Comments received on poems by Neville
Dearth
Bella Shepard said:
To speak the words of your poem is to feel the emotion. To \"wonder where did the sky all go\", captures the enormity of the loss, and the regret that it is irrevocable. The pathos of this verse, palpable. A strong write my friend.
September 3rd, 2023 13:27
Bella Shepard said:
To speak the words of your poem is to feel the emotion. To \"wonder where did the sky all go\", captures the enormity of the loss, and the regret that it is irrevocable. The pathos of this verse, palpable. A strong write my friend.
September 3rd, 2023 13:27
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem puts me in mind of the Van Morrison song \"Brown eyed girl\". Sweet, salted, carmel, melt in your mouth descriptive and delicious. You do honor to the brown eyed, and to your lady love. Verse to tempt the senses. Beautiful!
September 3rd, 2023 09:00
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem puts me in mind of the Van Morrison song \"Brown eyed girl\". Sweet, salted, carmel, melt in your mouth descriptive and delicious. You do honor to the brown eyed, and to your lady love. Verse to tempt the senses. Beautiful!
September 3rd, 2023 09:00
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 van Morrison would be proud, although I am a blue eyed gal, I too adore the brown eyes exotic and beautiful. Beautiful imagery dearest Nev. 💖
September 3rd, 2023 06:54
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 van Morrison would be proud, although I am a blue eyed gal, I too adore the brown eyes exotic and beautiful. Beautiful imagery dearest Nev. 💖
September 3rd, 2023 06:54
Dearth
LIZ said:
Staring at desire\'s scarcity peak has a way of doing that. I can feel the strength of your hunger...need. I\'m attracted to the urgency of your promise to satisfy; even though you were the one left without; and the willingness to go to great lengths to....please! 💜
September 3rd, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
Staring at desire\'s scarcity peak has a way of doing that. I can feel the strength of your hunger...need. I\'m attracted to the urgency of your promise to satisfy; even though you were the one left without; and the willingness to go to great lengths to....please! 💜
September 3rd, 2023 04:31
On Returning to Gullworthy
Bella Shepard said:
This is a reminiscence so sweet, and so beautifully told. You\'ve taken a memory from its resting place, held it in your hands, and caressed it lovingly. Superb!
September 2nd, 2023 16:08
Bella Shepard said:
This is a reminiscence so sweet, and so beautifully told. You\'ve taken a memory from its resting place, held it in your hands, and caressed it lovingly. Superb!
September 2nd, 2023 16:08
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
orchidee said:
I wish to complain about the abundance of \'UFFF\' on \'ere - if I knew what it is?! heehee.
Now me next poem, not deep, but \'Shallow!\'😁
September 2nd, 2023 12:49
orchidee said:
I wish to complain about the abundance of \'UFFF\' on \'ere - if I knew what it is?! heehee.
Now me next poem, not deep, but \'Shallow!\'😁
September 2nd, 2023 12:49
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
LIZ said:
Well damn!! Stop playing with me Neville!! \"Oh’ but oh so very slow indeed.. Oh’ yes, I so want to feel myself melting and deeply ..All the way down to that, stricken lost soul of yours\"- Is there any other way? Took me to paradise! Closed my eyes for a moment! And...ummmm I have dark brown eyes. UFFFF! 💜 Deep....DEEP!
September 2nd, 2023 05:15
LIZ said:
Well damn!! Stop playing with me Neville!! \"Oh’ but oh so very slow indeed.. Oh’ yes, I so want to feel myself melting and deeply ..All the way down to that, stricken lost soul of yours\"- Is there any other way? Took me to paradise! Closed my eyes for a moment! And...ummmm I have dark brown eyes. UFFFF! 💜 Deep....DEEP!
September 2nd, 2023 05:15
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Bobby O said:
To discard the weight of my longing
Next appropriate moment with your permission I may steal this word for word
I enjoy
September 2nd, 2023 03:20
Bobby O said:
To discard the weight of my longing
Next appropriate moment with your permission I may steal this word for word
I enjoy
September 2nd, 2023 03:20
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Doggerel Dave said:
I was gonna say \'bet you say that to all the girls\' but you pre-empted me when you commented...
