Comments received on poems by Neville
A Thought For a Day
Teddy.15 said:
Should be the thought of the day. Yes wishing others well and being able to actually celebrate with them is simply a matter of reasonable behaviour although not all can do this. A wonderful thought 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:40
Teddy.15 said:
Should be the thought of the day. Yes wishing others well and being able to actually celebrate with them is simply a matter of reasonable behaviour although not all can do this. A wonderful thought 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:40
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Parisab said:
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
August 10th, 2023 00:50
Parisab said:
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
August 10th, 2023 00:50
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
August 9th, 2023 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
August 9th, 2023 13:48
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Christina8 said:
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
August 9th, 2023 08:36
Christina8 said:
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
August 9th, 2023 08:36
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Teddy.15 said:
So very touching, it\'s unconditional love, and it\'s just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that\'s when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can\'t get enough of a new born I know I\'ve spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it\'s always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it\'s hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
August 9th, 2023 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
So very touching, it\'s unconditional love, and it\'s just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that\'s when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can\'t get enough of a new born I know I\'ve spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it\'s always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it\'s hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
August 9th, 2023 04:10
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
LIZ said:
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
August 9th, 2023 02:27
LIZ said:
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
August 9th, 2023 02:27
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say\' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!\' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
August 9th, 2023 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say\' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!\' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
August 9th, 2023 02:11
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
August 9th, 2023 02:10
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
August 9th, 2023 02:10
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Parisab said:
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the power of symbolism-“I saw her clearly edged” on the (church like) stained glass imagery-I see holy, maternal, and sensual represented by the same woman-This is one of my favorites of your body of work…
August 9th, 2023 00:38
Parisab said:
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the power of symbolism-“I saw her clearly edged” on the (church like) stained glass imagery-I see holy, maternal, and sensual represented by the same woman-This is one of my favorites of your body of work…
August 9th, 2023 00:38
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a touching exploration of human connection and the significance of seemingly ordinary .
August 8th, 2023 20:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a touching exploration of human connection and the significance of seemingly ordinary .
August 8th, 2023 20:37
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Christina8 said:
Nice double entendre!! Hungry indeed!x
August 8th, 2023 19:34
Christina8 said:
Nice double entendre!! Hungry indeed!x
August 8th, 2023 19:34
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like a recipe to tempt the taste buds, in more ways than one. Soft and gentle, it makes one sigh. Lovely dear friend!
August 8th, 2023 15:11
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like a recipe to tempt the taste buds, in more ways than one. Soft and gentle, it makes one sigh. Lovely dear friend!
August 8th, 2023 15:11
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
MendedFences27 said:
You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins.
I felt there was a lightheartedness to this poem. It brought a smile to my face and brightened an otherwise rainy day. It also sparked my appetite. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2023 09:15
MendedFences27 said:
You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins.
I felt there was a lightheartedness to this poem. It brought a smile to my face and brightened an otherwise rainy day. It also sparked my appetite. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2023 09:15
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely your writing lights me up it shines thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:13
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely your writing lights me up it shines thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:13
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Jerry Reynolds said:
You lusty devil.
Well written, Neville.
August 8th, 2023 08:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
You lusty devil.
Well written, Neville.
August 8th, 2023 08:20
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
orchidee said:
Yes, KP said she would like some flowers in her hair, so I tipped a bag of flour over her! lol. My nastiness to her never stops. Well, she deserves it. lol.
August 8th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Yes, KP said she would like some flowers in her hair, so I tipped a bag of flour over her! lol. My nastiness to her never stops. Well, she deserves it. lol.
August 8th, 2023 01:49
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully described dear Nev, baked to perfection. 💖
August 8th, 2023 01:31
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully described dear Nev, baked to perfection. 💖
August 8th, 2023 01:31
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
LIZ said:
Well...this could be interpreted in so many ways. Probably just me lol...beautifully written!
August 8th, 2023 00:44
LIZ said:
Well...this could be interpreted in so many ways. Probably just me lol...beautifully written!
August 8th, 2023 00:44
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
orchidee said:
A quiz now - ooh!
The nearest person to KP\'s double is [fill in your answer].
Aww, why they put my name there?! lol.
August 7th, 2023 11:43
orchidee said:
A quiz now - ooh!
The nearest person to KP\'s double is [fill in your answer].
Aww, why they put my name there?! lol.
August 7th, 2023 11:43
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
Teddy.15 said:
LOL Albania has some of the most beautiful beaches in the world. 🤣 cheaper than anywhere in Italy this year, I do feel for the airport hold ups though! 💖
August 7th, 2023 06:16
Teddy.15 said:
LOL Albania has some of the most beautiful beaches in the world. 🤣 cheaper than anywhere in Italy this year, I do feel for the airport hold ups though! 💖
August 7th, 2023 06:16
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣🤣 Some things , as the years advance I relinquish with much relief.... airports and flying are top of that list....
Hilarious!
(But why Albania?)
(not you? - different queue?)
August 7th, 2023 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣🤣 Some things , as the years advance I relinquish with much relief.... airports and flying are top of that list....
Hilarious!
(But why Albania?)
(not you? - different queue?)
August 7th, 2023 02:07
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
orchidee said:
There can\'t possibly be a doppelganger for KP. Well, maybe - just look in the river for old trouts! lol.
August 7th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
There can\'t possibly be a doppelganger for KP. Well, maybe - just look in the river for old trouts! lol.
August 7th, 2023 02:03
Silverback
Jerry Reynolds said:
I do identify with that. No hair but Grandpa indeed.
August 6th, 2023 14:47
Jerry Reynolds said:
I do identify with that. No hair but Grandpa indeed.
August 6th, 2023 14:47
Silverback
orchidee said:
I thought this was about KP\'s similarity to - silverback gorillas?! lol.
August 6th, 2023 12:32
orchidee said:
I thought this was about KP\'s similarity to - silverback gorillas?! lol.
August 6th, 2023 12:32
Silverback
LIZ said:
😆 BUT...silverback is the style these days! No? And...sir...preferably with beard! Lol
August 6th, 2023 07:24
LIZ said:
😆 BUT...silverback is the style these days! No? And...sir...preferably with beard! Lol
August 6th, 2023 07:24
Silverback
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I bet you are the most handsome granpappy out of all your mates! ❤️
August 6th, 2023 05:05
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I bet you are the most handsome granpappy out of all your mates! ❤️
August 6th, 2023 05:05
Silverback
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s said grey/white hairs are a sign of wisdom. KP has none of course. lol.
In our old ages, I will go \'silver\' and she will melt from botox.
August 6th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s said grey/white hairs are a sign of wisdom. KP has none of course. lol.
In our old ages, I will go \'silver\' and she will melt from botox.
August 6th, 2023 02:04
When Absolutely Gone
Doggerel Dave said:
My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....
August 5th, 2023 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....
August 5th, 2023 18:28
When Absolutely Gone
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it\'s painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 11:04
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it\'s painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 11:04
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