Comments received on poems by Neville
Colour Envy
LIZ said:
For those of us who are open correct? You\'re talking to my heart! One thing\'s for sure...\"all traces of any old and now
obsolete predecessor\" must be gone before moving to the next level! You need to teach me how you come up with your titles! Love it š
August 23rd, 2023 02:44
LIZ said:
For those of us who are open correct? You\'re talking to my heart! One thing\'s for sure...\"all traces of any old and now
obsolete predecessor\" must be gone before moving to the next level! You need to teach me how you come up with your titles! Love it š
August 23rd, 2023 02:44
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
Parisab said:
āHer night scented gardenā captivated your memory with painstaking detailā¦Youāre giving us directions to a destination so very personalā¦
August 23rd, 2023 01:55
Parisab said:
āHer night scented gardenā captivated your memory with painstaking detailā¦Youāre giving us directions to a destination so very personalā¦
August 23rd, 2023 01:55
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful poem that stirs beautiful images. Such a wonderful allusion to treasured memories dear friend.
August 22nd, 2023 11:28
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful poem that stirs beautiful images. Such a wonderful allusion to treasured memories dear friend.
August 22nd, 2023 11:28
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
MendedFences27 said:
If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples.
Try to keep this floral arrangement well-watered and fed.
The metaphor teases the mind. It drives the illusion, or should I say allusion. This is a classic. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2023 09:10
MendedFences27 said:
If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples.
Try to keep this floral arrangement well-watered and fed.
The metaphor teases the mind. It drives the illusion, or should I say allusion. This is a classic. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2023 09:10
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
orchidee said:
Now a terrible joke - just call me Ambi - Mr Dextrous. Or Bambi - I\'m a Guinea Pig Dude (GPD) as one poet says! Doh!
August 22nd, 2023 06:46
orchidee said:
Now a terrible joke - just call me Ambi - Mr Dextrous. Or Bambi - I\'m a Guinea Pig Dude (GPD) as one poet says! Doh!
August 22nd, 2023 06:46
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
orchidee said:
A flowery write N. I might swoon in one interpretation of it! lol.
August 22nd, 2023 06:42
orchidee said:
A flowery write N. I might swoon in one interpretation of it! lol.
August 22nd, 2023 06:42
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
Bobby O said:
So, I asked Siri about secateurs and got nothing. I changed her accent in settings and then SIRI tells me Garden Shears. Gotta get me an Oxford I guess and then I see that Jasmine held you hostage but then I see flowers. Do I started again with a fresh Mi n d abd I really like it. BTW- I had Jasmine pictured like Halle Berry.
August 22nd, 2023 02:35
Bobby O said:
So, I asked Siri about secateurs and got nothing. I changed her accent in settings and then SIRI tells me Garden Shears. Gotta get me an Oxford I guess and then I see that Jasmine held you hostage but then I see flowers. Do I started again with a fresh Mi n d abd I really like it. BTW- I had Jasmine pictured like Halle Berry.
August 22nd, 2023 02:35
Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m going to move aside and give other\'s room to let their imagination fly....as I\'m not sure I have the capacity, Neville.......
August 22nd, 2023 02:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m going to move aside and give other\'s room to let their imagination fly....as I\'m not sure I have the capacity, Neville.......
August 22nd, 2023 02:31
Sibling Arrivalry
Bella Shepard said:
Being an only child I have no frame of reference. But when I see what siblings share all through life, I have to say I am envious. When all is good, cherish. So good!
August 21st, 2023 14:40
Bella Shepard said:
Being an only child I have no frame of reference. But when I see what siblings share all through life, I have to say I am envious. When all is good, cherish. So good!
August 21st, 2023 14:40
Sibling Arrivalry
Sunsetmet said:
When all is good again yes family is everything sometimes I wish I was more there I was super busy with s many things but I miss so much thanks again
August 21st, 2023 08:39
Sunsetmet said:
When all is good again yes family is everything sometimes I wish I was more there I was super busy with s many things but I miss so much thanks again
August 21st, 2023 08:39
Sibling Arrivalry
LIZ said:
At least he remembered all is good! Although, a lot of us do take for granted the fact that we can just dash across to our folks with any news. Thanks for the reminder! š
August 21st, 2023 05:43
LIZ said:
At least he remembered all is good! Although, a lot of us do take for granted the fact that we can just dash across to our folks with any news. Thanks for the reminder! š
August 21st, 2023 05:43
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, those tales of the English seaside towns can be wonderful and scary.
Andy
August 21st, 2023 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, those tales of the English seaside towns can be wonderful and scary.
Andy
August 21st, 2023 01:58
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
Bella Shepard said:
You set the tone of this poem beautifully in the voice of the salty old sailor, and his warings. A tale to delight, told around the campfire. Loved it!
August 20th, 2023 13:27
Bella Shepard said:
You set the tone of this poem beautifully in the voice of the salty old sailor, and his warings. A tale to delight, told around the campfire. Loved it!
August 20th, 2023 13:27
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
Kinsey Peterson said:
Would it be dramatic to say that I am in love with the way you use the English language?
August 20th, 2023 12:20
Kinsey Peterson said:
Would it be dramatic to say that I am in love with the way you use the English language?
August 20th, 2023 12:20
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
2781 said:
A bit of trivia: Isolated danger markers on the waters, are two black balls on a black bouy.
August 20th, 2023 08:03
2781 said:
A bit of trivia: Isolated danger markers on the waters, are two black balls on a black bouy.
August 20th, 2023 08:03
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
Michael Edwards said:
Hi N - love this one and so good to see you are still posting.
August 20th, 2023 02:42
Michael Edwards said:
Hi N - love this one and so good to see you are still posting.