Well, of one thing we can be fairly certain - you ain\'t colour blind , otherwise you would have been in trouble years ago....
September 2nd, 2023 03:02
Doggerel Dave said:
I was gonna say \'bet you say that to all the girls\' but you pre-empted me when you commented...
Well, of one thing we can be fairly certain - you ain\'t colour blind , otherwise you would have been in trouble years ago....
September 2nd, 2023 03:02
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
orchidee said:
KP has caramel eyes - it\'s the botox that does it, you see! lol
September 2nd, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
KP has caramel eyes - it\'s the botox that does it, you see! lol
September 2nd, 2023 02:00
On Returning to Gullworthy
L. B. Mek said:
such a Rich and vivid tapestry
you\'ve weaved dear Poet supreme
this is your Tintern Abbey
Wordsworth lives-on
I\'m just proud, I get to call you friend
a badge I wear proud
thank you! what a delightful read
you\'ve made my day, and its only 9am
September 1st, 2023 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
such a Rich and vivid tapestry
you\'ve weaved dear Poet supreme
this is your Tintern Abbey
Wordsworth lives-on
I\'m just proud, I get to call you friend
a badge I wear proud
thank you! what a delightful read
you\'ve made my day, and its only 9am
September 1st, 2023 03:16
Whatever Happened to Miriam
L. B. Mek said:
You\'re weaving Mythology\'s Hydra
with a nation\'s sanskrit traditions
Paulo Coelho, played the same dance when in the alchemist
he had love meet at an Oasis
between a water carrier and a shepherd
is Miriam, a wished for mirage
like the name suggests
or simply a memory, unfulfilled...
(do i get pity marks for effort..)
lol
🍻 cheers, to you Hyung
for serving-up another poetic delight
September 1st, 2023 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
You\'re weaving Mythology\'s Hydra
with a nation\'s sanskrit traditions
Paulo Coelho, played the same dance when in the alchemist
he had love meet at an Oasis
between a water carrier and a shepherd
is Miriam, a wished for mirage
like the name suggests
or simply a memory, unfulfilled...
(do i get pity marks for effort..)
lol
🍻 cheers, to you Hyung
for serving-up another poetic delight
September 1st, 2023 03:11
The Making of a Single Murmuration
L. B. Mek said:
(aligned, we\'re segregated
by invisible machinations
yet with every other thought
someone, somewhere is sharing
our frowning murmurations
and starling\'s in-flight
our only witness to these threads
of self-curated happenstance...)
such a deep write, Hyung
(I read and strive
to comprehend, learn and appreciate)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
(aligned, we\'re segregated
by invisible machinations
yet with every other thought
someone, somewhere is sharing
our frowning murmurations
and starling\'s in-flight
our only witness to these threads
of self-curated happenstance...)
such a deep write, Hyung
(I read and strive
to comprehend, learn and appreciate)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 03:00
Bang Goes Another Theory
L. B. Mek said:
and there is something
about seedless grapes
and Bill Gates
buying-up all the farms
then producing
commercial meat in laboratories...
yes, dear wise Poet
\'There is something electromagtastic,\'
\'about the destruction found in re-birth
and the proceeds of
artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..\'
and sadly, very few like me
will ever truly comprehend
\' the enormity and asceticism\' of these most haunting foreshadowing
of our collective society\'s projection
upon a path of irreversible demise...
September 1st, 2023 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
and there is something
about seedless grapes
and Bill Gates
buying-up all the farms
then producing
commercial meat in laboratories...
yes, dear wise Poet
\'There is something electromagtastic,\'
\'about the destruction found in re-birth
and the proceeds of
artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..\'
and sadly, very few like me
will ever truly comprehend
\' the enormity and asceticism\' of these most haunting foreshadowing
of our collective society\'s projection
upon a path of irreversible demise...
