Comments received on poems by Narcisa



GILT
FredPeyer said:

Well done Chicha! A different take on a break-up by a strong woman with an unexpected ending.

March 8th, 2021 11:13

Time
AwHec8 said:

This 1 reminds me of the Song sung by Hootie & the Blowfish years back that is Named \"Time\" that if you want to go ahead and give it a listen. Tell me what you think?
Good write that could be a song too. Don

August 26th, 2020 19:37

Nine Pictures and a Few Videos
AwHec8 said:

Reminds me of the Earth shattering day when my Dad died. Also I just happened to have a voice message he left me on one of the few times I missed his call. (I live on the east coast, he lived on the west coast and he never seemed to figure out the 3 hour difference. LOL) So I gave it to those in the family who wanted it and saved it in my phone. Only to lose it when I changed cell phones. Dammit! Now years later it seems all that\'s left are memories that fade into memories of memories if that makes any sense and pictures I still have. Oh yeah and like you the pamphlet of the funeral service too.
Thank You for the fine write Narcisa. Don

August 26th, 2020 19:32

Windows to the Soul
AwHec8 said:

Wow I felt this 1 in my soul. As it cut to the bone. Thank You Narcisa for a good write & Thank You Audax for recommending this Poet who writes quite well. Don

August 25th, 2020 19:56

To All the Boys I Let Hit
jarcher54 said:

This is so fiercely beautiful I am in awe of your self-awareness of yourself. I have no idea how much of this is literally autobiographical, but it is so dead-on sincere it\'s riveting and thought-provoking. Those are the stuff of good writing.

August 24th, 2020 09:00

Chocolate City Baby
L. B. Mek said:

this is so raw, so true, so controlled: dripping with flow and beaming with its power of unfiltered veracity,
\'You only have one shot in this life

Don’t lose it by being in the wrong place, wrong time as your welcomed with a knife.

The man who has no teeth wasn’t born crazy

Take it from me a graduate Chocolate City baby.\'
brilliant write!

August 17th, 2020 04:10

My Breakup Letter I Never Sent
TWENTY3 said:

think i\'ll use excerpts of this for a letter I am close to writing. Did you send it?

July 17th, 2020 06:01

On the Hunt for Bliss
dusk arising said:

Or does happiness arrive as a result of a lot of different happenings, each one harbouring complacency which will dull the happiness into contentment.
Unhappiness on the other hand.... well thats another story.

Enjoyed reading your thought provoking piece today.

July 16th, 2020 14:32

Unaccompanied isolation
santese914 said:

If this is a personal reflection of your own life, I’m really sorry about your boyfriend, your mother, and the loss of your closest friend. You express your pain beautifully

June 27th, 2020 19:24

Sincere torment
JustABird said:

This made me cry. I\'m sorry anyone has to feel this way. It\'s not a lesson, it\'s a knife to the heart. And no one deserves that. Sounds like they\'re someone who would be forgiving, even without having to trade for it.

May 19th, 2020 00:39

Destined Disposition
Goldfinch60 said:

In all aspects of life there are doors and if you didn\'t go through them none of us would be where we are now, go through that door.

May 5th, 2020 00:16

Damsel in Distress
jarcher54 said:

N, your poems are so authentic and vibrant. I will look in on them when I need a reminder of what it is to be young and fearless to speak your thoughts. I like the line: I need a hero, and my first choice should be me.

May 4th, 2020 21:25

Love Is Not My Drug
Goldfinch60 said:

May your collection be filled with words as good as these.

Andy

March 5th, 2020 01:50

Love Is Not My Drug
dusk arising said:

I like this a lot. Have you been looking at my dreams of those imperfect beautifuls in my past?



March 4th, 2020 17:30

Love Is Not My Drug
Clara said:

Oh this is fab! Really enjoyed this. Such a fresh perspective! Well done!

March 4th, 2020 16:35

Restless thoughts
Clara said:

This is great. There\'s such anger and emotion here. But also vulnerability and a sense of loss. You\'ve a great way with words. It reads well.

March 3rd, 2020 15:57

Time
dusk arising said:

Like a mantra of truth in a time of suffering..... Should be read aloud to those currently suffering. Time teaches us healing.

February 28th, 2020 16:21

Hear My Cry
Goldfinch60 said:

There will be no disaster in your life when you write words like these.

February 28th, 2020 02:00

Hear My Cry
myself and me said:

Hope the cry unload all the pain. You are beautiful for sure, not so sure about the disaster part. Well done.

February 27th, 2020 16:15

Hear My Cry
Saxon Crow said:

Good poem. Lots of self reflection


February 27th, 2020 14:58

Hear My Cry
Nemo said:

Very well written, heard your cry loud and clear through this 🌹

February 27th, 2020 13:17

Nine Pictures and a Few Videos
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful emotion laden write, your words are so meaningful.

Andy

February 18th, 2020 02:02

Nine Pictures and a Few Videos
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Hola Narcisa ~ Buenas Tardes Gracias por tu Poema. It happens when a *Friend* dies ~ often all we have left is a few letters - videos & pictures. After Death we always try to think the best of the departed how ever positive or negative our relationship was with them ! You have exhibited this trait in your very moving poem ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check our site ~ Thanks !

Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛

February 17th, 2020 15:23

Nine Pictures and a Few Videos
Saxon Crow said:

Wow. Just wow. Its beautiful

February 17th, 2020 14:12

Nine Pictures and a Few Videos
Poetic Dan said:

Wow that felt heartbreakingly true, when we look back we hope to have a few photos and videos too.

I have lost many friends before their time, thank you the words but sorry for what made you write them.

Much peace and respect
Always appreciated

February 17th, 2020 10:05

Broken Record 2019
Maxine Smith said:

Well said, here’s to kicking all those bad habits and creating positive ones.


December 28th, 2019 12:29

For the boy that will never love me
Jane Frye said:

I had a secret love too. For many years, he was the man I compared all other men to. Then one day, many years later, I ran into him and he and I had lunch together. He told me all the things I had wished he had said years ago. My head was spinning and my heart felt like it stopped, but I remained calm on the outside. We were both married and so, I kept my distance. Turns out, I was his secret love too. So you never know. By the way, beautifully written.

December 9th, 2019 00:58

Goodbye Sad Girl
Clara said:

Me too!

Well rounded write. Tells quite the tale. And the hope and promise at the end there is rather hopeful.

CLARA X

September 7th, 2019 03:15

Black Bile
Goldfinch60 said:

May that next distraction be filled with wonder and happiness. Good write.

August 31st, 2019 00:28

Black Bile
vvnrose said:

Peculiar to come across this today. I was just reading about the 4 types; sanguine in particular but have previously many melancholic days. Isolation and looking for the next distraction is relatable. Thanks for sharing.

August 30th, 2019 19:34

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