Comments received on poems by Neville
That Certain Something
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing intense about KP and I, only that we spent some nights camping in separate tents (in-tents) Doh!
September 8th, 2023 04:19
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing intense about KP and I, only that we spent some nights camping in separate tents (in-tents) Doh!
September 8th, 2023 04:19
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
L. B. Mek said:
may she rest in peace
(i looked but sadly couldn\'t find any links to her work)
still, if she inspired and nourished
the burgeoning talents of my Poet supreme
than I imagine I would have loved reading her work
may you ever celebrate her memory with your ink, kind Poet
sorry for your loss, what a testing week its been for you
i\'m sorry Hyung
have a an extra glass or two, on me
🍻
hope you n yours have a peaceful weekend
September 8th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
may she rest in peace
(i looked but sadly couldn\'t find any links to her work)
still, if she inspired and nourished
the burgeoning talents of my Poet supreme
than I imagine I would have loved reading her work
may you ever celebrate her memory with your ink, kind Poet
sorry for your loss, what a testing week its been for you
i\'m sorry Hyung
have a an extra glass or two, on me
🍻
hope you n yours have a peaceful weekend
September 8th, 2023 03:07
Something About Shells
L. B. Mek said:
as Beautiful! as a mesmeric seashell
(i read and learn, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
as Beautiful! as a mesmeric seashell
(i read and learn, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 02:58
Me and My Long List of Things
L. B. Mek said:
so gentle and intimate, Hyung
this little bird, will cherish these words
and the Poet, they showcase
September 8th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
so gentle and intimate, Hyung
this little bird, will cherish these words
and the Poet, they showcase
September 8th, 2023 02:56
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Bella Shepard said:
What a privilege to have known someone such as she, a true renaissance woman. A beautiful tribute! Now it is my task to find her and read.
September 7th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
What a privilege to have known someone such as she, a true renaissance woman. A beautiful tribute! Now it is my task to find her and read.
September 7th, 2023 16:05
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Doggerel Dave said:
Tributes and cigars - the wonder of it all....with emphasis on \'wonder\'....................................................................... Are mythologies not meant to entertain and please?
September 7th, 2023 15:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Tributes and cigars - the wonder of it all....with emphasis on \'wonder\'....................................................................... Are mythologies not meant to entertain and please?
September 7th, 2023 15:25
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Yep, I remember having a cigar with her, while discussing poetry! :)
September 7th, 2023 07:50
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Yep, I remember having a cigar with her, while discussing poetry! :)
September 7th, 2023 07:50
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Doggerel Dave said:
If only.... if only we could all have just a smattering of the talent Esme AKA Grace bestowed upon the world......... not quite there yet......
September 7th, 2023 06:30
Doggerel Dave said:
If only.... if only we could all have just a smattering of the talent Esme AKA Grace bestowed upon the world......... not quite there yet......
September 7th, 2023 06:30
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
LIZ said:
This is such a beautiful tribute, not only for someone you obviously admired, but to poetry! By doing this, you keep her memory alive! 💜
September 7th, 2023 04:39
LIZ said:
This is such a beautiful tribute, not only for someone you obviously admired, but to poetry! By doing this, you keep her memory alive! 💜
September 7th, 2023 04:39
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my dearest Nev, this is incredibly, incredibly sad to know, our dear Grace has past away. I\'m so deeply touched by this poem and incredibly sad. I\'m staring at this writing, not knowing really what to say, except for your beautiful heart that has written such a dedication for one of the most gracious ladies on my poetic side, she had everything humour knowledge kindness and a magnificent poetic pen she will be deeply missed , it was truly an honour to have known her. 💖
September 7th, 2023 03:00
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my dearest Nev, this is incredibly, incredibly sad to know, our dear Grace has past away. I\'m so deeply touched by this poem and incredibly sad. I\'m staring at this writing, not knowing really what to say, except for your beautiful heart that has written such a dedication for one of the most gracious ladies on my poetic side, she had everything humour knowledge kindness and a magnificent poetic pen she will be deeply missed , it was truly an honour to have known her. 💖
September 7th, 2023 03:00
Something About Shells
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have used shells and the ocean to describe this lovely memory. There is a fascination there like no other, and you have formed a pearl of a poem here. Beautifully done dear friend!
