Comments received on poems by Neville
A Brief Inconvenience
Doggerel Dave said:
Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev for exposing such frankness, in all probability resulting in much trauma and numerous visits to a psychiatrist.....
February 23rd, 2023 03:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev for exposing such frankness, in all probability resulting in much trauma and numerous visits to a psychiatrist.....
February 23rd, 2023 03:33
Checking In
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed let departures be brief for those who checking in find love waiting again for exchanges. An insightfully gentle write our Nev......x
February 22nd, 2023 05:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed let departures be brief for those who checking in find love waiting again for exchanges. An insightfully gentle write our Nev......x
February 22nd, 2023 05:35
Checking In
Christina8 said:
Very detailed, I enjoyed it! Those words she left there at the table were yours to devour.....how sweet!
February 22nd, 2023 05:19
Christina8 said:
Very detailed, I enjoyed it! Those words she left there at the table were yours to devour.....how sweet!
February 22nd, 2023 05:19
Checking In
orchidee said:
Words? I never say anything to KP. I can never get a word in! lol.
February 22nd, 2023 02:56
orchidee said:
Words? I never say anything to KP. I can never get a word in! lol.
February 22nd, 2023 02:56
It Should Never Happen To a Vet
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville and so very true, they get forgotten in life after they have given all for the country.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville and so very true, they get forgotten in life after they have given all for the country.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:57
Taken From a Diary Found
Goldfinch60 said:
A lady the you will always remember Neville.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
A lady the you will always remember Neville.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:52
Taken From a Diary Found
orchidee said:
Or - you found my old dairy? I thought I binned it! lol.
February 21st, 2023 05:31
orchidee said:
Or - you found my old dairy? I thought I binned it! lol.
February 21st, 2023 05:31
Taken From a Diary Found
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah yes - - she be the one to remember as writ in a time back when and now resurrected versed so appealingly fresh................x.
February 21st, 2023 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah yes - - she be the one to remember as writ in a time back when and now resurrected versed so appealingly fresh................x.
February 21st, 2023 03:47
Taken From a Diary Found
mvvenkataraman said:
A woman can transform a man\'s life,
Or cause severe harm to give strife,
She can make him forever rejoice
By having at his side equipoise,
Or she can make him have displeasure,
With agony that God even can\'t measure!
February 21st, 2023 03:35
mvvenkataraman said:
A woman can transform a man\'s life,
Or cause severe harm to give strife,
She can make him forever rejoice
By having at his side equipoise,
Or she can make him have displeasure,
With agony that God even can\'t measure!
February 21st, 2023 03:35
Taken From a Diary Found
Doggerel Dave said:
Get away with it in the stiff canteen....?
Better than the mile high rub....?
The stuff risqué fantasies are made of, Nev (risqué as in risky......).🙂
February 21st, 2023 03:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Get away with it in the stiff canteen....?
Better than the mile high rub....?
The stuff risqué fantasies are made of, Nev (risqué as in risky......).🙂
February 21st, 2023 03:24
Taken From a Diary Found
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna dash to meet her! Though it will cause me several swoons. I can\'t take Fido along with me. He will quench any ardour, dampen any excitement, etc. lol.
February 21st, 2023 03:06
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna dash to meet her! Though it will cause me several swoons. I can\'t take Fido along with me. He will quench any ardour, dampen any excitement, etc. lol.
February 21st, 2023 03:06
It Should Never Happen To a Vet
Christina8 said:
Vets are often forgotten here in america as well. There is a charity to stop veteran suicides. Sad poem but well done!
February 20th, 2023 08:42
Christina8 said:
Vets are often forgotten here in america as well. There is a charity to stop veteran suicides. Sad poem but well done!
February 20th, 2023 08:42
It Should Never Happen To a Vet
Fay Slimm. said:
Vets of any war are often forgotten - -- shame on the system that uses and then refuses responsibility - -- makes your heart cry out for justice dont it mon ami. ?
February 20th, 2023 04:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Vets of any war are often forgotten - -- shame on the system that uses and then refuses responsibility - -- makes your heart cry out for justice dont it mon ami. ?
February 20th, 2023 04:59
It Should Never Happen To a Vet
L. B. Mek said:
reality\'s sobering, unpoetic
essential Poesy
as exemplary, conduit
spotlighting our ugly, that
we so try to pretend and hide
in our convolutedly bankrupt
society...
thank you! dear Poet
for not letting us get away with it
February 20th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
reality\'s sobering, unpoetic
essential Poesy
as exemplary, conduit
spotlighting our ugly, that
we so try to pretend and hide
in our convolutedly bankrupt
society...
thank you! dear Poet
for not letting us get away with it
February 20th, 2023 04:13
Two Odd Numbers
L. B. Mek said:
Heinz and Kama Sutra
what a cocktail of sensuality
to word, with such vividity
our \'messy\' in love
lovemaking, to be more precise
beyond the physical, even
such a fun read, Hyung
and indeed, opposites
do magnetise
our pulsating, attractions..
