Comments received on poems by Neville
Whatever Happened to Miriam
LIZ said:
Isn\'t cornucopia known as the horn of plenty...or something like that? At first, I was like....who is this Miriam person...and you saw her naked? Nah! 😆 But the title made me think of the transgender Miriam Rivera who died years ago. My mind\'s all over the place! Thank you for that...LOL. 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:13
LIZ said:
Isn\'t cornucopia known as the horn of plenty...or something like that? At first, I was like....who is this Miriam person...and you saw her naked? Nah! 😆 But the title made me think of the transgender Miriam Rivera who died years ago. My mind\'s all over the place! Thank you for that...LOL. 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:13
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Bella Shepard said:
A secret orchard, a murmuration of starlings, for they are the only ones that do this, is as unique as this beautiful poem. You have described a visual treat and brought it to life, line by line. This has to be read aloud, for the syllables drip from the tongue like honey.
August 30th, 2023 14:58
Bella Shepard said:
A secret orchard, a murmuration of starlings, for they are the only ones that do this, is as unique as this beautiful poem. You have described a visual treat and brought it to life, line by line. This has to be read aloud, for the syllables drip from the tongue like honey.
August 30th, 2023 14:58
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely way with words .. I liked reading your poem )
August 30th, 2023 10:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely way with words .. I liked reading your poem )
August 30th, 2023 10:29
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Doggerel Dave said:
Did they nick your fruit? A coordinated attack?
August 30th, 2023 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Did they nick your fruit? A coordinated attack?
August 30th, 2023 06:24
Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden
Dove said:
A beautiful piece to sway my heart. The smells of flowers permeate through my senses, my eyes can imagine the beauty before you. .. Awesome job. Hope your vision is better
August 30th, 2023 06:01
Dove said:
A beautiful piece to sway my heart. The smells of flowers permeate through my senses, my eyes can imagine the beauty before you. .. Awesome job. Hope your vision is better
August 30th, 2023 06:01
The Making of a Single Murmuration
LIZ said:
Mmmm.....an invitation? Like starlings do? I\'m guessing you\'ve seen it, because it would be hard to describe if you haven\'t. They protect each other! Loved this! 💜
August 30th, 2023 02:01
LIZ said:
Mmmm.....an invitation? Like starlings do? I\'m guessing you\'ve seen it, because it would be hard to describe if you haven\'t. They protect each other! Loved this! 💜
August 30th, 2023 02:01
The Making of a Single Murmuration
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Can ya beat some murmurisation?! :)
August 30th, 2023 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Can ya beat some murmurisation?! :)
August 30th, 2023 01:40
Bang Goes Another Theory
Bella Shepard said:
You evoke in this poem a feeling I struggle to put into words, unsettling and worthy of contemplation. We constantly hunger for more, but never truly know what that might be. It leaves an empty feeling amidst all that we discard. I may be way off, but I so loved the mental exercise. This poem leaves me right on the cusp of a thought....... This is superb!
August 29th, 2023 13:17
Bella Shepard said:
You evoke in this poem a feeling I struggle to put into words, unsettling and worthy of contemplation. We constantly hunger for more, but never truly know what that might be. It leaves an empty feeling amidst all that we discard. I may be way off, but I so loved the mental exercise. This poem leaves me right on the cusp of a thought....... This is superb!
August 29th, 2023 13:17
Bang Goes Another Theory
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope springs eternal......so it just can continue to.......
Yep - no doubt about it....I\'ve checked again.....
August 29th, 2023 08:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope springs eternal......so it just can continue to.......
Yep - no doubt about it....I\'ve checked again.....
August 29th, 2023 08:29
Bang Goes Another Theory
LIZ said:
Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!💜
August 29th, 2023 06:42
LIZ said:
Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!💜
August 29th, 2023 06:42
Bang Goes Another Theory
orchidee said:
It\'s OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
I\'m talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.
August 29th, 2023 02:01
orchidee said:
It\'s OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
I\'m talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.
August 29th, 2023 02:01
A Slice of Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
But Autumn, my favourite time of the year, comes first.
Andy
Enjoy yourself up t\'north.
August 25th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
But Autumn, my favourite time of the year, comes first.
Andy
Enjoy yourself up t\'north.
August 25th, 2023 02:24
A Slice of Sky
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, my wise friend
we must cherish
that gifted nature aesthetic
in our now of verdant sublime
and rainbow winged skies...
as far too soon
it will be grey, brooding clouds
once again..
still variety, does add to flavour
in life
August 25th, 2023 01:29
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, my wise friend
we must cherish
that gifted nature aesthetic
in our now of verdant sublime
and rainbow winged skies...
as far too soon
it will be grey, brooding clouds
once again..
still variety, does add to flavour
in life
August 25th, 2023 01:29
Mused
L. B. Mek said:
probably the reason why dead poet\'s reign..
your Time will come, dear Poet supreme!
glad I get to say, i knew him before
they gave him his flowers, belatedly..
soar high my friend, till
you block out their sun
and force them
to acknowledge your humanitarian
legacy
and your poetry\'s, timeless poignancy
August 25th, 2023 01:25
L. B. Mek said:
probably the reason why dead poet\'s reign..
your Time will come, dear Poet supreme!
glad I get to say, i knew him before
they gave him his flowers, belatedly..