September 6th, 2023 14:36
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have used shells and the ocean to describe this lovely memory. There is a fascination there like no other, and you have formed a pearl of a poem here. Beautifully done dear friend!
September 6th, 2023 14:36
Something About Shells
Doggerel Dave said:
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered poetry....why not....?
With care - round here some seashells can contain (if they haven\'t vacated the premises) very antisocial (read poisonous) little buggers.....
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered poetry....why not....?
With care - round here some seashells can contain (if they haven\'t vacated the premises) very antisocial (read poisonous) little buggers.....
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Something About Shells
orchidee said:
And furthermore - I can\'t shay your title after a couple of gins! Shumthingsh about shellsh. Good acting from me, innit? lol.
September 6th, 2023 05:41
orchidee said:
And furthermore - I can\'t shay your title after a couple of gins! Shumthingsh about shellsh. Good acting from me, innit? lol.
September 6th, 2023 05:41
Something About Shells
LIZ said:
You took me there with you! I enjoy the way you describe memories/moments so much! \"with the call, the kiss and the mighty roar of the sea\" wow!!! Beautiful! 💜
September 6th, 2023 02:28
LIZ said:
You took me there with you! I enjoy the way you describe memories/moments so much! \"with the call, the kiss and the mighty roar of the sea\" wow!!! Beautiful! 💜
September 6th, 2023 02:28
Something About Shells
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Nev. Such emotion captured and sound too. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:05
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Nev. Such emotion captured and sound too. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:05
Something About Shells
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Whenever I take up a shell and listen to it - melodious tones? Nope, all I hear is KP nagging in me \'shell-like\' (me ear)! lol.
September 6th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Whenever I take up a shell and listen to it - melodious tones? Nope, all I hear is KP nagging in me \'shell-like\' (me ear)! lol.
September 6th, 2023 01:44
Me and My Long List of Things
Bella Shepard said:
Found myself wondering if I could sing this to the tune of \"My Favorite Things\". I\'m no Julie Andrews, but it didn\'t sound too bad. When you are fun, you are really fun. Loved this!
September 5th, 2023 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Found myself wondering if I could sing this to the tune of \"My Favorite Things\". I\'m no Julie Andrews, but it didn\'t sound too bad. When you are fun, you are really fun. Loved this!
September 5th, 2023 13:53
Me and My Long List of Things
LIZ said:
UFFFFFFF OK, you listed a few of mine.
HONESTY being the biggest one!!! 💜
September 5th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
UFFFFFFF OK, you listed a few of mine.
HONESTY being the biggest one!!! 💜
September 5th, 2023 02:40
Me and My Long List of Things
Teddy.15 said:
I always knew you and I were so much alike. This list is mine. 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:21
Teddy.15 said:
I always knew you and I were so much alike. This list is mine. 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:21
Me and My Long List of Things
Doggerel Dave said:
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to wristwatches, Cheese, birds, clocks, honesty, on time, justice, poetry.
Add mine: Bottles – not screw top - non vintage, old junk furniture (it’s the way I live), West German pottery, mazes and labyrinths, books (form plus content) scotch and vino ……………………….
You’ve started something now, amendments and additions to perhaps follow….
September 5th, 2023 01:57
Doggerel Dave said:
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to wristwatches, Cheese, birds, clocks, honesty, on time, justice, poetry.
Add mine: Bottles – not screw top - non vintage, old junk furniture (it’s the way I live), West German pottery, mazes and labyrinths, books (form plus content) scotch and vino ……………………….
You’ve started something now, amendments and additions to perhaps follow….
September 5th, 2023 01:57
Me and My Long List of Things
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP has a list too. Here\'s the start of it:
Me
Me
Me......
