Comments received on poems by Neville
From a Little Book of Sins
arqios said:
Poetry is often a person’s “little black book.”
December 16th, 2023 19:31
arqios said:
Poetry is often a person’s “little black book.”
December 16th, 2023 19:31
From a Little Book of Sins
Doggerel Dave said:
Delicious? Not much keen on tropical fruit actually prefer cool temperate - so its still plums and cherries for me... lychees make a close second...or third depending on how you count \'em; mind how you spit the pips....
That reminds me: water melons have something.. You can do delicious circles with the pips if you know how to form the lips....well maybe not a full circle, but certainly a classic parabola ...... memories....
I shot a watermelon pip in the air,
And it fell to earth I know exactly where.............Gotcha!
December 16th, 2023 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Delicious? Not much keen on tropical fruit actually prefer cool temperate - so its still plums and cherries for me... lychees make a close second...or third depending on how you count \'em; mind how you spit the pips....
That reminds me: water melons have something.. You can do delicious circles with the pips if you know how to form the lips....well maybe not a full circle, but certainly a classic parabola ...... memories....
I shot a watermelon pip in the air,
And it fell to earth I know exactly where.............Gotcha!
December 16th, 2023 19:09
Suburban Sunflower
Neville said:
Core thanks Cassie .. & then it dawned on him 💜 :) I hope you feel able to post here very soon .. Neville
December 16th, 2023 03:54
Neville said:
Core thanks Cassie .. & then it dawned on him 💜 :) I hope you feel able to post here very soon .. Neville
December 16th, 2023 03:54
Suburban Sunflower
Cassie58 said:
Your surburban sunflower stimulates the senses. She must have been the apple of your eye. Tasty work.
December 16th, 2023 01:51
Cassie58 said:
Your surburban sunflower stimulates the senses. She must have been the apple of your eye. Tasty work.
December 16th, 2023 01:51
Suburban Sunflower
Doggerel Dave said:
I have trouble with peaches and apricots.....couldn\'t make it a plum or a cherry, could yer......?
A good sign your jetlag is almost
December 15th, 2023 21:06
Doggerel Dave said:
I have trouble with peaches and apricots.....couldn\'t make it a plum or a cherry, could yer......?
A good sign your jetlag is almost
December 15th, 2023 21:06
Suburban Sunflower
MendedFences27 said:
Was she the apricot or one of the sunflowers? I\'m thinking Sunflower. This made me hungry for some peach pie.
Welcome back.
An excellent start for one weary from traveling. Loved it. - Phil A.
December 15th, 2023 15:04
MendedFences27 said:
Was she the apricot or one of the sunflowers? I\'m thinking Sunflower. This made me hungry for some peach pie.
Welcome back.
An excellent start for one weary from traveling. Loved it. - Phil A.
December 15th, 2023 15:04
Suburban Sunflower
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Ahh, another poem about KP and I. I fancied bit of her, but got a mouthful of botox. lol.
December 15th, 2023 10:49
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Ahh, another poem about KP and I. I fancied bit of her, but got a mouthful of botox. lol.
December 15th, 2023 10:49
Suburban Sunflower
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Great use of the senses old friend.
December 15th, 2023 09:32
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Great use of the senses old friend.
December 15th, 2023 09:32
Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People
Doggerel Dave said:
Much too late (wasn\'t present when you penned this).
1788 saw the start of a similar (tragically similar) story here following the \'settlement\' (invasion) by the British in what came to be known as Australia.
You received the kind of response you deserved here, Neville.
December 2nd, 2023 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Much too late (wasn\'t present when you penned this).
1788 saw the start of a similar (tragically similar) story here following the \'settlement\' (invasion) by the British in what came to be known as Australia.
You received the kind of response you deserved here, Neville.
December 2nd, 2023 20:05
Acid Days
Bobby O said:
This piece and your planned saunter have the harmony of a chorus
November 23rd, 2023 21:39
Bobby O said:
This piece and your planned saunter have the harmony of a chorus
November 23rd, 2023 21:39
Acid Days
Thomas W Case said:
Safe travels. I don\'t know what the hell to think of your poem, but I like it.
