Comments received on poems by Neville
Once When She Tasted of Apples
orchidee said:
The only juice from KP is bitter lemon juice. It\'s my fault - I make her bitter by slagging her off every day. lol.
I might swoon if I look for too many meanings in this.
February 4th, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
The only juice from KP is bitter lemon juice. It\'s my fault - I make her bitter by slagging her off every day. lol.
I might swoon if I look for too many meanings in this.
February 4th, 2024 03:15
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Goldfinch60 said:
May that juice run down your lips once more Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May that juice run down your lips once more Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2024 02:24
Once When She Tasted of Apples
Thomas W Case said:
Very hot work, thirsty for some cider.
February 3rd, 2024 21:37
Thomas W Case said:
Very hot work, thirsty for some cider.
February 3rd, 2024 21:37
The Gagging of Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47
Once When She Tasted of Apples
2781 said:
I said, I will go up to the palm tree,I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be like clusters on the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
February 3rd, 2024 15:51
2781 said:
I said, I will go up to the palm tree,I will take hold of the boughs thereof: now also thy breasts shall be like clusters on the vine, and the smell of thy nose like apples;
February 3rd, 2024 15:51
The Gagging of Gaza
Parisab said:
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of their own demise-the denial of these atrocities will haunt us with trauma for generations to come-thank you for using your sensitive and honest pen, Neville
February 2nd, 2024 20:58
Parisab said:
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of their own demise-the denial of these atrocities will haunt us with trauma for generations to come-thank you for using your sensitive and honest pen, Neville
February 2nd, 2024 20:58
The Gagging of Gaza
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for the moment the penultimate usual diversion....
History from forever seems to be the mechanism which generates the ongoing conflict and characterises humankind\'s warlike behaviour.
Your piece is spot on as it defines this point in time.
Please give it wider circulation, Neville.
February 2nd, 2024 16:38
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for the moment the penultimate usual diversion....
History from forever seems to be the mechanism which generates the ongoing conflict and characterises humankind\'s warlike behaviour.
Your piece is spot on as it defines this point in time.
Please give it wider circulation, Neville.
February 2nd, 2024 16:38
The Gagging of Gaza
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem poses the question, is a strip of land more valuable than human life? Sadly, the answer is yes? This fight, over a strip of land, has been going on for 75 years, I should think the land is exhausted with the wars, and just wants peace. It\'s a pity that this strip of land cannot speak, for if it could I think it would welcome all. Brilliantly written my friend, you capture the senseless of continued conflict and wars, when all they accomplish is devestation.
February 2nd, 2024 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem poses the question, is a strip of land more valuable than human life? Sadly, the answer is yes? This fight, over a strip of land, has been going on for 75 years, I should think the land is exhausted with the wars, and just wants peace. It\'s a pity that this strip of land cannot speak, for if it could I think it would welcome all. Brilliantly written my friend, you capture the senseless of continued conflict and wars, when all they accomplish is devestation.
February 2nd, 2024 16:05
The Gagging of Gaza
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - some garotting going on between KP and I?! That\'s going too far, you naughty guinea pig, says Fido.
February 2nd, 2024 12:30
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - some garotting going on between KP and I?! That\'s going too far, you naughty guinea pig, says Fido.
February 2nd, 2024 12:30
The Gagging of Gaza
Teddy.15 said:
And right before all our eyes, I can\'t believe we live in this world to be honest. A magnificent piece of poetry that I wish wasn\'t real and going on as we speak. Kudos 👏
February 2nd, 2024 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
And right before all our eyes, I can\'t believe we live in this world to be honest. A magnificent piece of poetry that I wish wasn\'t real and going on as we speak. Kudos 👏
February 2nd, 2024 12:10
The Gagging of Gaza
Lorenz said:
For 20 years I was in charge of souls in communities for the (so-called) mentally handicapped .I have built a reality...
February 2nd, 2024 09:02
Lorenz said:
For 20 years I was in charge of souls in communities for the (so-called) mentally handicapped .I have built a reality...
February 2nd, 2024 09:02
The Gagging of Gaza
Lorenz said:
Enough with the psychopath mattimala\'s call to kill !
February 2nd, 2024 06:43
Lorenz said:
Enough with the psychopath mattimala\'s call to kill !
February 2nd, 2024 06:43
Dare to Stray
Goldfinch60 said:
We must each go along our own paths Neville to get to the place where we want to be.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We must each go along our own paths Neville to get to the place where we want to be.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:49
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, who is counting, I\'m not.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, who is counting, I\'m not.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:21
Dare to Stray
Bella Shepard said:
Tis safer to stray when the return route is well marked. Good judgement, and on occasion, a good pair of running shoes are essential. Love the visual of these lines, and love the poem!