September 5th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP has a list too. Here\'s the start of it:
Me
Me
Me......
September 5th, 2023 01:47
Non Figmental
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write my friend. Is that ink indelible or non-indelible? I think I\'ll just have a little lie down after this, need some recovery time.
September 4th, 2023 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write my friend. Is that ink indelible or non-indelible? I think I\'ll just have a little lie down after this, need some recovery time.
September 4th, 2023 13:53
Non Figmental
L. B. Mek said:
lmao
much better than my vertebrae ramblings
(so true Hyung
and please forgive my tendency to 🔞
my scribbles
it is not age, but maturity of thought
that I fear i need to warn readers of)
September 4th, 2023 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
lmao
much better than my vertebrae ramblings
(so true Hyung
and please forgive my tendency to 🔞
my scribbles
it is not age, but maturity of thought
that I fear i need to warn readers of)
September 4th, 2023 04:47
Dearth
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tho’ should we
by chance,
ever meet again
my love ..
I am sure I would
more than
just disappoint ..\'
as i read, recognise and relate
to the brave transparency in these choice words
how I fear, the truth they promise...
a dread, so many of my nightmares
have been sculpted out of..
(such great pacing, dear Poet
so blatantly subtle, so tentatively bold
such refined skill you showcase)
September 4th, 2023 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tho’ should we
by chance,
ever meet again
my love ..
I am sure I would
more than
just disappoint ..\'
as i read, recognise and relate
to the brave transparency in these choice words
how I fear, the truth they promise...
a dread, so many of my nightmares
have been sculpted out of..
(such great pacing, dear Poet
so blatantly subtle, so tentatively bold
such refined skill you showcase)
September 4th, 2023 04:43
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
\'All the way down
to that,
stricken lost soul
of yours ..
Where I might
just be permitted
to dispense
once and for all\'
\'To discard
the weight of my
longing
and to finally feel,
for once at least,\'
!!! BRILLIANT !!!
the Poet supreme
this is why, I am such a grateful fan
oh most talented friend of mind
(once more
I humbly bow to your Superior talent
Hyung!)
September 4th, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'All the way down
to that,
stricken lost soul
of yours ..
Where I might
just be permitted
to dispense
once and for all\'
\'To discard
the weight of my
longing
and to finally feel,
for once at least,\'
!!! BRILLIANT !!!
the Poet supreme
this is why, I am such a grateful fan
oh most talented friend of mind
(once more
I humbly bow to your Superior talent
Hyung!)
September 4th, 2023 04:38
Non Figmental
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot, yer put up yer shingle as a tattooist did yer,,,,,,?
Given up on the trickcyclist game??
September 4th, 2023 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot, yer put up yer shingle as a tattooist did yer,,,,,,?
Given up on the trickcyclist game??
September 4th, 2023 04:28
Non Figmental
LIZ said:
Mmmm this is how we\'re starting the week huh? I got you! Slowly......up and down...in whispers! My spine is screaming!!! You\'re speaking my language. 💜 By the way....I laughed way too hard at your author comment!! 😆
September 4th, 2023 02:33
LIZ said:
Mmmm this is how we\'re starting the week huh? I got you! Slowly......up and down...in whispers! My spine is screaming!!! You\'re speaking my language. 💜 By the way....I laughed way too hard at your author comment!! 😆
September 4th, 2023 02:33
Dearth
Goldfinch60 said:
Cleverly written Neville, it may be that that hunger may return for both of you.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Cleverly written Neville, it may be that that hunger may return for both of you.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:09
Non Figmental
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F word. lol.
Pen before tongue - you\'ll get a mouthful of ink!
I dare not lick KP anywhere - I would taste botox. Bleeuurggh!
September 4th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F word. lol.
Pen before tongue - you\'ll get a mouthful of ink!
I dare not lick KP anywhere - I would taste botox. Bleeuurggh!
September 4th, 2023 02:00
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