Comments received on poems by Neville
Just in Case it Still Matters
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I\'m doing my bit.....Anything to keep the whole arrangement on the road, Nev.
February 27th, 2023 06:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I\'m doing my bit.....Anything to keep the whole arrangement on the road, Nev.
February 27th, 2023 06:12
Just in Case it Still Matters
L. B. Mek said:
(we keep our hand, reaching out
till
that very last! in hope we entrust)
beautifully paced Hyung, so subtle
made me remember
some beloved people from my past
February 27th, 2023 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
(we keep our hand, reaching out
till
that very last! in hope we entrust)
beautifully paced Hyung, so subtle
made me remember
some beloved people from my past
February 27th, 2023 03:50
Always Singularly Noticed
L. B. Mek said:
what a serenading waterfall of eloquence, dear Poet supreme
\'A wild card,
an enigma in the
wake
of a star burst ..\'
I\'m gonna borrow this one Hyung, maybe I\'ll get lucky
lol
February 27th, 2023 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
what a serenading waterfall of eloquence, dear Poet supreme
\'A wild card,
an enigma in the
wake
of a star burst ..\'
I\'m gonna borrow this one Hyung, maybe I\'ll get lucky
lol
February 27th, 2023 03:46
Winterlude
L. B. Mek said:
everyone said it all already, just an elegant write
a most memorable read, thank you!
February 27th, 2023 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
everyone said it all already, just an elegant write
a most memorable read, thank you!
February 27th, 2023 03:42
Just in Case it Still Matters
Fay Slimm. said:
The comfort of receiving these words would surely make a difference to one who was lost yet still deeply loved - -- a moving read..............x
February 27th, 2023 03:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The comfort of receiving these words would surely make a difference to one who was lost yet still deeply loved - -- a moving read..............x
February 27th, 2023 03:10
Just in Case it Still Matters
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - KP\'s always been invisible to me! lol.
February 27th, 2023 02:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - KP\'s always been invisible to me! lol.
February 27th, 2023 02:59
Just in Case it Still Matters
Goldfinch60 said:
May that loss soon be retrieved Neville. Emotive words.
Andy
February 27th, 2023 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May that loss soon be retrieved Neville. Emotive words.
Andy
February 27th, 2023 02:56
Always Singularly Noticed
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, we are all individuals that go our own way and have unique ideas.
Andy
February 27th, 2023 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, we are all individuals that go our own way and have unique ideas.
Andy
February 27th, 2023 01:08
Always Singularly Noticed
Bella Shepard said:
This is such a beautiful write dear friend. Wandering through this canvas of imagery, I can\'t help but get lost in it\'s \"warm glow\". This is such a fav!
February 26th, 2023 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
This is such a beautiful write dear friend. Wandering through this canvas of imagery, I can\'t help but get lost in it\'s \"warm glow\". This is such a fav!
February 26th, 2023 14:14
Always Singularly Noticed
Christina8 said:
Beautiful metaphors and just plain a darn good read! \"A forget-me-not in a field of sunflowers\". Thats what I am. Something different in a sea of sameness. Great write!
February 26th, 2023 13:58
Christina8 said:
Beautiful metaphors and just plain a darn good read! \"A forget-me-not in a field of sunflowers\". Thats what I am. Something different in a sea of sameness. Great write!
February 26th, 2023 13:58
Always Singularly Noticed
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi, you are so deluded - It\'s me he\'s on about.... \"Under no obligation to follow rules or religion ..\"
February 26th, 2023 05:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Orchi, you are so deluded - It\'s me he\'s on about.... \"Under no obligation to follow rules or religion ..\"
February 26th, 2023 05:01
Always Singularly Noticed
orchidee said:
I never knew I was all those things.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
February 26th, 2023 02:57
orchidee said:
I never knew I was all those things.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
February 26th, 2023 02:57
Winterlude
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily those winterludes pass very quickly.
Andy
February 26th, 2023 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily those winterludes pass very quickly.
Andy
February 26th, 2023 02:55
Winterlude
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
You certainly have a way with words.
You are incredibly talented.
This poem made me think of someone experiencing a heart attack. I guess each reader has their own interpretation depending on their own experiences.
Laura🌻
February 25th, 2023 20:10
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
You certainly have a way with words.
You are incredibly talented.
This poem made me think of someone experiencing a heart attack. I guess each reader has their own interpretation depending on their own experiences.
Laura🌻
February 25th, 2023 20:10
Winterlude
Doggerel Dave said:
Seem to remember some bloke walking on water...though it was a long time ago and he carked it in his thirties...Still, there must be evening classes for that kind of thing...🙂
February 25th, 2023 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Seem to remember some bloke walking on water...though it was a long time ago and he carked it in his thirties...Still, there must be evening classes for that kind of thing...🙂
February 25th, 2023 19:49
Winterlude
Doggerel Dave said:
Out of my depth there, Nev - I hope the ice is firm...🙂
February 25th, 2023 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Out of my depth there, Nev - I hope the ice is firm...🙂
February 25th, 2023 16:56
Winterlude
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful poem, you must include this one in an upcoming book. I was thinking it was too warm in England for waters to harden like they do here, but lovely sentiment. I just love this one.....saving to my favs! C
February 25th, 2023 09:08
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful poem, you must include this one in an upcoming book. I was thinking it was too warm in England for waters to harden like they do here, but lovely sentiment. I just love this one.....saving to my favs! C
February 25th, 2023 09:08
Winterlude
orchidee said:
Oh woe! It\'s always Winterlude tome with KP and I. It\'s never any other season! lol. Her icy trout-like stare is scary. heehee.