soar high my friend, till
you block out their sun
and force them
to acknowledge your humanitarian
legacy
and your poetry\'s, timeless poignancy
August 25th, 2023 01:25
A Moment of Enlightenment
L. B. Mek said:
lol
zen in, zen out
karate kid\'s got nothing
on a poet, sincere
(thanks for the chuckle)
August 25th, 2023 01:20
L. B. Mek said:
lol
zen in, zen out
karate kid\'s got nothing
on a poet, sincere
(thanks for the chuckle)
August 25th, 2023 01:20
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
L. B. Mek said:
i\'m smiling all teeth
my heart opened wide
what a delight
to share in a cherished friends
success..
you must be so proud Hyung
🍻
August 25th, 2023 01:18
L. B. Mek said:
i\'m smiling all teeth
my heart opened wide
what a delight
to share in a cherished friends
success..
you must be so proud Hyung
🍻
August 25th, 2023 01:18
Silverback
L. B. Mek said:
smile wide, let those gums shine bright
for this, is
a most deserved grandpa accolade
you\'ve earned my friend
August 25th, 2023 01:14
L. B. Mek said:
smile wide, let those gums shine bright
for this, is
a most deserved grandpa accolade
you\'ve earned my friend
August 25th, 2023 01:14
When Absolutely Gone
L. B. Mek said:
to some of us
you\'re remembered and cherished
for all these things
even as you live and breathe..
may you never change Hyung
thank you! for being you
dear Poet supreme
August 25th, 2023 01:11
L. B. Mek said:
to some of us
you\'re remembered and cherished
for all these things
even as you live and breathe..
may you never change Hyung
thank you! for being you
dear Poet supreme
August 25th, 2023 01:11
A Slice of Sky
Bella Shepard said:
Exquisite imagery, color evokes such warm feelings, \"Silhouttes of gold eyed birds\" a sense of peace. Had to take a breath, and just sigh in contentment. Thank you!
August 24th, 2023 10:57
Bella Shepard said:
Exquisite imagery, color evokes such warm feelings, \"Silhouttes of gold eyed birds\" a sense of peace. Had to take a breath, and just sigh in contentment. Thank you!
August 24th, 2023 10:57
A Slice of Sky
Bobby O said:
A winter of discontent?
I liked as I do all, the poem
August 24th, 2023 03:15
Bobby O said:
A winter of discontent?
I liked as I do all, the poem
August 24th, 2023 03:15
A Slice of Sky
Christina8 said:
Oh, no reminders of winter please! LOL Our winters are so harsh. Beautiful description of the sky, I really enjoyed this piece!
August 24th, 2023 03:15
Christina8 said:
Oh, no reminders of winter please! LOL Our winters are so harsh. Beautiful description of the sky, I really enjoyed this piece!
August 24th, 2023 03:15
A Slice of Sky
LIZ said:
This is so beautiful! I can see all the pastel colors. I have an Amethys stone. It\'s violet/purple. AND, I read \"a slice\"....and I said, OF CAKE. Then, your first word is \"pastel\", which is cake in Spanish. I guess I need to go get me a piece of cake!! Loved it!!
August 24th, 2023 02:45
LIZ said:
This is so beautiful! I can see all the pastel colors. I have an Amethys stone. It\'s violet/purple. AND, I read \"a slice\"....and I said, OF CAKE. Then, your first word is \"pastel\", which is cake in Spanish. I guess I need to go get me a piece of cake!! Loved it!!
August 24th, 2023 02:45
A Slice of Sky
Doggerel Dave said:
Not for me it ain\'t...Summer is on its way....
The prompt to make notes before this season presents itself, seems a reasonable proposition (thanks for that), if I can find an incombustible medium...
August 24th, 2023 02:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Not for me it ain\'t...Summer is on its way....
The prompt to make notes before this season presents itself, seems a reasonable proposition (thanks for that), if I can find an incombustible medium...
August 24th, 2023 02:15
A Slice of Sky
orchidee said:
Good write N,
We not started Autumn yet! lol.
This gives me a cue for a Christmas carol - in August! heehee.
Goldfinch/Andy will shoot me, for not waiting until December. 😁
August 24th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N,
We not started Autumn yet! lol.
This gives me a cue for a Christmas carol - in August! heehee.
Goldfinch/Andy will shoot me, for not waiting until December. 😁
August 24th, 2023 01:47
Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Being that hostage sounds a wonderful place to be Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Being that hostage sounds a wonderful place to be Neville.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 01:09
Colour Envy
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for your words Neville, in my current life I am certainly \'blown away by beauty\'.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for your words Neville, in my current life I am certainly \'blown away by beauty\'.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:57
Colour Envy
orchidee said:
What colour(s) do old trouts turn when they sunbathe?! lol. KP will melt - botox. lol. She\'s 45, don\'t ya know - so she says. Looks like 145.
August 23rd, 2023 04:58
orchidee said:
What colour(s) do old trouts turn when they sunbathe?! lol. KP will melt - botox. lol. She\'s 45, don\'t ya know - so she says. Looks like 145.
August 23rd, 2023 04:58
Colour Envy
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve just read the terms and conditions - cannot find the box to tick.....😇!!!
August 23rd, 2023 04:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve just read the terms and conditions - cannot find the box to tick.....😇!!!
August 23rd, 2023 04:38
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