Comments received on poems by Neville
No Contest
L. B. Mek said:
they call it a fence
I call it my survival rope
they call it running
I call it seeing another day
they call it scared
I call it wise..
(still each to their own
an eye for an eye
is a great way to live
in a world
blinded by hate..)
October 9th, 2023 02:06
L. B. Mek said:
they call it a fence
I call it my survival rope
they call it running
I call it seeing another day
they call it scared
I call it wise..
(still each to their own
an eye for an eye
is a great way to live
in a world
blinded by hate..)
October 9th, 2023 02:06
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
L. B. Mek said:
I have seen a few abandoned wrecks
trains and ships, in my time
always a tinge of dramatic sorrow
in the scene
and the lost past it conveyed to me..
yet, still
it\'s the abandon human faces
at the bus stops, supermarkets
and shuffling along bravely
on those busy highstreets
that give me nightmares
and remind me
of what awaits, most of us
at that cruel twist of fate
in our days of laboured breath
dim minds
and yet, still inside
is that caged child
wishing.. hoping.. regretting
waiting...
(simply BRILIANT Hyung
you already know how much
I love your subtle writes!!)
thank you, this has made my morning
October 9th, 2023 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
I have seen a few abandoned wrecks
trains and ships, in my time
always a tinge of dramatic sorrow
in the scene
and the lost past it conveyed to me..
yet, still
it\'s the abandon human faces
at the bus stops, supermarkets
and shuffling along bravely
on those busy highstreets
that give me nightmares
and remind me
of what awaits, most of us
at that cruel twist of fate
in our days of laboured breath
dim minds
and yet, still inside
is that caged child
wishing.. hoping.. regretting
waiting...
(simply BRILIANT Hyung
you already know how much
I love your subtle writes!!)
thank you, this has made my morning
October 9th, 2023 02:02
No Contest
MendedFences27 said:
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat. Seems like a plan, if everyone else agrees to lose. Maybe some things are best left to their natural outcomes.
A very thought provoking poem. It stirs the reader to ponder many things; Wisdom, conquest, winning, losing, self, empathy, and morality. I believe you\'ll get varied opinions on this one. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 15:38
MendedFences27 said:
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat. Seems like a plan, if everyone else agrees to lose. Maybe some things are best left to their natural outcomes.
A very thought provoking poem. It stirs the reader to ponder many things; Wisdom, conquest, winning, losing, self, empathy, and morality. I believe you\'ll get varied opinions on this one. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 15:38
No Contest
Bella Shepard said:
I think I would say, the battles you pick in life should be worth the effort. Very thought provoking of you my friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
I think I would say, the battles you pick in life should be worth the effort. Very thought provoking of you my friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:52
No Contest
Christina8 said:
I really like this message. Like me with my anxiety, i must overcome. Do I let anything defeat me? Not usually lol. i know this write was not about me but you did an awesome job!
October 8th, 2023 08:04
Christina8 said:
I really like this message. Like me with my anxiety, i must overcome. Do I let anything defeat me? Not usually lol. i know this write was not about me but you did an awesome job!
October 8th, 2023 08:04
No Contest
LIZ said:
To attemp to defeat by force is often useless!! A difficult struggle of power! Our choice though!! 💜💜💜
October 8th, 2023 04:16
LIZ said:
To attemp to defeat by force is often useless!! A difficult struggle of power! Our choice though!! 💜💜💜
October 8th, 2023 04:16
No Contest
Teddy.15 said:
Put two types of crazy in a boxing ring and no one wins ❤️
October 8th, 2023 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Put two types of crazy in a boxing ring and no one wins ❤️
October 8th, 2023 03:01
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less value these days. it\'s tough to lose another wooden ship, for they\'ll not be building any more. I guess she was \"waiting on the tide\" for quite some time. A sad but beautiful poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2023 21:20
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less value these days. it\'s tough to lose another wooden ship, for they\'ll not be building any more. I guess she was \"waiting on the tide\" for quite some time. A sad but beautiful poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2023 21:20
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Bobby O said:
Splintered Oaken Seams
The whole body of the piece was sublime and it fed quality that surged and culminated with that wonderfully descriptive phrase that painted in 3D
October 7th, 2023 15:53
Bobby O said:
Splintered Oaken Seams
The whole body of the piece was sublime and it fed quality that surged and culminated with that wonderfully descriptive phrase that painted in 3D
October 7th, 2023 15:53
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Teddy.15 said:
Epic scribbles wow dear Nev, your imagery is outstanding loved this imagery so very detailed
but the finding
that really matters,
isn’t it my darling ..
