Comments received on poems by Neville
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
arqios said:
That, the exquisite ache signifying we live and not merely exist!
October 31st, 2023 19:22
arqios said:
That, the exquisite ache signifying we live and not merely exist!
October 31st, 2023 19:22
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Bobby O said:
The frown hanging there adds a weight to my shoulders, it’s cumbersome especially when it may be predicted and yet doesn’t slow us down. It’s irrational and yet most who have committed resource in the past feel it’s due to turn, so we stumble forward with unreasoned plan, but the frown is honest and therefore a base of advantaged certainty.
October 31st, 2023 18:46
Bobby O said:
The frown hanging there adds a weight to my shoulders, it’s cumbersome especially when it may be predicted and yet doesn’t slow us down. It’s irrational and yet most who have committed resource in the past feel it’s due to turn, so we stumble forward with unreasoned plan, but the frown is honest and therefore a base of advantaged certainty.
October 31st, 2023 18:46
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
MendedFences27 said:
I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and receive a \"frown.\" Otherwise, a great piece of poetry, \"and again upon rainbows,\" \"the sense of you.\" \" are yet to be remembered.\" Not just your average phrasing. - Phil A.
October 31st, 2023 15:52
MendedFences27 said:
I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and receive a \"frown.\" Otherwise, a great piece of poetry, \"and again upon rainbows,\" \"the sense of you.\" \" are yet to be remembered.\" Not just your average phrasing. - Phil A.
October 31st, 2023 15:52
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Thomas W Case said:
Another one gets slammed out of the park. Nice work.
October 31st, 2023 02:55
Thomas W Case said:
Another one gets slammed out of the park. Nice work.
October 31st, 2023 02:55
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of German there in the title?!
I don\'t long for the pong of botox when KP is near me. lol.
Does it have any smell?
October 31st, 2023 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of German there in the title?!
I don\'t long for the pong of botox when KP is near me. lol.
Does it have any smell?
October 31st, 2023 02:45
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
Teddy.15 said:
Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:29
Teddy.15 said:
Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:29
Tu Es Tout Pour Moi
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyyyy 🫣🫣🫣🫣 your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! 💜💜💜💜
October 31st, 2023 01:03
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyyyy 🫣🫣🫣🫣 your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! 💜💜💜💜
October 31st, 2023 01:03
She Wore Him So Well
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could almost hear the words whispered in a slow, southern drawl, alluring and sensuous. You\'ve outdone yourself with the tenor of this poem my friend. Sublime!
October 30th, 2023 15:24
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could almost hear the words whispered in a slow, southern drawl, alluring and sensuous. You\'ve outdone yourself with the tenor of this poem my friend. Sublime!
October 30th, 2023 15:24
She Wore Him So Well
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wrote a similar poem (did I?). It said ...the cream of the botox of KP\'s thigh... Not a pretty sight. heehee.
Fido says I best not let anyone ride on my mastery this time of day! lol
October 30th, 2023 10:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wrote a similar poem (did I?). It said ...the cream of the botox of KP\'s thigh... Not a pretty sight. heehee.
Fido says I best not let anyone ride on my mastery this time of day! lol
October 30th, 2023 10:24
She Wore Him So Well
MendedFences27 said:
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this erotic poem is subtle, such that it becomes a love poem. A great piece of work. - Phil A,
October 30th, 2023 09:58
MendedFences27 said:
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this erotic poem is subtle, such that it becomes a love poem. A great piece of work. - Phil A,
October 30th, 2023 09:58
She Wore Him So Well
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent on all levels. Truly genius.
October 30th, 2023 08:03
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent on all levels. Truly genius.
October 30th, 2023 08:03
She Wore Him So Well
arqios said:
A perfect fit it would appear to be. Always good to have exquisite velvet.
October 30th, 2023 07:29
arqios said:
A perfect fit it would appear to be. Always good to have exquisite velvet.
October 30th, 2023 07:29
She Wore Him So Well
LIZ said:
Well.....well......I hope he had the time of his life!! 🤭🤭💜💜💜💜
October 30th, 2023 04:45
LIZ said:
Well.....well......I hope he had the time of his life!! 🤭🤭💜💜💜💜
October 30th, 2023 04:45
A Handful of Water
Parisab said:
Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to the value of water and the labor it requires in the most parts of this earth…
October 30th, 2023 00:20
Parisab said:
Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to the value of water and the labor it requires in the most parts of this earth…
October 30th, 2023 00:20
This is Us ..
