Comments received on poems by Neville
Ned’s View
LIZ said:
Oh Neville....it\'s definitely changing our human environment. It can be scary. Definitely not a solution to real world problems....but one can only hope....it\'s realized....before it\'s too late....or is it already? 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:21
LIZ said:
Oh Neville....it\'s definitely changing our human environment. It can be scary. Definitely not a solution to real world problems....but one can only hope....it\'s realized....before it\'s too late....or is it already? 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:21
Ned’s View
Teddy.15 said:
You are talking of robots taking over our jobs and lives. Powerful stuff dear Nev. Unfortunately here they are everywhere even the banks have cyber pens to use now. 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:16
Teddy.15 said:
You are talking of robots taking over our jobs and lives. Powerful stuff dear Nev. Unfortunately here they are everywhere even the banks have cyber pens to use now. 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:16
Ned’s View
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be Neville but hopefully some time soon people in power will realise they are destroying the world.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be Neville but hopefully some time soon people in power will realise they are destroying the world.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:49
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Neville.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Neville.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:41
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Doggerel Dave said:
\"The end of the affair\"?
Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice before I realised that the first word last line was not \'symbiotic\'.
September 24th, 2023 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
\"The end of the affair\"?
Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice before I realised that the first word last line was not \'symbiotic\'.
September 24th, 2023 18:22
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Bobby O said:
Forever forgotten is different than forgotten rhythm which might suggest a soon repair with in exact procedure. One less or maybe One More black and tan could be a baseline start?
September 24th, 2023 17:32
Bobby O said:
Forever forgotten is different than forgotten rhythm which might suggest a soon repair with in exact procedure. One less or maybe One More black and tan could be a baseline start?
September 24th, 2023 17:32
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Parisab said:
I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…
September 24th, 2023 17:00
Parisab said:
I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…
September 24th, 2023 17:00
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
spilleronsheet said:
This is a heartfelt poetry…it feels like issues of adulting for me…with time we forget to cherish the time with ourselves and ending as strangers with the voice inside…lovely poetry dear Neville….
September 24th, 2023 15:58
spilleronsheet said:
This is a heartfelt poetry…it feels like issues of adulting for me…with time we forget to cherish the time with ourselves and ending as strangers with the voice inside…lovely poetry dear Neville….
September 24th, 2023 15:58
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Bella Shepard said:
For me, you put into words a feeling that comes over me more and more these days. I\'m aging, life is changing, and sometimes I don\'t recognize the stranger that\'s here now. This poem is so touching in which ever context you choose to see it. Thank you for sharing!
September 24th, 2023 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
For me, you put into words a feeling that comes over me more and more these days. I\'m aging, life is changing, and sometimes I don\'t recognize the stranger that\'s here now. This poem is so touching in which ever context you choose to see it. Thank you for sharing!
September 24th, 2023 12:31
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m guessing grand parents are visiting the beautiful babe today, my goodness sometimes life can be or feel so complicated, I\'ve felt like a stranger many times being away from home, but actually in the end I\'m home. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 11:37
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m guessing grand parents are visiting the beautiful babe today, my goodness sometimes life can be or feel so complicated, I\'ve felt like a stranger many times being away from home, but actually in the end I\'m home. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 11:37
When My Heart Fell in Love
Bobby O said:
Hmmmm. Heart. Brain. Soul. Spirit. I think padding the intangible to insure an available escape clause is pure brilliance.
September 24th, 2023 01:08
Bobby O said:
Hmmmm. Heart. Brain. Soul. Spirit. I think padding the intangible to insure an available escape clause is pure brilliance.
September 24th, 2023 01:08
When My Heart Fell in Love
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom be forever with you Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom be forever with you Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:51
Accumulations
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment we change history when together Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment we change history when together Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:38
When My Heart Fell in Love
Bella Shepard said:
The first blush of love does indeed dazzle the senses. The shine can wear off and back to reality. No harm, no foul? Truly an engaging write for the little gray cells my friend
September 23rd, 2023 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
The first blush of love does indeed dazzle the senses. The shine can wear off and back to reality. No harm, no foul? Truly an engaging write for the little gray cells my friend
September 23rd, 2023 13:57
When My Heart Fell in Love
Parisab said:
Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with spirit. And that’s such a breakthrough!
September 23rd, 2023 11:31
Parisab said:
Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with spirit. And that’s such a breakthrough!
September 23rd, 2023 11:31
When My Heart Fell in Love
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lot of \'ufffing\' here. I dunno wot it is, of course!
September 23rd, 2023 04:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lot of \'ufffing\' here. I dunno wot it is, of course!
September 23rd, 2023 04:57
When My Heart Fell in Love
LIZ said:
\"When my soul, was in synch with my spirit, I just knew that I was free again... AND 🎤 drop!!!! UFFFFF! It is what it is!! 💜
September 23rd, 2023 03:12
LIZ said:
\"When my soul, was in synch with my spirit, I just knew that I was free again... AND 🎤 drop!!!! UFFFFF! It is what it is!! 💜
September 23rd, 2023 03:12
When My Heart Fell in Love
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, your last lines make me hear the violin playing sweetly love can be a bitch for sure but if we can leave it knowing we at least did it with a certain amount of dignity then it\'s all going to be alright ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, your last lines make me hear the violin playing sweetly love can be a bitch for sure but if we can leave it knowing we at least did it with a certain amount of dignity then it\'s all going to be alright ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 02:45
When My Heart Fell in Love
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m leaving this one for those as do this kind of response best.............. they\'ll be along in a moment....