For instance,
take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ❤️
October 7th, 2023 15:37
Teddy.15 said:
Epic scribbles wow dear Nev, your imagery is outstanding loved this imagery so very detailed
but the finding
that really matters,
isn’t it my darling ..
For instance,
take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ❤️
October 7th, 2023 15:37
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Accidental Poet said:
That\'s just like the feeling of falling in love N. You know you\'re about to walk through that door even though you cant see the door. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:55
Accidental Poet said:
That\'s just like the feeling of falling in love N. You know you\'re about to walk through that door even though you cant see the door. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:55
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Accidental Poet said:
But like an old truck rusting away in a field, it will take on artistic look and may someday even be the subject of oil paintings. Finely penned write N. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:46
Accidental Poet said:
But like an old truck rusting away in a field, it will take on artistic look and may someday even be the subject of oil paintings. Finely penned write N. 😉
October 7th, 2023 12:46
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Bella Shepard said:
As with any carcass, the bones are be picked clean, and the
remains, a sad memory of what once was. A woeful tale, beautifully told dear friend!
October 7th, 2023 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
As with any carcass, the bones are be picked clean, and the
remains, a sad memory of what once was. A woeful tale, beautifully told dear friend!
October 7th, 2023 12:19
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Michaelpoet said:
This is some awesome writing.
October 7th, 2023 07:23
Michaelpoet said:
This is some awesome writing.
October 7th, 2023 07:23
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Bobby O said:
Wow!🌠🌠
I’m a believer. Snow drops emerging, heard in distance, above when doves cry. I hear Prince on guitar bringing this above the visceral that already exists. I read it twice and added it to my file if keepers that add force to my life.
October 6th, 2023 17:35
Bobby O said:
Wow!🌠🌠
I’m a believer. Snow drops emerging, heard in distance, above when doves cry. I hear Prince on guitar bringing this above the visceral that already exists. I read it twice and added it to my file if keepers that add force to my life.
October 6th, 2023 17:35
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
MendedFences27 said:
Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought after,
or are just plain missed as valueless. In the course of life much is never experienced, because of its lack of necessity. People draw the breadth of their living into the quarters of their habitat. Life becomes richer as horizons are expanded.
An eye-opening poem that gives examples of things missed and questions whether we should be more open-minded. Loved the personification of \"the leaf rejoicing.\" I believe your examples cover all of the senses save the sense of touch and I guessed this to be intentional. Great poem. - Phil A.
October 6th, 2023 14:09
MendedFences27 said:
Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought after,
or are just plain missed as valueless. In the course of life much is never experienced, because of its lack of necessity. People draw the breadth of their living into the quarters of their habitat. Life becomes richer as horizons are expanded.
An eye-opening poem that gives examples of things missed and questions whether we should be more open-minded. Loved the personification of \"the leaf rejoicing.\" I believe your examples cover all of the senses save the sense of touch and I guessed this to be intentional. Great poem. - Phil A.
October 6th, 2023 14:09
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Sunsetmet said:
I love your words truly meaningful you really thought them out thanks so much great poet
October 6th, 2023 07:22
Sunsetmet said:
I love your words truly meaningful you really thought them out thanks so much great poet
October 6th, 2023 07:22
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
arqios said:
There seems to be a significant olfactory trigger to this sensing. Mmm....
October 6th, 2023 06:16
arqios said:
There seems to be a significant olfactory trigger to this sensing. Mmm....
