Comments received on poems by Neville
When My Heart Fell in Love
LIZ said:
\"When my soul, was in synch with my spirit, I just knew that I was free again... AND 🎤 drop!!!! UFFFFF! It is what it is!! 💜
September 23rd, 2023 03:12
LIZ said:
\"When my soul, was in synch with my spirit, I just knew that I was free again... AND 🎤 drop!!!! UFFFFF! It is what it is!! 💜
September 23rd, 2023 03:12
When My Heart Fell in Love
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, your last lines make me hear the violin playing sweetly love can be a bitch for sure but if we can leave it knowing we at least did it with a certain amount of dignity then it\'s all going to be alright ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, your last lines make me hear the violin playing sweetly love can be a bitch for sure but if we can leave it knowing we at least did it with a certain amount of dignity then it\'s all going to be alright ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 02:45
When My Heart Fell in Love
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m leaving this one for those as do this kind of response best.............. they\'ll be along in a moment....
September 23rd, 2023 02:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m leaving this one for those as do this kind of response best.............. they\'ll be along in a moment....
September 23rd, 2023 02:35
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Bobby O said:
A take a deep conscious that deals with a choice that maybe was absolute. ??
September 22nd, 2023 23:19
Bobby O said:
A take a deep conscious that deals with a choice that maybe was absolute. ??
September 22nd, 2023 23:19
Accumulations
Bobby O said:
Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers and it faded a meaning beyond the words
Very nice Mr. Neville.
September 22nd, 2023 21:35
Bobby O said:
Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers and it faded a meaning beyond the words
Very nice Mr. Neville.
September 22nd, 2023 21:35
Accumulations
Pop64 said:
Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully clear and quite imaginative (though more than likely true). Very well done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:03
Pop64 said:
Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully clear and quite imaginative (though more than likely true). Very well done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:03
Accumulations
Doggerel Dave said:
History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so who am I to intervene?
Now provided… no, listen Neville – provided you can absolutely guarantee that this pair of incompatible sillies are history, then I can depart, knowing I’ve done the best I can and so on, etc…….
PS: you are getting a little slow off the starting blocks here. What\'s going on?
September 22nd, 2023 05:45
Doggerel Dave said:
History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so who am I to intervene?
Now provided… no, listen Neville – provided you can absolutely guarantee that this pair of incompatible sillies are history, then I can depart, knowing I’ve done the best I can and so on, etc…….
PS: you are getting a little slow off the starting blocks here. What\'s going on?
September 22nd, 2023 05:45
Accumulations
L. B. Mek said:
this is the glue, that never makes it movie scenes
or poetry\'s verse
the ugly in the bonds that carry us
from disaster to
our dreamed Perhaps of a better
a blink and history is redrafted
that\'s all it takes
may that never change...
(Brilliant! Hyung
loved every minute of reading
your poems this week)
thank you!
September 22nd, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
this is the glue, that never makes it movie scenes
or poetry\'s verse
the ugly in the bonds that carry us
from disaster to
our dreamed Perhaps of a better
a blink and history is redrafted
that\'s all it takes
may that never change...
(Brilliant! Hyung
loved every minute of reading
your poems this week)
thank you!
September 22nd, 2023 04:41
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
L. B. Mek said:
\'she left behind in such
exquisite
and likewise,
well-rehearsed disarray ..\'
This is PG Wodehouse\'s
flamboyance of words
at its finest
love the exoticism in your wording, Hyung
sometimes this scribbling thing
needs to be fun
or else why labour
September 22nd, 2023 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'she left behind in such
exquisite
and likewise,
well-rehearsed disarray ..\'
This is PG Wodehouse\'s
flamboyance of words
at its finest
love the exoticism in your wording, Hyung
sometimes this scribbling thing
needs to be fun
or else why labour
September 22nd, 2023 04:30
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
L. B. Mek said:
reality is vulture\'s feast
while the brave fight to survive
decorated in camouflages
seeking a small space in life
where malice
wasn\'t trying
to barge down the door, again
eyes that rape
every time a breeze lifts
the velvet helm of armour,
our heroine\'s labour beneath...
(your words always sink deep
within that empathetic sea of tragedy
that is humanity)
I bow to your superior HEART
dear Poet supreme!
September 22nd, 2023 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
reality is vulture\'s feast
while the brave fight to survive
decorated in camouflages
seeking a small space in life
where malice
wasn\'t trying
to barge down the door, again
eyes that rape
every time a breeze lifts
the velvet helm of armour,
our heroine\'s labour beneath...
(your words always sink deep
within that empathetic sea of tragedy
that is humanity)
I bow to your superior HEART
dear Poet supreme!
September 22nd, 2023 04:26
Too Many Maybe’s
L. B. Mek said:
I like perhaps over maybe
one foot out of the door
if they ask me to come in
i can cut my leg off
save some of me from the ensuing
inevitability
I am weary of full tables
and laughter full smiles
hunger scenes seem more natural
less questions needed
like, who died to gift us this
restaurant silver
like
why that waiter is limping
one legged like me
like
maybe, it\'s those
with perhaps holes of self
who can feel life\'s
gust of wind blades...
yeah
I\'m with you Hyung..
save your maybe\'s
I\'ll stay by the gutter of perhaps
save myself a few body blows...
September 22nd, 2023 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
I like perhaps over maybe
one foot out of the door
if they ask me to come in
i can cut my leg off
save some of me from the ensuing
inevitability
I am weary of full tables
and laughter full smiles
hunger scenes seem more natural
less questions needed
like, who died to gift us this
restaurant silver
like
why that waiter is limping
one legged like me
like
maybe, it\'s those
with perhaps holes of self
who can feel life\'s
gust of wind blades...
yeah
I\'m with you Hyung..
save your maybe\'s
I\'ll stay by the gutter of perhaps
save myself a few body blows...
