Comments received on poems by Neville
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful in every way, pain can bring such art as this. 💖
August 3rd, 2023 01:32
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful in every way, pain can bring such art as this. 💖
August 3rd, 2023 01:32
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
LIZ said:
I love this one!! Days when things were simple and innocent!! ❤️
August 3rd, 2023 01:25
LIZ said:
I love this one!! Days when things were simple and innocent!! ❤️
August 3rd, 2023 01:25
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:14
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:14
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Christina8 said:
Well, I\'m smiling! A beautifully penned write! x
August 3rd, 2023 00:44
Christina8 said:
Well, I\'m smiling! A beautifully penned write! x
August 3rd, 2023 00:44
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
orchidee said:
And now some words that do have something to do with the weather - sun, rain, wind, whatever ya fancy! lol.
It\'s educational on \'ere, as I\'ve said!
August 2nd, 2023 12:36
orchidee said:
And now some words that do have something to do with the weather - sun, rain, wind, whatever ya fancy! lol.
It\'s educational on \'ere, as I\'ve said!
August 2nd, 2023 12:36
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
MendedFences27 said:
Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others live under a cloud. Then, there are the realists, who get snowed, get sunburnt, or carried away on winds of promise.
This poem, it seems to me, is about a relationship that is on and off, again and again. Perhaps a stormy one, where she brings the rain. Enjoyed it. - phil A.
August 2nd, 2023 10:08
MendedFences27 said:
Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others live under a cloud. Then, there are the realists, who get snowed, get sunburnt, or carried away on winds of promise.
This poem, it seems to me, is about a relationship that is on and off, again and again. Perhaps a stormy one, where she brings the rain. Enjoyed it. - phil A.
August 2nd, 2023 10:08
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Teddy.15 said:
I see an image of a love that once was, peeping in and out again,. I often wonder why people are cruel when it comes to love, I have come somewhat to the conclusion it\'s pure selfishness with an ugly ego mixed in. lol 💖🤣 sorry to go on dear boy!
August 2nd, 2023 02:43
Teddy.15 said:
I see an image of a love that once was, peeping in and out again,. I often wonder why people are cruel when it comes to love, I have come somewhat to the conclusion it\'s pure selfishness with an ugly ego mixed in. lol 💖🤣 sorry to go on dear boy!
August 2nd, 2023 02:43
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say this to KP:\' Not now, KP, I\'ve got a headache; or \'Not now, KP, it\'s raining - though we are indoors!\' Any excuse to not...... TMI (Too Much Info) to tell you more! lol.
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say this to KP:\' Not now, KP, I\'ve got a headache; or \'Not now, KP, it\'s raining - though we are indoors!\' Any excuse to not...... TMI (Too Much Info) to tell you more! lol.
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
LIZ said:
Well, it\'s the full moon 🌚....it highlights emotions that need healing, and things we need to release!! Happy Wednesday!!!
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
LIZ said:
Well, it\'s the full moon 🌚....it highlights emotions that need healing, and things we need to release!! Happy Wednesday!!!
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Parisab said:
The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most interesting read, poet friend…
August 2nd, 2023 01:48
Parisab said:
The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most interesting read, poet friend…
August 2nd, 2023 01:48
Tongue Spillage
Parisab said:
I’ve never heard a masculine brand of annoyances to sound so delightful… Must be the English humor…
August 1st, 2023 22:03
Parisab said:
I’ve never heard a masculine brand of annoyances to sound so delightful… Must be the English humor…
August 1st, 2023 22:03
Smeared With Affection
Bella Shepard said:
I confess I am beguiled and bewildered in the most delightful way. I read this poem four times, and reading it aloud the last time, I paused to think about \"without any doubt whatsoever..\" , and its\' implication, that perhaps the words are meant in the moment, \"at the mercy of such intimate liars and fools\" such as we? I may have it all wrong, but the enjoyment of this poem was digging to find treasure, which is in abundance. A wonderfully delicious poem dear Nev!
August 1st, 2023 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
I confess I am beguiled and bewildered in the most delightful way. I read this poem four times, and reading it aloud the last time, I paused to think about \"without any doubt whatsoever..\" , and its\' implication, that perhaps the words are meant in the moment, \"at the mercy of such intimate liars and fools\" such as we? I may have it all wrong, but the enjoyment of this poem was digging to find treasure, which is in abundance. A wonderfully delicious poem dear Nev!
