Comments received on poems by Neville
It Took Three Coats
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t feel the cold much so I may put one jacket on over my short sleeved shirt occasionally Neville.
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t feel the cold much so I may put one jacket on over my short sleeved shirt occasionally Neville.
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:23
It Took Three Coats
Accidental Poet said:
Just when I thought it was warming up. BRRRR. 🥶
April 20th, 2024 09:04
Accidental Poet said:
Just when I thought it was warming up. BRRRR. 🥶
April 20th, 2024 09:04
It Took Three Coats
Teddy.15 said:
Metaphorically beautiful, I still have a coat my dear mum gave me years ago. This is beautiful dear Nev. 🌹
April 20th, 2024 08:36
Teddy.15 said:
Metaphorically beautiful, I still have a coat my dear mum gave me years ago. This is beautiful dear Nev. 🌹
April 20th, 2024 08:36
It Took Three Coats
Cassie58 said:
Nothing like cuddling under coats to keep you warm in freezing weather. We have been spoiled with central heating. Yes I remember ice on window panes and coats on top of blankets. That was one of my Nan’s tricks. Your poem though is about young love. You must have been captivated a great deal to wear that Moroccan thingy that crawled:) Neville your nostalgic writes are ace. Happy Saturday to you and yours.
April 20th, 2024 06:52
Cassie58 said:
Nothing like cuddling under coats to keep you warm in freezing weather. We have been spoiled with central heating. Yes I remember ice on window panes and coats on top of blankets. That was one of my Nan’s tricks. Your poem though is about young love. You must have been captivated a great deal to wear that Moroccan thingy that crawled:) Neville your nostalgic writes are ace. Happy Saturday to you and yours.
April 20th, 2024 06:52
It Took Three Coats
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Someone - you knows her - wears 3 coats/layers of botox! lol. More like 30 layers.
April 20th, 2024 06:42
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Someone - you knows her - wears 3 coats/layers of botox! lol. More like 30 layers.
April 20th, 2024 06:42
It Took Three Coats
2781 said:
It\'s turned cold today, I wore my new 2nd hand leather jacket,
Shouldn\'t have worn it to the mall though.
April 20th, 2024 05:05
2781 said:
It\'s turned cold today, I wore my new 2nd hand leather jacket,
Shouldn\'t have worn it to the mall though.
April 20th, 2024 05:05
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. Excellent work.
April 19th, 2024 11:53
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. Excellent work.
April 19th, 2024 11:53
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Accidental Poet said:
All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. 👍
April 19th, 2024 08:07
Accidental Poet said:
All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. 👍
April 19th, 2024 08:07
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Bella Shepard said:
An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.
April 19th, 2024 07:25
Bella Shepard said:
An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.
April 19th, 2024 07:25
Some Words Speak for Themselves
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that amorphous emotion impossible to define. So often misunderstood. If God is everything, everywhere, and all present then God is love. I see all nature as love. Peace comes after Hope is realized and love is present. There is too little of each in this world and probably will be for some time but as John Lennon said I cant help but \"Imagin e\". Great write Neville
April 19th, 2024 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that amorphous emotion impossible to define. So often misunderstood. If God is everything, everywhere, and all present then God is love. I see all nature as love. Peace comes after Hope is realized and love is present. There is too little of each in this world and probably will be for some time but as John Lennon said I cant help but \"Imagin e\". Great write Neville
April 19th, 2024 06:46
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:
So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........
April 19th, 2024 06:06
Doggerel Dave said:
So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........
April 19th, 2024 06:06
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐
April 19th, 2024 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐
April 19th, 2024 03:47
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.
April 19th, 2024 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.
April 19th, 2024 03:42
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
orchidee said:
Yes, intriguing N.
I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.
April 19th, 2024 02:25
orchidee said:
Yes, intriguing N.
I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.
April 19th, 2024 02:25
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:21
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hope of peace and love be with all very shortly Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hope of peace and love be with all very shortly Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:14
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Thomas W Case said:
Another homerun. All we can do is hope and pray.
April 18th, 2024 15:52
Thomas W Case said:
Another homerun. All we can do is hope and pray.
April 18th, 2024 15:52
Some Words Speak for Themselves
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now KP and I don\'t help towards peace, with our constant fighting like cat and dog. Doh!
Do many cats and dogs actually fight each other?
You beaten that egg yet?!
April 18th, 2024 08:12
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now KP and I don\'t help towards peace, with our constant fighting like cat and dog. Doh!
Do many cats and dogs actually fight each other?
You beaten that egg yet?!
April 18th, 2024 08:12
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Cassie58 said:
Hope, love and peace. The most important words in the dictionary in present times of conflict. How eloquently you convey the meaning of those three little words that can make every difference to our planet. Thank you Neville.
April 18th, 2024 07:56
Cassie58 said:
Hope, love and peace. The most important words in the dictionary in present times of conflict. How eloquently you convey the meaning of those three little words that can make every difference to our planet. Thank you Neville.