February 25th, 2023 03:13
orchidee said:
Oh woe! It\'s always Winterlude tome with KP and I. It\'s never any other season! lol. Her icy trout-like stare is scary. heehee.
February 25th, 2023 03:13
When the Walls Were Magnolia
Doggerel Dave said:
You don\'t have to fess up to the identity of the \'he\' do you, Nev..... the multiplicity of detail says all..... about powers of observation as much as anything else.....not to mention memory....🙂
February 24th, 2023 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
You don\'t have to fess up to the identity of the \'he\' do you, Nev..... the multiplicity of detail says all..... about powers of observation as much as anything else.....not to mention memory....🙂
February 24th, 2023 07:35
When the Walls Were Magnolia
orchidee said:
Ahh, dear poets - some don\'t understand my nuttiness! They would if they were married to KP. lol.
February 24th, 2023 06:49
orchidee said:
Ahh, dear poets - some don\'t understand my nuttiness! They would if they were married to KP. lol.
February 24th, 2023 06:49
When the Walls Were Magnolia
Christina8 said:
A beautiful remembrance so full of detail I can see it in my mind. Thanks for sharing it with us! Christina
February 24th, 2023 06:28
Christina8 said:
A beautiful remembrance so full of detail I can see it in my mind. Thanks for sharing it with us! Christina
February 24th, 2023 06:28
When the Walls Were Magnolia
L. B. Mek said:
(Hyung, have you read Possession by A. S. Bryatt?
these Poem resonates with that tale..)
\'stood formal proud ..\'
wonderful imagery, a reflection
of not just the scenery
but a window into the poetic voice\'s
perspective, in that Time
when all was bright field, horizons
and rooms, echoed life\'s
enamouring zest flor laughter\'s gifts
(a great write, dear cherished Poet
rich in nuanced detail
I was immersed in a time n place
from first syllable to last line)
February 24th, 2023 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
(Hyung, have you read Possession by A. S. Bryatt?
these Poem resonates with that tale..)
\'stood formal proud ..\'
wonderful imagery, a reflection
of not just the scenery
but a window into the poetic voice\'s
perspective, in that Time
when all was bright field, horizons
and rooms, echoed life\'s
enamouring zest flor laughter\'s gifts
(a great write, dear cherished Poet
rich in nuanced detail
I was immersed in a time n place
from first syllable to last line)
February 24th, 2023 04:21
Checking In
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a dotting father
watching that inevitable, distance
sprouting between him
and that precious gift, in his life..
(such a lovely tone to your wording and rhythm
an echo of life\'s, unfortunate inevitable)
thank you Hyung, a subtly poignant read
(sorry if I interpreted it wrong my friend)
February 24th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a dotting father
watching that inevitable, distance
sprouting between him
and that precious gift, in his life..
(such a lovely tone to your wording and rhythm
an echo of life\'s, unfortunate inevitable)
thank you Hyung, a subtly poignant read
(sorry if I interpreted it wrong my friend)
February 24th, 2023 04:12
Taken From a Diary Found
L. B. Mek said:
a sobering read, Hyung
a bleak tale
that brings up memories
we all have repressed, far
far
in our cupboards of ashamed regret...
(youth\'s vigour, as unashamed ignorance
transmuted
by life\'s bruises, as old age\'s haunting mirrors of shame..
funny
we demand to be treated with respect
yet seldom do we recognise how easily
cruelty, comes to us so naturally innate
devil\'s in those stains, we fail to witness
as our very own, handiwork of callous
indifference)
February 24th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
a sobering read, Hyung
a bleak tale
that brings up memories
we all have repressed, far
far
in our cupboards of ashamed regret...
(youth\'s vigour, as unashamed ignorance
transmuted
by life\'s bruises, as old age\'s haunting mirrors of shame..
funny
we demand to be treated with respect
yet seldom do we recognise how easily
cruelty, comes to us so naturally innate
devil\'s in those stains, we fail to witness
as our very own, handiwork of callous
indifference)
February 24th, 2023 04:06
When the Walls Were Magnolia
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Folk write \'I love you\' letters.
I write \'I hate ya\' letters to KP. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
When I\'m on holiday alone, I send her postcards saying \'Glad you\'re not here: I won\'t hurry back!\' heehee.
February 24th, 2023 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Folk write \'I love you\' letters.
I write \'I hate ya\' letters to KP. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
When I\'m on holiday alone, I send her postcards saying \'Glad you\'re not here: I won\'t hurry back!\' heehee.
February 24th, 2023 03:22
When the Walls Were Magnolia
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion laden words Neville.
Andy
February 24th, 2023 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion laden words Neville.
Andy
February 24th, 2023 03:14
A Brief Inconvenience
Bella Shepard said:
I guess if you\'re going to let him down, don\'t waste your ammo, get \'im with the first shot. This is an \"Ouchie\", and painful as it is, a really good write my friend. May your days be sunnier, you deserve much better.
February 23rd, 2023 12:05
Bella Shepard said:
I guess if you\'re going to let him down, don\'t waste your ammo, get \'im with the first shot. This is an \"Ouchie\", and painful as it is, a really good write my friend. May your days be sunnier, you deserve much better.
February 23rd, 2023 12:05
A Brief Inconvenience
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Wow…this one took my breath away for multiple reasons.
Laura 🌻
February 23rd, 2023 10:11
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Wow…this one took my breath away for multiple reasons.
Laura 🌻
February 23rd, 2023 10:11
A Brief Inconvenience
Christina8 said:
Oh that\'s terrible! I saw your note and sheesh!!! i bet that is a day you\'ll not soon forget! C
February 23rd, 2023 09:18
Christina8 said:
Oh that\'s terrible! I saw your note and sheesh!!! i bet that is a day you\'ll not soon forget! C
February 23rd, 2023 09:18
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