August 20th, 2023 02:42
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Steer well clear of Dorset buoysā by Neville
In yon stretching resort land, one must never trust those buoys and even less those lasses. As for the lads, ātis not just Bridport and West Bay. Nothing and nobody be as they appear; neāer trust yon fake smile. The gulls be giving out warning signs that one must heed. They have seen a lot but they can only talk gull language. āTis for us to decipher. Thou must, indeed, neāer relax vigilance and always remember whatās for thy own good. Sirens and pirates have got to be fed and they feed on the unsuspecting. They be hungry like whales, crafty as foxes and slippery like snakes. āBe most afearādā indeed. Thou be right : foul weather be nothing. Look for the real dangers and āstay alert.ā Stay clear of them lads, lasses and buoys, for they have a myriad tricks up their sleeves. Buoys are meant to warn : but, buoys might deceiveā¦ Some buoys can save thee : some can sink theeā¦ Soman Ragavan. 20 August, 2023. //
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August 20th, 2023 02:07
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Steer well clear of Dorset buoysā by Neville
In yon stretching resort land, one must never trust those buoys and even less those lasses. As for the lads, ātis not just Bridport and West Bay. Nothing and nobody be as they appear; neāer trust yon fake smile. The gulls be giving out warning signs that one must heed. They have seen a lot but they can only talk gull language. āTis for us to decipher. Thou must, indeed, neāer relax vigilance and always remember whatās for thy own good. Sirens and pirates have got to be fed and they feed on the unsuspecting. They be hungry like whales, crafty as foxes and slippery like snakes. āBe most afearādā indeed. Thou be right : foul weather be nothing. Look for the real dangers and āstay alert.ā Stay clear of them lads, lasses and buoys, for they have a myriad tricks up their sleeves. Buoys are meant to warn : but, buoys might deceiveā¦ Some buoys can save thee : some can sink theeā¦ Soman Ragavan. 20 August, 2023. //
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August 20th, 2023 02:07
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
orchidee said:
This has inspired me to say - crabs and lobster pots - and trouts, old ones, that is?! lol.
Answer: Yes. KP goes there on her hols.
August 20th, 2023 01:42
orchidee said:
This has inspired me to say - crabs and lobster pots - and trouts, old ones, that is?! lol.
Answer: Yes. KP goes there on her hols.
August 20th, 2023 01:42
Steer Well Clear of Dorset Buoys
LIZ said:
I always look forward to your titles! You again, did not disappoint. Thank you for the explanation in the comment section. And by the way, you\'ll never (never say never but...) find me out at sea. Not my thing...so I will steer well clear! BUT, I do love Homer\'s Odyssey! Yes, the sirens lured sailors to their death...but still...beautiful. š
August 20th, 2023 01:41
LIZ said:
I always look forward to your titles! You again, did not disappoint. Thank you for the explanation in the comment section. And by the way, you\'ll never (never say never but...) find me out at sea. Not my thing...so I will steer well clear! BUT, I do love Homer\'s Odyssey! Yes, the sirens lured sailors to their death...but still...beautiful. š
August 20th, 2023 01:41
All Bases Covered
Parisab said:
He named the muse, and she stuck to the identity he created for herā¦I hope that she deserved it, since she didnāt know who she was before thenā¦ Reads like a Woody Allen script, so fresh and interesting as alwaysā¦
August 19th, 2023 22:12
Parisab said:
He named the muse, and she stuck to the identity he created for herā¦I hope that she deserved it, since she didnāt know who she was before thenā¦ Reads like a Woody Allen script, so fresh and interesting as alwaysā¦
August 19th, 2023 22:12
Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m sure you meant equinox really....almost halfway there.....
August 19th, 2023 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m sure you meant equinox really....almost halfway there.....
August 19th, 2023 19:32
Fear Silence Not
Kinsey Peterson said:
Nothing to fear in silence, aside from the sheer volume your own thoughts then create to occupy the space...
August 19th, 2023 12:47
Kinsey Peterson said:
Nothing to fear in silence, aside from the sheer volume your own thoughts then create to occupy the space...
August 19th, 2023 12:47
All Bases Covered
Kinsey Peterson said:
Goodness Neville, you always pull curiosity out of me. I quite wonder what knowing this woman would be like.
August 19th, 2023 12:44
Kinsey Peterson said:
Goodness Neville, you always pull curiosity out of me. I quite wonder what knowing this woman would be like.
August 19th, 2023 12:44
Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe
Kinsey Peterson said:
When I was in 6th grade I read the dictionary for free reading time because I had already read the entire library at the school. I still had to double check on this poem lol
August 19th, 2023 12:41
Kinsey Peterson said:
When I was in 6th grade I read the dictionary for free reading time because I had already read the entire library at the school. I still had to double check on this poem lol
August 19th, 2023 12:41
Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe
Bella Shepard said:
Did my homework and googled entonox. In my naivete I opped for lamaze first time around, and must have had a memory lapse with the second, cause I went the same route again. It was all the rage 50 years ago. I suppose some of us just like doing it the hard way. Good write!
August 19th, 2023 12:37
Bella Shepard said:
Did my homework and googled entonox. In my naivete I opped for lamaze first time around, and must have had a memory lapse with the second, cause I went the same route again. It was all the rage 50 years ago. I suppose some of us just like doing it the hard way. Good write!
August 19th, 2023 12:37
Fear Silence Not
Parisab said:
So true about the awkwardness of silence, the nature symbolism takes the fear out and brings mysteries āechoedā ā¦ This is why I enjoy the essence of your poetry, Neville.
August 19th, 2023 12:16
Parisab said:
So true about the awkwardness of silence, the nature symbolism takes the fear out and brings mysteries āechoedā ā¦ This is why I enjoy the essence of your poetry, Neville.
August 19th, 2023 12:16
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