Comments received on poems by Neville
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Nev I\'m not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my lightly coded response:
Co-Ann was not quite broken, but some enlightenment ensued...
February 13th, 2023 22:03
Doggerel Dave said:
OK Nev I\'m not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my lightly coded response:
Co-Ann was not quite broken, but some enlightenment ensued...
February 13th, 2023 22:03
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Jerry Reynolds said:
Terrific, Neville. The first thing I thought of was a gun fight. So bad of me.
February 13th, 2023 17:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
Terrific, Neville. The first thing I thought of was a gun fight. So bad of me.
February 13th, 2023 17:35
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
So he is what he is and
he isn’t what he isn’t …
he opined for a fleeting of a moment.
A very interesting write which I enjoyed perusing through.
Laura🌻
February 13th, 2023 11:56
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
So he is what he is and
he isn’t what he isn’t …
he opined for a fleeting of a moment.
A very interesting write which I enjoyed perusing through.
Laura🌻
February 13th, 2023 11:56
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Kinsey Peterson said:
so much can change in a fraction of a second. never let anyone else define you.
February 13th, 2023 09:23
Kinsey Peterson said:
so much can change in a fraction of a second. never let anyone else define you.
February 13th, 2023 09:23
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Christina8 said:
I enjoyed your poem, dear N. Yes those fractions of a second can either be rewarding or disappointing, either way just a peek into a moment, thank you!
February 13th, 2023 06:21
Christina8 said:
I enjoyed your poem, dear N. Yes those fractions of a second can either be rewarding or disappointing, either way just a peek into a moment, thank you!
February 13th, 2023 06:21
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Fay Slimm. said:
Hah -- that\'s the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short but often resulting in double- trouble - -- - another momentary peep behind moments. Great stuff Sir N..........x
February 13th, 2023 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Hah -- that\'s the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short but often resulting in double- trouble - -- - another momentary peep behind moments. Great stuff Sir N..........x
February 13th, 2023 04:09
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
L. B. Mek said:
indeed
dear cherished Poet, supreme
if all \'lifeline\' philosophy
could be worded so accessible
maybe
all that search for meaning
would have lost
its hold on humanity\'s capacity
to evolve, already...
(standing at our stations of life
we calculate future\'s, inclusive
of connections, within
a hairbreadth of our scheduled
arrivals
while, Time and a smirking Fate
look-on, unimpressed...)
February 13th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
indeed
dear cherished Poet, supreme
if all \'lifeline\' philosophy
could be worded so accessible
maybe
all that search for meaning
would have lost
its hold on humanity\'s capacity
to evolve, already...
(standing at our stations of life
we calculate future\'s, inclusive
of connections, within
a hairbreadth of our scheduled
arrivals
while, Time and a smirking Fate
look-on, unimpressed...)
February 13th, 2023 03:40
Distilled Time
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet still as mountain air
Caught
And cupped\'
you at your subtle best, Hyung
these words are so deep
(memento\'s, grip
on our rear-view, mirror
perspectives, distilled)
I read and learn
February 13th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet still as mountain air
Caught
And cupped\'
you at your subtle best, Hyung
these words are so deep
(memento\'s, grip
on our rear-view, mirror
perspectives, distilled)
I read and learn
February 13th, 2023 03:32
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
orchidee said:
You spent that extra second that we had one year?
I spent it all at once. Boo hoo! Now it\'s gone for ever.
February 13th, 2023 03:01
orchidee said:
You spent that extra second that we had one year?
I spent it all at once. Boo hoo! Now it\'s gone for ever.
February 13th, 2023 03:01
Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Goldfinch60 said:
Those fractions of seconds can be so dissipating Neville.
Andy
February 13th, 2023 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those fractions of seconds can be so dissipating Neville.
Andy
February 13th, 2023 02:47
Distilled Time
Doggerel Dave said:
All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just there...no knowledge of a beginning or end....
Just telling what I got out of it...never mind what you meant...................🙂
February 12th, 2023 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just there...no knowledge of a beginning or end....
Just telling what I got out of it...never mind what you meant...................🙂
February 12th, 2023 19:19
Distilled Time
Bella Shepard said:
To capture a moment in time is serendipitous, to be saved and treasured. If this poem had a taste, I would say it is champagne. Beautiful my friend!
February 12th, 2023 15:12
Bella Shepard said:
To capture a moment in time is serendipitous, to be saved and treasured. If this poem had a taste, I would say it is champagne. Beautiful my friend!
February 12th, 2023 15:12
Distilled Time
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone may savour things, cos there ain\'t no savouring for KP and I! lol.
February 12th, 2023 13:40
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone may savour things, cos there ain\'t no savouring for KP and I! lol.
