Comments received on poems by Neville
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Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m unsure if you find that pleasing....or not, Neville.
August 13th, 2024 01:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m unsure if you find that pleasing....or not, Neville.
August 13th, 2024 01:53
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Interesting words Neville, men and women do have differing dreams but in life they can be composite partners.
Andy
August 13th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Interesting words Neville, men and women do have differing dreams but in life they can be composite partners.
Andy
August 13th, 2024 01:25
Clocked
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP\'s like some ticking clock at night - a loud tick, annoying, troublesome, etc!
August 13th, 2024 01:16
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP\'s like some ticking clock at night - a loud tick, annoying, troublesome, etc!
August 13th, 2024 01:16
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, the selfish male rises again. It\'s a wonder anyone finds the time for marriage. Especially these days.
Yeah, this is poetry. It has only one objective. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:53
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, the selfish male rises again. It\'s a wonder anyone finds the time for marriage. Especially these days.
Yeah, this is poetry. It has only one objective. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:53
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
Doggerel Dave said:
Cracked it, haven\'t you...What one is left to wonder is how a man and woman ever get it together for any length of time......
August 12th, 2024 08:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Cracked it, haven\'t you...What one is left to wonder is how a man and woman ever get it together for any length of time......
August 12th, 2024 08:29
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve done quite a good job differentiating between the male and female ego. And yet, with all the differences, they still manage to find amicable relationships, well most of the time. A very interesting and illuminating write my friend.
August 12th, 2024 08:14
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve done quite a good job differentiating between the male and female ego. And yet, with all the differences, they still manage to find amicable relationships, well most of the time. A very interesting and illuminating write my friend.
August 12th, 2024 08:14
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
Bella Shepard said:
The poetic form of this poem is perfect in rhyme and meter, reflecting upon a progression of thought that is sublime. You never cease to amaze!
August 12th, 2024 08:00
Bella Shepard said:
The poetic form of this poem is perfect in rhyme and meter, reflecting upon a progression of thought that is sublime. You never cease to amaze!
August 12th, 2024 08:00
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
orchidee said:
KP says to me each night \'Happy botox dreams\'. lol.
August 12th, 2024 07:05
orchidee said:
KP says to me each night \'Happy botox dreams\'. lol.
August 12th, 2024 07:05
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Something really profound there.
August 12th, 2024 06:31
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Something really profound there.
August 12th, 2024 06:31
The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences in males and females. So nicely expressed in short poetic lines. The difficulty of expressing these differences in a condensed form you have distilled ina few lines. Lovely!!
August 12th, 2024 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences in males and females. So nicely expressed in short poetic lines. The difficulty of expressing these differences in a condensed form you have distilled ina few lines. Lovely!!
August 12th, 2024 04:37
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
MendedFences27 said:
Some deep thinking put into poetic form. Your theory offers \"divine immortality\" for \"love\" and why not?
Love is the one thing that we share universally. Scientists know that love exists but can\'t explain it. It also is the one emotion of mankind that is not totally self-centered.
Your little poem on love is actually a greatly powerful idea with much to defend it. It may cause a cosmic shift in our beliefs. I found it to be very stimulating. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
Some deep thinking put into poetic form. Your theory offers \"divine immortality\" for \"love\" and why not?
Love is the one thing that we share universally. Scientists know that love exists but can\'t explain it. It also is the one emotion of mankind that is not totally self-centered.
Your little poem on love is actually a greatly powerful idea with much to defend it. It may cause a cosmic shift in our beliefs. I found it to be very stimulating. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 15:03
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
sorenbarrett said:
A profound thought deeply rooted in faith and belief but so well stated here it seems logic. The wording was superb and it reads so smoothly.
August 11th, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A profound thought deeply rooted in faith and belief but so well stated here it seems logic. The wording was superb and it reads so smoothly.
August 11th, 2024 06:53
Comparing Uncertain Potentialities
Cassie58 said:
Divine immortality for love. What a very beautiful thought for a glorious Sunday morning. Brevity with much to ponder on. Lovely thoughts Neville.