September 22nd, 2023 04:17
Accumulations
LIZ said:
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it\'s used to create...that special One! 💜
September 22nd, 2023 03:34
LIZ said:
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it\'s used to create...that special One! 💜
September 22nd, 2023 03:34
Accumulations
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I read this a few times and each time it got more and more fabulous although she sounds like a man eater i do love the last stanza, nothing wrong with changing history makes it all a bit more exciting. I had a chuckle darling Nev. ❤️
September 22nd, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I read this a few times and each time it got more and more fabulous although she sounds like a man eater i do love the last stanza, nothing wrong with changing history makes it all a bit more exciting. I had a chuckle darling Nev. ❤️
September 22nd, 2023 03:14
Accumulations
orchidee said:
I don\'t wanna bring any more trouts into the world with KP - the last line of your poem! 😁
September 22nd, 2023 02:17
orchidee said:
I don\'t wanna bring any more trouts into the world with KP - the last line of your poem! 😁
September 22nd, 2023 02:17
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be so decimating to one\'s mind Neville and can be forever with us, I hope they do not stay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be so decimating to one\'s mind Neville and can be forever with us, I hope they do not stay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 00:39
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last drop of them,\" \" I squeeze that last drop of poison in.\" Vengeance is sweet. Is there anything to be gained by this action or is it just a craving? A dark tale of desired retribution. - Phil A.
September 21st, 2023 11:24
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last drop of them,\" \" I squeeze that last drop of poison in.\" Vengeance is sweet. Is there anything to be gained by this action or is it just a craving? A dark tale of desired retribution. - Phil A.
September 21st, 2023 11:24
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Doggerel Dave said:
My goodness golly gosh they must\'ve solved it for you above (if indeed there were anything needed to be solved or for that matter resolved), The freedom which must now cloak your shoulders in lieu of the abreactive state which lead to this confession.... ist gut? (don\'t push it, pal - I don\'t speak no uther lingo but Anglo sort of...)....
September 21st, 2023 04:55
Doggerel Dave said:
My goodness golly gosh they must\'ve solved it for you above (if indeed there were anything needed to be solved or for that matter resolved), The freedom which must now cloak your shoulders in lieu of the abreactive state which lead to this confession.... ist gut? (don\'t push it, pal - I don\'t speak no uther lingo but Anglo sort of...)....
September 21st, 2023 04:55
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
LIZ said:
Wow!!! A little dark Neville! I love it! And, so true....some words can cut your heart, leaving you bleeding all over the place!! Can make the strongest person bend! That damn poison! 💜
September 21st, 2023 03:31
LIZ said:
Wow!!! A little dark Neville! I love it! And, so true....some words can cut your heart, leaving you bleeding all over the place!! Can make the strongest person bend! That damn poison! 💜
September 21st, 2023 03:31
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Teddy.15 said:
Words can surely hurt dear Nev. Sometimes stay inside us for a very long time, until they no longer ring in our ears. 💖
September 21st, 2023 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Words can surely hurt dear Nev. Sometimes stay inside us for a very long time, until they no longer ring in our ears. 💖
September 21st, 2023 02:30
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Neville said:
Thank you Max and without wishing to repeat my self, the answer is yes .. 😎🍷cheers 👍
September 20th, 2023 07:51
Neville said:
Thank you Max and without wishing to repeat my self, the answer is yes .. 😎🍷cheers 👍
September 20th, 2023 07:51
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you\'ve met KP, and she told you one of her adventures. lol.
September 20th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you\'ve met KP, and she told you one of her adventures. lol.
September 20th, 2023 02:04
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Goldfinch60 said:
Heave away indeed Neville.
\"Show a leg!\"
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Heave away indeed Neville.
\"Show a leg!\"
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:51
Too Many Maybe’s
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that perhaps will be with you soon Neville.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that perhaps will be with you soon Neville.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:14
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Teddy.15 said:
Some how I\'m visioning New York Sounds like fleet week, when the sailors come home to visit. ❤️
September 20th, 2023 01:03
Teddy.15 said:
Some how I\'m visioning New York Sounds like fleet week, when the sailors come home to visit. ❤️
September 20th, 2023 01:03
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Doggerel Dave said:
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in her arrrms...
If she goes with \'em she won\'t have much use for her attire...could I have it ? (You never know your luck in a big city come Saturday night....)
Definitely smelt the salt and fresh breeze there, Neville.
September 20th, 2023 00:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in her arrrms...
If she goes with \'em she won\'t have much use for her attire...could I have it ? (You never know your luck in a big city come Saturday night....)
Definitely smelt the salt and fresh breeze there, Neville.
September 20th, 2023 00:33
Too Many Maybe’s
Christina8 said:
This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!
September 19th, 2023 08:03
Christina8 said:
This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!
September 19th, 2023 08:03
Too Many Maybe’s
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
Worth a ponder, though.....
September 19th, 2023 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
Worth a ponder, though.....
September 19th, 2023 04:35
Too Many Maybe’s
LIZ said:
Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜
September 19th, 2023 03:36
LIZ said:
Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜
September 19th, 2023 03:36
Too Many Maybe’s
Bobby O said:
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20
Bobby O said:
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20
Too Many Maybe’s
orchidee said:
Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can\'t be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!
September 19th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can\'t be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!
September 19th, 2023 01:49
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