Sensing
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad memories Cassie finely written.

Andy

January 24th, 2025 02:17

Sensing
Teddy.15 said:

Gave me goosebumps, there is a lot of horrific news this week regarding knives, it has to stop, your pain is our pain, a comunity shouldn\'t have to grieve any child and children shouldn\'t be handling knives. I was in London when Steven Lawrence died, I was also in much pain for him. 🌹 Your empathy and compassion and in the way you have even entered your dear Dog really brings home how terrible it all is. 💔

January 23rd, 2025 12:52

Wind Chime Tree
Tom Dylan said:

Such a powerful piece, Cassie. The emotion comes through on every line. A fine write. Thanks so much for sharing.

January 23rd, 2025 10:37

Sensing
arqios said:

Oh wow, much like the scurrying about my sister and I did as school children, sometimes even when events like this one described had just occurred. Very moving poem. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊️

January 23rd, 2025 06:10

Sensing
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting! This poem brings the reader in in the middle and leaves them without an ending, suspended in time and space with that feeling of weightlessness of falling but not having hit yet. There is a feeling of apprehension. Very well written Cassie

January 23rd, 2025 05:06

Wind Chime Tree
jim56 said:

hi Cassie your poem is very touching and emotional
the words describe the poem so well and touches the heart
to lose the life of child in a senseless killing is hard to bare
when its children that have done it harder to understand
parents are sentenced to life killers can be set free
knife crime now is getting worse almost epidemic
a lovely poem you have written should be proud of yourself
you really a very talented writer but you know how good you are Jim xx


January 22nd, 2025 13:14

Wind Chime Tree
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Cassie.

Andy

January 22nd, 2025 02:46

Wind Chime Tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh my. RIP Olly. Why does stupidity have to carry such a weighty cost? Human violence, displayed at such a young age. I looked up Olly\'s story and it is such a terrible tragedy that kids/humans would do that to another kid, and for what reason? Senseless stupidity, callous evil. Both...and the result is a beautiful life and soul taken from this world. Wonderful poem, Cassie. Thank you for sharing his memory with us all. His story deserves to be heard.

January 21st, 2025 08:38

My Love
Reynaldo Casison said:

Beautiful, Sweet And Tender Cassie,
Nice Loving Rhythms

January 21st, 2025 06:36

Wind Chime Tree
sorenbarrett said:

This poem carries with it the reader. Very well written it pulls the reader up that hill and in its exertion left panting. There is a sense of loss, loyalty to a memory, sadness over stupidity all cast in the perfect image of a snow frosted mount. A sumit climbed to end here. Full of metaphor this poem leaves a haunting feeling and sense of emptiness.

January 21st, 2025 05:06

Friendless
jim56 said:

hi cassie love this
it is heartfelt and you can feel the lonlieness
the story is told in the expression and words you have used
very well written and put together good to read
you really are a very talented writer dont stop writing
keep well safe and keep writing Jim xx


January 20th, 2025 13:31

Melting Snow
Goldfinch60 said:

That romance will always be with you Cassie.

Andy

January 20th, 2025 02:49

Melting Snow
Thad Wilk said:

Awwww,
what a romantic, 😍 poignant,
tender and emotional write!!
Outstanding rhyme and flow!!
Just resonates with greatness,
my pleasure to recite!!!🤩
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹🐦 Thad

January 19th, 2025 21:30

Melting Snow
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is such a beautiful and inspiring piece, my dear friend! Seriously, I needed to read it today, Cassie. Crushed wings can still fly...there\'s hope in that. There\'s resilience. Love this poem so much. 🌹👏

January 19th, 2025 16:29

Lasting
Shahla Latifi said:

I believe in friendship with myself more than with others.
I have found a faithful companion and solid loyalty within me.
Thanks; It\'s a good poem.

January 19th, 2025 11:02