August 1st, 2023 14:38
Tongue Spillage
MendedFences27 said:
Liking this one, especially \"dandelion clocks.\" In and out of love seems to be a theme today. The language is light in this, but the message leaves a taste of longing. For maybe a better result? Makes one wonder why is she so indecisive? Anyhow, much enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
August 1st, 2023 14:10
MendedFences27 said:
Liking this one, especially \"dandelion clocks.\" In and out of love seems to be a theme today. The language is light in this, but the message leaves a taste of longing. For maybe a better result? Makes one wonder why is she so indecisive? Anyhow, much enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
August 1st, 2023 14:10
Smeared With Affection
Sunsetmet said:
The last lines calm and good again we can fix and work things out and mend
poor clouded rose tinted I love this lines lenses just great
August 1st, 2023 08:20
Sunsetmet said:
The last lines calm and good again we can fix and work things out and mend
poor clouded rose tinted I love this lines lenses just great
August 1st, 2023 08:20
Tongue Spillage
Teddy.15 said:
I only fave stuff from my heart and your poems as you well know speak volumes to a once upon a time first love of mine. Extraordinary beauty in your lines ❤️
August 1st, 2023 02:58
Teddy.15 said:
I only fave stuff from my heart and your poems as you well know speak volumes to a once upon a time first love of mine. Extraordinary beauty in your lines ❤️
August 1st, 2023 02:58
Tongue Spillage
orchidee said:
Me word is \'Pffft\' whatever that means! Good write N.
No danger of me falling out of love with KP. I never fell in love with her in the first place! heehee.
What stings? Don\'t answer that. I better ask Liz! lol.
August 1st, 2023 02:22
orchidee said:
Me word is \'Pffft\' whatever that means! Good write N.
No danger of me falling out of love with KP. I never fell in love with her in the first place! heehee.
What stings? Don\'t answer that. I better ask Liz! lol.
August 1st, 2023 02:22
Tongue Spillage
LIZ said:
Uffff leaking all over the place!!! The title is amazing! Lies, lies, lies! \"Like falling in and out of love\" They sting don\'t they?
August 1st, 2023 00:31
LIZ said:
Uffff leaking all over the place!!! The title is amazing! Lies, lies, lies! \"Like falling in and out of love\" They sting don\'t they?
August 1st, 2023 00:31
Smeared With Affection
Christina8 said:
I love that your combined DNA will be strewn about the place.....such a better comparison than \"fucking\' I think. Very good poem you have here! x
July 31st, 2023 07:47
Christina8 said:
I love that your combined DNA will be strewn about the place.....such a better comparison than \"fucking\' I think. Very good poem you have here! x
July 31st, 2023 07:47
Smeared With Affection
Caring dove said:
Great writing neville .. especially like these lines
‘Your eyes, are my
spring my love
those that force me
to see
beyond the blues
and the greens
( that’s beautiful )
Pinned, albeit loosely
between these
poor clouded,
rose tinted lenses
A well written poem and just like teddy I read it a few times too
July 31st, 2023 04:47
Caring dove said:
Great writing neville .. especially like these lines
‘Your eyes, are my
spring my love
those that force me
to see
beyond the blues
and the greens
( that’s beautiful )
Pinned, albeit loosely
between these
poor clouded,
rose tinted lenses
A well written poem and just like teddy I read it a few times too
July 31st, 2023 04:47
Smeared With Affection
L. B. Mek said:
I grant my fears, wings
free my tears to swim and serenade
fate\'s rain-starved clouds and hills
Within your fingers, life granted me
peace and harmony
enough for poetic lies to assuage
My every ambition
dear You, I\'ve learnt from these craters you gifted
and emptiness, you tattooed deep
Beyond my lungs capacity to hope
and yet, in a glance or stutter
of our synergetic heartbeats, I pause
Once more ready to dive, lust first
loyalty, not far behind
energised by a glint of your relapsing
Eyes...
approaching you slowly, tenderly
dear universe, I promise
Afford me this one mercy and I\'ll
guarantee
never will I ever need to seek
Another opportunity to get things right
now that I\'m pulsing to a beat, of
wedding rings and crimson vows
Bled with pride!
July 31st, 2023 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
I grant my fears, wings
free my tears to swim and serenade
fate\'s rain-starved clouds and hills
Within your fingers, life granted me
peace and harmony
enough for poetic lies to assuage
My every ambition
dear You, I\'ve learnt from these craters you gifted
and emptiness, you tattooed deep
Beyond my lungs capacity to hope
and yet, in a glance or stutter
of our synergetic heartbeats, I pause
Once more ready to dive, lust first
loyalty, not far behind
energised by a glint of your relapsing
Eyes...
approaching you slowly, tenderly
dear universe, I promise
Afford me this one mercy and I\'ll
guarantee
never will I ever need to seek
Another opportunity to get things right
now that I\'m pulsing to a beat, of
wedding rings and crimson vows
Bled with pride!