October 6th, 2023 06:16
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
L. B. Mek said:
\'take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ..
Visible only
in the half-light,
or the tremor
of a single leaf rejoicing,\'
Oh what a gift to drink lavishly
from your intoxicating poetic ink
A dreamscape of language
gifting a sip of fresh fall cyder brew
simply
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'THE\' Poet
thank you, Hyung
October 6th, 2023 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ..
Visible only
in the half-light,
or the tremor
of a single leaf rejoicing,\'
Oh what a gift to drink lavishly
from your intoxicating poetic ink
A dreamscape of language
gifting a sip of fresh fall cyder brew
simply
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'THE\' Poet
thank you, Hyung
October 6th, 2023 06:04
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
L. B. Mek said:
“The best bridge
between despair and hope
is a good night\'s sleep.”
well, too fckn bad
so many of us, are
insomniacs...
October 6th, 2023 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
“The best bridge
between despair and hope
is a good night\'s sleep.”
well, too fckn bad
so many of us, are
insomniacs...
October 6th, 2023 05:59
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
L. B. Mek said:
\'to plunge himself
into her hunger ..\'
(sadly..
.. our crude - cold humanity
is heading exactly
to that drought of emotion reality
in our soon to be
dystopian society
removed from a mirage community
let alone
that vulnerability of intimacy...)
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
\'where we offer shallow, no mess
solutions
to your lifetime of debilitating scars\'
visionary Brilliance dear Poet supreme
By the Time the majority
can relate to these lines
it will have already been
too late...
how monstrously deflating
to contemplate!
October 6th, 2023 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'to plunge himself
into her hunger ..\'
(sadly..
.. our crude - cold humanity
is heading exactly
to that drought of emotion reality
in our soon to be
dystopian society
removed from a mirage community
let alone
that vulnerability of intimacy...)
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
\'where we offer shallow, no mess
solutions
to your lifetime of debilitating scars\'
visionary Brilliance dear Poet supreme
By the Time the majority
can relate to these lines
it will have already been
too late...
how monstrously deflating
to contemplate!
October 6th, 2023 05:55
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
orchidee said:
Dang it! What we been missing? I been missing all this with KP around. All I get is the smell of botox! lol.
October 6th, 2023 04:10
orchidee said:
Dang it! What we been missing? I been missing all this with KP around. All I get is the smell of botox! lol.
October 6th, 2023 04:10
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
LIZ said:
Precognition? Because this whole poem reminds me of.....being intuitive. Having....found....recognition of something that\'s about to happen...a hint. Even maybe...de ja vu! And yet, your question at the end, to me, says....\"we know, we found, so what are we waiting for?\". Got me thinking hard! Thank you!! 💜
October 6th, 2023 03:05
LIZ said:
Precognition? Because this whole poem reminds me of.....being intuitive. Having....found....recognition of something that\'s about to happen...a hint. Even maybe...de ja vu! And yet, your question at the end, to me, says....\"we know, we found, so what are we waiting for?\". Got me thinking hard! Thank you!! 💜
October 6th, 2023 03:05
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Bella Shepard said:
Blessed sleep, do we ever get enough of it in our world today? Quantity and quality up for grabs. Wishing you peaceful sleep whenever you can grab it. Good write dear friend!
October 5th, 2023 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Blessed sleep, do we ever get enough of it in our world today? Quantity and quality up for grabs. Wishing you peaceful sleep whenever you can grab it. Good write dear friend!
October 5th, 2023 14:49
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
MendedFences27 said:
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment there, simply for the gratification of continuing on the journey of poetic expression. Sometimes we pause long enough to pen a few lines of truthfulness. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2023 11:52
MendedFences27 said:
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment there, simply for the gratification of continuing on the journey of poetic expression. Sometimes we pause long enough to pen a few lines of truthfulness. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2023 11:52
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Pop64 said:
Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way you identify its brief but required action as it is part of our lives. Well done!
October 5th, 2023 05:24
Pop64 said:
Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way you identify its brief but required action as it is part of our lives. Well done!
October 5th, 2023 05:24
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