September 1st, 2023 02:47
On Returning to Gullworthy
LIZ said:
Sounds like even though you feel like you\'ve been away for years, you remember very vivid details! Took me on a trip for sure! But then again, you always do! I have to say, you\'re one of 3 people who always has me reaching for a dictionary. LOL-Thank you for the author comment. I feel like that was for my benefit 😁 I love how you play with words....most likely unintentional 💜
September 1st, 2023 02:37
LIZ said:
Sounds like even though you feel like you\'ve been away for years, you remember very vivid details! Took me on a trip for sure! But then again, you always do! I have to say, you\'re one of 3 people who always has me reaching for a dictionary. LOL-Thank you for the author comment. I feel like that was for my benefit 😁 I love how you play with words....most likely unintentional 💜
September 1st, 2023 02:37
On Returning to Gullworthy
Doggerel Dave said:
Man oh man, a rich word painting if I\'ve ever read one... almost lived there myself....
PS: The afghan must have lost it\'s distinctive olfactory properties by now, surely?
September 1st, 2023 01:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Man oh man, a rich word painting if I\'ve ever read one... almost lived there myself....
PS: The afghan must have lost it\'s distinctive olfactory properties by now, surely?
September 1st, 2023 01:57
On Returning to Gullworthy
Goldfinch60 said:
Betsy will always be there for you Neville, the characters in our life are never forgotten.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Betsy will always be there for you Neville, the characters in our life are never forgotten.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:44
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Goldfinch60 said:
Those meetings can filled with such emotion Neville and can therefore bring back both good and sad memories.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Those meetings can filled with such emotion Neville and can therefore bring back both good and sad memories.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:20
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Bobby O said:
I search out what you write because it has proven piece after piece to be interesting and thought provoking. It’s just right THERE.
September 1st, 2023 00:12
Bobby O said:
I search out what you write because it has proven piece after piece to be interesting and thought provoking. It’s just right THERE.
September 1st, 2023 00:12
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Bobby O said:
The vaguest direction I would put that down as victory. Might I guess that semi directional glance was her hinting that she has a fond memory that while not quite ready for a replay the fondness still touches her and it is privilege.
August 31st, 2023 23:54
Bobby O said:
The vaguest direction I would put that down as victory. Might I guess that semi directional glance was her hinting that she has a fond memory that while not quite ready for a replay the fondness still touches her and it is privilege.
August 31st, 2023 23:54
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Bella Shepard said:
The Miriam I found was the sister of Moses, and the beautiful story of her well. Your lady must be quite remarkable by comparison. Your verse rich, and delightful. Thank you dear friend.
August 31st, 2023 14:31
Bella Shepard said:
The Miriam I found was the sister of Moses, and the beautiful story of her well. Your lady must be quite remarkable by comparison. Your verse rich, and delightful. Thank you dear friend.
August 31st, 2023 14:31
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Parisab said:
This brief encounter needs no introduction-I am sure she saw that you appreciate her beauty and labor-thanks for the write-
August 31st, 2023 09:28
Parisab said:
This brief encounter needs no introduction-I am sure she saw that you appreciate her beauty and labor-thanks for the write-
August 31st, 2023 09:28
Whatever Happened to Miriam
orchidee said:
Just call me Miriam (in disguise). lol.
August 31st, 2023 07:34
orchidee said:
Just call me Miriam (in disguise). lol.
August 31st, 2023 07:34
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno what the final score was in the exchange above, but a quick scan of biblical and torah references didn\'t yield much info either.... lack of both water and nakedness...
August 31st, 2023 04:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno what the final score was in the exchange above, but a quick scan of biblical and torah references didn\'t yield much info either.... lack of both water and nakedness...
August 31st, 2023 04:52
Whatever Happened to Miriam
LIZ said:
Absolutely! But you might have to turn me in the right direction. That\'s why I said my mind\'s all over the place. 😆 now I\'m thinking about Miriam and the Nile. Lord help me! But all in all, the experience seems to me like a moment of bliss. I\'m in my feminine energy at the moment so....help? 😉 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:59
LIZ said:
Absolutely! But you might have to turn me in the right direction. That\'s why I said my mind\'s all over the place. 😆 now I\'m thinking about Miriam and the Nile. Lord help me! But all in all, the experience seems to me like a moment of bliss. I\'m in my feminine energy at the moment so....help? 😉 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:59
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