Comments received on poems by Neville
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Doggerel Dave said:
Garn - the air\'s just misdirection, \'twas the smile wot got you going....
The gentlest of poems.
March 2nd, 2024 00:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Garn - the air\'s just misdirection, \'twas the smile wot got you going....
The gentlest of poems.
March 2nd, 2024 00:06
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Parisab said:
Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a simple smile! Beauty does not escape you, my poetic friendā¦
March 1st, 2024 11:22
Parisab said:
Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a simple smile! Beauty does not escape you, my poetic friendā¦
March 1st, 2024 11:22
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Cassie58 said:
Wonāt cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville . Brevity can say so much. Wishing you a grand weekend:)
March 1st, 2024 11:21
Cassie58 said:
Wonāt cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville . Brevity can say so much. Wishing you a grand weekend:)
March 1st, 2024 11:21
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orchidee said:
In KP\'s case, the portion of air is a cavern - a trout-mouth!
She\'ll serve me up for lunch soon - squeak squeak!
March 1st, 2024 06:45
orchidee said:
In KP\'s case, the portion of air is a cavern - a trout-mouth!
She\'ll serve me up for lunch soon - squeak squeak!
March 1st, 2024 06:45
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Bobby O said:
You describe happenstance? Or perhaps inevitability like knowing water finds its path but even that is A v B , knowing or projecting where that landing spot will be ? Or the B side where wonder , faith, and goodwill await that landing spot and greet be surprise. OR IS IT ALL just for taking another shot at Ziggu under some plaudible veiled Device tantamount to shaking a rivals hand in public , smiling and gripping tightly with purpose,? the part that makes you so good is it works in Austin scenarios? Youāre the man now youāre the man.
February 29th, 2024 22:06
Bobby O said:
You describe happenstance? Or perhaps inevitability like knowing water finds its path but even that is A v B , knowing or projecting where that landing spot will be ? Or the B side where wonder , faith, and goodwill await that landing spot and greet be surprise. OR IS IT ALL just for taking another shot at Ziggu under some plaudible veiled Device tantamount to shaking a rivals hand in public , smiling and gripping tightly with purpose,? the part that makes you so good is it works in Austin scenarios? Youāre the man now youāre the man.
February 29th, 2024 22:06
Fleeced
Tom Dylan said:
A compelling read, Neville. I get the feeling of optimism, yet melancholy at the same time. Very intriguing piece.
February 29th, 2024 04:08
Tom Dylan said:
A compelling read, Neville. I get the feeling of optimism, yet melancholy at the same time. Very intriguing piece.
February 29th, 2024 04:08
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Teddy.15 said:
Oh Neville, how very sad and so not true ā¤ļø however the emotion written in this is extraordinary along with the profound imagery. š¹
February 29th, 2024 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Neville, how very sad and so not true ā¤ļø however the emotion written in this is extraordinary along with the profound imagery. š¹
February 29th, 2024 03:56
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orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP\'s fleeced me for money for botox, I know that much! lol.
February 29th, 2024 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP\'s fleeced me for money for botox, I know that much! lol.
February 29th, 2024 03:11
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Goldfinch60 said:
May that positivity be with you at all times Neville.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that positivity be with you at all times Neville.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:48
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Goldfinch60 said:
That piano obviously played all the notes in the right order Neville.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That piano obviously played all the notes in the right order Neville.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:40
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2781 said:
I\'ll write this with trepidation-
Yea, the darkness hideth not from thee; but the night shineth as the day; the darkness and the light are both alike to thee.x
February 29th, 2024 02:24
2781 said:
I\'ll write this with trepidation-
Yea, the darkness hideth not from thee; but the night shineth as the day; the darkness and the light are both alike to thee.x
February 29th, 2024 02:24
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Doggerel Dave said:
On the tin: \'Smoking is not good for your health\' Especially when those ciggies have had a very special additive...I just floated away after one of \'em....
February 29th, 2024 01:56
Doggerel Dave said:
On the tin: \'Smoking is not good for your health\' Especially when those ciggies have had a very special additive...I just floated away after one of \'em....