April 18th, 2024 07:56
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as I age I hit the rewind button in my mind a little more each day, and wonder how all that life passed by. Was I really that child, adolescent, adult, now senior? I think going back helps us understand where we are. Socrates said \"The unexamined life is not worth living\", so the food for thought you offer here is most relevant and beautifully said.
April 18th, 2024 07:48
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as I age I hit the rewind button in my mind a little more each day, and wonder how all that life passed by. Was I really that child, adolescent, adult, now senior? I think going back helps us understand where we are. Socrates said \"The unexamined life is not worth living\", so the food for thought you offer here is most relevant and beautifully said.
April 18th, 2024 07:48
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve chosen wisely and well my friend, words that should be taken to heart and not carelessly bandied about, but uttered with the deepest respect. You\'ve made my day!
April 18th, 2024 07:34
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve chosen wisely and well my friend, words that should be taken to heart and not carelessly bandied about, but uttered with the deepest respect. You\'ve made my day!
April 18th, 2024 07:34
Some Words Speak for Themselves
David Wakeling said:
Hope Love and Peace. Not a bad recipe for a good life
April 18th, 2024 03:19
David Wakeling said:
Hope Love and Peace. Not a bad recipe for a good life
April 18th, 2024 03:19
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
I would be there like a shot Neville, such wonderful times and memories back in the day. My friends and I made bows and arrows, we were never ever injured by them, or the catapults we made. LOL
Great times and such innocence all around.
Andy
April 18th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I would be there like a shot Neville, such wonderful times and memories back in the day. My friends and I made bows and arrows, we were never ever injured by them, or the catapults we made. LOL
Great times and such innocence all around.
Andy
April 18th, 2024 01:21
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Doggerel Dave said:
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing detail (and I mean \'most\' as part of many or much) which filled me with the above mentioned...
Second: Yes - I\'d go back for a week\'s visit because there were many things/attitudes I really enjoyed.....but do I want my own naivety too?
April 17th, 2024 21:04
Doggerel Dave said:
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing detail (and I mean \'most\' as part of many or much) which filled me with the above mentioned...
Second: Yes - I\'d go back for a week\'s visit because there were many things/attitudes I really enjoyed.....but do I want my own naivety too?
April 17th, 2024 21:04
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You pull the reader along brilliantly. I anticipated everything. Superb work.
April 17th, 2024 15:07
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You pull the reader along brilliantly. I anticipated everything. Superb work.
April 17th, 2024 15:07
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Cassie58 said:
Some say you should never go back, but I would give my right arm to have a day back with my mum and dad, my four grandparents and my four siblings. So much in your words Neville that I like and resonate with. Simple times, when money wasn’t king, when people were friendlier and your neighbours were called auntie and uncle. Values have sadly changed. I sometimes pine for what has gone. That doesn’t mean I am unhappy. It just means time has moved on and I am nostalgic. Thank goodness for poetry, where we can pen our memories and enjoy them with like minded souls. I’d gladly go back with ya to the days before it all went wrong . Just think, no internet, no mobiles we all walked or got buses. A very different world. I really enjoyed the detail in this write.
April 17th, 2024 12:08
Cassie58 said:
Some say you should never go back, but I would give my right arm to have a day back with my mum and dad, my four grandparents and my four siblings. So much in your words Neville that I like and resonate with. Simple times, when money wasn’t king, when people were friendlier and your neighbours were called auntie and uncle. Values have sadly changed. I sometimes pine for what has gone. That doesn’t mean I am unhappy. It just means time has moved on and I am nostalgic. Thank goodness for poetry, where we can pen our memories and enjoy them with like minded souls. I’d gladly go back with ya to the days before it all went wrong . Just think, no internet, no mobiles we all walked or got buses. A very different world. I really enjoyed the detail in this write.
April 17th, 2024 12:08
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Accidental Poet said:
Although there are many times in the past I would not want to relive, there are more that I\'d give almost anything to be able to relive. When time was slower paced and less arrogance and ignorance in the world. When everyone in the neighborhood knew each other and would stop to talk. When you could leave your house unlocked without fear of strangers been there while you were gone. And when I saw a pretty girl smile to outshine everyone else. 😊
April 17th, 2024 06:21
Accidental Poet said:
Although there are many times in the past I would not want to relive, there are more that I\'d give almost anything to be able to relive. When time was slower paced and less arrogance and ignorance in the world. When everyone in the neighborhood knew each other and would stop to talk. When you could leave your house unlocked without fear of strangers been there while you were gone. And when I saw a pretty girl smile to outshine everyone else. 😊
April 17th, 2024 06:21
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Teddy.15 said:
I wouldn\'t go back in time simply because I believe nothing would change and what I have learnt on my road is that everything from the past has led me to today 🌹 Fabulous thought provoker dear Nev.
April 17th, 2024 03:27
Teddy.15 said:
I wouldn\'t go back in time simply because I believe nothing would change and what I have learnt on my road is that everything from the past has led me to today 🌹 Fabulous thought provoker dear Nev.
April 17th, 2024 03:27
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