February 12th, 2023 13:40
Distilled Time
Fay Slimm. said:
The way your words seem to highlight the intimate moment is always so engaging ..... a taste again of your talent for short-line intrigue - - thank you for sharing it mon ami...............x
February 12th, 2023 13:33
Fay Slimm. said:
The way your words seem to highlight the intimate moment is always so engaging ..... a taste again of your talent for short-line intrigue - - thank you for sharing it mon ami...............x
February 12th, 2023 13:33
Shadows Dancing
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows of night. What could be more perfect than the synchrinization of movement and music, lost in time, and when the shadows are no more the sensation lingers. I call it heavenly dear poet!
February 10th, 2023 16:31
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows of night. What could be more perfect than the synchrinization of movement and music, lost in time, and when the shadows are no more the sensation lingers. I call it heavenly dear poet!
February 10th, 2023 16:31
Shadows Dancing
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to some treasured memories, Hyung
I\'ll be coming back to these words
(nothing like being lost in a dance
an embrace of shadows
a communion of in-sync hip vibrations
just sad, the music has to end
and wake us from that sensual
dreamscape)
February 10th, 2023 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to some treasured memories, Hyung
I\'ll be coming back to these words
(nothing like being lost in a dance
an embrace of shadows
a communion of in-sync hip vibrations
just sad, the music has to end
and wake us from that sensual
dreamscape)
February 10th, 2023 05:38
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
L. B. Mek said:
\'lost, cost, most
else, place, made\'
how subtly you weave your magic
this poem showcases
your poetry\'s technical prowess, Hyung
I read and learn, a great write
February 10th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'lost, cost, most
else, place, made\'
how subtly you weave your magic
this poem showcases
your poetry\'s technical prowess, Hyung
I read and learn, a great write
February 10th, 2023 05:34
Come Late July
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations!!!
\'my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..\'
so happy for you and your family Hyung
I\'ll have an extra glass or two over the weekend
to help you celebrate
😁👏🥂
February 10th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations!!!
\'my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..\'
so happy for you and your family Hyung
I\'ll have an extra glass or two over the weekend
to help you celebrate
😁👏🥂
February 10th, 2023 05:29
Shadows Dancing
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Darkness came the moment I married KP. I\'ve not seen daylight since! heehee.
February 10th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Darkness came the moment I married KP. I\'ve not seen daylight since! heehee.
February 10th, 2023 03:10
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
[email protected] said:
This is the best of your poems I\'ve read. It feels as if you\'re not trying too hard. I enjoyed this poem immensely.
February 10th, 2023 02:44
[email protected] said:
This is the best of your poems I\'ve read. It feels as if you\'re not trying too hard. I enjoyed this poem immensely.
February 10th, 2023 02:44
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Kinsey Peterson said:
Goodness Neville, every time I read your works I always have the inspiration to write. Beautiful as always and as touching as ever my friend. I hope the sadness in some of your work is the creation of an exquisite imagination.
February 9th, 2023 09:58
Kinsey Peterson said:
Goodness Neville, every time I read your works I always have the inspiration to write. Beautiful as always and as touching as ever my friend. I hope the sadness in some of your work is the creation of an exquisite imagination.
February 9th, 2023 09:58
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Christina8 said:
Guilt is a tragic emotion---I have felt it many a time and it\'s destructive. Glad I don\'t deal with it anymore but many folks do. This is a wonderful descriptive write, N! C
February 9th, 2023 06:59
Christina8 said:
Guilt is a tragic emotion---I have felt it many a time and it\'s destructive. Glad I don\'t deal with it anymore but many folks do. This is a wonderful descriptive write, N! C
February 9th, 2023 06:59
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Fay Slimm. said:
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just waiting to happen - told with clear and precise honesty and highlighting guilt as the reason for yet another sad \"accident\" maybe - -- a heart-tugger and no doubt about it mon ami...........x.
February 9th, 2023 06:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just waiting to happen - told with clear and precise honesty and highlighting guilt as the reason for yet another sad \"accident\" maybe - -- a heart-tugger and no doubt about it mon ami...........x.
February 9th, 2023 06:08
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Doggerel Dave said:
A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this, Nev?!
February 9th, 2023 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this, Nev?!
February 9th, 2023 05:17
Come Late July
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a grandfather is so wonderful Neville, may you enjoy the journey with your grandchild.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a grandfather is so wonderful Neville, may you enjoy the journey with your grandchild.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:51
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:35
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
orchidee said:
A fine poem N.
KP\'s always been an accident waiting to happen - and it\'s always happened! lol.
February 9th, 2023 02:30
orchidee said:
A fine poem N.
KP\'s always been an accident waiting to happen - and it\'s always happened! lol.
February 9th, 2023 02:30
Come Late July
Doggerel Dave said:
No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new grandparent\'s eyes...only remains to say good luck to all involved and all the best, Nev.
February 8th, 2023 20:18
Doggerel Dave said:
No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new grandparent\'s eyes...only remains to say good luck to all involved and all the best, Nev.
February 8th, 2023 20:18
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