February 29th, 2024 01:56
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Cassie58 said:
This feels like a black shadow lurking in the background. Makes me think of negative thoughts or even depression. The golden ones are much more positive. Make sure you sit in the sun and not the shade. This poem can be interpreted in different ways. Thatās what I read on the tin. Happy Thursday Neville.
February 29th, 2024 01:48
Cassie58 said:
This feels like a black shadow lurking in the background. Makes me think of negative thoughts or even depression. The golden ones are much more positive. Make sure you sit in the sun and not the shade. This poem can be interpreted in different ways. Thatās what I read on the tin. Happy Thursday Neville.
February 29th, 2024 01:48
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure your ego and id were quite refreshed after such a cathartic massage. Good for Hannah, and more so for you. Just wondering what she was playing, Chopin, Mozart? You are the funnest!
February 28th, 2024 16:35
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure your ego and id were quite refreshed after such a cathartic massage. Good for Hannah, and more so for you. Just wondering what she was playing, Chopin, Mozart? You are the funnest!
February 28th, 2024 16:35
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Accidental Poet said:
May your quest be granted Sir N. šš
February 28th, 2024 10:11
Accidental Poet said:
May your quest be granted Sir N. šš
February 28th, 2024 10:11
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer old Sigmond, while decried in some (many?) circles, certainly had a few truths which have more than lingeredā¦ so, guilt free, go tickle them ivoriesā¦no, ignore the ivoriesā¦.
February 28th, 2024 07:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer old Sigmond, while decried in some (many?) circles, certainly had a few truths which have more than lingeredā¦ so, guilt free, go tickle them ivoriesā¦no, ignore the ivoriesā¦.
February 28th, 2024 07:15
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, and powerful dear Nev, I have always found people with ego are the ones we should avoid. š¹
February 28th, 2024 03:45
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, and powerful dear Nev, I have always found people with ego are the ones we should avoid. š¹
February 28th, 2024 03:45
My Very Dearest Sigmund
orchidee said:
I probably never knew ego and id could be massaged that way! Best not explain it further to me, or I will swoon! heehee.
February 28th, 2024 03:22
orchidee said:
I probably never knew ego and id could be massaged that way! Best not explain it further to me, or I will swoon! heehee.
February 28th, 2024 03:22
For All Those Once Beautiful
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty has only changed Neville, all are beautiful in differing ways.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty has only changed Neville, all are beautiful in differing ways.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:20
For All Those Once Beautiful
Doggerel Dave said:
My Doc told me I\'m maturing like fine wine when I popped in for my yearly assessment.... (true).... or was it cheese?....... gorgonzola? ....Anyway, I left with another \'script.....
February 27th, 2024 17:22
Doggerel Dave said:
My Doc told me I\'m maturing like fine wine when I popped in for my yearly assessment.... (true).... or was it cheese?....... gorgonzola? ....Anyway, I left with another \'script.....
February 27th, 2024 17:22
For All Those Once Beautiful
Kinsey Peterson said:
As always, a lovely piece. This reminds me of a quote: \"Let\'s do it for the love that used to be here. It is reason enough.\" Something I find to be a beautiful sentiment.
February 27th, 2024 15:24
Kinsey Peterson said:
As always, a lovely piece. This reminds me of a quote: \"Let\'s do it for the love that used to be here. It is reason enough.\" Something I find to be a beautiful sentiment.
February 27th, 2024 15:24
For All Those Once Beautiful
Teddy.15 said:
lol definitely humourous. Yeh tell me about it š¤£ I used to walk the catwalk I mean walk the cat lol ok on a serious note those who believe they are gorgeous are usually the ones who are not! That\'s what I believe anyway. A wonderful provoking piece here dear Nev. š¹
February 27th, 2024 12:15
Teddy.15 said:
lol definitely humourous. Yeh tell me about it š¤£ I used to walk the catwalk I mean walk the cat lol ok on a serious note those who believe they are gorgeous are usually the ones who are not! That\'s what I believe anyway. A wonderful provoking piece here dear Nev. š¹
February 27th, 2024 12:15
For All Those Once Beautiful
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully said!! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.....
February 27th, 2024 10:33
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully said!! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.....
February 27th, 2024 10:33
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