Comments received on poems by Neville
While Out Busy Partying
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words Neville.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words Neville.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 01:26
Let’s Play Sushi
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with \"lover\'s sushi\" create a sensual and intimate atmosphere.
August 15th, 2023 15:10
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with \"lover\'s sushi\" create a sensual and intimate atmosphere.
August 15th, 2023 15:10
Let’s Play Sushi
orchidee said:
I\'ll set those giant hamsters on her - so some think they are, in my pic! lol.
August 15th, 2023 07:21
orchidee said:
I\'ll set those giant hamsters on her - so some think they are, in my pic! lol.
August 15th, 2023 07:21
Let’s Play Sushi
orchidee said:
Good write N.
If KP\'s not a trout, she\'s some slithering reptile. \'You reptile, you\', I say to her! lol.
August 15th, 2023 02:41
orchidee said:
Good write N.
If KP\'s not a trout, she\'s some slithering reptile. \'You reptile, you\', I say to her! lol.
August 15th, 2023 02:41
Let’s Play Sushi
LIZ said:
Oh boy! I love the title! I could say so many things about this....but I\'ll be...sort of...good. I would normally say, I don\'t like sushi (raw meat)...and I\'m a bodybuilder so I wouldn\'t say it too loud...BUT, in this sense, I will always have my lover\'s sushi...but it will be slowly cooked 😉. AND, I would have black heels and a leopard print kimono. 🐆
August 15th, 2023 02:36
LIZ said:
Oh boy! I love the title! I could say so many things about this....but I\'ll be...sort of...good. I would normally say, I don\'t like sushi (raw meat)...and I\'m a bodybuilder so I wouldn\'t say it too loud...BUT, in this sense, I will always have my lover\'s sushi...but it will be slowly cooked 😉. AND, I would have black heels and a leopard print kimono. 🐆
August 15th, 2023 02:36
Let’s Play Sushi
Doggerel Dave said:
Not very keen on sushi..... still.....in certain given situations... I could conceivably make an effort.... and if a chase were on...then would it not be sporting to let her...
August 15th, 2023 01:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Not very keen on sushi..... still.....in certain given situations... I could conceivably make an effort.... and if a chase were on...then would it not be sporting to let her...
August 15th, 2023 01:28
Mused
Parisab said:
You have changed the old saying of it takes (three) to “tangoed” I like the interplay of the lover, the beloved, and the pen…enjoyably dramatic as always…
August 14th, 2023 23:03
Parisab said:
You have changed the old saying of it takes (three) to “tangoed” I like the interplay of the lover, the beloved, and the pen…enjoyably dramatic as always…
August 14th, 2023 23:03
Recollecting Unusual Positions
Sunsetmet said:
Memories stay together even one thing that you love to remember and that\'s natures way of telling us what we are feeling and knowing our time will be up
August 14th, 2023 17:16
Sunsetmet said:
Memories stay together even one thing that you love to remember and that\'s natures way of telling us what we are feeling and knowing our time will be up
August 14th, 2023 17:16
Recollecting Unusual Positions
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps he died happy with his memories of her? Not to say that it appears his life had been ruined by his loss of her. Either way it\'s a great tale of lost love and what it can do to men.
Drowning in a sea of woe, perhaps. This poem makes one want for the tale of their love. We do not know either of the characters depicted here. What are their other stories. Maybe a longer poem about these two? Enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
August 14th, 2023 11:34
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps he died happy with his memories of her? Not to say that it appears his life had been ruined by his loss of her. Either way it\'s a great tale of lost love and what it can do to men.
Drowning in a sea of woe, perhaps. This poem makes one want for the tale of their love. We do not know either of the characters depicted here. What are their other stories. Maybe a longer poem about these two? Enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
August 14th, 2023 11:34
Recollecting Unusual Positions
LIZ said:
The way I see it...unreachable desires! Wanting to...but too far to touch. Dying slowly...with only memories of...love....lust? You can see it, and you\'ve tasted it, but it\'s unreachable at the moment. Magic, or witchcraft....both? Because let\'s be real, true love IS magic!! I enjoyed this one so much! 💜
August 14th, 2023 06:29
LIZ said:
The way I see it...unreachable desires! Wanting to...but too far to touch. Dying slowly...with only memories of...love....lust? You can see it, and you\'ve tasted it, but it\'s unreachable at the moment. Magic, or witchcraft....both? Because let\'s be real, true love IS magic!! I enjoyed this one so much! 💜
August 14th, 2023 06:29
Recollecting Unusual Positions
orchidee said:
A fine write N. No, no need to bark, Fido, the title does not mean THAT - positions! But thanks for barking to warn me anyway, to save me from a possible swoon. lol.
August 14th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N. No, no need to bark, Fido, the title does not mean THAT - positions! But thanks for barking to warn me anyway, to save me from a possible swoon. lol.
August 14th, 2023 01:55
Recollecting Unusual Positions
Bobby O said:
Not many things for me match the allure of the small of a women’s back. His visual thru that glass bottom perhaps represented the refraction of his life in the view if his own mind, the possible blur and magnification of the water as lens is allegorical and brings a tactile image of those last flicks for his eyes brings one to visit close. Your subject choice is always like a character within the pride you share. I love that. I’m not yet able to add that dimension to my lines. Major Nod to style !!
August 14th, 2023 01:37
Bobby O said:
Not many things for me match the allure of the small of a women’s back. His visual thru that glass bottom perhaps represented the refraction of his life in the view if his own mind, the possible blur and magnification of the water as lens is allegorical and brings a tactile image of those last flicks for his eyes brings one to visit close. Your subject choice is always like a character within the pride you share. I love that. I’m not yet able to add that dimension to my lines. Major Nod to style !!