February 20th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
Heinz and Kama Sutra
what a cocktail of sensuality
to word, with such vividity
our \'messy\' in love
lovemaking, to be more precise
beyond the physical, even
such a fun read, Hyung
and indeed, opposites
do magnetise
our pulsating, attractions..
February 20th, 2023 04:09
Redundant Crows
L. B. Mek said:
\'murmerations\'
that\'s such refined imagery
a word anchoring an entire poem
I bow to your mastery, Hyung
I read and learn
February 20th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'murmerations\'
that\'s such refined imagery
a word anchoring an entire poem
I bow to your mastery, Hyung
I read and learn
February 20th, 2023 04:04
It Should Never Happen To a Vet
Doggerel Dave said:
Absobloodylutely, Nev.
There are nothing but casualties - the only fruits of war.
February 20th, 2023 03:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Absobloodylutely, Nev.
There are nothing but casualties - the only fruits of war.
February 20th, 2023 03:45
It Should Never Happen To a Vet
orchidee said:
I never notice KP if she\'s around! lol.
February 20th, 2023 03:21
orchidee said:
I never notice KP if she\'s around! lol.
February 20th, 2023 03:21
Two Odd Numbers
Christina8 said:
I like the poem....the numbers 6 and 9 spring to mind but theres nothing odd about them! :) Have a great day!
February 19th, 2023 11:35
Christina8 said:
I like the poem....the numbers 6 and 9 spring to mind but theres nothing odd about them! :) Have a great day!
February 19th, 2023 11:35
Two Odd Numbers
Fay Slimm. said:
A five and a seven might not agree but position for lovers according to K. Sutra. methinks means everything - - - at least that\'s my handle on deciphering your Two Odd Numbers ami - -- well p\'raps maybe .................x
February 19th, 2023 10:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A five and a seven might not agree but position for lovers according to K. Sutra. methinks means everything - - - at least that\'s my handle on deciphering your Two Odd Numbers ami - -- well p\'raps maybe .................x
February 19th, 2023 10:27
Two Odd Numbers
Doggerel Dave said:
Two odd numbers? I\'m not sure which, either the baked beans or the Kama Sutra got me salivating.... Such are the more minor difficulties of old age - avoid it if you can, Nev.
February 19th, 2023 04:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Two odd numbers? I\'m not sure which, either the baked beans or the Kama Sutra got me salivating.... Such are the more minor difficulties of old age - avoid it if you can, Nev.
February 19th, 2023 04:55
Two Odd Numbers
orchidee said:
Yep, 5 and 7 for Heinz - two odd numbers there.
I best have the baked beans and not the Karma Sutra. Or should I get out more, and live a little?! lol.
February 19th, 2023 03:19
orchidee said:
Yep, 5 and 7 for Heinz - two odd numbers there.
I best have the baked beans and not the Karma Sutra. Or should I get out more, and live a little?! lol.
February 19th, 2023 03:19
Two Odd Numbers
2781 said:
Baked beans or the Kama-Sutra. I can see the conflict there.
February 19th, 2023 02:38
2781 said:
Baked beans or the Kama-Sutra. I can see the conflict there.
February 19th, 2023 02:38
Redundant Crows
Doggerel Dave said:
Really feel I should have used \'murmurations\' somewhere..... I\'ll keep it in mind...thanks, Nev!
The feeling that like an expanding universe (but not in an inevitable or right way), we are moving apart from each other, has a certain resonance for me....
February 18th, 2023 20:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Really feel I should have used \'murmurations\' somewhere..... I\'ll keep it in mind...thanks, Nev!
The feeling that like an expanding universe (but not in an inevitable or right way), we are moving apart from each other, has a certain resonance for me....
February 18th, 2023 20:32
Redundant Crows
Fay Slimm. said:
Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous bird- murmerations - oh yes indeed - - \"togetherness\" if it really becomes redundant will without doubt cripple humanity with far more than loneliness - - an apt title too for your foreseeing write my friend.................x
February 18th, 2023 11:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous bird- murmerations - oh yes indeed - - \"togetherness\" if it really becomes redundant will without doubt cripple humanity with far more than loneliness - - an apt title too for your foreseeing write my friend.................x
February 18th, 2023 11:08
Redundant Crows
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a murmeration like ya can beat an egg?! As I say, I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.
February 18th, 2023 03:28
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a murmeration like ya can beat an egg?! As I say, I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.
February 18th, 2023 03:28
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