Cheers
November 23rd, 2023 13:25
Thomas W Case said:
Safe travels. I don\'t know what the hell to think of your poem, but I like it.
Cheers
November 23rd, 2023 13:25
Acid Days
Goldfinch60 said:
Now it is the alkali days Neville.
Enjoy your trip.
Andy
November 23rd, 2023 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Now it is the alkali days Neville.
Enjoy your trip.
Andy
November 23rd, 2023 02:46
Acid Days
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoy.
Could still continue to contribute - on Ipad or summat...(just a thought, but won\'t hold it against you if you don\'t make the effort...............)
November 22nd, 2023 18:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoy.
Could still continue to contribute - on Ipad or summat...(just a thought, but won\'t hold it against you if you don\'t make the effort...............)
November 22nd, 2023 18:18
Acid Days
orchidee said:
The only acid I fancy is the stuff in lemons, etc! Bon-wotsit. I dunno any more French! lol.
November 22nd, 2023 12:53
orchidee said:
The only acid I fancy is the stuff in lemons, etc! Bon-wotsit. I dunno any more French! lol.
November 22nd, 2023 12:53
Acid Days
Christina8 said:
Have the happiest of holidays. You deserve this!!
November 22nd, 2023 09:05
Christina8 said:
Have the happiest of holidays. You deserve this!!
November 22nd, 2023 09:05
Acid Days
Teddy.15 said:
Happy holidays dearest Neville. ❤️ I\'m not green with envy... lol ❤️ enjoy every minute of your amazing trip.
November 22nd, 2023 06:09
Teddy.15 said:
Happy holidays dearest Neville. ❤️ I\'m not green with envy... lol ❤️ enjoy every minute of your amazing trip.
November 22nd, 2023 06:09
When the Balance Wheel is Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
The central question I ask myself from time to time: do I want to go fast or slow...?
Still not sure, but will I, in the end (yeh - that one) have much choice? Rang many bells for me; thanks Neville.
November 22nd, 2023 00:37
Doggerel Dave said:
The central question I ask myself from time to time: do I want to go fast or slow...?
Still not sure, but will I, in the end (yeh - that one) have much choice? Rang many bells for me; thanks Neville.
November 22nd, 2023 00:37
Amen
Doggerel Dave said:
After the zombies came the S.I. Lobotomies whose guiding principle would be something like \'Think not - avoid the trouble\' or grunts to that effect.....
November 21st, 2023 15:31
Doggerel Dave said:
After the zombies came the S.I. Lobotomies whose guiding principle would be something like \'Think not - avoid the trouble\' or grunts to that effect.....
November 21st, 2023 15:31
Amen
Doggerel Dave said:
This is giving me a bit of a headache....but.... I\'ll definitely forgo my prayers tonight, as nothing, but nothing is going to interfere with my subconscious if I can avoid it.
November 21st, 2023 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
This is giving me a bit of a headache....but.... I\'ll definitely forgo my prayers tonight, as nothing, but nothing is going to interfere with my subconscious if I can avoid it.
November 21st, 2023 07:53
Amen
arqios said:
Amen has almost exclusively been associated with prayer 🙏🏻 where it retains its core meaning of agreement: “let it be so” to what was beforehand declared.
November 21st, 2023 04:24
arqios said:
Amen has almost exclusively been associated with prayer 🙏🏻 where it retains its core meaning of agreement: “let it be so” to what was beforehand declared.
November 21st, 2023 04:24
Amen
Bobby O said:
Bigly smled, he watched the
Manchurian candidate dress nary a smile unable to resist someone else’s plan. Bigly shrugged subliminallly soon to reside w a Dalmatian and a joint and Bigly knew that type of Love , was “What I Got?”
November 21st, 2023 02:45
Bobby O said:
Bigly smled, he watched the
Manchurian candidate dress nary a smile unable to resist someone else’s plan. Bigly shrugged subliminallly soon to reside w a Dalmatian and a joint and Bigly knew that type of Love , was “What I Got?”
November 21st, 2023 02:45
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