Veils Of Mystique
teardrop said:

Yes, disagreeing doesn\'t make us enemies, makes us human with different opinions. While not dismising your convections, actknowledge others, discuss and learn from one another. Excellent write. Thank you.

December 8th, 2024 02:40

Reaching
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Cassie, my wife Joyce was in a Care Home at the end and I could see what you have described.

Andy

December 8th, 2024 02:24

Reaching
Dan Williams said:

You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent summers on my Aunt\'s farm, typical city boy, I felt bailing hay was an adventure, lost a bet about catching a chicken. The lady in the corner provides mystery though. Well Done.

December 8th, 2024 01:31

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arqios said:

As long as there are no signs of it being “Animal Farm” it is all harmless enough. Makes me wonder if I will ever be a resident myself. It isn’t really going to be too long now… mmm….

December 7th, 2024 15:09

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Thad Wilk said:

Wow!! 😲
A powerful, poignant and
evocative poem indeed! 😢
Another grandslam poetess!🙏
Rock solid penning,
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹🐦 Thad

December 7th, 2024 13:33

Reaching
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Another excellent share, Cassie! I was glad to see you post another one, my friend 🌹👏

December 7th, 2024 13:16

Reaching
TobaniNataiella said:

Thank you Cassie for another enjoyable read

December 7th, 2024 08:46

Sunset and Wind Farms
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Cassie, I like watching those windmills out at sea, they are so calming.

Andy

December 7th, 2024 02:19

Veils Of Mystique
jim56 said:

say what you mean mean what you say
love this it says a lot and means lot
says a lot well written lovely poem
flows nicely aswell you really are amazing
and so is your talent

December 6th, 2024 15:27

Sunset and Wind Farms
arqios said:

Had they made them prettier in shape (not economically appealing to the magnates I imagine) would probably imaginable mark them more attractive to the subscribing public). But when was the last time any of 5hem really cared for the little people. Oops, went off on a tangent there… a thousand pardons.

December 6th, 2024 14:46

Sunset and Wind Farms
Teddy.15 said:

Shakespear lol ok now I\'m really enjoying this one dear Cassie and sorrenbarret 🌹💐 take your bows

December 6th, 2024 14:36

Sunset and Wind Farms
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great poem, Cassie. Clean energy is the way to go. Of course nothing has zero impact. These lines reminded me of that:

\"row on row they stand
embracing air
as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced through sky’s heart
rip roaring red no sutures
as crimson clots appear \"

Not sure if this is what you had in mind, but I think of the wildlife, particularly birds, that get \"sacrificed\" (if you will) for such clean energy. That said, it is not a reason to stop using wind (like some people try to argue)...as look at what oil does to the wildlife...let alone the planet. So, a far safer and CLEANER source of energy for sure. One that people have been using for the longest time actually. Anyway, all of that to say, this poem is not only beautifully rendered, it touches on such an important topic as well. 🙏🌹👏

December 6th, 2024 13:13

Sunset and Wind Farms
sorenbarrett said:

Such vivid imagery in this poem.
\"as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced through sky’s heart
rip roaring red no sutures
as crimson clots appear \"
Really very good poetic lines Cassie.

December 6th, 2024 12:41

A Losing Game
teardrop said:

My dad was an extremely bad alcoholic, he would make himself at least 3 large half and half vodka and grapefruit juice to set by his bed at night so he would have them to calm his shakes when he woke up in the morning. Needless to say, growing up was a story its self. I\'m babbling on....love ypur sty;e of writting and nice to meet you as well.

December 6th, 2024 05:40

Veils Of Mystique
Dan Williams said:

So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.

December 6th, 2024 00:58