August 11th, 2024 03:02
Cassie58 said:
Divine immortality for love. What a very beautiful thought for a glorious Sunday morning. Brevity with much to ponder on. Lovely thoughts Neville.
August 11th, 2024 03:02
Rituals
Cassie58 said:
Morning rituals. I always touch the sterling silver chain with its delicate pendant that hangs round my neck and which my mum wore till her dying day. I listen for the birdsong from the garden, and watch the movement of the silver birch outside my window. I’ve never focused before on these. I enjoyed reading about your rituals and I do agree that nothing can beat a full English. I like your thinking here Neville. Have a super sunny Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:58
Cassie58 said:
Morning rituals. I always touch the sterling silver chain with its delicate pendant that hangs round my neck and which my mum wore till her dying day. I listen for the birdsong from the garden, and watch the movement of the silver birch outside my window. I’ve never focused before on these. I enjoyed reading about your rituals and I do agree that nothing can beat a full English. I like your thinking here Neville. Have a super sunny Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:58
Rituals
Goldfinch60 said:
Full English without Black Pudding is not a Full English Neville. LOL
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Full English without Black Pudding is not a Full English Neville. LOL
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:32
Rituals
Bobby O said:
It’s a saunter thru a here and there possibilities that command a certain order
August 10th, 2024 16:05
Bobby O said:
It’s a saunter thru a here and there possibilities that command a certain order
August 10th, 2024 16:05
Rituals
orchidee said:
A chap in church did so much ritual and crossing-of-self, bowing, etc, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts!\'
August 10th, 2024 12:16
orchidee said:
A chap in church did so much ritual and crossing-of-self, bowing, etc, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts!\'
August 10th, 2024 12:16
Rituals
MendedFences27 said:
Somebody mentioned \"a full English\" and I got hungry and started thinking of food, which brought me to this irrelevant question, \"If you are blindfolded and do not know what country you are in but are told you are in a restaurant, would you order Bread. Sausages, Bacon, or Chocolate?
I think we all have such \"Rituals.\" They are all very personal habits built over the decades of life. Your poem reaches to the inner self of the reader. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
August 10th, 2024 10:41
MendedFences27 said:
Somebody mentioned \"a full English\" and I got hungry and started thinking of food, which brought me to this irrelevant question, \"If you are blindfolded and do not know what country you are in but are told you are in a restaurant, would you order Bread. Sausages, Bacon, or Chocolate?
I think we all have such \"Rituals.\" They are all very personal habits built over the decades of life. Your poem reaches to the inner self of the reader. Thoroughly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
August 10th, 2024 10:41
Rituals
Bella Shepard said:
Rituals are very powerful things, just try to change one and perhaps your whole day is off kilter. Love the poem, and I can thoroughly relate to rituals.
August 10th, 2024 10:23
Bella Shepard said:
Rituals are very powerful things, just try to change one and perhaps your whole day is off kilter. Love the poem, and I can thoroughly relate to rituals.
August 10th, 2024 10:23
Rituals
sorenbarrett said:
Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me hungry for. Nevill the poem itself reads in a hypnotic manner as if a mantra or ritual very nice.
August 10th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me hungry for. Nevill the poem itself reads in a hypnotic manner as if a mantra or ritual very nice.
August 10th, 2024 06:48
Maybe To Be Continued
Dan Williams said:
Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
August 9th, 2024 23:48
Dan Williams said:
Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
August 9th, 2024 23:48
Maybe To Be Continued
MendedFences27 said:
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and 47, and also the very sick cling to life until they were 98. Every day is one more experience. To be enjoyed to the fullest.
Live long and prosper.
Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A
August 9th, 2024 10:39
MendedFences27 said:
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and 47, and also the very sick cling to life until they were 98. Every day is one more experience. To be enjoyed to the fullest.
Live long and prosper.
Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A
August 9th, 2024 10:39
Maybe To Be Continued
sorenbarrett said:
Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense anticipation of loss. Nicely worded though. Hope there are many more days ahead.
August 9th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense anticipation of loss. Nicely worded though. Hope there are many more days ahead.
August 9th, 2024 05:27
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. A real thouht-provoking piece.
August 9th, 2024 03:35
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. A real thouht-provoking piece.
August 9th, 2024 03:35
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