February 1st, 2024 16:16
Bella Shepard said:
Tis safer to stray when the return route is well marked. Good judgement, and on occasion, a good pair of running shoes are essential. Love the visual of these lines, and love the poem!
February 1st, 2024 16:16
Dare to Stray
Doggerel Dave said:
Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat principle well defined.
February 1st, 2024 07:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat principle well defined.
February 1st, 2024 07:01
Dare to Stray
Teddy.15 said:
Being in the right place at the right time and there\'s being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Wonderful provoking the readers mind. ❤️
February 1st, 2024 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
Being in the right place at the right time and there\'s being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Wonderful provoking the readers mind. ❤️
February 1st, 2024 03:25
Dare to Stray
orchidee said:
It\'s a temptation to stray from KP - stray from old trouts, that is! lol. I never see her 99% of the time in person anyway, only at botox clinics, in the papers, magazines, etc. Dunno why I\'m complaining!
February 1st, 2024 03:18
orchidee said:
It\'s a temptation to stray from KP - stray from old trouts, that is! lol. I never see her 99% of the time in person anyway, only at botox clinics, in the papers, magazines, etc. Dunno why I\'m complaining!
February 1st, 2024 03:18
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Bobby O said:
I count but I reserve the right to refuse audit and to creatively classify. When you are in “observation mode w charachature as category “ I’d be good for a two hour session deeply coasting with an inveigled communique
February 1st, 2024 01:14
Bobby O said:
I count but I reserve the right to refuse audit and to creatively classify. When you are in “observation mode w charachature as category “ I’d be good for a two hour session deeply coasting with an inveigled communique
February 1st, 2024 01:14
Sorry
Cassie58 said:
The hardest word for some and yet when said with conviction, the most powerful of all. Ghosts and guilt, what a combination. A car wreck if not handled with care. Thought provoking brevity here Neville. Sorry a five letter word that can move mountains. Your brevity shows much wisdom my friend.
January 31st, 2024 05:53
Cassie58 said:
The hardest word for some and yet when said with conviction, the most powerful of all. Ghosts and guilt, what a combination. A car wreck if not handled with care. Thought provoking brevity here Neville. Sorry a five letter word that can move mountains. Your brevity shows much wisdom my friend.
January 31st, 2024 05:53
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Cassie58 said:
Two out of three ain’t bad. That’s Meat Loaf. See her and run like hell - like a bat out of hell, more Meat Loaf.
But these diary entries in stanza three, sound very much like you my friend. Well two of them do. Happy Monday.
January 31st, 2024 05:46
Cassie58 said:
Two out of three ain’t bad. That’s Meat Loaf. See her and run like hell - like a bat out of hell, more Meat Loaf.
But these diary entries in stanza three, sound very much like you my friend. Well two of them do. Happy Monday.
January 31st, 2024 05:46
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
orchidee said:
Yes, I score two out of three. I tried the middle line, but there\'s no escape from KP. lol.
January 31st, 2024 05:42
orchidee said:
Yes, I score two out of three. I tried the middle line, but there\'s no escape from KP. lol.
January 31st, 2024 05:42
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well known (just not by me!) quotes from an era shared by you and I.... but with so little time and despite much benign intent ....the caravan moves on....
January 31st, 2024 05:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well known (just not by me!) quotes from an era shared by you and I.... but with so little time and despite much benign intent ....the caravan moves on....
January 31st, 2024 05:34
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Teddy.15 said:
Seafood and eat it, well when I\'m anywhere near borough market that\'s my rule. oh who was you running from? And autumn could stay forever in my eyes. 🤗
January 31st, 2024 05:29
Teddy.15 said:
Seafood and eat it, well when I\'m anywhere near borough market that\'s my rule. oh who was you running from? And autumn could stay forever in my eyes. 🤗
January 31st, 2024 05:29
Just a Few Odd Diary Notes
Tom Dylan said:
Some good lines here, Neville. Feels like the out-takes from a poem.
January 31st, 2024 04:54
Tom Dylan said:
Some good lines here, Neville. Feels like the out-takes from a poem.
January 31st, 2024 04:54
Sorry
Goldfinch60 said:
That sorrow may be appreciated and take you both to a better path Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2024 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That sorrow may be appreciated and take you both to a better path Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2024 02:13
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