacket,
Shouldn\'t have worn it to the mall though.

April 20th, 2024 05:05

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Thomas W Case said:

Boom. Excellent work.

April 19th, 2024 11:53

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Accidental Poet said:

All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. πŸ‘

April 19th, 2024 08:07

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Bella Shepard said:

An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.

April 19th, 2024 07:25

Some Words Speak for Themselves
sorenbarrett said:

Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that amorphous emotion impossible to define. So often misunderstood. If God is everything, everywhere, and all present then God is love. I see all nature as love. Peace comes after Hope is realized and love is present. There is too little of each in this world and probably will be for some time but as John Lennon said I cant help but \"Imagin e\". Great write Neville

April 19th, 2024 06:46

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:

So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........

April 19th, 2024 06:06

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful and elegant dear Nev πŸŒΉπŸ’

April 19th, 2024 03:47

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.

April 19th, 2024 03:42



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