August 14th, 2023 01:37
Yesterday’s Muse
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a bit like a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma, as any good muse should be. You broaden my horizons my friend, and for that I have to thank you.
August 13th, 2023 15:22
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a bit like a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma, as any good muse should be. You broaden my horizons my friend, and for that I have to thank you.
August 13th, 2023 15:22
Yesterday’s Muse
Kinsey Peterson said:
your poems are always so lovely. Thank you Neville
August 13th, 2023 13:34
Kinsey Peterson said:
your poems are always so lovely. Thank you Neville
August 13th, 2023 13:34
Yesterday’s Muse
Doggerel Dave said:
Here\'s to the \'Sixties!!.......and the Seventies..... and maybe their daughters linger on...... and granddau.......
August 13th, 2023 08:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Here\'s to the \'Sixties!!.......and the Seventies..... and maybe their daughters linger on...... and granddau.......
August 13th, 2023 08:38
Yesterday’s Muse
LIZ said:
First of all Neville, \"giving head, that is
and making bread\" is my line!!! 😝 Second, she seems to be all over the place....but, aren\'t we all in some way? 😆 Still...inspiration!
August 13th, 2023 04:38
LIZ said:
First of all Neville, \"giving head, that is
and making bread\" is my line!!! 😝 Second, she seems to be all over the place....but, aren\'t we all in some way? 😆 Still...inspiration!
August 13th, 2023 04:38
Yesterday’s Muse
Bobby O said:
Cry in’ and Lyin’ sounds like she now is in the circular file like the newspaper of Yesterday!
August 13th, 2023 04:33
Bobby O said:
Cry in’ and Lyin’ sounds like she now is in the circular file like the newspaper of Yesterday!
August 13th, 2023 04:33
Yesterday’s Muse
orchidee said:
I might swoon - giving head? Don\'t answer that. i.e. don\'t explain it to me in public! lol.
Fido says I should stick to making bread myself. lol.
So.... church is not just made up of little old ladies. 😁
August 13th, 2023 01:39
orchidee said:
I might swoon - giving head? Don\'t answer that. i.e. don\'t explain it to me in public! lol.
Fido says I should stick to making bread myself. lol.
So.... church is not just made up of little old ladies. 😁
August 13th, 2023 01:39
Mused
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes finding an ending can be more difficult than finding a beginning. We pray the muse sticks around long enough. And sometimes writing poetry can seem like a slow death. I\'ll end here because I can\'t think of anything else to write. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2023 18:49
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes finding an ending can be more difficult than finding a beginning. We pray the muse sticks around long enough. And sometimes writing poetry can seem like a slow death. I\'ll end here because I can\'t think of anything else to write. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2023 18:49
Mused
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, dear Nev, who can ever know when the Muse will intercede in the eleventh hour, isn\'t it always the way. Inspiration comes in the last place you look, because it\'s there you\'ve found it. Keep writing these gems, that we may admire their beauty. Take care my friend!
August 12th, 2023 13:56
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, dear Nev, who can ever know when the Muse will intercede in the eleventh hour, isn\'t it always the way. Inspiration comes in the last place you look, because it\'s there you\'ve found it. Keep writing these gems, that we may admire their beauty. Take care my friend!
August 12th, 2023 13:56
Mused
LIZ said:
Ah nice! In the literary sense....that last verse, when you think you can\'t give anymore, inspiration takes over, and with one last breath, the poetic rhyme is complete! 💜
August 12th, 2023 03:27
LIZ said:
Ah nice! In the literary sense....that last verse, when you think you can\'t give anymore, inspiration takes over, and with one last breath, the poetic rhyme is complete! 💜
August 12th, 2023 03:27
Mused
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I muse over KP, but it\'s ghastly meditations! Pictures of trouts come to mind for some reason...... lol.
August 12th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I muse over KP, but it\'s ghastly meditations! Pictures of trouts come to mind for some reason...... lol.
August 12th, 2023 02:06
Mused
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m very amused let he or she run riot after all your muse is of course your bestest buddy! A fun read dear Nev, happy Saturday. 💖
August 12th, 2023 01:56
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m very amused let he or she run riot after all your muse is of course your bestest buddy! A fun read dear Nev, happy Saturday. 💖
August 12th, 2023 01:56
Mused
Bobby O said:
I’m still wondering if the muse knew ahead or perhaps is qualified in an AI or maybe planned it all. Possible just preparing little by little so we won’t be let down. ??
August 12th, 2023 01:16
Bobby O said:
I’m still wondering if the muse knew ahead or perhaps is qualified in an AI or maybe planned it all. Possible just preparing little by little so we won’t be let down. ??
August 12th, 2023 01:16
A Moment of Enlightenment
Sunsetmet said:
This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much
August 11th, 2023 15:11
Sunsetmet said:
This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much
August 11th, 2023 15:11
A Thought For a Day
Christina8 said:
Hopefully every single day is special to many of us. Unfortunate to the ones suffering. Great thought for the day! x
August 11th, 2023 09:08
Christina8 said:
Hopefully every single day is special to many of us. Unfortunate to the ones suffering. Great thought for the day! x
August 11th, 2023 09:08
A Moment of Enlightenment
LIZ said:
Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🤣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That\'s just how I look at it. Nice piece! 💜
August 11th, 2023 06:02
LIZ said:
Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🤣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That\'s just how I look at it. Nice piece! 💜
August 11th, 2023 06:02
A Moment of Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah but now the wall has come down. 🤗 🤣 💖
August 11th, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah but now the wall has come down. 🤗 🤣 💖
August 11th, 2023 03:14
A Moment of Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)
August 11th, 2023 02:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)
August 11th, 2023 02:25
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