Comments received on poems by Neville



Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Cassie58 said:

Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have scorchio at MPS. Cooking on regulo 9 here Neville:)

February 24th, 2024 16:37

Three Summers
Cassie58 said:

I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. Three whole summers would have covered a lot of blue sky loving. A poignant poem of loss here. Sudden surprise endings are like a thunderbolt. They are the most painful sadly. Happy Saturday my friend.

February 24th, 2024 15:37

Three Summers
orchidee said:

Do two swallows (a variation on \'one swallow\', I discovered) make a Summer?
If not, how many swallows do we need to see?! Or how many guinea pigs?! lol.

February 24th, 2024 13:35

Three Summers
orchidee said:

You had the three summers all in one day?!

February 24th, 2024 08:42

Three Summers
Teddy.15 said:

Three whole summers are better than none my dear Nev. 🌹

February 24th, 2024 08:18

Three Summers
Accidental Poet said:

Three\'s better than none, and it did lead to a great little poem. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

February 24th, 2024 07:56

Three Summers
Doggerel Dave said:

Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb about diamonds.....)

February 24th, 2024 05:11

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Goldfinch60 said:

It must have been a wonderful time Neville.

Andy

February 24th, 2024 02:44

Glare
Bella Shepard said:

The mind\'s eye holds the image, but the heart holds emotion, kept safe as a wonderful memory. Beautifully versed dear friend.

February 23rd, 2024 15:35

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Bella Shepard said:

Titillating, tantalizing, and metaphorically tremendous. I\'d say \"WOW,\" but that would be an understatement. You\'ve given this old Catholic School Girl something to ponder. Yes indeed!

February 23rd, 2024 15:22

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m having a hot flush over here lol love the scenery especially on your last lines. πŸ”₯

February 23rd, 2024 13:15

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Christina8 said:

As erotica, I think your poetry is so vivid in your descriptions, delicately and tastefully so.....I think I need to step out for some air!

February 23rd, 2024 11:51

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Accidental Poet said:

A personal experience I presume N, and a great one at that. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

February 23rd, 2024 10:24

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Doggerel Dave said:

You\'ve ex-seeded yourself there, Neville...

February 23rd, 2024 08:51

Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
orchidee said:

Don\'t explain the meaning further, or I will swoon! lol.

February 23rd, 2024 06:43

Glare
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories can bring so many emotions Neville.

(My Laphroaig always tastes wonderful though - LOL)

Andy

February 23rd, 2024 02:42

Glare
Kinsey Peterson said:

The way you used the changing of the alcohol was very well done to describe the emotions within your piece. I appreciate learning from your work :)


February 22nd, 2024 13:50

Glare
Accidental Poet said:

As long as you\'ve survived N, that\'s the important thing. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

February 22nd, 2024 10:19

Glare
orchidee said:

How can I forget the forget-me-nots of KP\'s botox eyes?! lol.

February 22nd, 2024 05:47

Glare
Teddy.15 said:

Well this is so deep so beautiful and incredible sad all at once. Another one which will relate for so many scenarios. 🌹

February 22nd, 2024 04:30

Almost Famous Last Words
Thomas W Case said:

You sure bring this one home. Superb work.

February 21st, 2024 15:57

Almost Famous Last Words
Accidental Poet said:

And still, most wonderful words N. πŸ‘

February 21st, 2024 10:10

Amasser of All Dark Things
Accidental Poet said:

Not everything can be thrown out N. It\'s good that you\'re saving some things if only just to prove that they were here. Great write my friend. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

February 21st, 2024 09:51

Almost Famous Last Words
Teddy.15 said:

Beautifully sad 😒 Nev, so little yet so much said. ❀️

February 21st, 2024 09:50

Almost Famous Last Words
Doggerel Dave said:

So you embark on an odyssey - the quest for the perfect black....just rev the world up and continue....

February 21st, 2024 06:23

Almost Famous Last Words
orchidee said:

To be daft and insensitive to any emotion in this poem - why is the world much darker? Are the dark evenings drawing in?!
OR - who turned the light off?! heehee.

February 21st, 2024 03:12

Almost Famous Last Words
orchidee said:

You know I\'m gonna say summat like this - I will never hear KP\'s last words to me, though I long to hear them. She\'s never gonna say them to me: \'Goodbye for ever!\' lol.

February 21st, 2024 03:10

Almost Famous Last Words
Goldfinch60 said:

But that heart is still there Neville and may arise with love once again.

Andy

February 21st, 2024 02:52

Amasser of All Dark Things
Goldfinch60 said:

I too am a collector of \'stuff\'. As you know Neville \'stuff\' is important.

Andy

February 21st, 2024 02:25

Amasser of All Dark Things
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

February 20th, 2024 20:27



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