July 31st, 2023 04:37
Smeared With Affection
LIZ said:
Ayyyy messy love connection! Fastened but not enough, covered in mixed emotions. Unravelling, wanting, hoping, losing, crying. I guess we\'re all in our feelings today! ❣️This is beautiful!
July 31st, 2023 04:30
LIZ said:
Ayyyy messy love connection! Fastened but not enough, covered in mixed emotions. Unravelling, wanting, hoping, losing, crying. I guess we\'re all in our feelings today! ❣️This is beautiful!
July 31st, 2023 04:30
Smeared With Affection
Teddy.15 said:
I read this one a few times
(bloody wonderful) 💓
July 31st, 2023 04:30
Teddy.15 said:
I read this one a few times
(bloody wonderful) 💓
July 31st, 2023 04:30
Smeared With Affection
orchidee said:
Oohhh, a kiss is but a meeting of molecules.... and that\'s all it is for KP and me. lol.
July 31st, 2023 04:27
orchidee said:
Oohhh, a kiss is but a meeting of molecules.... and that\'s all it is for KP and me. lol.
July 31st, 2023 04:27
Smeared With Affection
orchidee said:
DNA? Swoon!
Glad some one(s) having fun! 😁😎😯
July 31st, 2023 04:26
orchidee said:
DNA? Swoon!
Glad some one(s) having fun! 😁😎😯
July 31st, 2023 04:26
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just some kind
of foreplay perhaps ..\'
\'that I want
after all, is to make
you go ..
Uuh uuh uh,
aah aah ah ..
Oh yes, yes, yes yes ..
I so want you
to do that with me
time and time and again ..\'
\'Their love proved
unconventional ..
Yet it
remained
unconditional ..\'
!Brilliant!
(what a deftly dextrous Poet
you are my friend
Hope you and yours have a wonderful week)
July 31st, 2023 02:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just some kind
of foreplay perhaps ..\'
\'that I want
after all, is to make
you go ..
Uuh uuh uh,
aah aah ah ..
Oh yes, yes, yes yes ..
I so want you
to do that with me
time and time and again ..\'
\'Their love proved
unconventional ..
Yet it
remained
unconditional ..\'
!Brilliant!
(what a deftly dextrous Poet
you are my friend
Hope you and yours have a wonderful week)
July 31st, 2023 02:44
Another Local Legend
L. B. Mek said:
\'later still
when he saw
something dark
in each
of them,\'
that ubiquitous
imbued cruelty in the human condition
unfurled so acutely pertinent
by your poetry\'s insightful ink..
I relate and so can only empathise
with those granted such accursed
ill-fate\'s...
(I read and learn
dear Poet supreme)
may he be granted a most triumphant peace
July 31st, 2023 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'later still
when he saw
something dark
in each
of them,\'
that ubiquitous
imbued cruelty in the human condition
unfurled so acutely pertinent
by your poetry\'s insightful ink..
I relate and so can only empathise
with those granted such accursed
ill-fate\'s...
(I read and learn
dear Poet supreme)
may he be granted a most triumphant peace
July 31st, 2023 02:37
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Parisab said:
‘Part way
down and across
some hypothetical
empty page’
“Foreplay” words which I’m sure were proven to be effective…Even if she used her inside voice… LOL
July 30th, 2023 15:30
Parisab said:
‘Part way
down and across
some hypothetical
empty page’
“Foreplay” words which I’m sure were proven to be effective…Even if she used her inside voice… LOL
July 30th, 2023 15:30
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Bella Shepard said:
I so love a man with a simple vocabulary, preferably one syllable, two or three letters tops. Now that\'s what I call foreplay, Whoo-hoo! lol
July 30th, 2023 15:06
Bella Shepard said:
I so love a man with a simple vocabulary, preferably one syllable, two or three letters tops. Now that\'s what I call foreplay, Whoo-hoo! lol
July 30th, 2023 15:06
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Christina8 said:
Glad your muse inspired you today! Yes indeed who needs foreplay when we have poetry???
July 30th, 2023 08:11
Christina8 said:
Glad your muse inspired you today! Yes indeed who needs foreplay when we have poetry???
July 30th, 2023 08:11
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Bobby O said:
I was thinking no ire like
yes yess Yes YEs YYYESSS!!
July 30th, 2023 03:45
Bobby O said:
I was thinking no ire like
yes yess Yes YEs YYYESSS!!
July 30th, 2023 03:45
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