Bobby O said:
A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both
October 30th, 2023 00:05
Bobby O said:
A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both
October 30th, 2023 00:05
On Moving On
Bobby O said:
I guessing that you are forever woven into the fabric of her existence. If DNA could move and take residence that would be you.
October 30th, 2023 00:02
Bobby O said:
I guessing that you are forever woven into the fabric of her existence. If DNA could move and take residence that would be you.
October 30th, 2023 00:02
On Moving On
MendedFences27 said:
The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when we are young. You have captured the \'fear\" of being forgotten ever so well. I noticed the \"maybe\" at the end and know full well why it is there. - Phil A.
October 29th, 2023 14:00
MendedFences27 said:
The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when we are young. You have captured the \'fear\" of being forgotten ever so well. I noticed the \"maybe\" at the end and know full well why it is there. - Phil A.
October 29th, 2023 14:00
On Moving On
LIZ said:
Mmmmmm so romantic, so beautiful! And because I know you\'re a gentleman......so gentle!! How can she not think of you every now and then?! 💜💜💜💜
October 29th, 2023 11:57
LIZ said:
Mmmmmm so romantic, so beautiful! And because I know you\'re a gentleman......so gentle!! How can she not think of you every now and then?! 💜💜💜💜
October 29th, 2023 11:57
On Moving On
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP\'s threatened to go away (hooray!) but she always comes back for more money from me for botox! 😁
October 29th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP\'s threatened to go away (hooray!) but she always comes back for more money from me for botox! 😁
October 29th, 2023 02:00
This is Us ..
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and still failed. I am mightily impressed how you find words so hard to find.
This write stays with me. It hits hard sir. 🙏🏼
October 28th, 2023 13:26
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and still failed. I am mightily impressed how you find words so hard to find.
This write stays with me. It hits hard sir. 🙏🏼
October 28th, 2023 13:26
A Handful of Water
LIZ said:
Neville!! I think I told you before, but, your titles are amazing!! \"A creation made out of hard work\"!! \"Nothing, but everything\"! 💜💜💜💜
October 28th, 2023 04:21
LIZ said:
Neville!! I think I told you before, but, your titles are amazing!! \"A creation made out of hard work\"!! \"Nothing, but everything\"! 💜💜💜💜
October 28th, 2023 04:21
A Handful of Water
Christina8 said:
The imagery in this poem is astonishing, Neville! Also very delicate.
October 28th, 2023 03:43
Christina8 said:
The imagery in this poem is astonishing, Neville! Also very delicate.
October 28th, 2023 03:43
A Handful of Water
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is just gorgeous dear Nev. Diamonds for sure. ❤️
October 28th, 2023 01:58
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery is just gorgeous dear Nev. Diamonds for sure. ❤️
October 28th, 2023 01:58
A Handful of Water
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, KP\'s hands are rough, calloused, etc. The botox don\'t make any difference. Dunno why she has it. 😁
October 28th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, KP\'s hands are rough, calloused, etc. The botox don\'t make any difference. Dunno why she has it. 😁
October 28th, 2023 01:52
This is Us ..
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, such sadness in such beauty, I have a great friend who literally went through this, it fathoms me how he did it with such dignity but he did. A stunning capture of soulmates and Indeed many other types of love, when I was really young it\'s what I felt about my mother. ❤️
October 28th, 2023 00:39
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, such sadness in such beauty, I have a great friend who literally went through this, it fathoms me how he did it with such dignity but he did. A stunning capture of soulmates and Indeed many other types of love, when I was really young it\'s what I felt about my mother. ❤️
October 28th, 2023 00:39
This is Us ..
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two lines especially. It\'s difficult to deal with and harder, I imagine, to write about it. I have no more to say except I hope you all find the peace you seek. - Phil A.
October 27th, 2023 18:37
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two lines especially. It\'s difficult to deal with and harder, I imagine, to write about it. I have no more to say except I hope you all find the peace you seek. - Phil A.
October 27th, 2023 18:37
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