September 23rd, 2023 02:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m leaving this one for those as do this kind of response best.............. they\'ll be along in a moment....
September 23rd, 2023 02:35
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Bobby O said:
A take a deep conscious that deals with a choice that maybe was absolute. ??
September 22nd, 2023 23:19
Bobby O said:
A take a deep conscious that deals with a choice that maybe was absolute. ??
September 22nd, 2023 23:19
Accumulations
Bobby O said:
Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers and it faded a meaning beyond the words
Very nice Mr. Neville.
September 22nd, 2023 21:35
Bobby O said:
Twas nice. I was rooting and rewarded when yiu broke that chain of losers and it faded a meaning beyond the words
Very nice Mr. Neville.
September 22nd, 2023 21:35
Accumulations
Pop64 said:
Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully clear and quite imaginative (though more than likely true). Very well done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:03
Pop64 said:
Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully clear and quite imaginative (though more than likely true). Very well done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:03
Accumulations
Doggerel Dave said:
History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so who am I to intervene?
Now provided… no, listen Neville – provided you can absolutely guarantee that this pair of incompatible sillies are history, then I can depart, knowing I’ve done the best I can and so on, etc…….
PS: you are getting a little slow off the starting blocks here. What\'s going on?
September 22nd, 2023 05:45
Doggerel Dave said:
History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so who am I to intervene?
Now provided… no, listen Neville – provided you can absolutely guarantee that this pair of incompatible sillies are history, then I can depart, knowing I’ve done the best I can and so on, etc…….
PS: you are getting a little slow off the starting blocks here. What\'s going on?
September 22nd, 2023 05:45
Accumulations
L. B. Mek said:
this is the glue, that never makes it movie scenes
or poetry\'s verse
the ugly in the bonds that carry us
from disaster to
our dreamed Perhaps of a better
a blink and history is redrafted
that\'s all it takes
may that never change...
(Brilliant! Hyung
loved every minute of reading
your poems this week)
thank you!
September 22nd, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
this is the glue, that never makes it movie scenes
or poetry\'s verse
the ugly in the bonds that carry us
from disaster to
our dreamed Perhaps of a better
a blink and history is redrafted
that\'s all it takes
may that never change...
(Brilliant! Hyung
loved every minute of reading
your poems this week)
thank you!
September 22nd, 2023 04:41
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
L. B. Mek said:
\'she left behind in such
exquisite
and likewise,
well-rehearsed disarray ..\'
This is PG Wodehouse\'s
flamboyance of words
at its finest
love the exoticism in your wording, Hyung
sometimes this scribbling thing
needs to be fun
or else why labour
September 22nd, 2023 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'she left behind in such
exquisite
and likewise,
well-rehearsed disarray ..\'
This is PG Wodehouse\'s
flamboyance of words
at its finest
love the exoticism in your wording, Hyung
sometimes this scribbling thing
needs to be fun
or else why labour
September 22nd, 2023 04:30
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
L. B. Mek said:
reality is vulture\'s feast
while the brave fight to survive
decorated in camouflages
seeking a small space in life
where malice
wasn\'t trying
to barge down the door, again
eyes that rape
every time a breeze lifts
the velvet helm of armour,
our heroine\'s labour beneath...
(your words always sink deep
within that empathetic sea of tragedy
that is humanity)
I bow to your superior HEART
dear Poet supreme!
September 22nd, 2023 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
reality is vulture\'s feast
while the brave fight to survive
decorated in camouflages
seeking a small space in life
where malice
wasn\'t trying
to barge down the door, again
eyes that rape
every time a breeze lifts
the velvet helm of armour,
our heroine\'s labour beneath...
(your words always sink deep
within that empathetic sea of tragedy
that is humanity)
I bow to your superior HEART
dear Poet supreme!
September 22nd, 2023 04:26
Too Many Maybe’s
L. B. Mek said:
I like perhaps over maybe
one foot out of the door
if they ask me to come in
i can cut my leg off
save some of me from the ensuing
inevitability
I am weary of full tables
and laughter full smiles
hunger scenes seem more natural
less questions needed
like, who died to gift us this
restaurant silver
like
why that waiter is limping
one legged like me
like
maybe, it\'s those
with perhaps holes of self
who can feel life\'s
gust of wind blades...
yeah
I\'m with you Hyung..
save your maybe\'s
I\'ll stay by the gutter of perhaps
save myself a few body blows...
September 22nd, 2023 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
I like perhaps over maybe
one foot out of the door
if they ask me to come in
i can cut my leg off
save some of me from the ensuing
inevitability
I am weary of full tables
and laughter full smiles
hunger scenes seem more natural
less questions needed
like, who died to gift us this
restaurant silver
like
why that waiter is limping
one legged like me
like
maybe, it\'s those
with perhaps holes of self
who can feel life\'s
gust of wind blades...
yeah
I\'m with you Hyung..
save your maybe\'s
I\'ll stay by the gutter of perhaps
save myself a few body blows...
September 22nd, 2023 04:17
Accumulations
LIZ said:
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it\'s used to create...that special One! 💜
September 22nd, 2023 03:34
LIZ said:
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it\'s used to create...that special One! 💜
September 22nd, 2023 03:34
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